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Beyond - Legends So Happy Together L/M. New Post on June 28!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by WarmNyota_SweetAyesha, May 25, 2015.

  1. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    by Nyota's Heart - Disclaimer: Borrowing the characters.

    Characters: Luke/Mara.

    Genre: Banter/mush.

    AN: Specifically in the form of all dialogue. Will be open-ended. The reader, hopefully, will be able to tell the context. [face_batting] And each person who reads can place this in Legends or not. [face_laugh]

    ~!

    "Now what, Skywalker?"

    "I'm not sure, Mara. I haven't done this too many times before now. Not much opportunity during the Rebellion for such things, and with my students who had crushes, that was purely one-sided."

    "Don't look at me. The only time(s) I ever embarked on such endeavors was strictly in the performance of duty."

    "Spare me the gory details!"

    "Hey, I'll have you know, I was very convincing!"

    "That I don't doubt."

    "It'll be OK. If Han survived his first date with your sister, I'm sure we'll make it."

    +++++

    [face_rofl]

    8-}

    TBC?
     
  2. Gemma

    Gemma Jedi Master star 4

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    Cute --- do we get to see the date???
     
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  3. Jedi_Lover

    Jedi_Lover Chosen One star 5

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    Yes, please TBC. That would be interesting to see.
     
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  4. Kahara

    Kahara Chosen One star 4

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    I too want to see the date! :D
     
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  5. Annia Piet

    Annia Piet Jedi Knight star 2

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    Very cute - date please! :)
     
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  6. JadeLotus

    JadeLotus Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Let's see the date! :D
     
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  7. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    "Hmmm. Well, that went better than I thought. A great nerf-steak, fried tubers, & fizzleberry pie for dessert!"

    "And I didn't tromp on your feet too badly!"

    "Luke, it was a judicious use of the Force. I knew when to step out of the way."

    "Mara!"

    "Seriously, you're a very good dancer."

    "Don't sound so surprised."

    "I'm not."

    "Uh huh."
    [Pause]
    "Mara?"

    "Hmmm?"

    "Shall we do this again?"

    "Well...."

    "Yes?"

    "I'm thinking."

    "Mara."

    "All right, if you insist."

    "All right, I can comm you, or all right you'll give me a straight answer."

    "Both."

    ++++++

    [face_laugh]
     
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  8. Annia Piet

    Annia Piet Jedi Knight star 2

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    Ha! lovely, sounds exactly like them! :D
     
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  9. Irish_Jedi_Jade

    Irish_Jedi_Jade Jedi Master star 4

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    So cute! The format is super interesting but I can fill the blanks in my own head and its nice [face_love] You're so creative!!!!!

    That was my favorite line. [face_laugh]

    [face_good_luck] Irish
     
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  10. Ewok_Slayer

    Ewok_Slayer Jedi Master star 2

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    I wish the profics had them date before the engagement. That would have been fun to see. Nice little ficlet.
     
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  11. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Thanks y'all!

    :)

    Ever since ginchy wrote an all-dialogue L/M (I think it was Kiss and Tell) - I've been in love with the all-dialogue style. [face_batting]

    And their snark lends itself to the style too [face_laugh] [face_love]

    Agree about the whole dating thing too. :p
     
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  12. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Awwww – this is so sweet

    [face_love][face_love][face_love]

    It’s nice to see Luke and Mara both unsure of how to navigate their romance.

    =D==D==D==D=

    Nice job
     
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  13. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    love the banter and snarky teasing in these vignettes
     
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  14. Gemma

    Gemma Jedi Master star 4

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    I loved how she said she used the Force to protect her feet as they danced. Well done. More??
     
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  15. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    You decided to go for the dialogues only, which is exiting to read. It is like following a tennis match, with the ball going forth and back between experienced players.
     
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  16. Chyntuck

    Chyntuck Force Ghost star 5

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    Ahem. Too much information? ;)
    [face_rofl]

    I love the format and the snark here. Will this continue? Pretty please?
     
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  17. Kahara

    Kahara Chosen One star 4

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    :) The choice of just-dialogue here is great; I like how it leaves us to imagine a lot of what's going on while still showing how they feel at this point in time. For some reason, I pictured them barbecuing their meal in the backyard of somewhere, which is probably not the case, but it's an entertaining image. :p
     
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  18. JadeLotus

    JadeLotus Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    [face_laugh] Love the first date banter!
     
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  19. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Loving this format & thanks.

    ~!

    "So how many months have we been seeing each other on and off?"

    "Is that a rhetorical question?"

    "No."

    "Guess I should've known that, coming from you. About nine months."

    "Well, Mara. We could keep this up forever or take the next step."

    "And what would that be?"

    "Don't look at me like that! I'm not asking you to train or anything."

    "Thank the Maker for small mercies."

    "I'm suggesting I take a hiatus from the Academy. I suppose it won't fall apart without me and I would like to ... experience what it's like living the more or less spontaneous lifestyle of a Master trader."

    "Are you serious?"

    "Yes, but only if you would want that too. I'm not interested in being in a relationship all by myself."

    "Is that something on the lines of one hand clapping?"

    "I believe so."

    "Yes, I would like it - I think you and I would make a good team, Skywalker. I like the idea of teaching you."

    [Laughter and kisses ensue.]
    ++++

    [face_mischief] :D
     
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  20. Annia Piet

    Annia Piet Jedi Knight star 2

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    oooh, I like the idea of Luke being the one who gives up his life (for a while) to further their relationship! Although I wanted Mara to be a Jedi and it made sense in the context of what happens in Hand of Thrawn, the way Mara's lifestyle gets put to one side and she completely changes it to be with him always felt a bit... unequal when looked at from a particular perspective. Look forward to seeing how Luke copes with being on her territory!
     
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  21. JadeLotus

    JadeLotus Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    I also love the idea of Luke kicking back and travelling with Mara and learning from her. Love the banter as usual!
     
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  22. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    AN: Takes place sometime later.

    ~!

    "I think Ghent has a crush on you, Mara."

    "He has, since the beginning of me knowing him. Makes no difference, Luke."

    "Why?"

    "You want me to say it don't you?"

    "Is it so hard?"

    "No, just that ..."

    "Mara, you're actually shy!"

    "Shhh. Not so loud. Do you have to be so enthusiastic about it?"

    "I haven't forgotten the original topic."

    "Okay. Because I love you. Satisfied?"

    "Yes! And now, was that so hard?"

    "No."

    "I love you too."

    [Tackle-hugs and tickles ensue.]

    ++++++

    :D
     
  23. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Fun with those

    Mara teaching Luke
    And the teasing talk about their love
     
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  24. Jedi_Lover

    Jedi_Lover Chosen One star 5

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    They are sweet together.
     
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  25. Gemma

    Gemma Jedi Master star 4

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    They are wonderful together and I love the last lines of both sections 2 and 3; especially #2 with Mara being the teacher - where the mind wonders.....ahhhh.....yum.
     
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