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Something Less Ordinary [K/J with a twist...] Hormone-induced insanity is BACK!, November 26, 2004!!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Deneveon, Dec 6, 2002.

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  1. Deneveon

    Deneveon Jedi Master star 4

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    Due to popular demand, I decided to write my own little interesting K/J, but one with a twist...

    Jaina chases after Kyp in this one.

    :D

    Disclaimer: Yeah! That's right! I'm writing a STAR WARS fic! So SUE me!! Go ahead, track me down, trace my messages, and SUE me!! Sue me for not asking permission from GL or Lucasfilm before writing this! SUE ME!!!!!

    *five seconds later*

    WAIT!!! i take that back!!! I'm BROKE, see, okay, and the above message was written in a fury of sugar-driven madness! So please don't sue me, I don't own SW, and I'm DEFINITELY not making any money off this. (Though I wish I could be...)

    :p

    First post in a second...
     
  2. Deneveon

    Deneveon Jedi Master star 4

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    --


    SOMETHING LESS ORDINARY


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    At this very instant, I wished I had a pillow I could scream into.

    Or perhaps a wall? then I could bang my head against it. A table would suffice. Anything!

    Anything would do. Except for the present predicament I was in. To put it both poetically and literally, I was on the verge of fury?or perhaps it was simply indignation. I couldn?t tell; I didn?t really care.

    And instead, I pasted a plastic scowl on my face, gritting my teeth and making a tight fist.

    He was at it again.

    ?So if you gave me a kiss??

    I didn?t let him finish. ?Not in your life, Durron!?

    ?So I have to be dead for me to get a kiss from you?? How I wished I could wipe that cocky little grin off his face?

    ?Leave me alone,? I simply said flatly, spinning on my heel and trying my very best to conceal the growing frustration?and not to mention aggravation?churning in my stomach. The man just wouldn?t stop!

    And I liked it.

    Well, of course I couldn?t ignore those innocent flirtations he seemed to like to throw at me. How couldn?t I? As good-looking?though that was barely an understatement?as he was, and as attractive?more like gorgeous?as he was, how could any girl my age resist his charms? Not to mention his uncanny ability to match anyone?s wits?

    I let out a breath I had not realized I had been holding. I felt like punching something. Anything. Or anyone.

    He makes it so difficult! I screamed at myself mentally, trying to find a logical explanation as to why it was so hard to tell him. It wasn?t my fault, after all. If he didn?t act like such the lovable jerk that he was?

    That thought made me break into an incredulous grin, even if I tried her best to hide it. The lovable jerk?!

    It was at this very moment that I realized I had gone too far to correct whatever mistake I had made in the past.

    And to be precise, it was too late to correct my falling in love with him.

    Where the Force is a pillow when you need one?!


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    BTW, I know this is short. But I promise the next one is longer. :D

    EDIT: Changed the POV. :D

    --Den
     
  3. Runaway_Shadow

    Runaway_Shadow Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Great start! I think I'm going to like that little twist!

    *smacks herself in the head and wonders why she didn't think of this*
     
  4. Deneveon

    Deneveon Jedi Master star 4

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    Thankies RS. :D

    I hope ya do like this. We get to see manipulative, sweet, good-natured and absolutely annoying Jaina in this one [face_devil]
     
  5. Runaway_Shadow

    Runaway_Shadow Jedi Padawan star 4

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    :D That'd be good!

    More, pleaaaaassssssseeeeeee?
     
  6. Deneveon

    Deneveon Jedi Master star 4

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    Yep. Def. more soon. It's 3am here and there's no school tomorrow... I mean, today. :p So I get to write a lot. For now, I'd better get some sleep.

    G'night! Or, in my case, G'morning! :D
     
  7. Runaway_Shadow

    Runaway_Shadow Jedi Padawan star 4

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    LOL. it's 15.00p, here :D

    Anyaway, sleep thight!
     
  8. Trickster_Jaina_Fel

    Trickster_Jaina_Fel Jedi Knight star 5

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    Where the Force is a pillow when you need one?!

    [face_laugh] i LOVE this new twist! great job--can't wait for more! :D

    UP!

    ~TJF
     
  9. padme-96

    padme-96 Jedi Master star 4

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    me can't wait for more either, hey i'm stating to follow you now, *not my fault i just wanted to find this cause you were telling us about it on your other fic*
     
  10. Crimson_Sabre

    Crimson_Sabre Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Well this is different, eh? A fiction where Jaina chases Kyp, not the other way around. Nice to see the change. What happens next? Need. Know. Now. Or. Later. Now. Preferable. Gracias.
     
  11. Jez_3-14159265358979

    Jez_3-14159265358979 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oooo what a change in the usualy plot. i like it.

    Jez
     
  12. SWMara

    SWMara Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I've been screaming for such a fic in practically evry post and I'm glad someone shows mercy at last... :D
    But please make Kyp playing hard to get! :)
    Oh, and post more soon, PLEASE!
     
  13. padme-96

    padme-96 Jedi Master star 4

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    me must up
     
  14. Deneveon

    Deneveon Jedi Master star 4

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    Currently working on the next post...

    --Den
     
  15. Deneveon

    Deneveon Jedi Master star 4

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    One pathetic up won't hurt, right? :p

    --Den
     
  16. Kyp_side_of_TheForce

    Kyp_side_of_TheForce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Holy Sith! I forgot to respond when I first read this! I love it so far, and having Jaina go after Kyp is gonna be so kriffing cool!!!!!!!!!
    WOOHOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  17. Deneveon

    Deneveon Jedi Master star 4

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    Thankies, Kyp_side ;)

    --Den
     
  18. Bellyup

    Bellyup Jedi Padawan star 4

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    A K/J fic with Jaina chasing Kyp??? Whoohoo!!!!!!!!! That sounds abso-bally-lutely spiffen'!! And the first part was classic-lol. Luv the emotions of Jaina, I know a lovable jerk who can be difficul too, and that's almost exactly how I feel!



    Did I jsut say that?? [face_blush]
     
  19. alain_bioras

    alain_bioras Jedi Master star 2

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    Bellyup, you're a K/J fan? Woohoo! ;) Great start Den (as usual)! But you stopped there! Write MOORE!! I agree with Kyp_Side-it's kriffing cool. :D
     
  20. Kyp_side_of_TheForce

    Kyp_side_of_TheForce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    MORE UP= MORE STORY?
     
  21. Jaina-Solo-Fel13

    Jaina-Solo-Fel13 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Ok, just so you know I am not a K/J fan, but this story looks interestng and I liked the first post. :) I'll check up for new posts and I hope we get a new one soon. :)
     
  22. Bellyup

    Bellyup Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yeah Alain, I'm a K/J fan....thanks to Jade!! *makes angry face at Jade* Now there are just WAY too many stories to read!! lol
     
  23. Deneveon

    Deneveon Jedi Master star 4

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    Whoa. [face_shocked]

    I really thought this thing was dead. :confused: Oh well. Currently writing up the next post. :D

    I'd probably have posted it much sooner, though my other computer where I had saved about the half-completed story crashed and I lost all my files :_| So, er, sorry bout that. :D

    --Den
     
  24. NicoleDurron

    NicoleDurron Jedi Youngling star 1

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    like it a lot, thought he beginning was funny, can't wait to read more.
     
  25. Deneveon

    Deneveon Jedi Master star 4

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    Thankies, Nicole! :D The next post is abouit three-fourths done...

    --Den
     
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