Something Less Ordinary [K/J with a twist...] Hormone-induced insanity is BACK!, November 26, 2004!!

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  1. Deneveon Jedi Master

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    Due to popular demand, I decided to write my own little interesting K/J, but one with a twist...

    Jaina chases after Kyp in this one.

    :D

    Disclaimer: Yeah! That's right! I'm writing a STAR WARS fic! So SUE me!! Go ahead, track me down, trace my messages, and SUE me!! Sue me for not asking permission from GL or Lucasfilm before writing this! SUE ME!!!!!

    *five seconds later*

    WAIT!!! i take that back!!! I'm BROKE, see, okay, and the above message was written in a fury of sugar-driven madness! So please don't sue me, I don't own SW, and I'm DEFINITELY not making any money off this. (Though I wish I could be...)

    :p

    First post in a second...
  2. Deneveon Jedi Master

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    SOMETHING LESS ORDINARY


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    At this very instant, I wished I had a pillow I could scream into.

    Or perhaps a wall? then I could bang my head against it. A table would suffice. Anything!

    Anything would do. Except for the present predicament I was in. To put it both poetically and literally, I was on the verge of fury?or perhaps it was simply indignation. I couldn?t tell; I didn?t really care.

    And instead, I pasted a plastic scowl on my face, gritting my teeth and making a tight fist.

    He was at it again.

    ?So if you gave me a kiss??

    I didn?t let him finish. ?Not in your life, Durron!?

    ?So I have to be dead for me to get a kiss from you?? How I wished I could wipe that cocky little grin off his face?

    ?Leave me alone,? I simply said flatly, spinning on my heel and trying my very best to conceal the growing frustration?and not to mention aggravation?churning in my stomach. The man just wouldn?t stop!

    And I liked it.

    Well, of course I couldn?t ignore those innocent flirtations he seemed to like to throw at me. How couldn?t I? As good-looking?though that was barely an understatement?as he was, and as attractive?more like gorgeous?as he was, how could any girl my age resist his charms? Not to mention his uncanny ability to match anyone?s wits?

    I let out a breath I had not realized I had been holding. I felt like punching something. Anything. Or anyone.

    He makes it so difficult! I screamed at myself mentally, trying to find a logical explanation as to why it was so hard to tell him. It wasn?t my fault, after all. If he didn?t act like such the lovable jerk that he was?

    That thought made me break into an incredulous grin, even if I tried her best to hide it. The lovable jerk?!

    It was at this very moment that I realized I had gone too far to correct whatever mistake I had made in the past.

    And to be precise, it was too late to correct my falling in love with him.

    Where the Force is a pillow when you need one?!


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    BTW, I know this is short. But I promise the next one is longer. :D

    EDIT: Changed the POV. :D

    --Den
  3. Runaway_Shadow Jedi Padawan

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    Great start! I think I'm going to like that little twist!

    *smacks herself in the head and wonders why she didn't think of this*
  4. Deneveon Jedi Master

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    Thankies RS. :D

    I hope ya do like this. We get to see manipulative, sweet, good-natured and absolutely annoying Jaina in this one [face_devil]
  5. Runaway_Shadow Jedi Padawan

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    :D That'd be good!

    More, pleaaaaassssssseeeeeee?
  6. Deneveon Jedi Master

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    Yep. Def. more soon. It's 3am here and there's no school tomorrow... I mean, today. :p So I get to write a lot. For now, I'd better get some sleep.

    G'night! Or, in my case, G'morning! :D
  7. Runaway_Shadow Jedi Padawan

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    LOL. it's 15.00p, here :D

    Anyaway, sleep thight!
  8. Trickster_Jaina_Fel Jedi Knight

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    Where the Force is a pillow when you need one?!

    [face_laugh] i LOVE this new twist! great job--can't wait for more! :D

    UP!

    ~TJF
  9. padme-96 Jedi Padawan

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    me can't wait for more either, hey i'm stating to follow you now, *not my fault i just wanted to find this cause you were telling us about it on your other fic*
  10. Crimson_Sabre Jedi Padawan

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    Well this is different, eh? A fiction where Jaina chases Kyp, not the other way around. Nice to see the change. What happens next? Need. Know. Now. Or. Later. Now. Preferable. Gracias.
  11. Jez_3-14159265358979 Jedi Padawan

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    Oooo what a change in the usualy plot. i like it.

    Jez
  12. SWMara Jedi Youngling

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    I've been screaming for such a fic in practically evry post and I'm glad someone shows mercy at last... :D
    But please make Kyp playing hard to get! :)
    Oh, and post more soon, PLEASE!
  13. padme-96 Jedi Padawan

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  14. Deneveon Jedi Master

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    Currently working on the next post...

    --Den
  15. Deneveon Jedi Master

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    One pathetic up won't hurt, right? :p

    --Den
  16. Kyp_side_of_TheForce Jedi Padawan

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    Holy Sith! I forgot to respond when I first read this! I love it so far, and having Jaina go after Kyp is gonna be so kriffing cool!!!!!!!!!
    WOOHOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  17. Deneveon Jedi Master

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    Thankies, Kyp_side ;)

    --Den
  18. Bellyup Jedi Padawan

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    A K/J fic with Jaina chasing Kyp??? Whoohoo!!!!!!!!! That sounds abso-bally-lutely spiffen'!! And the first part was classic-lol. Luv the emotions of Jaina, I know a lovable jerk who can be difficul too, and that's almost exactly how I feel!



    Did I jsut say that?? [face_blush]
  19. alain_bioras Jedi Master

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    Bellyup, you're a K/J fan? Woohoo! ;) Great start Den (as usual)! But you stopped there! Write MOORE!! I agree with Kyp_Side-it's kriffing cool. :D
  20. Kyp_side_of_TheForce Jedi Padawan

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  21. Jaina-Solo-Fel13 Jedi Youngling

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    Ok, just so you know I am not a K/J fan, but this story looks interestng and I liked the first post. :) I'll check up for new posts and I hope we get a new one soon. :)
  22. Bellyup Jedi Padawan

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    Yeah Alain, I'm a K/J fan....thanks to Jade!! *makes angry face at Jade* Now there are just WAY too many stories to read!! lol
  23. Deneveon Jedi Master

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    Whoa. [face_shocked]

    I really thought this thing was dead. :confused: Oh well. Currently writing up the next post. :D

    I'd probably have posted it much sooner, though my other computer where I had saved about the half-completed story crashed and I lost all my files :_| So, er, sorry bout that. :D

    --Den
  24. NicoleDurron Jedi Youngling

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    like it a lot, thought he beginning was funny, can't wait to read more.
  25. Deneveon Jedi Master

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    Thankies, Nicole! :D The next post is abouit three-fourths done...

    --Den
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