Something Less Ordinary [K/J with a twist...] Hormone-induced insanity is BACK!, November 26, 2004!!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Deneveon, Dec 6, 2002.

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  1. Ireth_Tasartir Jedi Grand Master

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  2. Deneveon Force Ghost

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    Thanks for the ups! I am currently halfway with the next post, unfortunately it's stuck on my home computer (I'm at school right now), so I can't work on it. I'll try to finish it soon, though. Thanks :D

    I know I've lost a bunch of readers... I used to have like a dozen... now I only have a handful. :( But that's all right. I'm just gonna have to up the ante a bit :p

    --Den
  3. Ireth_Tasartir Jedi Grand Master

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    Halfway sounds good ;)

    You should have more readers,ths story is awesome!! :D Believe me,if I could write something half as good as this story I'd be happy ;)

    BTW,this is an UP!!! :p
  4. Lady_Jedi_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Awesome story! Finished reading what's up and I like it a lot.

    LJS out! But will probably come back in a min... :p
  5. Ireth_Tasartir Jedi Grand Master

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    See?? You have a new reader!!! :D

    Hi LJS :)


    And up ;)
  6. padme-96 Jedi Master

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    sharts chant

    POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...POSTIE!...

    [evil laugh] he he he he he he he he [/evil laugh]
  7. Lady_Jedi_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Hello Ireth!

    So will we be able tog et a post soon, Denev?

    LJS out! But will probably be back in a min... :p
  8. Deneveon Force Ghost

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    Oooh! New reader! :D Thanks for dropping by! i will try my best to get you a post by this weekend, if not tonight or tomorrow, but it will be a short one.

    --Den
  9. Anahiri Jedi Knight

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    I just read this, great job so far! I hope the next part is posted soon! :)

    Anahiri
  10. Ireth_Tasartir Jedi Grand Master

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    Another new reader and a postie soon... Good!! :D

    UP!! ;)
  11. C3SoloP0 Jedi Master

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  12. Lady_Jedi_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Posty soon, Denev?

    LJS out! Probably be back in a min... :p
  13. Deneveon Force Ghost

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    Very short post, but it's something at least.


    --


    I plopped down onto my bed, exhausted both mentally and physically. I just felt numb inside. It wasn?t the same kind of numb I?d get when someone close to me died. It was this sort of metaphysical, vague numbness that I?d get when I just wanted to shut myself out of the world and all the cruelty within it. Which, of course, happened very often.

    This time, though, I just didn?t want anything to do with anything at all. I just wanted to curl up and die. Or something.

    It wasn?t because I?d temporarily lost my job. Oh, no. It was because I had just acted like a complete and total idiot in front of the last person I wanted to act like an idiot in front of. He must have thought I was a spoiled little brat, selfish and domineering and every other synonym for the word egotistical. But really, won?t anyone cut me some slack? I mean, I wasn?t really that bad. Honest. It?s just that all the stress from the past weeks had been building up in me and this final breaking of my pride (i.e., my squadron being taken away from me, and yes, that is a really big thing) simply blew everything up. Of course, it wasn?t really my fault to begin with, considering that most of that stress could be attributed to the one and only Kyp Durron.

    Who, by the way, as I?d mentioned earlier, had followed me into my room without either my knowledge or consent until not less than thirty seconds later, when I plunked myself down onto my bunk and caught a glimpse of a familiar figure leaning against my wall, arms crossed and eyebrows furrowed and everything.
    And I thought my day couldn?t have gotten any worse.

    So anyway. The very moment I noticed him I almost screamed. Not the kind of angry scream that you do when you?re furious at someone. More like the kind of frightened/shocked/scared scream that they have those really bad actors do in cheap horror flicks on the HoloNet. And for once, I am actually happy to say that I almost screamed. Please note the almost there. So yes, even if my day was probably the one worst day in my entire year so far, at least one thing went right and I ended up NOT screaming my head off and making a really embarrassing fool of myself.

    So what I did instead was bolt upright, turn to him, and just stared at him.

    For a whole thirty seconds more.

    Not the sort of Don?t-You-Realize-How-Much-I-Love-You-But-I-Know-You-Will-Never-Return-My-Love kind of stare, and not the kind of psycho stalker stare, either. It was an incredulous stare. Yes, I actually did manage to pull that off. Amazing, isn?t it? Bit I digress. It was more on the lines of a What-The-Kriffing-Force-Do-You-Think-You?re-Doing-In-My-Room kind of stare. And even if on any other day besides this one I would have been overly ecstatic with the notion of me and Kyp Durron alone (and locked away from the rest of the world, I might add) in my quarters, I didn?t appreciate his presence very much right now. And I could tell he knew that.

    Well, okay, maybe not. I really couldn?t tell anything about him, actually. I was too much in a state of shock (the idea that he had actually followed me to my room and I?d never even noticed him was still very strange to me?I mean, come on, when a hot guy you?ve been crushing over for your entire life decides to follow you to your room, you usually notice something like that) to really try and get my brain mechanisms functioning correctly, much less try and pry open his mind and read his thoughts with the Force.

    Somehow or other, I finally got myself to my senses enough so that I could form a coherent thought. The first thing that went out of my lips was, unsurprisingly:

    ?Just what do you think you?re doing here, Durron??

    I think I even managed to put some anger and indignation in my voice.

    He just looked at me with those fiery-yet-passive eyes of his (don?t ask me where I got the description; that?s just how his eyes really looked at that exact moment) and didn?t smile or grin or smirk or frown or wh
  14. Glory Jedi Knight

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    Dec 10, 2003
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    COME ON ! You can't leave it like that !! I need more !! NOW !!!!

    *calms down*

    Forgive me for my outburst . I am after all insane .

    Best post yet !!!
  15. padme-96 Jedi Master

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    hello

    talk about the cliffie to end all cliffie.

    not going to comment on swtorie till the cliffie stops
  16. Lady_Jedi_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Woohoo next post!

    What did Kyp do, what did he do?

    LJS out! Probably be back in a min... :p
  17. Daughterofflame Jedi Master

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    Den, what an absolutely evil cliffy. :mad:


    Seriously, if you could walk over cliffies, I would be six feet under right now.


    :p ;) :D


    So come fix this before I find a way to fall over this thing, K?




    ~*~ Austyn
  18. Delaya Jedi Knight

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    That was just cruel. Good. Very good in fact. But oh so cruel. More soon I hope? I've been out of the loop and just got around to catching up.
  19. AliaSoloDurron Force Ghost

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    Awww. What the Hell!!! That was awesome! You are gonna post soon right? Please say you're gonna post soon. I hate cliffhangers(in a good way), Especially good ones. Geez!

    :)

    Ali
  20. Ireth_Tasartir Jedi Grand Master

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    What did he do? What? I need to know!!! Please?? Pretty please with a Kyppie on top? ;)


    Good one, I laughed a lot... Jaina is definitely going crazy... :p
  21. Lady_Jedi_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Tralalalala, I'm waiting, I'm waiting, for a new post!

    LJS out! Probably be back in a min... :p
  22. kyps_godess Jedi Knight

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    noooooo you cant do this
    i finally remember to cheak the classics board for updates on j/k s and find that you have updated but only to find myself left with a positivly evil cliffie!!
    nooooo please hurry and tell us what he did please??
    hurry before we die of impatience!

    kyps godess
  23. Ireth_Tasartir Jedi Grand Master

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  24. Dantana Skywalker Manager Emeritus

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  25. C3SoloP0 Jedi Master

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    EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    evil, evil, evil, evil!!!!!!

    What did Kyp do???

    What did he do, what did he do, what did he do????

    I wanna know!!!!
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