Saga Somewhere I Belong - AU-Complete

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  1. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Master

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    Jul 16, 2001
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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww the story is almost over, please tell us you will write a squeal, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

    I to think des and nell together would be cute and sweet and hail and obiwan i would love of course, as for everyone else i'm loving them too......
  2. Skystrider77 Jedi Knight

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    Sep 6, 2003
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    ya with ji's padawan....or DES hehe
  3. JadeSolo Manager Emeritus

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    Sep 20, 2002
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    or DES hehe

    YES to DES :D
  4. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Master

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    Jul 16, 2001
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    Ji and Des would be cute with padawans...
  5. Happy_Hobbit_Padawan Force Ghost

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    Feb 3, 2003
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    Neill isn't gonna be in trouble!! Yay! :D
  6. Darth_Leia_6669 Jedi Master

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    Apr 26, 2003
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    Late again. *sighs* At least there's a new post waiting!

    Ch78:Thanks for the sugar-shock o-e! As soon as I quit twitching, I'll reply!

    *about 5 hours go by....*

    Ok, I'm back. That was very nice. The healing begins, and it seems like all will be fine.

    I hope that you are feeling better. I know what it's like to constantly be down (mine's the beginning of arthritis in both legs :( ) I've got more healing energies coming to you, I hope it's helping somewhat!

    --later--

  7. obi_ew Force Ghost

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    Apr 14, 2002
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    dp ;)

    Vadey It ends today. :(

    Jade Sorry I didn't have time to get your treat ready. :(

    Thalia I had to toss the fishies in one last time! :D

    PK Find out today about Hale.

    diane It was all Sheila's. :)

    Skystrider Niell is around 29. Des is just a big ole cupcake! [face_love]

    Phoenix Find out today. ;)

    Sheila Thanks! [face_blush] I'll miss the family too.

    JTJG Sequel? Possibly! :D

    Skystrider Poor Des can't have an apprentice. :(

    Jade ;)

    JTJG Ji may have his own in the future. :D

    HHP :D Hanging around Des he might! [face_laugh]

    DL That was a long case of sugar shock! :p


    Posty up soon. Making sure I'm happy with it. :_|

  8. Shaindl Force Ghost

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    Jun 18, 2002
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    Wait! I'm here! Don't end without me! :D

    Loving all the mush, OE! You know me with this stuff... :D

    Glad that everyone's safe and taken care of. [face_suspicious] You wouldn't bring back Khalid or Lilith just to wreck it, would you? [/face_suspicious] :p

    Marvelous job, dear! Can't wait for the next installment of the series... (nudge, nudge, wink, wink)

    Shaindl
  9. obi_ew Force Ghost

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    Apr 14, 2002
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    Shaindl I owe you so much! You gave me such wonderful ideas with this one and kept me sane when I realized how I goofed on numerous occasions! Hope I can return the favor in the future. Thanks and hugs! [face_love]

    All my readers Can ya believe we've finished another one? :eek: You guys have been so great and embraced my little family from the beginning. It has meant alot and I hope you all know how much I treasure each and everyone of you. :) I'm already kicking around an idea for yet another follow up. It would take place about five years down the road, imagine an 18 year old Shai! ;) We'll see what happens. Until then I'll see some of you on Lying . [face_love]



    EPILOGUE

    I want to feel like I?m
    Somewhere I Belong


    by Linkin Park



    The infectious sound of laughter rang out, startling a flock of brightly colored birds and sending them scattering to safety in another part of the Gardens. Their outraged squawks went un-noticed by the group gathered nearby to celebrate an important Birthday.

    The adults sat on benches around the three children who were occupied by unwrapping the small pile of gifts collected on the grass. Desimir and Niell conversed quietly with Master Luminara and Bant about their upcoming trip to Agri-Corps, Desimir?s gaze traveling often to study the two people who sat nearby, their heads close together as they whispered to one another. Bant and Luminara fought back grins at the bemused expression that settled over Desimir?s handsome features the longer he watched.

    Xanatos and Lady Asha had at some point and without the knowledge of any of the men, resumed their long ago relationship. The once fallen Jedi was even moving out of the Temple in order to take up residence with the still lovely politician. While Jivan was happy for his father, Desimir seemed to find the idea of his parents together difficult to swallow.

    Lady Asha took that exact moment to giggle like a young girl at something Xanatos whispered in her ear. Flushing bright red, Desimir shuddered before focusing his attention on the three men who sat watching the children with indulgent expressions on their faces.

    Obi-Wan, Anakin and Jivan sat together on a bench, their gazes fixed on Shai?s beeming face as he exclaimed in delight over each gift. Noa and Hale huddled over his shoulders, passing the gifts between them to examine.

    As he watched them, Obi-Wan smiled faintly as he remembered his padawans at that young age. It was hard to believe that the two massive men who sat beside him had actually once been that small and innocent. When Shai glanced up and briefly met his gaze, Obi-Wan felt his heart nearly burst with emotion.

    Perhaps sensing his emotional state, Hale?s head snapped up, her warm brown eyes settling on him worriedly.

    { Master?}

    { I?m fine Padawan, merely feeling sentimental} he assured her through their newly formed bond.

    She seemed to study him intently for several more seconds before smiling and returning to her conversation with Noa. Shaking his head, Obi-Wan had to wonder yet again what had possessed him to take another apprentice at his age, and a female on top of it.

    ?You have one last gift Padawan,? Anakin informed his apprentice. ?It?s a special gift that Master Obi-Wan and I discussed long and hard."

    Gray eyes wide with excitement, Shai hurried forward to accept the brightly wrapped package his mentor held out to him. Kneeling down directly in front of them, he quickly tore the box open and smiled in confusion as he held up what was inside.

    ?A new datapad. Thank you, but my other one is still like new,? he commented hesitantly.

    The three Jedi exchanged knowing grins.

    ?The actual gift is what?s on the datapad Shai,? Obi-Wan informed him gently.

    Grinning in embarrassment, the boy switched the equipment on and studied what was displayed. When he remained silent, seemingly frozen in place, they exchanged glances tinged with worry and disappointment. After what Desimir had told them about
  10. Shaindl Force Ghost

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    Jun 18, 2002
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    PERFECT, PERFECT, PERFECT!

    Oh, I love what you added! It rounded everything off so well!

    And made me sniffle at work yet again! :mad: :p

    Hugs back - I don't know what I'd do without you! You're one of the sweetest people here and such a good friend. Thanks for letting me share your ride - I'm glad I could help shoulder the load a couple of times.

    Cheers on another wonderful story, but more importantly, to an even more wonderful woman. :)

    Shaindl
  11. Jedi_Knight_Hunter Jedi Master

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    Jun 6, 2002
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    Shai at 18? prefect...but I think I'd rather have Jiv'...

    oh well, like I'd ever get either.


    Another one o-e? Your ambitious...and I can't wait!

    Prefect ending o-e...(what can I say, I'm a sucker for happy endings)
  12. VadeyFan2002 Force Ghost

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    Sep 30, 2002
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    Thank you oe for another wonderful story. We all delighted in it and knowing that this isn't the last we hear from that family is an even greater delight as it eases the parting with this.

    And thanks for makeing it padawan Hale and Shai Kenobi, too. It makes a very happy ending.

    [face_love] Vadey
  13. Bekah_K Jedi Master

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    Sep 3, 2002
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    That was great OE! I'm sad to see this one end. I look forward to your posts.

    One thing, will we get to see a snippet of Jivan and Des versus Anakin in a no holds bar lightsaber duel?

    Just wondering...anything to get you writing these guys again. Although, it was hinted at during Shai's dinner when he became Anakin's Padawan.

    ~Bek
  14. obi_ew Force Ghost

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    Apr 14, 2002
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    Dag nab it Bekah! :mad: I'd put that out of my head and you had to remind me of it! :p I guess it could make a nice little one poster hum? ;)
  15. diamond_pony2002 Jedi Master

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    Nov 6, 2002
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    Great ending! But I don't get something. Did Obi adopt Shai or is Shai his padawan and not Ani's now? I know Hale is Obi's padawan, but he said Padawan Shai Kenobi. Did he just get the last name? Too many questions for a great ending!
  16. obi_ew Force Ghost

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    Apr 14, 2002
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    Sorry to confuzzle you dp. ;) Anakin and Obi-Wan just agreed that Shai should have Obi-Wan's last name since they are more or less related and Shai was obviously troubled by not having one. :)
  17. dianethx Jedi Grand Master

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    Mar 1, 2002
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    That was very sweet and so satisfying - everything neatly sewn up!! Great job!!!
  18. JadeSolo Manager Emeritus

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    Sep 20, 2002
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    I had to surreptitiously read this at work so my boss wouldn't find out that I wasn't doing my work, and he didn't, hehehe, I'm so smooth...

    Xanatos and Lady Asha--awwwwww!

    Hale-- [face_laugh] I can't wait to see her when she's older! And Shai, 18 years old? *pictures Obi-Wan at 18* Oh, that's terrible! Here we are, saying how adorable and cute and sweet he is, loving him like a son, even though soon enough we'll all probably be thinking, "Dude, he's hot!!"

    No birthday treat? :( :_| That's okay. I'm more or less already Mrs. Desimir deCrion--that's enough for me :)

    And thank you, Birdie and OE, for the birthday well-wishes--it was a GOOD day! The big 2-0...UGH! I feel so OLD! :p
  19. honour Force Ghost

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    Jul 13, 2003
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    Beautiful. I can't wait for the 18-year-old Shai and teenage Hale.
  20. Phoenix_Reborn Jedi Master

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    Feb 23, 2003
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    20? Dude- you're acient!!! Thats close to drinkin age which is a 3/4s from death!













































    JOKING
  21. JadeSolo Manager Emeritus

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    Sep 20, 2002
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    Yeah, I get to join OE in the old folks' home--she's even more ancient than I am, you know :D YIKES! *runs to avoid getting run over by OE's old-lady walker* "Eh! Those kids! Durn that rock 'n' roll!"
  22. PadawanKitara Force Ghost

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    Dec 31, 2001
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    Happy B-day Jade from one oldie to another ;)

    A very sweet ending. And it seems that Hale already has her older brothers wrapped around her cute little finger :)
  23. obi_ew Force Ghost

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    Apr 14, 2002
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    hey! :mad: How many old grannies you know rock out to Linkin Park!? I may be older , but I'm still :cool: * wanders off mumbling about disrespectful little tadpoles*
  24. Thalia_Nox Jedi Knight

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    Oct 29, 2002
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    That's the end? **sniffles** I hope you write that sequel! I want more Shai! **grins** And Niell, of course.

    You finally made Hale Obi's Padawan? How sweet! I just wish that we'd been able to read all about that scene. I bet it was cute!

    **cheers** Shai got a last name! YEA! The poor kid... Well, he finally got what he deseves. **grins** In a good way!

    See you at Lying! One of these days I'm going to tackle Under a Sky of Dust, I actually started it once, but **sighs**, I don't currently have the open week it'd take me to read it!
  25. Phoenix_Reborn Jedi Master

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    Feb 23, 2003
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    Thalia-make the effort! It's good


    *Offers Jade chocolate chocolate chip cookies as an appologie*
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