Soulhunters. Obi/Qui angst, supernatural (JA) *New post 03/18* COMPLETED

I'll post soon - little technical problems.

 

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So the next post will be when my beta-reader sends it back to me. And next to it will be if I don't blow up my computer for erasing 5 hour's work

 

I'm SOOOOOOOOOO... sorry, Nifet. Like I told you, I did the beta-ing and my computer freezes up. I do the whole beta-ing AGAIN, and my INTERNET screws up [face-angry] [face-angry] [face-angry] (etc., etc., etc. for ).

I'll try it one more time today. Seriously, I'm beginning to hate my computer. Not only is it unbelievably slow, it also is very screwed up.

Aunecah_Skywalker

 

Looks like we are fellow-sufferers, Aunecah. I wrote the whole next part, 5 pages, and was just doing minor corrections when it hang. And then this silly thing wrote another file over the one I needed

 

Finaly the post is here And a cliffhanger, too. Hope you'll like.

Feedback is appreciated as ever

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Obi-Wan shuffled out of Qui-Gon?s apartment, upset and disappointed. Though somewhere deep in his mind he knew it would happen this way it still hurt. Why couldn?t Qui-Gon listen to him just once? What if it proved to be dangerous?

Obi-Wan gloomily looked out the large mullioned windows that overtook the wall to his right. Through them he saw a glorious crescent of the sun slowly making its descent down into the abyss of night and casting scarlet rays into the darkening skies. After Coruscant, Allura?s air-traffic seemed somehow abysmal. Occasionally hovercrafts and air taxis flew so close to the widows that one could see their passengers. Had this been sometime else, or had he been someone else, he would have immensely enjoyed the breathtaking view. But this wasn't sometime else. And he wasn't somebody else. He was Obi-Wan.

Being thus completely occupied, Obi-Wan totally forgot to look where he was going. The whimsical lady called ?fate? didn?t fail to prove his Master?s point of keeping one?s focus on the here and now: Obi-Wan bumped into someone. He raised his head, startled out of his gloomy thoughts to look at the happy face of a fellow Padawan.

?Hey, Obi! What are you doing here looking like a player in a casino that has just lost his last credit??

?I-umm?? Obi-Wan tried to think of something to reply with but Kamon didn?t wait for explanations of any sort.

?Come to a club with us. You seem to be in a desperate need of a good time out.? Kamon virtually dragged the other Padawan along.

?Us? I don?t see anyone else, unless you are walking around with a ghost,? Obi-Wan quipped sarcastically. But his sarcasm fell on deaf ears.

?Namira?s waiting for me at that club. Now she?s waiting for us, only she doesn?t know about it yet. There?s no way I will let you walk around with a face like that. You?ll scare all those representatives and they will run off like a herd of banthas. You want to catch them after that? I rather not.? Kamon kept speaking all the way down to the landing pad where an air taxi was waiting for them. Obi-Wan didn?t have a chance to put in a single word. He could only listen and smile at what the other said. Kamon definitely knew how to lighten someone?s mood.

The air taxis here were almost the same as the ones on Coruscant. Their air taxi glided lazily along the line of traffic, making its way towards its destination. Where its destination was left unknown to Obi-Wan. He leaned against the back of his seat, absent-mindedly listening to Kamon?s babbling next to him. Thoughts of Qui-Gon?s dismissal returned to plague him. He couldn?t forget the casualty with which the Master told him to go out, the indifference on Qui-Gon?s face. The sense of foreboding, that very same feeling he couldn?t grasp, suddenly surfaced as well. Obi-Wan straightened abruptly and started looking around, trying to determine the source of it. But he saw only the blue sky, the flying traffic, and the tall buildings they passed. There was no other warning from the Force either.

Shaking his head in disappointment, he leaned back in his seat again. Kamon looked at him worriedly but had no time to say anything. For the air taxi slipped out of the line and stopped at a platform. The two Padawans got out of it and, having paid for the ride, started towards a door. A neon sign above the door proclaimed this establishment to be a club with a strange name, ?Lakucha Iva?.

The club itself looked like a two-storied round building, situated on the roof of another, also round, building. The roof was bordered with the line of blinking neon arc?s of different colour. To both sides of the entrance there was a parking lot, enclosed in the neon fence. Obi-Wan thought that this club would definitely benefit if there was any dark time on this planet. At the moment the parking lot was only half-filled. Two twi?lek?s were arguing loudly, standing on different sides of an odd-sha

 

Yep. That was quite a post. Now would that 'SHE' be the woman Obi-Wan saw at the meeting in the morning . Keep up your good work, Nifet .

Aunecah_Skywalker

 

Of course it's her. Stupid me, I thought it was obvious

Thank you Aunecah_Skywalker. For everything

 

It was obvious ... just that there's always a possibility that you could have introduced another new character from ... Obi's past or something.

Aunecah_Skywalker

 

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Guess I'll up again. But did everyone forget about this fic?

Except for Aunecah, of course.

 

Another uppie.

 

DON'T WORRY! I'M BACK! SOME STUPID $$%^#$%^$#ERS CUT THE CABLE SO I DIDN'T HAVE INTERNET! Don't worry, I'm still here and lovin' this fic.

 

Thank you, Wild_Huntress

Good to know at least someone is still here.

 

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