NSWRPF Archive spartans v.s. elites major harcore war!!!!!!!!!!!

Yo state your name, your rank,race,class,weapons,vehicle,fav. multi player level . Who would win Spartans or elites? give your true statement who would win this war.

name - jt456.980
rank- commander
race-spartan
class-1st class
weapons- battle rifle and sniper rifle
vehicle- golden war hog
fav. multi player level- Zanzibar

 

Blasphemy! There is no "Golden War Hog"!

I'm telling you right now...this RP is bad. There is no story, it's barely even a game...more like a debate if anything.

 

Lets try to be constructive, no?

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[quote=comanderspartan]Yo state your name, your rank,race,class,weapons,vehicle,fav. multi player level . Who would win Spartans or elites? give your true statement who would win this war.

name - jt456.980
rank- commander
race-spartan
class-1st class
weapons- battle rifle and sniper rifle
vehicle- golden war hog
fav. multi player level- Zanzibar [/quote]

The RPG has more potential then one might think at first glance (E.g. Lightsaber Combat Thread), it merely lacks structure.

[b]comanderspartan:[/b] You just need to do a few things different, is all. Most of the serious Roleplayers on the TFN forums appreciate Three Things: Structure, Grammar and Spelling, and Professionalism.

[i]-Structure:[/i] Your game needs to have a storyline, rules, etc.

There's nothing wrong with an all out war; in my experience, human beings typically enjoy the idea of fighting senselessly (In regards to Role Playing, of course). However, you have to give them something to fight about. There has to be a reason for them to fight (not just "they're at war". Plot and setting are an absolute must.

Also, a set of rules is more than a little important, otherwise you potentially end up with those individuals who claim they never die and get out of everything.


[i]-Grammar & Spelling:[/i] Perhaps one of the more boring parts of middle school, but very important whence designing and participating in an RPG.

Your game title certainly doesn't need umpteen exclamation points, and Versus (VS.) is one word, not two (V.S.).

Also, if you intend on starting a serious Halo based game, it's probably best if you use terms that apply to the game, not terms that simply sound similiar. (E.g. War hog vs. Warthog)

Also, capitals at the beginning of sentences and on nouns do wonders. This is creative writing, not poetry. [face_wink]


[i]-Professionalism:[/i] This usually comes as a shock to most newer players in the RPF and NSWRPF. Grammar and spelling is again a big part of this, but also, I've never seen a successful RPG start off with the word 'yo'.

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These are only my thoughts, of course, but for more information on Role Playing, Game Design, etcetera, check out the [link=http://boards.theforce.net/role_playing_resource/b10757]Role Playing Resource Forum[/link]

Good luck to you in your future Role Playing! [face_happy]