Before Sprout of Dagobah (Yoda birth to knight) Complete

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  1. BrentusofGath Jedi Master

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    Just then Nyla heard a familiar burring and came running to save the troll, as the Master had started to call the guest, only to find he had cut the handle off of the broom, handing it to Yoda he said. "Here sweep out the ship."

    Nyla thought, 'Hey I've been promoted that was my job.'



    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    Finished with Chapter 2, I am. Good, this is.

    I can't believe the Council turned the arrogant little troll down? They must not like his winning personality. :D

    Very good story!
  2. Lea-El Force Ghost

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    Yes! Yoda is an aquired taste. Glad you like my humor.:D
  3. mat-el Jedi Padawan

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    Safe journeys my wife, Lea-El.@};-@};-@};-
    Tell Yoda hi.
  4. BrentusofGath Jedi Master

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    "Thank you, I was just going to do that when you came in. You are not trained to handle a lightsaber." She scolded, taking it away from Yoda and locking the Besalisk in the root cellar.

    "Welcomed, you are. What training needed, turn on, not cut own head off." Yoda said honestly not seeing the problem.


    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    That was extremely funny!!

    And :eek: a cliffhanger for chapter 3!

    =D= Great chapter!
  5. Lea-El Force Ghost

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    I just wanted to say thank you to my readers and anyone who voted for me.

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  6. Jei-El Force Ghost

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    Back to the light of day with you.

    Up!
  7. BrentusofGath Jedi Master

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  8. BrentusofGath Jedi Master

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    =D= That was a great chapter! (Chapter 4)

    "Never eat new roots again, I will. Six hours stuck in vent, not good for digestion. (Unexplained noise) Relief." Yoda smiled. "Now to check on Nyla." Yoda pushed a rolling chair over to the table Nyla was tied to and climbed up. "Wakey, wakey." He said shaking her. Nyla groaned then went back to sleep. "Wakey, wakey." He said again shaking her harder this time.

    Unexplained noise huh? [face_laugh] And "Wakey, wakey," Too funny! I could hear Yoda doing that, lol!

    "Drunk it made her, mean drunk, she is."

    [face_laugh]

    Lots of action in this chapter! I love it. The escape was very well done!
  9. BrentusofGath Jedi Master

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    "It is not your head I'm worrying about. You shoot the tail of my ship and I'll space you after I skin your green hide and make a seat-cushion out of it and sit on you." Tona warned.

    "Why everyone want to space Yoda?" Yoda mumbled to himself between shots. "Yoda not break anything. Everyone accuse. Think Yoda a sprout."


    [face_laugh] That was great! I also like poor Nyla, she's great. Yoda is definitely a briefs kind of guy, lol!
  10. BrentusofGath Jedi Master

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    "Master Yoda?" Nyla said. "I hate to think of it, the Jedi order will never be the same." She sighed.

    Chapter 6 [face_laugh]

    I liked Nyla and Gen getting close. :D

    So the war wasn't a complete success and there's a dark Jedi on the prowl? And Yoda is a paddie. Yay for paddie Yoda!
  11. BrentusofGath Jedi Master

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    "Yoda, where are you?" He called out.

    "Right behind you, I am." Yoda said.

    Moth almost cleared the floor. "Don't do that!" Moth gasped.

    "Obey, I did. Stayed behind you, as ordered. Thought I was a sprout, he did. Showed him." Yoda said smugly.


    [face_laugh]

    Every chapter you come up with at least one thing to make me laugh.

    Loved how Moth disobeyed the Council, bunch of stodgy old masters. :p

    Very good, tense, and funny!
  12. BrentusofGath Jedi Master

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    "But that will cut into profits." Complained the factory owner.

    "It's that or leave a dead planet for your grandchildren." Nyla added.

    "With what we are making we can buy a small planet for the grandchildren to live on." The owner reasoned.

    "What of the workers that can't afford a planet for their grandchildren?" Moth asked.

    "Well, they had better start saving for a ticket on a transport out of here." The factory owner scoffed.




    :mad: So true, so true. Blockheads with money and power don't give a- about the grunts who bleed and die in their factories. Good capture of todays world, Lea-el! =D=
  13. DaenaBenjen42 Force Ghost

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    I liked the first chapter, with the birthing ceremony and the introduction of Yoda's family. Very cool. :)
  14. BrentusofGath Jedi Master

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    Apparently he doesn't know that this is the marriage ceremony on this planet

    :eek:

    Does the word 'Ooops' pop to mind?

    Master Moth, married? [face_laugh] Yoda's going to have a field day with this one!

    Very good twist!
  15. BrentusofGath Jedi Master

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    If Moth got kicked out of the Order he was going to be out a Master and he was just getting this one broken in.

    [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    and...

    :eek:

    Moth can't quit! [face_not_talking]

    And what about Yoda? Moth said you had to try a variety of stuff so you could deal if you were sent to a world that didn't have the kinds of foods you were used to. So how does Yoda get to bypass that rule? Make him eat gruel, says I! :p
  16. Lea-El Force Ghost

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    Hey! Maple syrup that's disgusting to Yoda. You wouldn't want to be cruel to him would you?
  17. BrentusofGath Jedi Master

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    Yoda was glad to be back with Moth, two months on a ship with two girls had started to get to him. 'Giggling and hair care, how ever get work done?'

    [face_laugh]

    Yeah, I've been wondering that myself for years now. :p
  18. BrentusofGath Jedi Master

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    Yamer broke the silence. "Well, about time, it is. Go back to soil, I can in peace. Lived long enough to hear name not start with Y. Brave man, Yav is, son of my root." Yamer proclaimed.

    [face_laugh]

    Moth on Dagobah. That was really cute. Holding the little sprouts in the palms of his hands. [face_laugh]

    Yoda's got a little sweetheart. [face_love] Aw, ain't they just the cutest pair?

    *Brentus feels sick from all this lovey dovey stuff* :p

    Hope something evil happens soon and shakes everything up! :D
  19. BrentusofGath Jedi Master

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    Chabocca met him at the bottom of the ramp, scooped Yoda up, threw him about twenty feet into the air, caught him by the leg, shook him then threw him back up in the air and caught him in a big Wookie hug.

    "I hope this isn't the traditional greeting on Kashyyyk?" Moth asked Yoda from the top of the ramp.



    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    Very funny. And those boys... very creepy.
  20. BrentusofGath Jedi Master

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    Moth heard Yoda through the Force. // Yes, Royal attitude she has. Give orders like queen. //

    Moth shushed Yoda. // You will get us both whipped. //


    [face_laugh]


    And I don't like the idea of Nyla helping the powerful at all. I know she said she wants to help all the people, but the powerful can help themselves, they don't need anybody else's help. That's the problem with us today, our politicos only help the powerful who line their pockets with green. Let the powerful fend for themselves, says I!
  21. Lea-El Force Ghost

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    Trust Lea-El's writing you should my fine Master. Pawn of the rich Nyla is not.
  22. BrentusofGath Jedi Master

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    "No, I needed to tell you...something...I...a... When you were here last month...you... left something." Taryn said unable to blurt it out.

    "Just set it aside and I will pick it up next time I come for a visit." Moth said clue-less.


    :eek: I didn't know they let numbskulls become Jedi Masters, lol! He's about as dim as a 2 watt bulb, lol!

    Yoda certainly has the nose to ferret out trouble, lol!
  23. Lea-El Force Ghost

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    I have noticed that your pregnant is not the first thing that comes to most men's mind.

    Thank you for reading.
  24. hyperspace_police FanForce CR Arkansas US

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    Finally got a chance to catch up on fan fic reading..

    Good job. I like this one.

    Keep it up and please keep me on the pm list.

    (It just takes me a while to shake off Darth Real Life.)

    [face_pig]
  25. BrentusofGath Jedi Master

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    "No tricks or Yoda will start doing tricks, unhappy you will be."


    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] Great fun! Poor kids, lol!
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