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Story [Star Trek 2009] No Longer Alone - Audrey/Jim one-post.

Discussion in 'Non Star Wars Fan Fiction' started by WarmNyota_SweetAyesha, May 12, 2011.

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  1. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Aug 31, 2004
    Title: No Longer Alone

    Author: Jade eyes

    Disclaimer: Borrowing for fun.

    Characters: J/A.

    A/N: In the style of leapylion3's fun Falcon Flight, alternating first person POV's.

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    Jim

    Audrey was a colleague first, brilliant and lovely and a little intimidating.

    Then she became a trusted friend, someone I could count on in a tight spot.

    I cannot say when I realized I was in love with her -- it seemed like I woke up one morning and -- I just was. That's how natural it was.

    Even when we clash, our rightness for each other never is something I doubt or ponder.

    I always knew I would never have a shortfall of friends -- but a (for lack of a more perfect word) soulmate ... that was something I didn't dare think of.

    When I grew up without a father, part of me felt adrift, somehow.

    Now, as the deepest part of me is bound to Audrey, I'm no longer alone.

    * *

    Audrey

    A more infuriating person than Jim I doubt I've ever known!

    But at the same time, he is the most fun-loving, romantic, and courageous person as well.

    There's a reason his crew would follow him to the gates of Mordor and back again -- and it wasn't long before I discovered that I would, as well.

    I was chary of giving my heart to him at first, I must confess. But once I got past all the hype and rumor, I discovered he was warm and caring and capable of a strong commitment.

    When I lost my dad, it was something that tore a hole in my heart that I thought nothing would be able to fill.

    And even though there are times when that loss is a deep ache, I feel -- whole in a way I never expected or dreamed.

    Bonded heart, mind, and soul to Jim, I am very happy to say I am no longer alone.

    +++++

    [face_dancing]

    [face_dancing]

     
  2. Master_Jaina1011

    Master_Jaina1011 Jedi Master star 4

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    May 20, 2002
    A more infuriating person than Jim I doubt I've ever known!

    Oh yes Audrey, every day you go between wanting to kill him and kiss him!

    Everything is so true here. I loved the alternating first person POV's!

    I love it when you showcase one of my favorite couples!
     
  3. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Jul 20, 2002
    Aww, this was so sweet! I love the split POVs :D
     
  4. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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    Nov 9, 2010
    :D

    Great to see these two and the way they fulfill each other.
     
  5. Mira_Jade

    Mira_Jade The (FavoriteTM) Fanfic Mod With the Cape star 5 Staff Member Manager

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    Jun 29, 2004
    You most certainlly know how to put the 'ush' in mush. [face_love] This was lovely and a pure joy to read! :D [face_dancing]

    WEIN? :p


    ~MJ @};-
     
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