Story Star Trek: Medbay mayhem (prompt challenge)

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  1. earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost

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    your next prompt is . . .
    Hit me with your best shot.

    “Hit me with your best shot,” Lionel Majeski dove to the floor when he saw McCoy readying a water filled glove. It was their way to unwind after a harrowing procedure and they had seen a lot of those the last few days.

    “I will,” McCoy grinned and had the glove sailing towards his senior anaestetist. He had been the one to chose the war-zone; his office. “Your fellow conspirators Baldavin and Djarada are gone.”

    “As in resigned,” a brief sad look passed Lionel’s face. Djarada getting injured had been the reason for the two to leave and head home. The glove showering him with water had him laughing again and searching for an item to retalliate. A sponge and a wad caught his attention and he wetted both before returning them to McCoy.

    But.

    A door opened and a short ‘oops’ and Nyota Uhura came in with the wetted wad clinging to her hair.

    “Spock should see you,” McCoy was doubled over with laughter.

    “I do,” Spock was the next to enter the medbay.

    tbc
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    LOL! Scrubroom fun Trek-style [face_mischief] @};-
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  3. Mira_Jade The NSWFF Manager With The Cape

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    [face_laugh] Those last two lines just sinched this one for me. This is such a fun series, earlybird, and I am glad that you are continuing it! [face_love]=D=
  4. earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost

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    and more to come
    the next prompt was fun with this



    Sunrise, Sunset

    “Sunrise, sunset, sunrise, sunset, I am flying where the…”

    “Spock!”

    “Oww, did you see that?” Nurse Jana John – opaline blue eyes laughing – turned to her singing colleague and husband Marc Jullio, like her a Mirana humanoid with black skin covered with scales.

    “I did and I am glad that Lionel can have his fun too,” Marc adjusted the IV-unit covering the left hand of the patient. “Nyota and Spock sure will have their fun.”

    “Singing unwinds you my husband,” Jana stroked softly over Marc’s hand. “We all had a harrowing time in the OT. The night-shift will come soon and we.”

    “Can plan some more singing and fun in our cabin,” Marc finished, skin now glowing with bio-luminescent patterns. “Sunrise, sunset, you are the love of my life.”

    tbc
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  5. Mira_Jade The NSWFF Manager With The Cape

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    Aww, this was both fun and cute. [face_love] A great way to use the prompt. =D=
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    [face_laugh] I second @Nyota's Heart -- totally fun! Nice to see the humorous side of McCoy :p
  8. KGA91 Jedi Padawan

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    This was great! Like the others said it was nice to see the humorous side of good old Bones.
  9. earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost

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    McCoy is in for more fun with the next prompt




    We meet again.

    “This is going to be fun,” McCoy was doubled over with laughter when he took his comlink. The transporterroom had sent a message that the new addition to his staff had arrived and was settling in in the assigned quarters.

    “Now let’s see,” Christine grinned. “Who do you have in mind?”

    “Scotty of course,” McCoy had opened his comlink. “His shift ended one hour ago.”

    ‘Scott here’

    “Mister Scott you are due for your medical check-up this week. Can you come now?”

    ‘On my way.’

    - - -

    Scotty was the first to arrive and Christine directed him into one of the examination rooms.
    “Get ready,” she said. “Underwear only and there’s a cover. We will be here soon.” She left the examination room and was readying the tray with test-tubes and syringes when the new surgeon arrived.

    “Welcome Doctor Benson,” McCoy shook hands.

    “Cole will do,” Cole shook hands with Christine and was introduced to Marc Jullio and Jana John. He told more about the journey to the Enterprise on the fast courier and ended “my wife has gone to hydroponics to meet her new colleagues and that had me longing to start too.”

    “You are ready for your first patient?” Christine indicated the tray and gave a clip-board.

    “Always,” Cole grinned. “Check-ups can be fun with the patient not wanting to partake at all and giving us the time of our life.”

    “You are about to meet the miracle worker,” Christine opened the door to the examination room.

    - - -

    Scotty – sprawled on the examination table – blinked with his eyes and sat up with a speed that had the cover sliding from his body. “Hey we meet again?”
    “We meet again?” Cole entered with a frown on his face.

    [IMG]

    Christine saw the expressions on the faces and had to turn away. She put the tray on a table.


    “Welcome back Ker,” Scotty swung his feet to the floor. “You were the guy who didn’t like my scotch when I met you the first time and toasted with just a glass of water. Ah but where is Jeran? He will give me the check-up?”


    “Jeran?” Cole shook his head.


    “Meet Doctor Cole Benson,” McCoy entered the room roaring with laughter.


    “He isn’t Ker Djarada,” Scotty eyed Cole and McCoy and a laughing Christine.


    “No I am Cole Benson,” Cole smiled. “I have to give you your check-up. And I like to know all about Djarada.”
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  10. Nyota's Heart Combos & Paragraphs Host

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    Nice use of the prompt and intro and prank ;) =D=
  11. Mira_Jade The NSWFF Manager With The Cape

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    Another fun update, and a great way to use the prompt. [face_laugh]=D=
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  12. AzureAngel2 Force Ghost

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    Scotty – sprawled on the examination table – blinked with his eyes and sat up with a speed that had the cover sliding from his body. “Hey we meet again?”
    “We meet again?” Cole entered with a frown on his face.

    I bet they will... ;)
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  13. earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost

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    You will see

    Far from Home has me continuing with Scotty and Cole


    Far from Home.

    A very strange day, it had been a very strange first day for Cole Benson. From his first and only patient of the day – if you could call Montgomery Scott a patient – he had heard all about his similarities to a former crewmember of the Enterprise and the colleague of that member. He had given Scott – call me Scotty – his annual check-up and had been invited to accompany him on a tour of the Enterprise. A long stop at the heart of the Enterprise – of course the smoothly running engines were for the engineer what he liked most – had Scotty beginning a long and loving explanation of the very best technology that brought him far from home.
    Cole had asked where that home was and Scotty had begun a slightly shorter narration about Scotland and of course the scotch. He had sampled the scotch – Scotty had in his office a bottle of the precious stuff – and had made faces. He told Scotty that he didn’t like alcoholic beverages very much since he tasted the first during his student days in Leiden.

    Scotty had of course wanted to know where Leiden was.

    ‘As far from home as my wife’s and your home is now’ had been Cole’s answer. And he had explained where Leiden was at the moment they were passing the recreational room where a beautiful lady and a Vulcan man were entertaining the crew with song accompanied by play on a stringed instrument of unknown design.

    Scotty had introduced communications specialist Nyota Uhura and first officer Spock.

    “A bonded pair,” Cole chuckled when he slipped between the sheets of the large bed where his wife Jenna was.

    “As we are,” Jenna turned and gave him a kiss.

    tbc
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  14. AzureAngel2 Force Ghost

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    Scotty had introduced communications specialist Nyota Uhura and first officer Spock.

    “A bonded pair,” Cole chuckled when he slipped between the sheets of the large bed where his wife Jenna was.

    “As we are,” Jenna turned and gave him a kiss.

    You & Nyota´s Heart get me to like mushy stuff here! :eek:[face_shame_on_you]:p
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    Squee on the post and on Nicole's ... liking mush. Mission accomplished. [face_laugh] [face_dancing]
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  16. Mira_Jade The NSWFF Manager With The Cape

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    Aw, a fantastically sweet post, and a wonderful use of the prompt! [face_love]=D=
  17. earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost

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    More stuff coming in the next piece with Cole and Jenna revealing some
    Mush it will be
    Thank you and here is the next one


    Mothers
    Still wearing his smudged greens Cole Benson shuffled through the door of the roomy cabin that he shared with his wife. His second shift had been a very busy one. He was about to drop down on the couch when Jenna came out of the small bedroom.

    “Your sister called.”

    “And?”

    “She was a bit agitated and…” Jenna had a fleeting smile on her face.

    “I see,” Cole dropped down on the couch shrugging with his shoulders. “I forgot it again but this time I have a great excuse.”

    “Yup,” Jenna flew in his arms. “We are away on the Enterprise and had no way to be home to go and celebrate ‘mothers day’ with your sister and…”

    “Her disapproving words for you and me with mother agreeing to every word she says and her endless rambling about her kids and husband,” Cole continued. “You know what happened three years ago.”

    “I do and I am glad we are here,” Jenna kissed him.
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    Nice use of the prompt and more details on Cole, Jenna and the in-laws [face_laugh] =D=
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  19. Mira_Jade The NSWFF Manager With The Cape

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    An excellent use of the prompt, and glimpse at the characters. =D=
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  20. earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost

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    thank you again
    And here is the next prompt



    Taking flight

    “Wow did you see them?” Jenna was coming to the medbay to see if her husband was ready.

    “I did,” Cole replied with laughter in his voice. “Marc and Jana are married Miranas. They are always displaying those bioluminescent patterns when they are planning something nice.”

    “Like taking flight,” Jenna grinned. “Floating away on the wings of love and becoming one during their love-making. And it must be similar to what I saw when Spock and Uhura sneaked into the hydroponic gardens.”

    “Aww,” Cole had pouting look. “You should have intercepted them. I was planning to…”

    “Do something nice too,” Jenna flew in his arms. “But I know the place. Come with me.”

    - - -

    “WOW this is taking flight!” Cole had a delighted look on his face. He was floating with Jenna beside him in one of the cross intersections of the Jeffries tubes where the artificial gravity was absent. Making love was a great experience.

    Jenna had planned. She had put a do-not-disturb sign on the entrances leading to said place and had taken him up, tugging at his clothes and discarding them – easy with the scrubs – and he tugging at her clothes – garden-coveralls were easy too – until underwear remained.
    Underwear, scrubs and garden-coveralls were now floating among them.

    “You ready to go to our cabin,” Jenna tickled her husband softly on his bare chest.

    “Uh,” Cole took her hand. “One more time in our private universe?”

    “One more time taking flight,” Jenna smiled and kissed.
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    Woot! Woot! [face_dancing] Buya! Now that is what I call a great! use of the prompt [face_mischief]

    Hugs and SQUEEE!
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  22. AzureAngel2 Force Ghost

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    “Uh,” Cole took her hand. “One more time in our private universe?”

    “One more time taking flight,” Jenna smiled and kissed.

    * uses Han Solo sort of voice here

    I can imagine a lot... ;)
  23. Mira_Jade The NSWFF Manager With The Cape

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    That is definitely a creative use of the prompt! [face_laugh][face_love] And so sweetly done, too! :)
  24. earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost

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    Thanks all for your kind replies and here is the next



    Walls

    “Kriffing piece of bantha poodoo, produced by a peedunky sleemo of a Hutt,” Cole Benson kicked hard with his right foot against the soft pink and beige tinted wall of the corridor leading to the shuttle-bay. “I am glad these walls don’t have ears or nerves.”

    “They don’t,” McCoy barely suppressed a laugh when he saw and heard his surgeon busy like that. The man had a point to be angry. “Admiral Dar…”

    “Darth Darkness you mean,” Cole muttered.

    “Admiral Dardan is in the shuttle bay and leaving with the rescued hostages. He outranked and overruled the captain and chose the away-team. Spock led the team and returned with all the members and the hostages. And this poor wall has nothing to do with it at all.”

    “No but it’s the same colour as the wall of the prison on the whatchamacallit planet,” Cole gave the wall another slap. “That wall chose the legs of poor ensign Wandaso and our exec’s slick haired skull as its target when it collapsed. I barely jumped free and had to support the two to our extrication zone.”

    “The wall going down was essential for the team to get the hostages to safety,” McCoy said. “Spock is now in the loving care of Uhura. Wandaso will be up and around in two days thanks to your immediate treatment in the shuttle. Get going Cole.”

    “I will be fine,” Cole grinned. “At least the walls in my cabin are soft tinted green and blue just like those in the medbay.”
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    Nice snark and super details of a riveting mission explained in the conversation. =D= :cool: Nothing like TLC ... personal/private wise hmm? [face_dancing]
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