Star Wars 2:( AU)

I am planning on writing an alternate sequel to the Original 1977 Star Wars Movie. I wuld be grateful if you could tell me your views on the first post. This alternate sequel takes place a few weeks after Star Wars

Star Wars II


Luke Skywalker stood firmly in place with his lightsaber held high. Over his eyes was a blast shield and hovering around him, a training remote. Since the Battle of Yavin Luke practiced these exercises which had begun under the wise guidance of Ben Kenobi on board the millenium falcon.His skill with the lightsaber had dramatically inproved and he could now rely fully on the Force...

I know this is brief, but i need feedback in order to continue writing.

Thanks people