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Saga Star Wars: Destiny (Obi/Ani/Padme/AU Fic Updated! 11/14/ Part 4)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Obi-Wan21, Jun 7, 2003.

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  1. CrystalKenobi

    CrystalKenobi Jedi Master star 4

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    Oh my, you did it again. Darth Ben. Thats great. "You just said this was dangerous, it really will be if we work together!" Obi-Wan stated agitated. I loved this line. Supsenseful to see what will happen.
     
  2. Obi-Wan21

    Obi-Wan21 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Thanx. I'm gonna try to mix in movie elements of EPIII that I've been reading about. Although this is AU and the characters are completely different from their movie counterparts, i still plan on bringing in things and quotes from the movies. Also, part 4, Padme's first appearance.
     
  3. Lieutenant_Jaina

    Lieutenant_Jaina Jedi Youngling star 3

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    OooHhhh This is rather interesting, a dark obi wan???? Yup, interesting, Part 4!!!!! Pleasy!


    Uppies
     
  4. Jazz_Skywalker

    Jazz_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Also, part 4, Padme's first appearance.

    That should be interesting!

    I loved the last two posts, as well, especially Obi-Wan's line of what he would do with his lightsaber!

    JS
     
  5. Obi-Wan21

    Obi-Wan21 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Part 4(Yeah, I'm spoiling you since I haven't updated this in a while)

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    Obi-Wan and Anakin then made their way to the Senate Chambers. "Why are you following me?" Obi-Wan asked looking back to Anakin.

    "Why did you come to the Senate building?" Anakin wondered

    "What do you think?" Obi-Wan smiled.

    "To see Padme!" Anakin said firmly.

    "That's right," Obi-Wan answered. "It's been a while since I've seen her."

    After walking down a few more halls they came up to a small built Senator wearing a white low cut dress. "Padme? Obi-Wan asked stepping up to her.

    "Yes?" she said turning around. "Obi-Wan!" she exclaimed, hugging him.

    "It's good to see you," Obi-Wan smiled.

    "You've changed," she said noticing his different hair, clothes, and voice. "I almost didn't recognize your voice."

    "People change," Obi-Wan stated.

    "You really have, but for the better," Padme said smiling.

    Anakin stood in the back without drawing attention to himself. He was wondering all what Padme would say if she didn't notice him.

    "I have work to do," Padme told him stepping away from his arms. He had not let go of her since she had hugged him. "But if you want, you can stop by later tonight at my senate apartment, it get's lonely up there."

    "Uh, um, Okay," Obi-Wan replied nervously. "Sure, I'll be by."

    "Good. Bye," Padme finsihed. Before she left, she kissed Obi-Wan on the cheek and made her way to the main Senate room where she would meet with Chancellor Palpatine.

    "You *******," mumbled Anakin.

    "I heard that," Obi-Wan said glancing out of the corner of his eye.

    "You were meant to," Anakin shot back.

    "I'm not arguing," Obi-Wan stated. "I have better things to do." Obi-Wan turned and went his own way. Anakin stayed back, the hatred was swealing.
     
  6. Lieutenant_Jaina

    Lieutenant_Jaina Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Anakin stayed back, the hatred was swealing.

    someone's jealous....haha
     
  7. Jazz_Skywalker

    Jazz_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    "But if you want, you can stop by later tonight at my senate apartment, it get's lonely up there."

    Now if that's not desperate, I don't know what is!

    JS
     
  8. JainaDurron

    JainaDurron Jedi Master star 4

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    Ooooooo! Must read this! Dark Obi-wan is cool. :D

    ~~Jilly
     
  9. Obi-Wan21

    Obi-Wan21 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    JaniaDurron: Thanx, i didn't think many people would like the dark Obi-Wan, but if you really love him like this, then you're really gonna love (or hate) him as it gets later on. Obi hasn't expressed his true dark powers yet. And what happens when a certain Padwan over steps his limits?
     
  10. KSA

    KSA Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Truly cool!

    Obi-Wan should get to wear a mask!

    But Anakin should get Padme so fair is fair.

    Ehh! OBI-WAN! OBI-WAN!

    Note: Could you please not type in bold? My eyes start hurting and it gets kinda hard to read.
     
  11. Obi-Wan21

    Obi-Wan21 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    KSA: Yeah sure. Anyway, you never know who's gonna get Padme. Could be anyone.
     
  12. CrystalKenobi

    CrystalKenobi Jedi Master star 4

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    My that is very interesting. I wonder who will end up with Padme. It at first looks like Obiwan but it could be Anakin, but then you may have a surprise for us.
     
  13. Lieutenant_Jaina

    Lieutenant_Jaina Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Up!

    ...true. you never know, I just hope it IS anakin :)
     
  14. CrystalKenobi

    CrystalKenobi Jedi Master star 4

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    up


    Well it could be an OC comes in and takes her from both of them. That would put them in their place. ;) :D
     
  15. Obi-Wan21

    Obi-Wan21 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    That'ssomething I have thought of CK, but you'll see. Anyway, I'm back. Had to move again so i didn't have a comp, expect updates soon.
     
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