Saga Star Wars: Episode III updated april 1, 04

EPISODE III by thejeditraitor/jason

The Clone Wars are over three years old and the entire galaxy has been thrown into war-torn chaos. The Separatist movement has gained momentum but the wars are drawing to a close with no clear victor. Chancellor Palpatine attempts to end the war by negotiation. The Chancellor and his Jedi escort are betrayed and taken captive by Count Dooku on his flagship high above Coruscant. Jedi Master Shaak Ti is the only surviving Jedi. As the Republic forces engage the Separatist fleet in a full scale counter attack the Jedi attempt a daring rescue...

A massive space battle is taking place above the planet of Coruscant. The Separatist forces, in a last desperate move, have surrounded the Capitol system with all their military strength. Their hope, to use their hostage to bring the war to an end. Palpatine has a tracking device implanted in his body and the Jedi are tracing his signal. Dooku believes he's still working together with Palpatine but Palpatine is tired of Dooku?s secret scheming. On the bridge of the command ship the Separatist leaders; Dooku, Wat Tambor and a young Boba Fett watch the beginnings of the battle. The Chancellor is chained to a hovering chair and surrounded by tall, thin, robotic guards with long staffs. A strange robotic figure in white armor is seen.

Count Dooku- ?This is a strange ploy for the Republic.?

Wat Tambor- "Well Chancellor, it appears the Republic does not wish to negotiate after all. They attack us knowing full well that you are on board. If only your Jedi protectors were here.?

Palpatine- "Do not underestimate the Jedi.?

A fleet of Republic Star Destroyers moves into formation. Manning these starships are Generals Yoda, Mace Windu and Bail Organa. Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker and many clone ships fly to the battlefront. Obi-Wan has also become a decorated general under Bail Organa and Anakin is now a full-fledged Jedi Knight. Anakin's starfighter has red coloring. Obi-Wan's ship has green coloring. The cockpits and undercarriages are grey and white.

Kenobi- ?Red leader online.?

Anakin- ?Hold formation Blue group... Hello Ben, it?s been a while since we fought together. How were things on Ord Mandell??

Kenobi- ?Bad... that was the Separatist?s last stronghold. We took it... but many died. Now there are only pockets of resistance. How have things been here, Anakin?... and don't call me that.?

Anakin- ?Quiet... until now, the Chancellor is a benevolent man. He decided to negotiate when he should have... here they come!!?

Trade Federation Core ships, Commerce Guild ships and I.B.C. Ships have set up a perimeter around the huge Separatist Command Ship, as hundreds upon hundreds of droid fighters, geonosian fighters and other ships streak forward to engage. Most of this first battalion is disintegrated, showering sparks and chunks of debris into the path of the advancing fighters. Anakin shows his vast piloting skills by spinning and weaving through massive amounts of enemy fighters, shooting and destroying many in the process.

Many other clone fighters are systematically destroyed. Anakin, with R2-D2 in his fighter, destroys a large battlecruiser single-handedly. Kenobi leads his battalion toward the command vessel. Obi-Wan's ship is hit with a barrage of laser fire, destroying R4.

Kenobi- ?R4? R4!?

He spins out of control toward the hangar of the Separatist?s command ship.

Kenobi- ?Anakin! Do you read??

Anakin- ?Yes!?

Kenobi- ?Anakin! My droid is gone and I?m losing control of my ship! Destroy the hangar?s shields so I can land inside.?

Anakin- ?I?m on it.?

Obi-Wan begins to get nervous as his starfighter rockets closer to the command ship. This is the same command ship that Count Dooku and Palpatine are on.

Kenobi- ?Hurry it up will you.?

Anakin- ?Trust me.?

Anakin spins in-between enemy ships and blows up the hangar?s sensor arrays, then loops back around to the hangar entrance. Kenobi's ship makes it inside the hangar bay.

As the clone fighters an

 

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*blinks*

Was that Ep. 3 in a nutshell?
Nicely done.

EDIT: whoops

 

i think it's pretty good.
please inform others... i would like for them to read it.
thank you.

 

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wow!!!

 

updated with all dialogue

 

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revamped jan 31 o4

 

GOOD POINT

 

Not bad not bad at all.

 

updated mar 27, 04