Beyond Star Wars Episode VII: An end to Peace (updated 6/06/03)

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  1. spiny1001 Jedi Padawan

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    EXT. SPACE

    A long time ago in a galaxy far, far way....

    A vast sea of stars serves as a backdrop for the Main Title, followed by a rollup, which crawls into infinity.

    Thirty years have passed since the fall of the Galactic Empire. Since then, a new Galactic Senate has been formed to keep peace throughout the galaxy.

    The recent assassination of Supreme Chancellor Jon Tempo though, has prompted the Galactic
    Senate to elect Lao Xizor as new Supreme Chancellor. Xizor has pledged to hunt down and capture these alleged assassins.

    Two senators though, Bokna and Tooknu, are mysterious of Xizor's plans and are on their way to Coruscant to confront him, to see whether he is restoring or bringing an end to the peace...

    PAN down to a large chrome Senate Cruiser, being escorted by two Senate Fighters. The Cruiser is on its way to the newly rebuilt planet of Coruscant.

    INT. CRUISER --DAY

    The ships captain approaches Senator Bokna.

    CAPTAIN
    (to Bokna)
    Senator Bokna, we are approaching Coruscant. We will be arriving at the Senate Chamber very shortly.

    BOKNA

    Thank you captain.

    EXT. CORUSCANT - CITYSCAPE --DAY

    TRACK with the Cruiser, as it flies and navigates its way through various skyscrapers. The sun glints off the shiny chrome plating of the ship, as it makes its way to the Senate Chamber.

    EXT. SENATE CHAMBER - DOCKING BAY --DAY

    The Cruiser lands on the docking bay, where several guards await the arrival of Senator's BOKNA and TOOKNU. The hatch of the ship opens and the two senators make their way down the ramp, on their way to the Senate Chamber.

    TRACK with the two Senators as they make there way to interior of the Chamber.

    TOOKNU
    (to Bokna)
    Senator Bokna, I hope you don't plan to reveal to the Senate that we have sent out troops to spy on Xizor's activities. We would surely be vanished from the Senate for good.

    BOKNA

    Of course not Tooknu. What we have done there is strictly our business. We are here simply to hear the latest news on the investigation of the assassination.

    TOOKNU

    Well what are your feelings about Xizor sending out a majority of our Senate Forces to hunt down these assassins?

    BOKNA

    Skeptical.

    TOOKNU

    Why?

    BOKNA

    Well, Xizor isn't just sending out forces to hunt down the assassins. He is also sending out the forces, reportedly, to put an end to some small rebel outbursts on the planet of Cantar.

    TOOKNU

    Well this is the first time I've heard about this.

    BOKNA

    Few know about it. I managed to get some inside information from a fellow Senator.

    TOOKNU

    Do these rebel threats concern you?

    BOKNA

    They don't concern me. I'm just confused as to why Xizor would concentrate so much on something so small. Rebel out-bursts occur all the time. Chancellor Tempo never did anything about them. He would just let them run their course. I just have a feeling that Xizor is up to something else, something unknown.

    TOOKNU

    Perhaps we should bring it up.
    FADE OUT:

    INT. SENATE CHAMBER --DAY

    FADE IN:

    The chamber is full, with representatives from all the planetary systems. The look is similar to what is seen in the prequel trilogies. PAN 360 degrees around the chamber to reveal all the representatives.

    CUT to BOKNA and TOOKNU, who take a seat in their assigned positions.

    The Speaker of the House, an elegant dressed GORGUN creature named TYPHIS, arrives in the chamber to address the representatives.

    TYPHIS

    Will all representatives please rise to welcome Supreme Chancellor Xizor!

    Everyone rises to greet the arrival of XIZOR. CUT to BOKNA and TOOKNU who applause the arrival. XIZOR enters the Chamber, greeted by applause, and takes his position in the center of the chamber.

    XIZOR

    I'm glad to see you all again, my fellow senators. These are not the circumstances that I wish we could of met under, but nonetheless we will get on with our busine
  2. spiny1001 Jedi Padawan

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  3. spiny1001 Jedi Padawan

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    I know reading this may be confusing, trust me it looks a lot better in actual script format (I guess most scripts do). I'm working on updating it, so for those who want to know what happens next just hang on.
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