Beyond - Legends Star Wars Episode VII Secrets of the Force

Yeah, I'm not sure about keeping Mace and Ventress around, but maybe they'll do. I would like to use Jar Jar at some point.
A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away?.
(Star Wars music is playing.)
STAR WARS
EPISODE VII SECRETS OF THE SITH
The Rebel Alliance has destroyed the second Death Star, dealing a strong blow to the evil Galactic Empire. However, in an unexpected move, the Empire has come out of hiding and united to take back the capital city of Courascant and also have taken over nearby systems.
The Rebel Alliance has formed the New Republic and, with the army of the New Jedi Order, led by Luke Skywalker, plan to take the Empire capital, Courascant, and defeat the Empire once and for all. However, unknown to the Jedi, the prophecy of the Chosen One was stolen by the Sith and a slightly altered one placed in the Jedi Temple over a thousand years ago. Anakin Skywalker is not the Chosen One destined to restore balance to the Force! And the villainous Emperor Palpatine knows the secret of Darth Plagius, and has cheated death on the second Death Star. He has moved his spirit to a clone on Courascant. He is planning to launch a surprise attack of stormtroopers, droids, and clones on the New Galactic Republic.
Palpatine is now more dangerous than ever and is seeking to find a new apprentice and form the first Intergalactic Empire once the galaxy has been subdued by the Empire. The only one who can stop him is the Chosen One, Luke Skywalker. The fate of the galaxy lies in his hands??
(The Star Wars music continues for a few more seconds and then stops playing.)
(On Courascant, two stormtroopers and an Imperial Guard are talking.)
Stormtrooper 1: (To the Imperial Guard) What are you doing here? The other Imperials got killed with the Emperor!
Imperial Guard: I?ve only just been promoted. The Emperor didn?t send me yet. Didn?t think I was ready. Anyway, I somehow don?t think he?s dead!
Stormtrooper 2: (Laughing) Ya right! The Death Star blew up! There?s no way he could have survived!
Imperial Guard: I just have this feeling. I sense that he?s not dead.
Stormtrooper: (Laughing) What are you, some kind of Jedi?
(A ship lands.) (A figure looking like Luke Skywalker, except dressed in all black and carrying a blue lightsaber instead of a green one.)
Stormtrooper: (Angry) (Shooting at him) Die Skywalker! (The figure deflects the bullets with his lightsaber. He then shoots out Force lightning and pushes the stormtrooper back.)
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(The Emperor?s theme song is playing. http://www.imeem.com/jerlin85/playlist/w-lpbUtP/emperors_theme_music_playlist/ ) Imposter# Luke Skywalker: (Angry) It?s me Palpatine. I?ve used the secret of Darth Plagius to cheat death on the Death Star. My apprentice Lord Vader tried to kill me. He stopped me from killing Skywalker. Vader is dead; there?s no way he could survive for long once the lightning destroyed his iron lung. I need a new apprentice.
Imperial Guard: (To the clone and stormtrooper) Told you.
Emperor Palpatine: (Curious) (To the Imperial Guard) Justinian, you are strong in the ways of the Force!
Justinian: (Amazed) You mean I really am a Jedi?
Emperor Palpatine: (Nodding) Yes, and you shall be my new apprentice. (Pulling out a lightsaber and turning it on) (It is a double-ended lightsaber.) This belonged to one of my old apprentices, Darth Maul. It was damaged when he died but I fixed it.
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Justinian: Thank you!
Emperor Palpatine: Henceforth# you will be known as Darth Trion!
Darth Trion: And do you have a Sith name Your Highness?
Emperor Palpatine: (Nodding) Darth Sidious.
Darth Trion: Teach me the ways of the Force, Master.
Darth Sidious: Don?t worry; I will.
(Sometime later, Darth Trion is flinging metal across the room and blocking bullets shot by droids and able to use a lightsaber well. He also has learned how to shoot out Force lightning, though he can only do it pretty poorly.)
Darth Trion: I?ve learned the ways of the Force, Master!
Darth Sidious: (Laughing evilly) You have done well, my young apprentice. Soon, I will have you take

 

I like Ahsoka, as you've probably figured out by now.

In fact, this in now officially AU as I am going to continue, even if she dies or goes to the dark side in the Clone War Series. However, the longer that keeps from happening, the more I can carry over. If she goes to the Dark Side, I'll have her turn back quickly or decide to turn on the Empire after Vader's death or something. If she dies in Order 66, I'll merely change it to have her survive it and know that Anakin went bad. As it is right now, she was expelled for seeking vengeance and doesn't know that Anakin went to the dark side and thinks he died in Order 66.

 

Welcome to the boards!

If I could make a suggestion, it's easier to read blocks of text when you put a space between your paragraphs and between scripted lines when the speakers change.

Like this:

EPISODE VII SECRETS OF THE SITH

The Rebel Alliance has destroyed the second Death Star, dealing a strong blow to the evil Galactic Empire. However, in an unexpected move, the Empire has come out of hiding and united to take back the capital city of Courascant and also have taken over nearby systems.

The Rebel Alliance has formed the New Republic and, with the army of the New Jedi Order, led by Luke Skywalker, plan to take the Empire capital, Courascant, and defeat the Empire once and for all. However, unknown to the Jedi, the prophecy of the Chosen One was stolen by the Sith and a slightly altered one placed in the Jedi Temple over a thousand years ago. Anakin Skywalker is not the Chosen One destined to restore balance to the Force! And the villainous Emperor Palpatine knows the secret of Darth Plagius, and has cheated death on the second Death Star. He has moved his spirit to a clone on Courascant. He is planning to launch a surprise attack of stormtroopers, droids, and clones on the New Galactic Republic.

Palpatine is now more dangerous than ever and is seeking to find a new apprentice and form the first Intergalactic Empire once the galaxy has been subdued by the Empire. The only one who can stop him is the Chosen One, Luke Skywalker. The fate of the galaxy lies in his hands??

(The Star Wars music continues for a few more seconds and then stops playing.)

(On Courascant, two stormtroopers and an Imperial Guard are talking.)

Stormtrooper 1: (To the Imperial Guard) What are you doing here? The other Imperials got killed with the Emperor!

Imperial Guard: I?ve only just been promoted. The Emperor didn?t send me yet. Didn?t think I was ready. Anyway, I somehow don?t think he?s dead!

Stormtrooper 2: (Laughing) Ya right! The Death Star blew up! There?s no way he could have survived!

Imperial Guard: I just have this feeling. I sense that he?s not dead.

Instead of this:

EPISODE VII SECRETS OF THE SITH
The Rebel Alliance has destroyed the second Death Star, dealing a strong blow to the evil Galactic Empire. However, in an unexpected move, the Empire has come out of hiding and united to take back the capital city of Courascant and also have taken over nearby systems.
The Rebel Alliance has formed the New Republic and, with the army of the New Jedi Order, led by Luke Skywalker, plan to take the Empire capital, Courascant, and defeat the Empire once and for all. However, unknown to the Jedi, the prophecy of the Chosen One was stolen by the Sith and a slightly altered one placed in the Jedi Temple over a thousand years ago. Anakin Skywalker is not the Chosen One destined to restore balance to the Force! And the villainous Emperor Palpatine knows the secret of Darth Plagius, and has cheated death on the second Death Star. He has moved his spirit to a clone on Courascant. He is planning to launch a surprise attack of stormtroopers, droids, and clones on the New Galactic Republic.
Palpatine is now more dangerous than ever and is seeking to find a new apprentice and form the first Intergalactic Empire once the galaxy has been subdued by the Empire. The only one who can stop him is the Chosen One, Luke Skywalker. The fate of the galaxy lies in his hands??
(The Star Wars music continues for a few more seconds and then stops playing.)
(On Courascant, two stormtroopers and an Imperial Guard are talking.)
Stormtrooper 1: (To the Imperial Guard) What are you doing here? The other Imperials got killed with the Emperor!
Imperial Guard: I?ve only just been promoted. The Emperor didn?t send me yet. Didn?t think I was ready. Anyway, I somehow don?t think he?s dead!
Stormtrooper 2: (Laughing) Ya right! The Death Star blew up! There?s no way he could have survived!
Imperial Guard: I just have this feeling. I sense that he?s not dead.

Makes it easier