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    A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away....

    STAR WARS - EPISODE VIII - THE LAST JEDI

    Since the destruction of the Hosnian System, many planetary governments secede from the New
    Republic fearful of First Order retaliation. A weakened and leaderless New Republic Defense struggles to

    protect the remaining New Republic members.

    Meanwhile, as the Resistance musters its forces, General Leia Organa sends the young, Force-sensitive
    Rey on a mission to enlist the help of Jedi Master Luke Skywalker, the last hope of the galaxy...

    TILT UP the star field, past mining-colonized asteroids, to a large red, white, and blue marbled planet.
    City lights twinkle in the shadowed half.

    With a whoosh, a Star Destroyer drops out of hyperspace.
    A swarm of Tie Fighters and transports launches from its hangar.

    INVASION!

    The force descends upon the unsuspecting population, and the Star Destroyer leaps away into the
    stars.

    EXT. BILBRINGI - STARSHIP YARD - DAY

    Cranes swing and sparks fly along a row of massive starships under construction in dry docks.
    A chubby supervisor, on a floating platform of welding droids, wipes his brow as he gives the work a
    final inspection. Satisfied, he leans over the edge of the platform and shouts.

    SUPERVISOR: Section one-one-five-eight complete! Clear below!

    As he descends, he doesn't notice the missile impacts on the ships in the distance, until the blast wave
    reaches him. Sirens blare as Tie Fighters scream across the sky. The supervisor clings to the platform
    for life. He turns in shock as explosions erupt from the hulls. The ships list to one side and collapse
    under their own weight.

    Gozanti-class military transports with underslung urban model AT-ATs touch and go in the city center.
    The AT-ATs' cannons blast buildings and trample everything as citizens flee. Fast-attack hover tanks
    smash through a fortified perimeter. Two Bilbringi starfighters scramble from a Hangar before the tank's
    dual cannons pulverize it. The Bilbringi starfighters attack a squad of Tie Fighters but are quickly
    annihilated. A squad of stormtroopers holds back a crowd, as children are loaded onto transports. A
    small BLUE-HAIRED BOY. 8, breaks free from stormtrooper NT-8346's grip and sprints toward the
    crowd.

    TQ-7877: Stop him!

    The boy almost makes it, but WA-9042 raises his blaster and shoots him in the back with a stun bolt.
    The boy falls. The NT-8346 casually approaches to collect him.

    EXT. AHCH-TO - ISLAND - DAY

    REY'S young outstretched hand holds the worn lightsaber with confidence, although her face is star-
    struck. Hesitantly, LUKE accepts it. It feels good, comfortable and yet odd in his prosthetic hand. He
    cracks a smile of old memories and better days as he runs his fingers across the hilt.

    REY: Maz Kanata kept it safe.

    LUKE: Of course she did.

    REY: She said you'd return and help us.

    His smile fades and his eyes go cold.

    LUKE: She was mistaken.

    Luke turns his back on her. Taken aback, Rey calls out.

    REY: But you're a Jedi Master.

    The words drag on Luke's heart. He stops but doesn't turn.

    LUKE: I'm no Master. Not anymore.

    Rey watches he walks away, but legend or not, she won't let him off that easily and chases him down.

    REY: People are suffering. How can you walk away from us?

    Luke turns and holds out his hand threateningly. Rey stops in her tracks not knowing what to expect.

    LUKE: You think I don't know that?

    REY: Then do something.

    He stares at her, on the cusp of confession, but holds back.

    LUKE: I can't.

    REY: Why not? I don't understand.

    LUKE: It's not for you to understand. Please, leave me.

    EXT. AHCH-TO - MILLENNIUM FALCON - DAY

    CHEWIE, on a lift, repairs the damaged quad-laser cannon that hangs toward the ground. A data cable
    leads to R2-D2. He groans a command to Artoo. The cannon moves but spins wildly. Chewie howls for
    Artoo to stop. Artoo squeals. Chewie opens a panel and looks around inside with a flashlight. He spots a
    loose device with small lights. He disconnects the device and examines it. It looks old, but it also
    looks... Imperial. Chewie stuffs the device into his bag and closes the hatch. The cannon resets into its
    normal forward position. He turns to Rey as she returns, on the verge of tears.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - LOUNGE - DAY

    Artoo projects a full-size hologram of LEIA.

    REY: Why can't you talk to him?

    Defeated, Rey collapses on the bench seat. She feels small and put-upon with the fate of the galaxy.
    Leia's hologram sits next to Rey, like the ghost of Obi-wan.

    LEIA: If Maz says you're the only one who can reach him, then it needs to be you. I've come to learn
    she's usually right about these things.

    REY: I don't understand why it must be me.

    LEIA: Because you have a gift. The Force is strong in you. Show him that there is still hope for the
    Jedi.

    Leia cracks a smile.

    LEIA: You remind me of a much younger Luke Skywalker. He had the same doubts about himself. You
    want to be a Jedi, don't you?

    REY: I guess so, but-

    Done with the coddling, Leia becomes firm.

    LEIA: Then put aside your fears and fulfill your destiny. We're counting on you.

    Leia disappears. Rey still has her doubts.

    EXT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - EVENING

    Rey watches the ramp of the Falcon close. Her hair and wrap flutters as the ship rises, turns, and
    leaves her behind. Alone again, she turns toward the setting blue sun.

    EXT. HALMAD ORBIT - BATTLECRUISER PROMINENCE - DAY

    Tie Fighters strafe a massive armored hull as they skim along the elaborate surface. Turbolasers shoot
    down the fighters, but not before they launch missiles.

    INT. BATTLECRUISER PROMINENCE - BRIDGE - DAY

    The impact rattles the bridge but not the crew. The craggy-faced ADMIRAL BASHIER, 60s with one
    cataractous eye, steadies himself as CAPTAIN CANADY, 40s but boyish, approaches.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: Admiral, they've invaded Bilbringi.

    From the landing, the Admiral looks out to their sister ship, THE INTREPID, also under siege from Tie
    Fighters.

    ADMIRAL BASHIER: Inform the Intrepid they must stave off the First Order alone.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: (in a hushed tone) Surely the Resistance can help with the more trivial conflicts.

    ADMIRAL BASHIER: Nonsense. We don't need the likes of an unruly militia. Besides, this offensive is
    unsustainable. The First Order will break soon enough. Another missile knocks the admiral into the
    console. He catches himself and a doubtful look from Captain Canady.

    INT. BATTLECRUISER PROMINENCE - HANGAR BAY - DAY

    Ground crews prep, repair, load, and fuel T-85 X-wing Fighters. Pilots perform preflight inspections on
    data pads. MYRI, 20s, a thin woman in a flight suit and black bob walks the column of X-wings. She
    micro-manages the inspection with a helmet under one arm and the air of a superior officer.

    KORTU, 30s, a tall, visibly strong, and bald near-human with yellow eyes and chalk-white skin
    decorated with intricate black tattoos, hands Myri his data pad.

    MYRI: Run those calcs again. You can't possibly be burning this much fuel unless you're running away.

    KORTU: (stilted) Kortu never runs away. Froog, he runs away.

    MYRI: And you've fired as many shots as the rest of the squad combined.

    KORTU: Because Kortu shoots down as many TIEs as the squad combined.

    She ignores him, turns to the squad, and yells over the noise.

    MYRI: It's important we make strong, decisive kills. With the New Republic gone, we can't afford to
    waste our resources. Be smart. Be efficient.

    FROOG, 20s, a gangly man with a chin beard, almost as tall as Kortu, spots Captain Canady over Myri's
    shoulder.

    FROOG: Captain on the deck.

    The squad snaps to attention. Myri stiffens even more.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: At ease, Rapier Squadron. Your mission has been scrubbed. Secure your fighters for
    hyperspace. A word, please, Lieutenant Commander.

    MYRI: Secure your craft for transport. I want complete flight logs and maintenance reports in fifteen.

    The squad collectively groans as Myri joins Captain Canady.

    ALEXA, 20s, a voluptuous woman with natural bronze skin and a bit of an outsider's chip on her
    shoulder mutters to Froog.

    ALEXA: I feel sorry for her boyfriend.

    FROOG: Alexa, you know she doesn't date. It's not in the service manual.

    Away from the activity, Captain Canady turns to Myri.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: Your squad has certainly lived up to Rapier's reputation.

    MYRI: Thank you, sir.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: A little advice from a man who commands thousands every day, go easy on them.
    It's a stressful job.

    MYRI: I will, sir, once the First Order threat has been eradicated.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: You may have their obedience, but you won't have their respect.

    MYRI: All I need is their obedience and your respect, sir.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: You have it.

    MYRI: Thank you, sir.

    Captain Canady looks about the hangar bay, but something weighs heavy on his mind.

    MYRI: Sir?

    He looks at Myri and gauges her trust.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: (in a hushed tone)

    When was the last time you spoke with your father?

    MYRI: My father and I don't speak often.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: But, you can get in touch with him.

    Myri looks confused about this conversation.

    MYRI: Yes, sir, but personal communication is not permitted during hostilities.

    Teetering, he decides to go for it.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: We need the help of the Resistance.

    Bemused, Myri relaxes her composure.

    MYRI: The Resistance? They're nothing but outer-rim hotshots and old Rebellion war vets.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: Maybe so, but we need every fighter we can get. The New Republic fleet is weaker
    than publicly known, even within the upper ranks, and right now we're at the breaking point.

    MYRI: What? I don't believe that.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: It's true.

    He hands her a data device, but she's not on board yet.

    MYRI: I assume this request does not come from Admiral Bashier.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: He's a wise and honorable man, but he's wrong about this. We need help.

    MYRI: And if he finds out about your mutinous plot, he'll throw us in the brig.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: I'll take full responsibility if it comes out, but I'm hoping-

    MYRI: I want the EX-1.

    Captain Canady blinks dumbfounded.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: That's Steadman's ship.

    Myri gives him a steely-eyed stare. He relents.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: You'll go far, Lieutenant Commander.

    A devious smile appears on Myri's face.

    EXT. MON CALA - DAY

    A heavily armed fighter/transport with two hulking engines, an FT-71 MARAUDER, drops through thick
    rain clouds. It skims across a turbulent ocean toward a floating city.

    EXT. MON CALA - DROID REPAIR SHOP - DAY

    With a deep moan, the marauder circles the landing site. The engines pivot and set the craft down into
    dense urban decay. Rain streams down the fuselage and sizzles on the engine. The door slides open
    and four mercenaries, dressed in tactical gear, jump out and secure the immediate area.

    Among them are QUIX, a green-skinned, bug-eyed RODIAN, IG-88, an ASSASSIN DROID gone rogue,
    KATHRYN, an armored MANDALORIAN woman, and REAGAR, a two head-tailed TWI'LEK. The Rodian
    signals "CLEAR" and a small, cloaked figure emerges.

    INT. DROID REPAIR SHOP - DAY

    Mechanical locks clatter and steel tracks creak as the door of the dark building slides opens and
    silhouette the team. The unknown figure pushes back her hood and steps forward into a pool of light.
    IT'S LEIA!

    She shows no sign of fear as two unnerving, squid-headed QUARREN guards greet the group. The
    guards lead them through a maze of slimy pipes, rusted droid chassis, and dripping roof leaks. They
    arrive at a dim and dirty room occupied by a heavy, metal table and formally dressed AMBASSADOR
    CHOCOLO, a fish-headed MON CALAMARI.

    He stands with respect and gives a slight bow.

    AMBASSADOR CHOCOLO: General Organa. I apologize for the precautions, but with the First Order
    occupation, I must insist on discretion.

    Leia smiles at the sight of her old friend.

    LEIA: Apologies are unnecessary, Ambassador Chocolo. It's good to see you.

    Ambassador Chocolo waves the guards away. The Quarren leave, but the mercenaries stay and
    establish a defensive perimeter.

    LEIA: I want to personally extend my sympathies for the loss of your daughter.

    As they sit, Leia hands him an elegant piece of coral.

    LEIA: She gave this to me when she first took her post on the council. I want you to have it.

    Ambassador Chocolo accepts it and fights back his tears.

    AMBASSADOR CHOCOLO: I was so proud of her. You have always been very generous to us. Thank you.

    LEIA: We wouldn't be here without your support, which is the other reason I needed to meet with you.
    The Resistance is destitute. We need ships, we need supplies, and we need people. I've had to enlist
    these mercenaries at great expense, for we can't spare a single fighter.

    The ambassador lowers his head in shame. A subtle thud from the next room piques the suspicion of
    Reagar. He signals to Kathryn with a nod toward the sound.

    AMBASSADOR CHOCOLO: I'm afraid we cannot lend you the aid you require. Even if we had the
    resources to spare, it would be too great a risk. Right now, we can only hope our people will survive
    this ordeal.

    Kathryn slowly pokes her head into the next room.

    LEIA: Ambassador, without the Resistance there is no hope for anyone.

    KATHRYN: It's a trap!

    Blaster bolts pummel Kathryn's armor. Her body hits the floor. Stormtroopers enter the room shooting.
    Everyone scrambles. Leia pushes over the table and pulls the ambassador behind it, but not before a
    bolt mortally wounds him. IG-88 and Quix hold off the stormtroopers as Leia tries to drag the heavy
    ambassador to safety.

    QUIX: (in Rodian) Gimme some cover!

    IG-88 lays down a terrific spray of bolts as Quix and Reagar hop an overturned cabinet toward Leia and
    Ambassador Chocolo.

    Reagar takes a blaster bolt to the back as Quix grabs the ambassador by his jacket. He and Leia drag
    him clear of the fight.

    IG-88's blasters smolder and he stops to let them cool.

    Quix's wrist holoprojector spawns an image of the blob-like worm GORGA THE HUTT. He quickly turns
    his back to Leia.

    GORGA THE HUTT: (in Huttese) Do you have her?

    QUIX: (in Rodian) Soon.

    Leia cradles Ambassador Chocolo's enormous head in her arms.

    AMBASSADOR CHOCOLO: You still have a chance to flee.

    He hands Leia a small blaster.

    LEIA: I have to do this.

    AMBASSADOR CHOCOLO: Ever the brave one.

    His life slips away. Quix grabs Leia's arm.

    QUIX: We're getting out of here.

    They start back the way they came, but more stormtroopers appear from behind heavy machinery and
    cut off their escape.

    QUIX: (in Rodian) We're surrounded!

    IG-88: I'll generate a diversion. Prepare for a rapid departure.

    IG-88 launches a thermal detonator from his forearm.

    CAPTAIN PHASMA: Take cover!

    KABOOM! The blast knocks down walls and collapses part of the ceiling.

    IG-88: Evacuate. Evacuate.

    As IG-88 moves through the debris, CAPTAIN PHASMA's armored glove grabs him through the rubble.
    He pulls his leg up to free himself, only to drag Captain Phasma out from under the wreckage. IG-88
    attacks but Captain Phasma blasts him. He flies across the room and lands in a pile of scrap droids. She
    turns her attention to Quix and Leia.

    CAPTAIN PHASMA: Hand over General Leia and you'll leave here with your life plus twice your fee.

    QUIX: (in Rodian) Show me the money.

    CAPTAIN PHASMA: I have it here.

    Captain Phasma raises her blaster, but IG-88 tackles her from behind.

    QUIX: (in basic) I'll get us out of here.

    Quix launches a small rocket at the stormtroopers hidden behind the machinery. The explosion topples
    the heavy equipment onto the entrenched stormtroopers.

    QUIX: Come on, we're going.

    He turns to Leia to find her pistol pointed at him. He tries to raise his gun, but LEIA SHOOTS FIRST.
    The Rodian falls to his knees and slumps over. Captain Phasma and IG-88 wrestle and fight hand to
    hand, but fighting IG-88 is like fighting a broken lawn chair. He slams her into the wall and knocks off
    her helmet.

    That does it. Enraged, she stands, grabs a pipe, and strikes IG-88 with a hostile vengeance. His spindly
    arms attempt to land a blow, but Captain Phasma deflects each swing until she gets close enough to
    grab him around the neck.

    His arms thrash about helplessly as she rips off his head in a shower of sparks. Victorious, she drops his
    limp body and tosses his lifeless head to the side. She turns to find a stormtrooper with her helmet in
    hand and Leia in binders.

    CAPTAIN PHASMA: You're right, General.

    She triumphantly puts her helmet on.

    CAPTAIN PHASMA: There is no hope for anyone.

    In the background, IG-88's arm slowly reaches for his head.

    EXT. AHCH-TO - JEDI TEMPLE - NIGHT

    A large ringed moon rises behind Rey as she slowly creeps up onto a rocky outcrop and spies Luke
    entering a badly eroded and overgrown stone temple.

    INT. JEDI TEMPLE - NIGHT

    Torchlight flickers in the distance as Rey, both excited and fearful, sneaks through a long arcade. It
    opens up into the Hall of Knights. With no sign of Luke, she ventures into the grand rotunda. She looks
    up, mesmerized, as the moonlight shines in through an oculus that makes column shadows radiate
    out like spokes. Rey moves into the center and takes it all in. She feels something deep within her,
    something unfamiliar. As the feeling intensifies, she gives in and lets its warmth and comfort wash over
    her.

    LUKE: That's the Force flowing through you.

    Rey looks toward Luke's echoing voice as he descends a grand stairway, moving in and out of light.

    LUKE: Like people, a place can have a strong connection to the Force.

    REY: It's beautiful.

    She steps away from the center and collects herself.

    LUKE: There have been many Jedi Temples, but this was the first. Now it's a shrine to honor the Jedi
    legacy.

    REY: (sarcastically) A shrine or a mausoleum?

    Luke sighs with annoyance.

    LUKE: The Jedi are extinct. Nothing can change that now.

    REY: You can revive it. You're a Jedi Master.

    LUKE: I'm not. I violated my oath. The murder of the Jedi Knights and the destruction of the academy
    is the result of my negligence and failure. Everyone suffered because of it.

    REY: You can't blame yourself for the actions of the First Order.

    Luke's thoughts go dark.

    LUKE: I pushed him to Dark Side.

    Luke uses a quick Force push to extinguish the torches.

    FLASHBACK TO: EXT. DAGOBAH - NEW JEDI ACADEMY - DAY

    Dense vines and tree canopies already envelop the bright, new Jedi Academy. In the lush forecourt of
    the institution, young Jedi practice their skills on native plant species. Luke oversees their techniques
    while he lectures.

    LUKE: The Force connects all living things.

    A flower blossoms for a young human girl, 15, as Luke passes.

    YOUNG BEN SOLO, 10, with a long black braid and the only student with a red accent on his tunic,
    shows off.

    His tree sprouts branches, leaves, blossoms, and produces fruit. He glances around with arrogant pride.
    Luke approaches with a look of disappointment. He plucks a fruit and hands it to Ben.

    LUKE: A Jedi does not coerce, but inspires. One cannot demand another's faith.

    Luke leaves Ben with that thought. Ben grumbles, hurt by Luke's dismissal. He takes an angry bite of
    his fruit, but the bitter taste makes him cringe and spits it out.

    REN, 8, a frail, blue-eyed boy, shutters as he tries to grow his small, wilted plant.

    Luke kneels next to him.

    LUKE: Relax and clear your mind.

    The boy sighs and closes his eyes.

    LUKE: Reach out with your feelings. Connect with the seedling, like a friend.

    Ren opens his eyes and lifts his hands. Luke covertly raises a finger. The stalk straightens and the bud
    billows. Ren's heart swells with excitement.

    LUKE: Good.

    Luke backs off and lets Ren take over. The petals open and turn out but then shrivel. The leaves wilt.
    Ren's eyes fill with tears.

    REN: It's dead.

    LUKE: It's not dead. Let's try again.

    REN: I can't do it.

    LUKE: Patience, young Ren. You've taken your first step into a larger world.

    A shadow sweeps over the pair. They look up to see Ben and SNOKE, 50s, wealthy, well-dressed, but
    pale.

    SNOKE: Your nephew here is quite the Jedi. I've no doubt he'll become a great Master.

    Luke stands.

    LUKE: Perhaps, if he can learn self-control. Ben poorly masks an indignant look.

    SNOKE: I only wish my son had half his talent.

    LUKE: It comes easily for Ben. However, the true essence of a Jedi is not their command of the Force,
    but their restraint.

    Luke musses Ren's hair. Snoke plucks Ren's seedling from ground. He looks at it with disgust and
    tosses it aside.

    SNOKE: Restraint is not a problem for Ren with such little command of the Force.

    LUKE: Some don't develop their abilities until much later in life. I didn't develop my mine until I was
    nineteen.

    SNOKE: Perhaps Ben could help with his training during the reprieve? (to Ben) How would you like to
    come and vacation with Ren and me on Spira?

    Ben's eyes light up.

    BEN SOLO: Spira? I wanna go. Please, Uncle Luke. Please.

    LUKE: But you haven't seen your parents once this session.

    BEN SOLO: Mother's busy with the New Republic and Han, well, he's never home. I'd spend my entire
    vacation with Threepio trying to teach me to speak Bocce.

    REN: Please, Master Luke.

    Luke glances toward-

    INT. SPIRA - MANSION BEDROOM - NIGHT

    A subtle sneer grows on Snoke's lips. Ben kneels next to Ren, who lies dead on the patterned rug of his
    ornate bedroom next to a glowing red lightsaber. The slice that crosses through half his body smokes.

    BEN SOLO: It was an accident.

    SNOKE: It's not your fault, my son. He was weak. But now you must learn the ways of the Force, as
    my people know it. It's tradition.

    EXT. SPIRA - CEMETERY - DAY

    A torch ignites a pyre. Snoke tosses the torch into the rising flames. Ben and Leia hold hands as Luke
    joins them at the front of the large gathering. Snoke stands alone. Ben moves toward Snoke, but Leia
    doesn't let go of his hand. Ben turns to her with a look of dismissiveness in his eyes. His hand slips
    from hers and he crosses over to Snoke. Luke watches through the flames as Ben offers his
    sympathies. Snoke embraces him like a long lost son.

    END FLASHBACK: EXT. AHCH-TO - STACKED STONE HUT - NIGHT

    The flames of the pyre dissolve into the hearth fire reflected in Rey's eyes.

    REY: You can't give up because of one mistake.

    LUKE: Obi-Wan is dead, Han is dead, my father is dead, the future of the Jedi is dead, and I created a
    Sith Lord who leads an enemy far more ruthless than the Empire ever was. That's a pretty big misstep.

    REY: But, this is exactly why we need you. You have to try.

    LUKE: An old friend once said, 'Do or do not, there is no try.' I will not make things worse.

    REY: What? That's ridiculous. Whoever said that is an idiot.

    Luke gives her startled look of bewilderment.

    REY: If you don't risk failure, you'll never succeed at anything. I'll be your apprentice. Be a Master once
    again. I'll never turn to the Dark Side, I promise you.

    Luke can't help but be touched by her tenaciousness. His heart warms and he feels the call back to the
    light. He closes his eyes and reaches out toward her.

    LUKE: The Force is strong with you. Perhaps, even stronger than with me.

    He opens his eyes again, undecided.

    LUKE: But, I am not convinced. Besides, you are too old begin the training.

    Luke turns back toward the fire.

    REY: Too old?

    LUKE: Tell Leia that you tried your best. She'll understand. It's a shame. You would have made a
    powerful Jedi.

    EXT. KRANT - SPECTER BASE - DAY

    A dense forest surrounds the resistance base and the landing field with a neat row of X-wings.

    POE and BB-8 stand on the back of their signature black and orange X-wing.

    POE: Let's add redundant power couplings to all four phase transducers.

    BB-8 gleefully bleeps an acknowledgment when a squad of old, battle-scarred X-wings screams past
    fast and low. Poe looks up with a jolt as BB-8 squeals in fright.

    POE: Those are old T-65s.

    Klaxons blare and the base goes on alert.

    POE: Come on, Bee.

    Poe slides down the ladder and hits the ground running. The X-wings circle the base in formation.
    Soldiers with blasters line up in defensive positions. The fighters descend upon the tarmac. Poe runs
    upstream through the river of fleeing pilots and right through the defensive perimeter.

    RESISTANCE FIGHTER: Take cover!

    POE: Hold your fire!

    The pilot rises from the cockpit and removes his helmet to reveal WEDGE ANTILLES. He looks down at
    the armed men who surround him and puts his hands up half-heartedly.

    WEDGE: Whatever my wife told you, I swear it was an exaggeration.

    Poe reaches the group and waves to Wedge.

    POE: Captain Antilles!

    WEDGE: Poe! It's good to know I haven't been completely forgotten.

    More fighters fly by.

    EXT. STAR DESTROYER FINALIZER - DAY

    Tie Fighters escort a TIE Avenger from the ocean planet toward the menacing Star Destroyer.

    INT. STAR DESTROYER FINALIZER - RESEARCH LAB - DAY

    An old withered hand, laced with mechanical tendrils partially overgrown with translucent flesh from
    years of dependency, injects an opaque black fluid into an IV drip. The black fluid creeps along the tube
    and into AL-2112'S vein.

    AL-2112: No. NO. NO!

    AL-2112, on a table and dressed only in his black body glove, writhes in pain and pulls violently at his
    restraints. He goes limp and his face changes from fearful to ghostly.

    Kylo, unmasked but in his black armor and cloak, watches along with DR. GRAFT, a geriatric clone
    trooper assisted by a tentacle-like exoskeleton that extends to every extremity.

    Dr. Graft examines AL-2112's eyes and checks his vitals.

    DR. GRAFT: This derivative has proven to be the most promising, with ninety-three percent
    effectiveness and a mortality rate of only seventeen percent.

    GENERAL HUX barges into the lab. Kylo turns to address him.

    GENERAL HUX: You may be the Supreme Leader's Hand, but I'm the commander of the military.

    KYLO: What are you babbling about, Hux?

    GENERAL HUX: Your unauthorized use of State property and personnel.

    KYLO: Has General Organa been captured?

    GENERAL HUX: That does not excuse your actions, and do not think for a moment that her presence
    here is anything short of a Resistance ploy.

    General Hux sees AL-2112 on the table.

    GENERAL HUX: What's going on? Release that man.

    General Hux pushes past Kylo and releases AL-2112's restraints. Dr. Graft moves to stop him, but Kylo
    holds him back. As one restraint opens, AL-2112 grabs General Hux by his throat and angrily squeezes
    it.

    KYLO: Blind devotion without question or hesitation isn't enough. Droids are a testament to that. We
    need soldiers driven by passion and a genuine desire to succeed at any cost or sacrifice.

    General Hux gasps and tries to free himself. After a moment, Kylo waves his hand and AL-2112
    releases him. General Hux falls to the floor and wheezes.

    KYLO: Start with the 501st Battalion. If all goes well, we'll administer injections to the newly acquired
    cadets on Raithal.

    DR. GRAFT: I need more time to test viability.

    KYLO: Test them in the field.

    GENERAL HUX: (in a raspy voice) These are my men!

    KYLO: Yes, your men. Your men who robbed us of our victory on D'Qar. I am forced to compensate for
    your incompetence and lack of discipline.

    GENERAL HUX: One man, out of thousands! One man!

    INT. KRANT - SPECTER BASE - DAY

    FINN, still in his leather jacket, pulls gingerly at a twisted nest of wires under the holographic projector.

    FINN: I got it.

    Sparks shoot out of the panel. ADMIRAL STATURA waits impatiently as the projector flickers.

    FINN: I got it.

    Finn jabs his hand inside, then slowly pulls out a hairy, rat-sized spider. Its legs flail about angrily. He
    slides out and a hand is offered to him. He grabs it, and POE helps him up.

    POE: Hey, Finn, how are you fitting in?

    FINN: Oh, you know. I'm just doing my part to further the cause.

    Finn shows off the spider to Poe. Poe flinches. Finn tosses the spider, but it scurries back into the
    console.

    Wedge enters as big as life. The staff crowds around him to shake hands and dish out praise.

    FINN: Who's that?

    POE: That, my friend, is Wedge Antilles. He's the leader of Rogue Squadron and my trainer back when I
    first joined the Republic Defense. He's gone toe to toe with more Death Stars than even Luke
    Skywalker.

    The staff parts as Admirals Statura and ACKBAR greet Wedge.

    ADMIRAL STATURA: I heard you retired, but I could never bring myself to believe it.

    WEDGE: Yeah, it's true, it's true, but two weeks alone with Iella-

    They all laugh because IELLA ANTILLES is an unpleasant person.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: What brings on this unexpected visit?

    WEDGE: Unfortunately, I'm here with troubling news. Where's Princess Leia?

    ADMIRAL STATURA: She's on a diplomatic mission.

    Wedge holds up a data device.

    WEDGE: This can't wait.

    Statura, Ackbar, Wedge, Poe, Finn, and TEMMIN "SNAP" WEXLEY, gather around the holographic
    projector. Wedge sees Snap and lights up.

    WEDGE: Temmin, I hardly recognized you.

    He gives Snap a hug/pat.

    SNAP: It's good to see you too, Wedge.

    WEDGE: Temmin here saved my life back on Akiva. Look at you, a resistance pilot. Your mother would
    be proud.

    POE: And this is Finn.

    Wedge shakes his hand with a big warm smile.

    POE: He's the stormtrooper who defected from the First Order.

    Wedge's grin turns disingenuous as he withdraws his hand.

    FINN: Poe tells me you're quite the legend.

    WEDGE: (acidly) Yes. You're lucky to be alive.

    Finn shifts uneasily and feels even more like an outsider.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: Let's see this news you bring.

    Wedge stops Admiral Ackbar from inserting the data device.

    WEDGE: Admiral, do you think it wise to have a- civilian present?

    POE: Sir, Finn has more insight into the First Order than any of us.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: His actions have proven his loyalty.

    Poe reassures Finn with a hand on his shoulder.

    WEDGE: (under his breath) A loyal traitor.

    Admiral Ackbar inserts the device and brings up a cropped region of the galaxy with red-tinted swaths.

    WEDGE: The First Order has overrun the New Territories and Northern Dependencies. Their attacks are
    focused on New Republic members.

    Poe points to blue markers.

    POE: These are the New Republic starships? There's only one per system.

    WEDGE: (hesitantly) Yes, barely enough to hold the line.

    SNAP: Where are the Star Destroyers?

    WEDGE: No Star Destroyers, only fighters, and ground forces.

    FINN: They've got a lot of stormtroopers, but they're not the Empire. There is no way they could grab
    and hold this much territory.

    POE: That's not their objective. Every member of the New Republic is entitled to protection by the
    Republic Defense.

    WEDGE: I believe the First Order's intention is to isolate each Star Cruiser then overwhelm it with a
    fleet of Star Destroyers.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: If that's true, their ground forces must be just large enough to draw in the New
    Republic.

    SNAP: Without the Republic Defense, there'll be no one left to stop them.

    FINN: (awkwardly defiant) Except for us!

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: We don't have the resources to fend off the First Order alone.

    Wedge barely contains his excitement.

    WEDGE: I have a plan to stop them.

    He points, and the map zooms in on the Bilbringi system. It shows the Prominence starship in orbit.

    WEDGE: If we assist the Prominence at Bilbringi with a fast, coordinated strike, we can end the
    skirmish quickly.

    A second starship appears next to the Prominence with starfighters.

    WEDGE: Then together we hop from system to system eliminating the invading forces and picking up
    additional Star Cruisers until the fleet is reunited.

    The map zooms out. A line extends from system to system and the red zone fades away along the
    path. Admiral Statura strokes his chin.

    ADMIRAL STATURA: I'd like to get General Organa's opinion on this.

    WEDGE: We need to move on this. Time is not on our side.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: (reluctantly) All right. Finalize your plans.

    FINN: Sir, instead of wiping out these forces indiscriminately, we could give them a chance to
    surrender. We would take fewer losses, faster victories, and possibly gain allies.

    Everyone gives Finn an astonished look.

    POE: What?

    FINN: Sir, these forces are isolated from their command, essentially abandoned. They may be open
    to surrender. We'd save a lot of lives.

    WEDGE: Stormtroopers don't defect.

    FINN: I did, and I'm no different than any other stormtrooper. There have to be others who want out.
    And, with all due respect, sir, the stormtroopers you fought were clones bred to serve and die. Today
    they're made up of real people. Many are torn from their families to serve against their will.

    This stirs Admiral Statura.

    ADMIRAL STATURA: How much dissent is there?

    FINN: (sheepishly) I only knew one other, and he was killed on Jakku. No one else dares talk about it,
    but we all feel it.

    WEDGE: Sir, we don't have time for this.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: I agree. Poe, ready your squadrons for the assault.

    Wedge casts Finn a disparaging eye as they depart.

    INT. SPECTER BASE - CORRIDOR - DAY

    Finn rushes to catch up to Poe's angered pace.

    FINN: Poe, wait up.

    Poe spins around.

    POE: What were you thinking?

    Finn stares at him dumbfounded.

    FINN: I was only trying to help.

    POE: Those are senior members of the Resistance. You can't talk to them like that. They deserve
    respect.

    FINN: If I can't talk, why am I there?

    POE: (exasperated) Look. Just... do what you're told.

    FINN: Like a stormtrooper. How is it that they trusted a notorious smuggler with secret missions, but
    I'm only trusted to sweep the floor?

    POE: Han's missions weren't exactly sanctioned. These men have been fighting stormtroopers
    since they were born. It's going to take some time for them to see you as I do.

    FINN: By that time, you'll be a hero, Rey will be a Jedi, and the war will be over. And I'll be the guy who
    fixed the holographic projector.

    Poe grabs Finn's shoulder reassuringly.

    POE: Hey... I'm already a hero.

    Finn lets out a small chuckle.

    POE: And so are you. We wouldn't be here otherwise. Don't forget that. Now, please, for me, stay out
    of trouble.

    Poe disappears into the briefing room.

    INT. AHCH-TO - STACKED STONE HOUSE - MORNING

    Sunlight creeps across Rey's face as she sleeps on a cot. She squints and opens her eyes. Alone, she
    wraps up in a blanket, her breath forming clouds. She shuffles toward the fireplace and finds a hot
    breakfast. On the mantle sit Luke and Anakin's lightsabers. Curious, she reaches out for Luke's
    lightsaber, but she remembers what happened last time and hesitates. Throwing caution to the wind,
    she grabs the hilt-

    VISION BEGINS:

    We hear Force lightning crackle and Luke's cries of pain. The room darkens into a starfield that tilts
    down onto a forest clearing on the moon of Endor. Darth Vader, his breath slow and rhythmic, stands
    engulfed in flames. He raises his arms out, beckoning. A newborn's cry echoes from behind.

    LEIA (V.O.): (teary) So beautiful.

    Rey turns away. The stars and moon are now outside an open bedroom balcony. The moonlight
    silhouettes MARA JADE SKYWALKER'S naked body propped up on an elbow in bed.

    LUKE (V.O.): (in a whisper) No one can know.

    Behind Rey, a warm light grows like a rising sun and partially lights Mara's face, smooth white skin, and
    flaming red hair.

    KYLO (V.O.): Traitor. Liar. Hypocrite.

    Rey turns toward the light to find herself outside of the moisture farm on Tatooine where Luke grew
    up. Mara now stands before her, dejected, as a hot breeze rustles her skirt and hair. Her arms cradle
    her pregnant belly.

    HAN (V.O.): You're safe here.

    Smoke and flames grow behind her. The house is on fire-

    VISION ENDS:

    LUKE (O.S.): I trust you slept well.

    Rey snaps out of her trance and turns with a start. Luke hangs up his cloak and notices the surprise
    that lingers in Rey's eyes. She turns back around and tries to cover.

    REY: Um, yeah. Never better. I didn't know Jedi skills included cooking because this smells delicious.

    Luke sits at the table and pours two cups of caf.

    LUKE: I've been thinking about what you said at the temple.

    Rey joins him, and he gives her the first cup.

    LUKE: I believe you're right. I may no longer be a Jedi Master, but I can still train Jedi.

    REY: You are a Jedi Master. You're only a failure if you don't learn from your mistakes.

    Luke looks at her in surprise. Rey's presumptuousness embarrasses her.

    LUKE: (jokingly) Perhaps you should be the master, and me the padawan.

    REY: Forgive me, Master Luke.

    LUKE: Never apologize for the truth, but be diplomatic in your delivery.

    Rey sips her caf. It's not good.

    LUKE: Why do you want to be a Jedi?

    REY: I hoped it would help me find my parents. Maz says I should give up on them.

    LUKE: Maz is usually right about these things, but not always. I've never known the Force used to find
    someone. My sister and I do share a connection that can span the galaxy. Do you know if your parents
    are force-sensitive?

    Rey eyes him suspiciously.

    REY: I don't remember much, but maybe.

    INT. KRANT - SPECTER BASE - COMMAND CENTER - DAY

    Finn wipes clear a strategic plan from a transparent tactical screen. He finds a particularly stubborn
    spot and scratches at it with a fingernail.

    IG-88: Touchstone to Specter Base.

    Finn approaches the empty comm station and presses the comm button. A hologram of IG-88 appears,
    his head askew.

    FINN: Go for Specter Base.

    IG-88: The mission has failed. General Leia has been captured, a trap set by the First Order.

    Finn waves down MAJOR TASLIN BRANCE. Major Brance sees the hologram and hurries over.

    MAJOR BRANCE: I'll take it from here.

    Finn moves aside as Major Brance puts on a headset.

    MAJOR BRANCE: Touchstone, what's your status?

    INT. SPECTER BASE - MEDICAL BAY - DAY

    Threepio holds a tray of instruments for the 2-1B surgical droid in the dimly lit recovery room. Three
    men lay in bed, and a fourth floats in a Bacta tank.

    THREEPIO: ...worshiped me, quite understandably, as a god. Despite their taste for human flesh, I
    managed to convince them that it was in their best interest-

    Finn pokes his head into the room.

    FINN: Can I borrow him?

    He grabs Threepio and pulls him out into the corridor. From inside the medical bay, the patients cheer.

    THREEPIO: What's the meaning of this? I was in the middle of an amusing anecdote.

    FINN: (in a hushed tone) I need your help for a secret mission.

    THREEPIO: What mission? I haven't heard of any secret mission.
    Finn shushes Threepio.

    FINN: Because it's a secret mission.

    THREEPIO: But why must I go? I'm not a soldier. This seems highly irregular.

    FINN: I- WE need someone who is smart, experienced, and knows their way around the galaxy.

    THREEPIO: I see. It is true, there are few who come close to my-

    FINN: Great. Meet me at the Falcon. I'm getting us a pilot.

    Finn takes off down the corridor.

    THREEPIO: But- but, where are we going?

    EXT. KRANT ORBIT - DAY

    Poe leads Black Squadron from the atmosphere and toward a large collection of starfighters and the
    ECHO OF HOPE, an old but heavily armed Star Cruiser.

    POE: As soon as we arrive at Bilbringi, go directly to the planet. Do not engage the enemy around the
    Prominence, Kare'. Let Echo of Hope handle them. Okay, sound off.

    ODDY MUVA: Black Five, standing by.

    L'ULO: Black Two, standing by.

    SNAP: Black Four, standing by.

    JESSIKA PAVA: Black Three, standing by.

    KARE' KUN: Black Six, ready to get it on!

    Poe grins as his squad cheers over the comm.

    INT. STAR CRUISER ECHO OF HOPE - BRIDGE - DAY

    From his command chair, Admiral Ackbar watches Black Squadron as they take the lead through the
    transparisteel window.

    POE: Black Squadron in position.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR Prepare for the jump to hyperspace, on my mark.

    INT. X-WINGS - DAY

    The diverse species of starfighter pilots in the collection of squadrons, including the SULLUSTAN NIEN
    NUNB, psyche themselves up as Admiral Ackbar counts down.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: Three... Two... One... Mark.

    EXT. KRANT ORBIT - DAY

    Each squadron streaks away, followed by the Echo of Hope.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - MAIN CORRIDOR - DAY

    Chewbacca and Finn jog up the ramp. Threepio chases after them in wonder as they head toward the
    cockpit.

    THREEPIO: Where's the pilot?

    INT./EXT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT - DAY

    Chewie sits in the left seat and Finn in the right. Finn straps in and Chewie starts the engines.

    THREEPIO: Chewbacca can't fly the ship.

    FINN: Sure he can. (to Chewbacca) Right?

    Chewie grunts and shrugs. Finn turns to Threepio.

    FINN: See?

    The Falcon drifts forward and drags its front landing gear along the tarmac. The front end lifts and the
    ship climbs, barely missing treetops but smashes into the Resistance antenna array.

    THREEPIO: Now look what you've done, you oversized Ewok. You said you could fly this thing.

    Chewie barks back defensively.

    THREEPIO: Well, then you should have brought Artoo. I'm no astromech.

    The Falcon wobbles off into the sky, landing gear still down. Finn white-knuckles the console while
    Chewie frantically steers and works the controls.

    THREEPIO: You'd best turn around before you get us all killed.

    FINN: We can't go back. They'd hang us.

    THREEPIO: Hang us? Are we fugitives? Blast my trustful nature. How am I always the one to get
    mixed up in these things?

    FINN: Someone needs to rescue Leia from the First Order.

    THREEPIO: A stormtrooper, a Wookiee, and a protocol droid, it sounds like the beginning of a bad joke.
    Do you even know where she is?

    FINN: Not exactly, but I'm working on it. It's what Han would have done.

    Chewie gives a sad moan in agreement.

    FINN: I do know that she was last seen with a mercenary that looks like a caf machine.

    Chewie growls a suggestion.

    THREEPIO: The Daystar Casino? Have you lost your Wookiee mind?

    Chewie barks a retort.

    THREEPIO: Yes, and bounty hunters, spice dealers, Hutt gangsters, Black Sun, all of which despise the
    Resistance almost as much as the First Order.

    FINN: Well, then it's a good thing we're fugitives. Hit it, Chewie.

    The engines rev up but cut out and send the ship tumbling end over end. It rights itself, raises its
    landing gear, and jumps to hyperspace.
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    INT. STAR DESTROYER FINALIZER - VISITOR'S QUARTERS - DAY

    Leia looks longingly out at the stars through the floor-to-ceiling transparisteel wall of her luxurious
    V.I.P. suite. A Tie Fighter patrol flies past. She turns away and resigns herself to an oversized sofa. She
    sits and casually reaches under the sofa. A compartment slides open and she removes an eight-inch
    vibroknife. The door unlocks, and Kylo enters in full battle gear. She stands and hides the weapon on
    herself with a dispassionate cool. Kylo pushes up his mask.

    KYLO: (sarcastically) Mother.

    Leia shocked at her son's scarred face, steps up to him and caresses his cheek.

    LEIA: Look what they've done to you.

    KYLO: Spare me the concerned mother act. Han was a much better liar than you.

    LEIA: Oh, not this again.

    KYLO: You're a princess and the Minister of State for the New Republic, and he was an outlaw and a
    womanizer.

    LEIA: No, you're wrong. He loved me. Han would never do that. You don't know him like I do.

    KYLO: You lie to yourself, but none of that matters now that he's dead.

    Leia slaps him and immediately regrets it. Kylo gives a little smile of self-satisfaction.

    LEIA: Ben, stop this and come home.

    KYLO: I'm sure you'd like that. I must be a terrible embarrassment to you and your Resistance. If you
    really wanted to make a difference, you'd join me.

    LEIA: What?

    KYLO: Your presence can influence entire worlds. We'll unify the galaxy and usher in a new era of
    peace and order.

    LEIA: Under the boot of the First Order.

    KYLO: How can you defend the New Republic when you, a founder, abandoned them? The New
    Republic is nothing more than an elitist assembly of selfish children. When I put an end to all of that,
    where will you be? Will you be here shaping the future, or will you be a forgotten relic of an
    insignificant faction?

    She turns away from him.

    LEIA: I didn't want to believe it, but you are truly blind.

    Anger swells in Kylo's face. He grabs her.

    KYLO: It is you who lack vision, rolling in filth, scurrying from one hole to the next, like womp rats.
    Your bumbling anarchists are no match for the strength that comes from order and discipline and
    respect.

    Leia pulls the knife and brings it to Kylo's neck. A small nick drips down the blade.

    LEIA: I found it in my suite. Perhaps it was an oversight, but how can that be from an organization
    that prides itself on order and discipline?

    Kylo smiles. He twists the knife from her grip.

    KYLO: We are more alike than you think. Join me and we'll rule the galaxy as mother and son.

    LEIA: I will never join you.

    KYLO: Too bad. We would have made a formidable team, but if it's suffering that drives you here, then
    you will suffer beyond imagination.

    He cups his hands behind her head and stares deep into her eyes. Leia squirms uncomfortably.

    LEIA: No, Ben, stop.

    Her agitation builds to real pain, but Kylo seems to enjoy it even though he sheds a tear. Leia struggles
    to get away.

    LEIA: No! Stop it!

    He holds her tighter, closer. His breathing quickens as he digs in deeper into her mind. Leia screams.

    EXT. AHCH-TO - JEDI TEMPLE - EVENING

    Between mounds of stacked stone graves, a mist lingers and swirls around Rey's knees as she walks.

    REY: Master Luke?

    She approaches a single headstone set apart from the others and kneels before it. The slate is blank.
    Does she dare touch it? She reaches out a shaky hand, fearful of what she may learn. Her fingertips
    almost touch it.

    LUKE: Psychometry is a rare ability and a skill forbidden by the Jedi.

    Rey turns to find Luke behind her.

    LUKE: Strong emotions embed themselves into objects, but their imprints are misleading out of
    context. Powerful emotions cloud judgment, suppress clarity, and occlude objectivity.

    REY: I'm sorry. I didn't mean to be disrespectful. I just... Is this her?

    Luke nods.

    Rey lets that float as she builds up the courage to pry.

    REY: In my vision, she was pregnant-

    Luke suddenly turns away, dazed.

    REY: (to herself) Good job, Rey.

    A strong breeze kicks up. Luke rubs his head, but the pain grows. He falls to his knees. Rey rushes to
    his side.

    REY: Master Luke, I'm sorry.

    LUKE: (through the pain) It's Leia. We're not safe. He knows.

    Rey helps him to his feet. The breeze becomes gusty. Luke struggles through the pain.

    LUKE: Kylo. He's coming for us.

    REY: Tell me you have a ship hidden away.

    He looks at Rey dead in the eye.

    LUKE: There is no way off this planet. We must face him. I can teach you.

    REY: Are you mad? There's no time.

    LUKE: There is never enough time. A Jedi's training never ends, but for you, we'll have to skip the
    basics.

    He holds out his lightsaber to her, but Rey is reluctant.

    LUKE: To walk the narrow path of a Jedi is a noble privilege. However, if you stray from the code of
    honor, the temptation of the dark side will forever dominate you, as it has me.

    Rey stares at it, vacillating between courage and fear. Finally, she grabs the hilt and extends the blade.
    A rush of excitement vibrates through her body and she raises the blade above her head with
    conviction.

    EXT. BILBRINGI ORBIT - BATTLECRUISER PROMINENCE - DAY

    The Prominence, alone, burns as it fends off Tie Fighters with its turbolasers and missiles.

    INT. BATTLECRUISER PROMINENCE - BRIDGE - DAY

    Captain Canady extinguishes a fire as a medic wraps the burned face of the comm officer. Captain
    Canady gets on the comm.

    CAPTAIN CANADY:

    We're getting pounded up here. We need support. What's your status?

    EXT. BILBRINGI - CAPITAL CITY - DAY

    Myri's EX-1 and her squad follow in formation as they bank and dive around toppled towers and
    through columns of smoke.

    Casualties from both sides litter the streets.

    MYRI: We've taken out their ground forces.

    CAPTAIN CANADY Stay only until the planetary defense takes over. We need you here.

    MYRI: Copy that.

    The squad locks onto an AT-AT's knee and fires missiles. The AT-AT fires flak from a turret mounted on
    its back, but the ships disperse. The missiles hit and the AT-AT crumbles to the ground. Tie Fighters hit
    and run. Froog groans in frustration.

    FROOG: The bucketheads won't engage. They're just toying with us.

    ALEXA: They're trying to keep us from the Prominence.

    MYRI: Rapier Two, take the squad and defend the battlecruiser. If the TIEs won't fight us as a group,
    I'm betting they will if I'm alone.

    KORTU: Good hunting, Rapier Leader.

    The team splits and rockets off into the sky.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: Another vessel has just entered-

    A loud bang rocks her ship and several missed shots fly by. BG-3, Myri's astromech droid, beams an
    alarm.

    MYRI: I see them. Just get my comms online.

    Three Tie Fighters swoop in and give chase.

    MYRI: Let's see what you're made of.

    She takes them on a wild tour through the devastated skyscrapers. She out-maneuvers the Tie
    Fighters, shoots down two, but attracts eight more. Fear creeps up on her.

    MYRI: Come on, Myri. You're better than this.

    Cannon fire surrounds her as she zigzags and takes more hits. The radio crackles and BG-3 whistles
    with success.

    POE: (radio crackles) Whoa! That's quite the TIE rack.

    Poe's black and orange X-wing swoops in and takes out two fighters, the rest scatter. Myri breathes a
    sigh of relief, gets her game face back on. She chases a fleeing Tie Fighter.

    MYRI: Bilbringi pilot, the New Republic Defense is handing off operations to your State military.

    She shoots and obliterates her Tie Fighter target.

    POE: Bilbringi?

    She looks over as Poe's X-wing barrel rolls and shoots down the another Tie Fighter.

    POE: (playfully) I'm insulted.

    Poe flies up parallel to Myri and looks over at her.

    MYRI: (sarcastically) Oh good. It's the Resistance. You're just in time for the bars to open.

    POE: Say, that's a nice ship. You should take better care of it.

    MYRI: I don't need the help of some backrocket space cadet.

    POE: What? I couldn't hear you over the sound of me saving your astromech.

    Bilbringi fighters whoosh past.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: The Bilbringi air command has taken over planetary operations. All fighters report to
    sector two-five.

    POE: Two-five, copy that.

    Poe salutes Myri, banks hard, and takes off into the sky. Annoyed, Myri lets out a low growl and follows
    after him.

    EXT. BILBRINGI ORBIT - DAY

    Several squads from the New Republic and the Resistance join the dogfight already in progress. Tie
    Fighters focus solely on the damaged Prominence. Cannons fire volleys as the Echo of Hope pushes
    into the cloud of Tie Fighters that engulfs the Prominence.

    POE: Okay, people, here's the plan. Shoot the bad guys then go home.

    L'ULO: Good plan.

    Black Squadron scatters. They pick targets and engage.

    MYRI: Select the easy target. Don't let them bait you into a chase. That's how you get killed. And do
    not fly through debris fields. It's dangerous and childish.

    A Tie Fighter explodes and Poe whoops as his X-wing punches through the explosion. BB-8 sequels.

    POE: That never gets old.

    Jessika weaves and dodges to shake off a Tie Fighter.

    JESSIKA PAVA: I've got one on me. I can't lose him.

    POE: I got him. Bank left.

    Jessica turns sharply and the Tie Fighter follows, exposing his large foils. Poe fires. Tie Fighter tumbles
    and explodes. Poe engages another Tie Fighter and gives chase. Poe fires and misses as the Tie Fighter
    weaves. Poe lets out a small groan of frustration. He tails it in a high-speed chase along the
    Prominence hull. He gets him locked in on his computer.

    POE: Ah, gotcha.

    Myri cuts him off, steals his kill.

    POE: Hey! That was my kill!

    MYRI: This is not a game; it's a war. Get over yourself.

    She barrel rolls away after another fighter.

    POE: (under his breath) Republic vac-head.

    BB-8 tweedles in agreement.

    WEDGE: Poe, we need you. They're are trying to rupture the core of the Prominence.

    POE: Black Squad, on me.

    Black Squadron falls into formation as they race toward the stern where Rogue Squadron fiercely fends
    off the kamikazes.

    WEDGE: Blue Six, you're too close.

    ZARI BANGEL: I can handle it, Rogue Leader.

    ZARI BANGEL dives into the oncoming Tie Fighters, guns blazing. She takes out one after another in
    short succession.

    They overrun her and a Tie Fighter foil clips her wing. They both spin out of control.

    JESSIKA PAVA: Zari!

    The TIE crashes into Prominence and Zari collides into another oncoming Tie Fighter. Stunned, Jessika
    watches the dispersing explosion. The last wave of Tie Fighters comes like rain. The X-wings fire but
    there's too many of them.

    POE: Jessika! Stay focused.

    KARE' KUN: There's too many of them.

    POE: Stay on them.

    KARE' KUN I can't. I-

    Jessika swoops in under, Kare' with her cannons blazing. Cheeks wet with tears, Jessika grits her teeth
    and unloads vengeance on the suicidal Tie Fighters. Poe frantically shoots down Tie Fighters and lets
    out a war cry as the overwhelming fleet barrels down on them. From behind, hundreds of cannon
    shots stream past as Rapier Squadron joins the fight and finishes off the fleet in a finally of fireworks.
    Poe lets out a sigh of relief.

    POE: Thanks for the assist, Rapier Leader.

    MYRI: Black and Rogue Leaders are to report to the Prominence.

    POE: Copy, that. All Resistance squads return to your docking bays. Repair, refuel, and reload. This is
    only the beginning.

    The squadrons divide and return to their respective starships. Poe and Wedge follow Myri to the still-
    burning Prominence.

    EXT. AHAKISTA - DAYSTAR CITY - DAY

    Towering hotels and casinos with grand marquees light up the city, like a Los Angeles-sized Las Vegas,
    as the sun sets. Street musicians and performers attract small crowds of tourists along the bustling
    streets. A young, red-skinned TOGRUTA couple stops to watch a BITH quartet. The fanfar player's
    routine drifts as he looks up. They all follow his gaze, slowly turn, then run. The Falcon, upside-down,
    flies low over the street.

    Through the cockpit window, Finn, Chewie, and Threepio hang from their seats and howl. The Falcon
    banks, flips upright, and stops just above the Daystar Casino's magnificent fountain. The engines cut
    and the Falcon falls into the pool, soaking the onlookers. The Falcon rises out of the water on its
    landing gear.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - LOUNGE - DAY

    Threepio stands clad in Han's clothes and with the DL-44 blaster strapped to his thigh.

    THREEPIO: This will never work.

    FINN: If you're gonna look like a bounty hunter you gotta dress like one. No one will take you seriously
    if you look like the furniture.

    THREEPIO: Why can't you do this?

    FINN: Because you know customs and etiquette and six million languages.

    THREEPIO: Seven million.

    FINN: Exactly. Stormtroopers... we don't get out much unless it's to shoot something. And Chewie,
    he...

    They look at Chewie.

    FINN: ...his accent makes him difficult to understand.

    Chewie grunts dismissively.

    FINN: All you have to do is casually ask around and see if you can find out where Leia is being held. By
    the way, you look great.

    Finn sticks a fedora on Threepio's head.

    INT. DAYSTAR CASINO - DAY

    Loud electronic dance music, synchronized laser lights, and slot-machine tones fill the towering,
    ultramodern atrium. Threepio enters like a boss, flanked by Chewie and Finn.

    THREEPIO: This is a treacherous place. We must all do our best to blend in.

    FINN: Blend in. Got it.

    Aliens from around the galaxy mill about as super-sexy chrome droids distribute complimentary drinks.

    THREEPIO: Oh my word. I can see her data port.

    Behind a grand circular bar, blue-skinned, PANTORAN go-go dancers shake and shimmy. In the center,
    a DJ in a gold helmet and a silver droid with a wide visor tops a tall platform. Chewie catches a scent
    and follows his nose to a sprawling buffet featuring a roasted nerf turning on a spit.

    FINN: I've never seen anything like this.

    As they pass the dancers, they wave to Finn and summon him.

    THREEPIO: The volume is uncomfortably loud. Perhaps I should speak with the manager. I'm sure
    everyone would appreciate my intervention.

    Finn gawks at the dancers and lags behind.

    FINN: Uh huh.

    Now alone, Threepio passes close by a slot machine. JACKPOT! Lights flash and bells ring. A three-eyed
    GRAN lets out a goat-like bleat of celebration.

    THREEPIO We must be careful not to draw any unwanted attention. Any confrontation could lead to
    real trouble.

    Finn leans in as a dancer gets up close and personal. Threepio passes an unoccupied slot machine.

    THREEPIO: I have no understanding why one would participate in games of chance when diversified
    investments in well-founded businesses will yield far greater gains with minimal risk.

    JACKPOT! The JAWA at the machine next to it hops off his seat and collects the reward as it pours onto
    the floor.

    At the buffet, Chewie strikes up a conversation with a reptilian TRANDOSHAN. Threepio turns to find
    he's alone and does a double take.

    THREEPIO: Where is everyone?

    He hurries down an aisle of slot machines and ignites a cascade of jackpots. A joyous roar goes up and
    people scramble for the winnings like children under a spent piñata. On the stage, Finn gyrates with
    the dancers. the crowd eggs him on. He pulls off his shirt, spins it over his head, and whips it into the
    audience as the girls dance around him.

    THREEPIO: Chewbacca? Finn? Where are you?

    An overhead drone spies on Threepio as he turns down another row and sets off more slot machines.
    One particularly attractive Pantoran seductively dances up against Finn Their lips get closer and closer.
    Finn closes his eyes, but Threepio pulls him away before they kiss.

    FINN: Hey! What are you doing? I'm trying to blend in.

    The spectators boo as Threepio drags Finn offstage only to be met with the sagging, leathery faces of
    three WEEQUAY, dressed in suits and armed with glowing stun batons.

    THREEPIO: I deeply apologize. This was all just a misunderstanding.

    With a large roar, Chewbacca appears and tosses one of the Weequay guards over a crowded Sabacc
    card table. THREEPIO: Oh no! Chewbacca, stop! Stop this nonsense at once. A second guard shocks
    Chewie as Finn jumps him.

    THREEPIO: This this madness!

    INT. DAYSTAR CASINO - VIP ROOM - DAY

    A triangular-headed ARCONA groans and folds cards, followed by a green-skinned, thin-lipped, DUROS
    and a heavy-set CORELLIAN woman in a white gown and gold necklace. Gorga the Hutt peeks through
    a monocle at what looks like a winning Sabacc hand. He glances at his merger stack of chips. Across
    the table, behind tall stacks of chips, in a fine suit, purple silk tie, and matching cape clasped by a gold
    chain, smiles LANDO CALRISSIAN. Two near-naked women stand on either side of him. In his
    signature, super sexy, voice-

    LANDO: So, what's it going to be, Gorga?

    Gorga, torn between winning and pride, goes with greed.

    GORGA THE HUTT: Perhaps a line of credit? You know I'm good for it.

    Lando raises a discerning eyebrow.

    GORGA THE HUTT: I have a nineteen-hundred series Corellian freighter I'd be willing to use as a
    retainer.

    LANDO: How about the bounty on Leia Organa?

    GORGA THE HUTT Lando, I thought this was a friendly game between friends. Now I see your loyalty to
    the Resistance isn't as detached as I was lead to believe.

    LANDO: I severed my ties with the Resistance long ago. This is just a favor for an old friend.

    GORGA THE HUTT: Your obligation to Solo died with him, but that makes no difference to me. The
    honor of my family is worth far more than a hand of Sabacc.

    LANDO: Even more than a small, but lucrative, gas mining operation?

    GORGA THE HUTT: Cloud City was lucrative before the end of the Empire, but now-

    LANDO: But now it's no longer on Bespin. It has a new home and it's poised to mine something more
    valuable than Tibanna gas. All it needs is cheap labor. I know you can manage that.

    Gorga looks at him intrigued, but with skepticism.

    LANDO: Like you said, your obligation to Jabba died with him, but aside from that, ask yourself, 'What
    would Jabba do?'

    Gorga knows exactly what Jabba would do, but before he can agree, a hologram of Finn, Chewie, and
    Threepio, all in binders, projects down onto the table. METTGA, the Weequay security guard steps into
    the image.

    METTGA: Your Eminence-

    GORGA THE HUTT: Do you not value your life?

    METTGA: I'm sorry, Your Eminence, but we caught these three running a scam.

    GORGA THE HUTT: Then kill them and don't bother me.

    Lando laughs out loud.

    LANDO: Those three? I find that hard to believe. I'll tell you what; I'll cover your losses if you turn
    them over to me. I'm in need of some cheap labor myself.

    THREEPIO: Lando! Oh, thank the Maker.

    Gorga slyly turns to Lando and smiles.

    GORGA THE HUTT: Friends of yours?

    LANDO: No, I've never had the pleasure, but my reputation is quite extensive.

    Gorga isn't buying it.

    GORGA THE HUTT: I'll bet that the Wookiee is none other than the notorious Chewbacca. Excellent
    work, Mettga.

    LANDO: Forget them. Let's finish this game. Are you in or out?

    THREEPIO: What?

    Chewie lets out a long howl.

    GORGA THE HUTT: Fine. Cloud City for the Huttslayer.

    LANDO: And those three.

    GORGA THE HUTT: What? No! Either Leia or the criminals, not both.

    INT. BATTLECRUISER PROMINENCE - LANDING BAY - DAY

    Poe slides down the ladder and looks around the spotless and modern hanger bay. BB-8 drops out of
    the X-wing and lets out an impressed whistle.

    POE: It's not that nice.

    Myri's EX-1 fighter enters the landing bay and lands nearby.

    POE: Wait here.

    He marches toward Myri with a few choice words on his lips. Myri climbs down, pulls off her helmet,
    and brushes back her hair. Poe sees her for the first time and is thunderstruck.

    MYRI: (annoyed) What are you staring at?

    The black and purple BG-3 droid rolls up next to her. Poe snaps out of his daze and tries to recover
    gracefully.

    POE: You've got a lot to learn about being a starfighter pilot.

    BB-8 rolls up behind Poe for a closer look at BG-3.

    MYRI: For your information, I wrote the book on starfighter engagement. But of course, you wouldn't
    know that having washed out of the academy, Poe Dameron.

    POE: I didn't wash out. I quit, along with all the great pilots of the original Rebellion. But, what would
    you know about the Rebellion?

    Myri, half listening, looks past him and waves.

    MYRI: Hello, father.

    Poe turns to see Wedge wave back. He manages a sheepish smile and half-hearted wave.

    POE: (in a clenched smile) You could have told me you were Myri.

    MYRI: Where's the fun in that?

    Wedge and Captain Canady approach. As Myri hugs Wedge, she flashes Poe a sneer. Captain Canady
    extends a hand to Poe.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: Poe Dameron, you've certainly lived up to your reputation.

    POE: Thank you, sir. It's an honor to serve with the Republic Defense.

    MYRI: Yes, it is.

    POE: Bee, contact Admiral Ackbar?

    BB-8 beeps and projects a large hologram of Admiral Ackbar.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: Admiral, thank you for joining us. I apologize for the delay.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: Apologies are unnecessary, Captain.

    Admiral Bashier stops to fraternize with his pilots.

    WEDGE: Admiral egos, the only thing larger than their fleet.

    Admiral Ackbar gives Wedge the fisheye.

    WEDGE: What? It's true.

    Admiral Bashier approaches the waiting party.

    ADMIRAL BASHIER: Admiral Ackbar, the New Republic Defense appreciates your assistance, but this
    cannot continue. We simply cannot protect you and fight the First Order.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: Admiral, I commend you on your commitment to the New Republic charter, but the
    First Order intends to use your own standing orders against you. You must reassemble your fleet or
    risk losing them all.

    Admiral Bashier looks at Captain Canady suspiciously.

    ADMIRAL BASHIER: How did you come by this information?

    WEDGE: From a Resistance agent on Valrar.

    ADMIRAL BASHIER: A Resistance agent on Valrar.

    WEDGE: Yes, sir.

    ADMIRAL BASHIER: (sarcastically) Are you stealing their latest advancements in logging technology?

    WEDGE: That information is classified.

    ADMIRAL BASHIER: Despite any rumors, you may have heard, the New Republic Defense has this
    situation under control. However, interference from rogue factions could undermine our abilities to
    operate effectively.

    WEDGE: Rogue faction? The only reason the New Republic Defense exists is because of us. When I was
    at Yavin 4-

    MYRI: Dad, nobody wants to hear your war stories. You're embarrassing yourself.

    The men shift uncomfortably. Wedge's anger grows.

    WEDGE: (with restrained fury) That's your mother talking.

    ADMIRAL BASHIER: We're done here.

    Admiral Bashier turns and leaves. Myri follows close behind.

    Captain Canady reluctantly turns and joins them.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: It's your ego that can't be contained. You need to fix this, Captain.

    Admiral Ackbar's hologram disappears. Wedge, frustrated and a little embarrassed, turns to Poe for
    some validation.

    WEDGE: I say let the Republic learn their lesson. When they come crawling back, then we'll be the

    ones in command.

    POE: We can't do it alone.

    WEDGE: We defeated the Empire alone, with instinct and action, not meetings and memos from bureaucrats.

    POE: When the Rebellion was ten times our size and it still cost billions of lives. We have the
    experience. They have the firepower. We need to unite.

    WEDGE: Tell that to Bashier. He's the one being unreasonable.

    POE: If we can't collaborate, we'll just participate. They have no authority over us.

    Wedge's mood lightens.

    WEDGE: That'd put a buzz-beetle in Bashier's beret, but the admiral won't be tipping his hand to
    Canady any longer. How will we track them?

    CUT TO: With one foot on the ladder, Poe straightens from his cockpit and tosses a device to Wedge
    who gives it a curious look.

    WEDGE: An Imperial tracker, where did you get this?

    Poe jumps down from the ladder.

    POE: Chewbacca found it on the Millennium Falcon.

    Wedge gives Poe a one-armed hug.

    WEDGE: Devious. You're like the son I never had. Where should we install it?

    Poe looks over at Myri's starfighter.

    POE: I know just the place.

    EXT. AHCH-TO - FOREST - DAY

    Blindfolded and surrounded by birdsong, trees, and rays of sunlight, Rey swings her lightsaber in swift-
    measured movements. Luke watches with a critical eye. Rey parries, spins, and attacks with a difficult
    move. She lands off balance and stumbles into a tree.

    LUKE: Stop there.

    Rey lets out an exasperated sigh.

    LUKE: When your mind is unbalanced, your body will follow. First position.

    He uses a long, thin stick and taps her arms and legs into their proper position when they
    simultaneously sense a presence in the Force. Rey pulls off her blindfold and raises her lightsaber, but
    Luke steadies her. Through the trees, an eight-foot tall, white stag-like ASHLING, with an immense
    twisted rack finds a patch to graze.

    Luke and Rey watch from behind a large tree.

    LUKE: (in a whisper) The ashling are Force-sensitive, like many creatures of this world. Clear your
    thoughts and reach out to him with your feelings.

    She closes her eyes and concentrates. Slowly, she senses its heartbeat. It grows from a murmur into
    deep pounding.

    The stag senses them and looks up. The heartbeat quickens.

    LUKE: Go to him. Do not be afraid.

    Rey steps out into the clearing and slowly approaches the beast with a hand full of long grasses. He
    lowers his antlers, paws at the ground, and gives a threatening snort. His muscles ripple and flex. Rey
    hesitates. The ashling becomes more agitated.

    Luke takes an intervening step but stops as Rey regains her confidence. Only a few inches away now,
    she offers up the grasses. The stag sniffs suspiciously and gives an unsettling grunt. After a moment,
    he sniffs them again. His lips snap noisily as he grasps the greens. Chewing, he sniffs Rey's face and
    pushes her gently with his nose. Rey slowly reaches out and strokes his muzzle. She turns back to
    Luke with a victorious smile. Luke nods.

    INT. STAR DESTROYER FINALIZER - ASSEMBLY ROOM - DAY

    Kylo and General Hux rise in tandem before the giant projection of Snoke as he looks down on them
    from his throne.

    SNOKE: General Hux, I'm uncomfortable with most of our military resources engaged in your
    operation. Your overreach has left us defenseless.

    GENERAL HUX: Supreme Leader, the Resistance has allied their forces with the New Republic as I
    anticipated. When their defensive capabilities are depleted, we'll overwhelm them with a massive
    attack.

    He pounds his fist in his palm for emphasis.

    SNOKE: You underestimate the influence of the Resistance. Crush them now, before outlying planetary
    forces come to their aid.

    GENERAL HUX: Yes, Supreme Leader.

    SNOKE: Why is General Organa still alive? We know the location of the Resistance and Skywalker, do
    we not?

    KYLO: She may be lying about the location.

    Snoke glowers.

    SNOKE: General, I wish to speak to my apprentice alone.

    GENERAL HUX: As you wish, Supreme Leader.

    General Hux turns and flashes Kylo a smug smile as he leaves.

    SNOKE: I'm disappointed. I thought we had finished your training, but you still resist. Do you need
    more guidance?

    KYLO: No, my master. Through your strength, I have shed the last of Ben Solo.

    SNOKE: That is for me to determine.

    KYLO: What more must I do?

    SNOKE: Destroy Luke Skywalker and bring the girl to me. Afterward, you'll dispose of General Organa.

    KYLO: I will not fail you.

    SNOKE: Have your knights accompany you.

    KYLO: Master, that is not necessary.

    SNOKE: This may be our only opportunity. I will not risk losing him again. He must not survive.

    Snoke sits back in his chair.

    SNOKE: I sense an uneasiness in you.

    KYLO: I fear some in the First Order are working against me.

    SNOKE: As you should. Someone will always try to depose you, just as you hope to depose me.

    KYLO: Master, I would never-

    SNOKE: I can sense it, and I expect nothing less. It's what drives men like us. And when that day
    comes, you had better be ready, because I will not hesitate to destroy you.

    EXT. AHAKISTA - DAYSTAR CASINO - DAY

    Under the dripping Falcon, the valet droid squawks and groans angrily at Lando. Lando rudely tosses
    credits at the droid.

    LANDO: For your trouble. The droid continues to complain as the security guards toss Finn and
    Threepio at Lando's feet.

    Mettga, with a long Gaderffii stick, pushes Chewie. Chewie rips it from his grip and snaps it in two.
    Mettga back away slowly.

    LANDO: Do you have any idea how long it took me to get in that game?

    THREEPIO: Sir, I deeply regret-

    LANDO: What are you doing here, Threepio?

    FINN: We're trying to rescue-

    LANDO: Did I ask you?

    THREEPIO: General Leia was captured by the First Order-

    LANDO: Captured, Leia? Who told you that?

    THREEPIO: Well, he did, sir.

    FINN: It's true.

    Lando sizes him up.

    LANDO: And who the hell are you?

    FINN: Finn.

    LANDO: Finn? That's it? Just, Finn?

    THREEPIO: His full name is FN-2187.

    Finn winces at the sound of his old designation.

    LANDO: Stormtrooper?!

    Lando pulls his blaster. Finn throws his hands up.

    FINN: Don't shoot. I'm not a stormtrooper, not anymore.

    LANDO: Stormtroopers don't defect.

    FINN: Yeah, do you know why? Because any stormtrooper who fails to follow orders goes to re-
    education. Many don't return. I couldn't go through that, not again.

    A hint of doubt enters Lando's mind.

    LANDO Who authorized this mission, Threepio?

    THREEPIO: Well sir, to be honest, it was Finn who- (humbled) who informed me of the mission.

    LANDO: That's what I thought. Chewie, lock him in the cargo hold. We're taking him back to the
    Resistance.

    Chewbacca begrudgingly obeys.

    INT. AHCH-TO - GROTTO - DAY

    Rey's foot dips into the still water. Ripples cascade and shimmer, and a single drop echoes. Tree roots
    and scattered daylight poke through the high ceiling of the creepy cave. She faintly hears-

    REY'S VOICE: (whispering) Rey.

    Rey stops and listens intently. Did she really hear that? Drip. She strains to see into the shadows.

    REY'S FATHER: Rey.

    She definitely heard it. She ignites her lightsaber, holds it up for extra illumination and wades deeper
    into the water.

    REY: Master Luke?

    She sloshes slowly through the pool. A black tentacle slithers past her in the knee-high water. She
    jerks away from it and holds out her blade ready to strike, but it disappears back under the water.

    REY'S MOTHER: We've come for you.

    A feminine silhouette moves from shadow to shadow. Rey squints at the figure.

    REY: M- Mom?

    Rey moves toward the shadow.

    Kylo's signature red lightsaber appears with a snap-hiss.

    The red glow reflects off his mask. Rey gasps.

    KYLO: What are you afraid of? The Force is not dark or light. It is the Force.

    Rey positions herself to fight.

    REY: I'm not afraid.

    Next to Kylo, two yellow sabers extend and illuminate a woman in black, form-fitting armor and helmet
    with chrome trim.

    KYLO: I can teach you things.

    Fear creeps up on Rey, and she takes a step back. The pool begins to churn. An electrostaff crackles
    with blue electricity. A man in worn, black stormtrooper armor with a modified helmet and a poncho
    draped over one shoulder, steps to Kylo's right.

    KYLO: Secrets he's keeping from you.

    Rey takes another step back. Black tentacles rise all around her. They grab and pull her down onto her
    hands and knees. Her lightsaber glows below the surface and boils the water around it. She strains
    against the beasts and cries out. Another tentacle wraps around her face and head, and they pull her
    into the depths of the pool.

    The pool waters calm. Drip.

    EXT. AHCH-TO - ISLAND COASTLINE - EVENING

    In deep contemplation, Luke looks out over the water from high atop a cliff. Rey, soaked and shivering,
    marches mad as hell toward Luke, red pockmarks on her neck and arms.

    REY: I could have been killed!

    LUKE: And yet, here you are.

    REY: You're supposed to be training me!

    Luke turns to her, calmly.

    LUKE: And you're supposed to be learning.

    He hands her his cloak. Rey grabs it thanklessly.

    LUKE: You were afraid, and now you're angry. You know where this leads.

    REY: I'm not angry. I just don't understand. You could have at least warned me about those, those
    things.

    Luke gives her a reassuring smile.

    LUKE: You don't understand? That's good. You've chosen knowledge over hatred. Those things are
    Sarmin. They use the Force to sense fear and find prey, as do all creatures of the Dark Side. This is why
    you must control your emotions and trust your feelings.

    REY: You want me to control my emotions and trust my feelings?

    LUKE: Emotions are internal, passionate, and selfish. They blind you to the truth and influence your
    decisions. Feelings are benevolent and empathetic. Combined with the Force, your feelings will
    enhance your senses and predict your opponent's behavior.

    Rey still looks indignant. Luke grabs her shoulders.

    LUKE: Learn from your mistakes. When you confront the Dark Side, you must have no sign of fear or
    hate, or they will consume you.

    INT. STAR DESTROYER FINALIZER - DOJO - DAY

    A dim light around the perimeter of the octagonal room illuminates racks of weapons and a variety of
    battle droids. Under a single light in the center, Kylo, shirtless, practices a complicated kata. His back
    covered in new scars from punishment lashes. He returns to his first position.

    KYLO: Run scenario Skywalker Two.

    A combat droid powers up and ignites a green lightsaber. A hologram of Luke, as he was when he
    defeated Darth Vader, projects over the droid. Kylo attacks and they re-enacts the final battle between
    Darth Vader and Luke Skywalker. The holo-luke droid gets a swipe in across Kylo's chest, leaving a pale-
    red burn. Kylo cries out, more in anger than pain. He then attacks the droid with a barbarous rage. The
    droid tries to defend itself. He cuts off the droid's right hand and kicks him in the chest. The droid falls
    backward and Kylo hacks him to pieces. The rest of the droids watch expressionless over Kylo's
    bloodcurdling wail and the slashes of his lightsaber.

    INT. STAR DESTROYER FINALIZER - CONTROL ROOM - DAY

    Above the docking bay, General Hux and Captain Phasma watch Kylo and his knights board the black
    Command Shuttle.

    CAPTAIN PHASMA: She tried to kill him with a vibroblade.

    He turns to her in surprise. She presents the blade.

    CAPTAIN PHASMA: Supposedly she found it in her stateroom. Kylo suspects this is your doing, as do
    others.

    GENERAL HUX: (grumbling) Of course he does. Do you?

    CAPTAIN PHASMA: It makes no difference to me; I'm merely making a report.

    GENERAL HUX: You brought her here. You find the traitor. I don't care how. And Captain, the
    speculation ends now. Anyone caught repeating such filth is to be shot.

    CAPTAIN PHASMA: Sir, if you have any doubt about your reputation, rest assured that the men are
    behind you... completely.

    He tries to read her meaning, but only sees his distorted reflection in her helmet.

    CAPTAIN PHASMA: You have their respect and loyalty. Fear is a powerful motivation.

    GENERAL HUX: Fear?

    CAPTAIN PHASMA: Fear of Dr. Graft and the augmentation the 501st has undergone.

    GENERAL HUX: Yes, I also find it unsettling, but that is not their concern, nor yours. Thank you,
    Captain.

    She leaves as General Hux turns away with a scowl and watches Kylo's black shuttle pass through the
    magnetic shield.

    EXT. HALMAD ORBIT - DAY

    The Prominence, flanked by X-wings streaks out of hyperspace to find the Intrepid on fire inside a
    swarm of Tie Fighters.

    ALEXA: Where are our starfighters?

    KORTU: Destroyed.

    MYRI: Turnabout is fair play. Work the perimeter. When I draw them out, ambush them.

    Myri swoops in along the ship and picks off easy targets. Several Tie Fighters give and she leads them
    away. Rapier Squadron follows and blasts her pursuers. The Prominence moves in close to the
    starboard side of the Intrepid as its turrets take out Tie Fighters. As Tie Fighters move to the port side,
    the X-wings follow and attack them in a chaotic dogfight. Myri zooms through the pack and knocks off
    Tie Fighters. X-wings nearby are not so lucky.

    ALEXA: There's too many of them.

    MYRI: Pull back and regroup.

    FROOG: They're right on top of me.

    MYRI: I'm almost there. Bank right!

    Two Tie Fighters shoot and Froog's ship explodes as Myri arrives too late. The Tie Fighters split. She
    follows one. It spins and zigzags about, but her targeting computer finally gets a lock until an alarm
    goes off and blasters hit her from behind.

    MYRI: They're on me.

    She pulls up and flips about, but takes more hits. BG-3 tweedles in a panic as her ship smokes. An
    alarm signals a weapons lock, but the Tie Fighter explodes.

    POE: Can't live without me.

    Myri ignores him. He looks over the damage to her ship.

    POE: I don't think that's going to buff out, but at least you look like a real fighter pilot now. (after a
    moment) What's wrong?

    MYRI: Froog's gone. I hadn't lost anyone until now.

    POE: I'm sorry, Myri. Want some payback?

    Myri gets control of her emotions and becomes determined.

    MYRI: Yes.

    POE: I'll follow your lead.

    Myri dives into a thick swarm and unleashes a reckless firestorm. Poe struggles to maintain her trail as
    he protectively blasts her pursuers.

    POE: Myri, it's getting pretty hairy. Save some of that fight for later.

    Two Star Destroyers flash into orbit over their heads. Tie Fighters launch from the landing bay as large
    turbolasers target the INTREPID.

    MYRI: Oh no.
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    EXT. KRANT - SPECTER BASE - REAR ENTRANCE - NIGHT

    Through the tree line, the dimly lit Resistance base hides quietly surrounded by the sounds of
    woodland creatures. The Falcon rumbles by overhead. Its engine moan fades. A twig snaps and a
    hidden sentry droid's lights pop on. It cycles through different frequencies as it scans the woods.
    Through a thermographic sensor, it finds a glowing orange figure, then a white flash. A bolt punches
    through the droid's head. Its lights go out.

    INT. SPECTER BASE - SECURITY STATION - NIGHT

    A perimeter alarm flashes on the base map and cadet NISHA, a young, female, hammer-headed
    ITHORIAN logs the event.

    NISHA: Sir. We've lost contact with SD-34.

    Security chief, CYPRISS, looks over her shoulder.

    CYPRISS: It's probably that pack of scaregs again. Send a team to check it out.

    EXT. SPECTER BASE - LANDING ZONE - NIGHT

    Lando, Chewie, and Threepio escort Finn off the Falcon, in a pair of binders, to a waiting armed detail.

    LANDO: I believe this is yours.

    GUARD: We'll take it from here, General.

    FINN: You're making a mistake. I'm not a criminal.

    KABOOM! A fireball billows up from behind the base. Sirens sounds.

    LANDO: Go! I'll watch him.

    The team hops onto their speeder and takes off to the base.

    LANDO: I don't like the looks of this, Chewie. Start refueling the Falcon, we may be leaving in a big
    hurry.

    INT. SPECTER BASE - REAR ENTRANCE - NIGHT

    THE KNIGHTS OF REN, in heavy black battle gear and armed to the teeth, enter the base through the
    flaming remains of a reinforced blast door. A hulk of a man, TAUG REN, 30s, holsters a rocket launcher.
    Resistance troops, scattered about the large maintenance bay, take cover and open fire on the
    intruders.

    ARIGAV: Taug!

    ARIGAV REN, in a hooded black cloak and skull-like mask, tosses a battle-ax to Taug, ignites a purple
    lightsaber and deflects incoming blaster bolts in one fluid movement. The soldiers duck, but one
    catches a ricochet in the chest. Taug grasps the handle. The blade spins chainsaw-like.

    BEZ MILOSTI REN, in a long black coat and single shoulder pauldron, scales a chain to a catwalk and
    snipes Resistance fighters from above with a long gun. Taug slashes through the posts of an overhead
    crane. Resistance soldiers scramble from their cover as it falls.

    MYRKKY REN, with two bandoleers of plasma clips and thermal detonators, extends a stiletto style
    vibrobayonet from his repeating blaster. He slides behind a barrier, slashes, and stabs two Resistance
    soldiers then shoots down fleeing enemy. The soldiers escape through a slowly closing fire door.

    MYRKKY: Skhal! The door!

    SKHAL REN, with his blue tipped electrostaff, wedges it under the closing door but saves only a small
    opening.

    TAUG: Move, Skhal. I'll blast it.

    ARIGAV: No! You'll collapse the opening.

    LASCENDU REN runs toward the door.

    SKHAL: Lascendu, no!

    She slides under feet first through the opening. On the other side, she springs up into a maelstrom of
    blaster bolts. She ignites her two yellow lightsabers and deflects the shots at the Resistance soldiers.
    Taug grabs the door and struggles to lift it up. Bez Milosti strolls up to watch but offers no help.

    ARIGAV: Myrkky! Get through there.

    MYRKKY: I don't take orders from you. Send Bez Milosti, he's not doing anything.

    BEZ MILOSTI: It sounds like Arigav is going to challenge Kylo again?

    ARIGAV: Someone's got to do his job.

    TAUG: (grunting) Will you two stop fighting?

    Alone, Lascendu uses her lightsabers to deflect blaster bolts. Entrenched soldiers, several of which lay
    dead on the floor, continue to fire in vain. As another soldier catches a shot in the chest, the others
    give up escape deeper into the turns back to the door and hits the lock. When she touches the switch,
    she sees Rey's face flashes for an instant. The door swishes open and Arigav leads the others on, but
    Skhal checks on Lascendu who stands dazed in the doorway.

    SKHAL: Are you okay?

    She blinks back her attention.

    SKHAL: Another vision?

    LASCENDU: Maybe. No. It's nothing. Come on, let's get this done.

    EXT. AHCH-TO - HILLSIDE - DAY

    Storm clouds roll in. As the ashling finds a tuft of grass to dine on, it senses danger and looks up. Kylo's
    black command ship glides past and sends the great white stag running. The ship folds its wings and
    lands.

    INT. JEDI TEMPLE - DAY

    Luke and Rey's lightsabers clash in the Hall of Knights. Luke lunges and Rey deflects then feigns an
    attack. Luke drops his guard and Rey pauses. Luke stares at nothing.

    LUKE: He's here. It's too soon. You need to hide.

    REY: Hide? Hide? I thought that the whole point of this was to confront him.

    LUKE: You're not ready, not yet.

    Luke leaves a disappointed Rey in the center of the hall.

    EXT. JEDI TEMPLE - PROMENADE - DAY

    Kylo stands at the base of the steps and looks up through his mask as Luke appears at the top. He
    looks down at Kylo with a warm smile.

    LUKE: (jokingly) You have my father's eyes.

    Kylo climbs the steps. Thunder rolls in the distance.

    LUKE: I won't fight you.

    KYLO: Then you'll die a coward.

    LUKE: I'm surprised you're here alone. It's not like Snoke to act without precautions. You do not
    possess the full strength of the Dark Side. The light is still in you. Even Vader couldn't eliminate it
    completely.

    Kylo ignites his blade as he reaches the top. Luke makes no movement even as Kylo comes face to face
    with him.

    KYLO: I will purge any light when I strike you down and extinguish the Jedi forever.

    Kylo tries to strike, but Luke's blade, seemingly from nowhere blocks it. They glare at one another
    through crossed blades.

    LUKE: Even if you do defeat me, my death will not extinguish the Jedi.

    KYLO: Where's the girl?

    LUKE: You're too late. I've already prepared her for you.

    KYLO: She's no Jedi. She's not even a padawan. The only thing she'll become is an unmarked grave.

    Kylo attacks with a flurry of swipes. Luke deflects the attacks in a Zen-like state. Lightning flashes and
    thunder booms. Kylo's face contorts as his anger swells in attack after attack. Luke stays calmly on the
    defensive. Kylo overextends his thrust, and Luke easily pushes him over. Kylo falls embarrassingly to
    the ground.

    LUKE: After all those years, do you remember nothing I've taught you?

    Kylo looks up at Luke as he catches his breath.

    LUKE: You fear her, Rey. I can feel it.

    KYLO: I'm not afraid of her.

    LUKE: You're afraid of her potential, what she might become.

    KYLO: NO!

    Kylo hurls himself at Luke in one great leap.

    EXT. KRANT - SPECTER BASE - LANDING ZONE - NIGHT

    Waves of people flee past the Falcon toward the transports.

    FINN: What's happening?

    LANDO: Quiet, you. (to Threepio) What's happening?

    THREEPIO: It looks like they're evacuating.

    LANDO: You're a fountain of knowledge.

    Artoo appears out of the crowd.

    THREEPIO: R2-D2! Am I glad to see you.

    He beeps and whistles urgently.

    THREEPIO: Good Heavens! He says The Knights of Ren are attacking the base.

    LANDO: Where's Leia?

    Artoo lets out a saddened series of tones.

    THREEPIO: Captured.

    FINN: See? I told you. (to Chewie) Didn't I tell him? I told him.

    Lando flashes Finn a look of annoyance. An explosion and the sound of a firefight erupt from the base.

    LANDO: Come on. Maybe we can buy some time.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - LOUNGE - NIGHT

    Lando pushes Finn onto the bench seat.

    LANDO: Watch him, Artoo.

    Artoo produces his electric prod.

    LANDO: (to Threepio) Can you operate the cannon?

    THREEPIO: I'm not a battle droid.

    Finn stands.

    FINN: I can fire those cannons.

    Artoo shocks him back onto the seat.

    FINN: Ow!

    He moves to shock him again.

    LANDO: Wait, Artoo.

    Lando removes the binders against his better judgment.

    LANDO: One misfire, and I'll have Chewie remove your head.

    Chewie gives a sympathetic moan.

    LANDO: Whose side are you on?

    Finn climbs down the ladder and into the quad cannon turret.

    EXT. SPECTER BASE - LANDING ZONE - NIGHT

    The Falcon lifts and circles toward the building. Finn fires at the Knights as they emerge from the huge
    doors. Skhal deflects a shot, but the others explode around them and force them back inside. Finn fires
    at vehicles and equipment to create a burning barrier between the Knights and evacuees. Taug pulls
    his rocket launcher and fires at the Falcon.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - TURRET - NIGHT

    Finn's eyes widen as warning alarms beep.

    FINN: Incoming!

    EXT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - NIGHT

    The impact rocks the ship and almost sends it into the forest, but Lando pulls out of the dive.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT - NIGHT

    Alarms beep and flash as the console sparks and smokes. Chewie howls and flips switches to mitigate
    the damage.

    THREEPIO: We've lost our shield generator. Another hit and we're done for.

    Through the window, Lando sees the transports lift off.

    LANDO: All right, let's get out of here.

    EXT. SPECTER BASE - NIGHT

    The Falcon swoops and makes for the night sky. Bez Milosti and Arigav appear as Taug aims his rocket
    at the scattering white whale-like GR-75 medium transports. He can't decide which one to fire upon.

    LASCENDU: That one. The others are nearly empty. I can feel it.

    Taug's computer struggles to lock onto the target. Bez Milosti grabs the rocket launcher away from
    Taug and fires quickly. The transport slips away, out of sight. Bez Milosti tosses the launcher back and
    Taug and walks off as the transport explodes in the distance.

    EXT. AHCH-TO - JEDI TEMPLE - PROMENADE - DAY

    Kylo wears down Luke with raw power. Luke struggles to disperse one brutal strike after another. Kylo
    sneaks in a punch to the side of Luke's head. Luke stumbles but regains his balance as Kylo gives him
    another barrage of attacks. Luke finally Force pushes Kylo off the temple promenade. Kylo hits a wall of
    rock and falls to the ground. Luke takes the lull to catch his breath and rub his face. Kylo stands, ready
    to go again.

    KYLO: The Jedi have made you weak.

    LUKE: And Snoke has made you a slave.

    KYLO: What kind of life has no emotion, no passion, nothing but blind obedience to a set of rules.
    That's the life of a slave. If you only knew the power-

    LUKE: Oh, I know it. I've seen what it can do and seen its wake of destruction. You are in your final
    days.

    KYLO: This is only the beginning.

    Kylo stands ready to attack again.

    LUKE: Snoke knows you'll never fully turn. (realizing) He doesn't want Rey dead. He wants her to
    replace you.

    KYLO: That will not happen.

    LUKE: He will kill you.

    KYLO: Not if I kill him first.

    LUKE: Ben, He'll never let you take his place. Never. There is too much of me in you. Even if you do kill
    me and Rey, Snoke will find someone to replace you.

    Kylo stares at the ground and takes this in. Rain begins to fall.

    LUKE: There is a way you can defeat him.

    Kylo looks up. Luke extends a hand to him.

    LUKE: Come back to us, it's not too late.

    Kylo stares at Luke's coaxing hand.

    KYLO: I- I can't. I killed my father.

    LUKE: I know, Ben. I also know Han loved you, and he wouldn't have it any other way if it meant your
    return.

    Kylo sheaths his sword and starts toward Luke. Luke gives him and exhausted and forgiving smile.
    Thunder rolls. Kylo reaches out toward Luke.

    KYLO: I won't go back.

    Luke's smile fades and Kylo sends Force lightning at Luke. Luke raises his blade to deflect the bolts, but
    his prosthetic limb shorts out. The lightsaber flies from his hand.

    Kylo gives him another blast of Force lightning. Luke cries out and writhes in pain. He crawls toward his
    lightsaber on his belly. His prosthetic hand malformed and disabled. Kylo, with clenched teeth and an
    evil grin, continues to shock Luke over and over again. Luke reaches over a toppled column toward his
    hilt, but another blast leaves Luke slumped over the stone, unmoving. Kylo casually walks around and
    picks up Luke's lightsaber. He examines his trophy with pride and ignites the blue blade.

    KYLO: How fitting it is that you should die by your father's sword.

    Kylo hovers the blade over Luke's neck then raises it above his head. He hesitates.

    KYLO: Goodbye, Uncle Luke.

    He brings it down hard, only to be stopped by Rey's green blade. Kylo and Rey's eyes meet. He slams
    his shoulder into her side and she stumbles backward but doesn't fall. Kylo spins his blade with
    pompous swagger. KYLO: So, you think you're a Jedi? Rey positions herself between Kylo and Luke and
    takes her practiced stance. She does her best to tamp down her nerves, but her fear is obvious.

    REY: Yeah. I'm a Jedi, a powerful Jedi, but merciful. If you leave now, I'll allow you to live.

    Kylo smiles with amusement.

    KYLO: No. I'm ready to die. Are you?

    Kylo attacks with Luke's lightsaber and Rey deflects. She recovers in time to parry another attack. Kylo
    enjoys himself. He lets out a series of attacks that force Rey to give up ground, but she leads him away
    from Luke. Kylo's attacks come faster and more aggressive. Rey can barely keep up until she spots an
    opening and swings. Kylo blocks her strike, but his anger erupts and he goes berserk. He scores a hit
    across Rey's shoulder. Rey spins and retreats into a narrow passage of the temple.

    REY: (to herself) The Force is with me. The Force is with me.

    Kylo slashes at the walls as he follows her inside. Rey turns left and right until she exits at the edge of
    a cliff. Kylo rounds the last turn.

    KYLO: You won't be the first Jedi I've killed, but you will be the last.

    He advances on her, determined. Rey looks fearless but clearly, favors her injured shoulder. Kylo stops.
    He looks worried. Confidence boosted, Rey stands taller with her blade high. Kylo turns and runs. Rey
    amazed, hears a loudening roar of engines. She turns to see the Falcon rise above the temple.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - TURRET - DAY

    Finn, in the gunner seat, locks onto Kylo. FINN: This is for Nines, Slip, and Zeros.

    EXT. JEDI TEMPLE - PROMENADE - DAY

    Finn fires and Kylo ducks back into the temple as stone shatters from the blasts. Without landing, the
    Falcon's ramp lowers with Chewie on the edge. He reaches out with his paw.

    REY: We have to get Luke.

    With no place to land, the Falcon circles the promenade and Chewie hops out near Luke. The Falcon
    hovers and Rey watches from the ramp as Chewie carries Luke's limp body.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT - DAY

    Lando holds the stick steady.

    REY: Okay, we're in.

    Lando flips a switch above him and pulls the yoke.

    EXT. JEDI TEMPLE - PROMENADE - DAY

    The Falcon's ramp closes as it banks and departs.

    EXT. HIGHLANDS - DAY

    Kylo sprints across an open field littered with rock outcroppings. The Falcon closes the gap between
    them. Kylo looks back as it is almost on top of him. He quits running and ducks into a grouping of
    stones. He looks out as the Falcon flies past and toward his black command ship.

    KYLO: No.

    Kylo steps out of his cover as the Falcon fires on his ship.

    KYLO: No!

    It launches a concussion missile and blows the ship to hell.

    KYLO: Nooooooo!

    Kylo falls to his knees in defeat as the Falcon rises up into the overcast sky.

    EXT. HALMAD ORBIT - DAY

    The two Star Destroyers pummel the Intrepid. Only a few cannons fire on the Echo of Hope and
    Prominence.

    INT. STAR CRUISER ECHO OF HOPE - BRIDGE - DAY

    Admiral Ackbar watches the battle from his captain's chair.

    ADMIRAL BASHIER: Extend your deflector shields around the Intrepid. We can take the hits.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: Yes, Admiral. (to his officers) Divert all auxiliary power to the forward deflectors
    shields and keep trying to hail-

    COMM OFFICER: I've got the Intrepid, sir.

    FREELAND (V.O.): (broken up transmission) This is acting Captain FREELAND.

    INT. DREADNOUGHT INTREPID - BRIDGE - DAY

    Red lighting washes over the dead crew and scorched superstructure. A fire suppression droid uses a
    dry fog to extinguish flames. A bloodied and burnt FREELAND leans on the flight console. FREELAND:
    Our main cooling system has breached and it's only a matter of time until the power cores destabilize.
    The rest of the crew is evacuating.

    INT. BATTLECRUISER PROMINENCE - BRIDGE - DAY

    Admiral Bashier looks out at the crippled Intrepid.

    FREELAND (V.O.): I'm going to scuttle the ship and take these bastards-

    The communication goes dead. Admiral Bashier stands with alarm and he stares out at the burning
    Intrepid.

    ADMIRAL BASHIER: Port deflector shields to maximum! Fire maneuvering thrusters! Get us away from
    the Intrepid.

    EXT. DREADNOUGHT INTREPID - DAY

    The Prominence and Echo of Hope split as the Star Destroyers move closer, concentrating their
    firepower on the Intrepid. Escape pods eject and fly off toward the planet. Tie Fighter move to intercept
    and destroy them.

    POE: All fighters get clear of the Intrepid. Defend the escape pods.

    The fighters scatter. The Intrepid fires its thrusters and charges forward.

    INT. STAR DESTROYER - BRIDGE - DAY

    The stiff STAR DESTROYER COMMANDER loses his composure as the Intrepid collides with the lead Star
    Destroyer.

    STAR DESTROYER COMMANDER: Maximize shields! Brace for impact!

    The bridge crew works frantically and klaxons blare. Through the window, the two hulls scrape against
    each other. The Intrepid explodes. The Star Destroyer commander reflexively holds up his arms against
    the explosion and yells.

    EXT. STAR DESTROYERS - DAY

    The collision and core explosion obliterates the lead Star Destroyer and critically damages the second.
    Debris bombards both the Echo of Hope and the Prominence and shoves them away from the blast.

    INT. STAR CRUISER ECHO OF HOPE - DAY

    Alarms flash and sound. The bridge crew works fast.

    COMMADOR META: Multiple hull breaches, but the pressures doors are holding.

    OFFICER BYCK VAVSON: Admiral, we're losing altitude.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: Engage the repulsorlifts.

    COMMADOR META: Sir, the repulsor coils are offline.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: Fire all thrusters.

    INT. BATTLECRUISER PROMINENCE - DAY

    The bridge crew handles the emergency, but a few stop and watch as the hull of the Echo of Hope
    sparks and glows red as it enters the atmosphere.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: Lock onto them with the tractor beam.

    ADMIRAL BASHIER: Delay that order. Establish communications first. We need to know if they can be
    saved.

    The bridge crew sneaks look at the Admiral.

    EXT. HALMAD ORBIT - DAY

    The grouped X-wings watch on helplessly as the Echo of Hope and second Star Destroyer burn and are
    pulled into the planet.

    KARE' KUN: Why aren't they helping?

    JESSIKA PAVA: Because they don't give a damn.

    POE: Of course they'd help.

    MYRI: Something must be wrong with the tractor beam.

    INT. STAR CRUISER ECHO OF HOPE - DAY

    Lights flicker, consoles spark, and the bridge shudders.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: Give me full power!

    COMMODORE META: I can't. The planet has an incredible magnetic field. It's interfering with the power
    core.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: Get the crew to the escape pods.

    OFFICER BYCK VAVSON: Sir, the escape pods will fry as soon as they launch.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: Damn it.

    Admiral Ackbar weighs his options then pushes the frog-eyed BOLLIE PRINDEL to the side of his
    engineering console. Bollie points to the huge spikes of the magnetic waveform.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: Invert the frequency and modulate the deflector shields to that waveform.

    BOLLIE PRINDEL: Yes sir.

    ADMIRAL ACKBAR: Cut the thrusters and divert all power to the anterior hull deflectors.

    INT. BATTLECRUISER PROMINENCE - DAY

    The pained crew watches helplessly as the Echo of Hope burns.

    LIEUTENANT MCCAUL, 30's human male, monitors the Echo of Hope's condition.

    LIEUTENANT MCCAUL: Their thrusters have failed.

    ADMIRAL BASHIER: They may have been renegades, but they died with honor. Few souls-

    LIEUTENANT MCCAUL: Sir, their orbit has stabilized.

    Admiral Bashier looks over his shoulder in disbelief.

    LIEUTENANT MCCAUL: It's gaining altitude, but I'm reading high levels of radiation. Their power core
    won't last much longer.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: Engage the tractor beam.

    ADMIRAL BASHIER: No. It's too dangerous. If their core breaches, we'll all die.

    EXT. STAR CRUISER ECHO OF HOPE - DAY

    The glow of the Echo of Hope's hull fades as it pulls away from the planet. The second Star Destroyer
    breaks into pieces. Nien Nunb finishes off the last Tie Fighter. He joins the pack of X-wings as they
    watch the Echo of Hope.

    NEV LEK: They're gonna make it.

    ALEXA: Come on, Echo!

    BASTIAN: Leave it to ole fish face to escape certain death.

    The Echo of Hope continues to climb, but suddenly the rear of the ship explodes in a cascade from tail
    to tip.

    POE: No!

    Nien Nunb wails. The fighter pilots writhe in horror.

    INT. BATTLECRUISER PROMINENCE - BRIDGE - DAY

    Captain Canady swallows his anger.

    ADMIRAL BASHIER: They were brave men and skilled fighters, but their lack of discipline and training
    led to their failure. Let this be a lesson for us all.

    Captain Canady storms out. Admiral Bashier ignores him.

    ADMIRAL BASHIER: Inform the remaining Resistance pilots that they are welcome to join our fleet. It's
    the least we can do.

    FLASHBACK: EXT. JAKKU - MINING TOWN - RESIDENTIAL ZONE - DAY

    Wind kicks up sand and whistles through dense pre-fab houses. A dirty little girl, 5, with short brown
    hair and a coarse linen dress, walks through the street with a worried look as residents hurry into their
    homes.

    LITTLE GIRL: (calling) Maddle.

    Tie Fighters in pursuit of X-wings flash by overhead. She finds her six-legged, two-tailed, goofy fuzz-ball
    under a landspeeder up on blocks.

    LITTLE GIRL: Maddle. There you are.

    As the girl pulls her pet JURURIE out, she sees a stormtrooper patrol turns down the street. She
    crouches behind the speeder. The patrol comes closer, and Maddle blurbles loudly. A door from a nearby
    house opens and YOUNG REY, 5, strikingly similar to the little girl, pokes her head out.

    YOUNG REY: (in a whisper) Salis. What are you doing?

    SALIS holds up her pet. Young Rey waves her in.

    YOUNG REY: Hurry.

    As Salis enters, Maddle squirms free and runs off again.

    SALIS: Maddle, come back!

    Salis starts after him, but Rey grabs her arm.

    YOUNG REY: Stay here. I'll get him.

    SALIS: No. Don't go, Rey. They'll catch you.

    YOUNG REY: Don't worry. I've done it before. If you see my mom and dad, tell them I'll be right back.

    EXT. MINING TOWN - TRANSPORT STATION - DAY

    The TICKET AGENT, late 40s, heavy-set and unshaven, in a faded and worn uniform, suspiciously
    examines travel documents behind the dirty glass window of his small ticket office.

    TALLIN MITHRYSE, the early 30s, with a dirty and weathered face, waves a callused hand above the
    counter.

    TALLIN: These papers are in order.

    STATION AGENT: These papers are in order. Three tickets for Dantooine, thirty-five hundred credits.

    Tallin hands over a burlap sack of credits. Annoyed, the station agent counts them out one by one.
    Tallin waves again.

    TALLIN: It's all there.

    STATION AGENT: It's all there.

    Tallin turns and hands off the tickets to EZIA MITHRYSE, the 20s, her face sun-beaten and tired. She
    pockets them.

    EZIA: We have to hurry. The rebels have started bombing runs.

    She pulls a hood over her long brown, braided hair.

    EXT. MINING TOWN - RESIDENTIAL ZONE - DAY

    Rey chases after Maddle through allies but stops and hides as a column of Imperial transports and
    stormtroopers pass. She continues her hunt as the stormtroopers occupy themselves with an anti-
    aircraft battery down the block from her. Above, a Y-wing lines up his attack run on the battery.

    INT. Y-WING - DAY

    A hefty pilot with a handlebar mustache adjusts his targeting computer to identify the missile battery.

    GOLD FIVE: Gold Five to Gold Leader. Request permission to target an Imperial battery within the labor
    camp.

    GOLD LEADER: Target confirmed. Permission granted Gold Five.

    GOLD FIVE: Copy Gold Leader.

    The targeting computer flashes a lock.

    EXT. MINING TOWN - RESIDENTIAL ZONE - DAY

    The Y-wing dives and launches its missile behind Rey as she creeps up on Maddle cornered by a low
    concrete wall.

    REY: Gotcha.

    She pounces on the beastie just the missile strikes. The deafening explosion knocks Rey off her feet.
    She stands shaken but unharmed, but her jaw drops as she sees her house, and those around it,
    demolished. Local residents help the wounded and douse the flames. A bloodied, injured woman in
    tattered clothes searches through the rubble of her home, frantic.

    INJURED WOMAN: Salis! Salis!

    A ground transport arrives, and stormtroopers pile out.

    PA SYSTEM: (pre-recorded voice) ...evacuate the area. This is now a restricted zone. All civilians
    evacuate...

    The troopers shove people out of the way and wave their blasters as they attend to their own. An
    angry old man holds his injured arm and stands his ground.

    ANGRY MAN: Ever since the Empire got here-

    A stormtrooper shoves him. The crowd protests. Through the mounting chaos, Rey sees Tallin and Ezra
    near the burning pile that was their house.

    REY: Mom! Dad!

    They can't hear over the crowd, but DM-0117 does.

    DM-0117: Stop!

    Rey takes off, and a wild chase ensues through the narrow alleyways of the shantytown section of the
    neighborhood.

    EXT. MINING TOWN - TRANSPORT STATION - DAY

    Young Rey frantically pushes through the crowd and squeezes through the gate as the transport lifts
    off. Rey stands out in the middle of the landing pad, exposed, but she doesn't care.

    UNKAR PLUTT grabs her hand. Rey tries to pull away.

    YOUNG REY: No, come back.

    UNKAR PLUTT: Quiet, girl!

    Unkar unceremoniously stuffs her into his junk cart. The stormtrooper runs just past Unkar, stops, and
    looks around.

    DM-0117: Where's the girl?

    UNKAR PLUTT: What girl?

    DM-0117 shoves him in frustration and scans the platform. Unkar laboriously drags his cart away. Rey
    peeks through a gap as DM-0117 searches through the offloaded cargo. She looks back to where the
    ship flew off and sees nothing but sand dunes.

    END FLASHBACK: INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - LOUNGE - DAY

    The dunes devolve into Luke's sandy brown cloak. Rey returns from her daydream as Threepio crosses
    her line of sight. Threepio adjusts Luke's monitor. When he moves away, she sees Luke's face and
    arms wrapped in bandages. Artoo inquisitively tweedles in remorseful tones.

    THREEPIO: Don't say such things, Artoo. Master Luke is quite resilient for a human.

    Finn joins them with a blanket and lays it over Luke. Rey returns to her work as she repairs Luke's
    prosthetic hand that lays in pieces on the checkered Dejarik table.

    FINN: Do you need a... help with that?

    REY: Uh... Here, hold this.

    Rey hands Finn a flashlight. Finn accepts the pandering gesture and half-heartedly lights the
    workspace. Mad at herself, Rey angrily works on Luke's prosthetic.

    FINN: You know, it's not your fault.

    REY: What?

    FINN: Luke. He's a Jedi Master and-

    REY: I know.

    FINN: Oh. You just seem upset.

    REY: I am upset! (tempering her tone) I- I tried, but I was scared. I couldn't help it. I failed. I failed
    Leia; I failed Luke; I failed everyone, literally everyone.

    Threepio looks over at the commotion. Finn shuts up and a thick uncomfortable silence fills the room.
    Lando notices it when he enters.

    LANDO: We're on course to the Both system. The Resistance has a safehouse there.

    No one responds.

    LANDO: You're welcome.

    Lando checks on Luke.

    THREEPIO: He's stable for the moment, but he needs a proper medical facility.

    LANDO: Hang in there, Luke. (standing) Hey Finn, help me recalibrate our long-range sensor array for
    First Order frequencies.

    FINN: Uh... sure.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - MAIN CORRIDOR - DAY

    Finn follows Lando into the corridor. He looks around for what might be a sensor array panel.

    LANDO: Finn, this isn't easy for me. I'm a man who lives by his instincts, and it's served me well, but I
    want to apologize to you. I was wrong and I hope you can forgive me.

    FINN: Thanks, Lando. That means more to me than you know. It's not easy earning trust with my
    background.

    LANDO: I can relate. We both have backgrounds that don't inspire trust. I also see why you joined the
    Resistance.

    Lando smiles and nods toward the lounge.

    FINN: Am I that obvious?

    LANDO: That's okay. I was lured into the Rebellion the same way.

    FINN: Yeah? Anyone I know?

    Lando waves his hands dismissively.

    FINN: Who? Leia? Leia. Is it Leia? It's Leia, isn't it?

    Lando gestures for Finn to lower his voice.

    LANDO: You need to learn to be subtle. And if you're going to win a girl, you can't be so aggressive. You
    need to be smooth and confident.

    FINN: Smooth and confident. Yeah, okay.

    LANDO: You're wasting your time with Rey.

    FINN: What are you talking about?

    LANDO: Don't you know? The Jedi can't have intimate relationships. It's part of their code. Something
    about emotions.

    The revelation crushes Finn's heart.

    LANDO: Unrequited love is more bitter than sweet, let me tell you.

    Lando puts a comforting arm on his shoulder.

    LANDO: Don't fret. Stick with me and I'll introduce you to some, uh, nice girls who'd love to meet you.

    A warning beacon sounds from the cockpit.

    LANDO: Inform the others we're coming up on Bothawui.

    INT. STAR DESTROYER FINALIZER - ASSEMBLY ROOM - DAY

    Kylo and General Hux kneel before Snoke's projection.

    SNOKE: Two Star Destroyers. You were to have crushed them by now.

    GENERAL HUX: A minor setback. The Resistance has been eliminated. Only the New Republic remains.

    SNOKE: Send no less than eight Star Destroyers. Finish off the fleet quickly.

    GENERAL HUX: Yes, Supreme Leader.

    SNOKE: Go.

    General Hux rises and leaves. Kylo remains kneeling.

    SNOKE: Rescued by your own subordinates.

    KYLO: I wanted to prove my loyalty to you.

    SNOKE: By disobeying me? Now Skywalker is no longer in exile.

    Kylo stands.

    KYLO: He was a feeble old man. He couldn't possibly survive our confrontation.

    SNOKE: Your theory is insignificant.

    KYLO: What must I do to regain your trust?

    SNOKE: Execute General Leia.

    Kylo flinches, but he quickly recovers.

    KYLO: As you wish, Supreme Leader.

    SNOKE: Do not fail me again.

    INT. STAR DESTROYER FINALIZER - DETENTION CENTER - DAY

    MAJOR VERRADER, 20s, privileged, in a teal uniform, walks tall down the corridor toward a pair of
    stormtroopers who flank a cell door. He turns to enter, but the guards step in front of him.

    MAJOR VERRADER: What is the meaning of this?

    AE-1016: I'm sorry, Major. We have strict orders to deny all access to the prisoner.

    MAJOR VERRADER: On whose authority?

    AE-1016: Captain Phasma, sir.

    MAJOR VERRADER: Captain Phasma. Has she secretly been promoted to Grand Moff?

    AE-1016: No, sir. I'm sorry, sir. Permit me to inform the Captain.

    MAJOR VERRADER: Inform her on your own time. Right now you two will accompany me during my
    interrogation.

    AE-1016: Yes, sir.

    The guards open the door to reveal Leia, who looks up from on a bench. As they enter, Major Verrader
    pulls his sidearm. Kylo, flanked by two stormtroopers of the 501st in their new red-striped helmets,
    turns the corner of the detention block and marches toward the cell door. He pushes the lock, and the
    door slides open to reveal two stormtroopers dead on the floor. Kylo swallows a curse.

    AL-2112: I'll alert security.

    KYLO: No. I'll find her myself.

    INT. STAR DESTROYER FINALIZER - LOADING DOCK - DAY

    Major Verrader leads stormtrooper MF-9007 with a repulsor trolley of weapons crates. Two 501st
    stormtroopers stop them.

    AL-2112: What's your designation?

    MAJOR VERRADER: What's the meaning of this, trooper? Don't you recognize MF-9007?

    MF-9007: (woman's voice) MF-9007.

    VH-0812: Remove your helmet.

    MF-9007 looks to Major Verrader, then removes her helmet to reveal a young woman with short red
    hair and freckles.

    AL-2112: It's not her.

    The stormtroopers continue their search. Captain Phasma feigns interest in a shipment of rifles but
    watches them closely. They round a freighter to reveal a rickety C-73 Vega shuttle of the Clone War
    Era. Major Verrader dismisses MF-9007 and pushes the crates up the loading ramp.

    INT. C-73 VEGA SHUTTLE - DAY

    He opens the crate and lets Leia out of the cramped container. She looks around the haggard interior.

    LEIA: A Vega? This thing is older than me.

    MAJOR VERRADER: Can you fly it?

    LEIA: Does it fly?

    He scoffs, opens another crate, and points out the devices.

    MAJOR VERRADER: This is the transponder. (points to data device) This data device contains a revolving
    clearance code generator, a map of the old Imperial Complex, and Snoke's current itinerary for the next
    few days. So, whatever it is you're planning, you'd better hurry.

    LEIA: I'm impressed, Major.

    MAJOR VERRADER: Yes, yes, fine. I fulfilled my part. Can I trust you to fulfill yours?

    LEIA: I will as long as you quit taking bribes from Zygerrian slavers.

    MAJOR VERRADER: I wouldn't dream of it.

    LEIA: Major, if you're in any kind of danger, you can come with me.

    MAJOR VERRADER: (playfully) What? And betray the First Order? Never. But thank you for the offer.

    INT. STAR DESTROYER FINALIZER - LOADING DOCK - DAY

    Major Verrader exits the shuttle to see Kylo enter the loading bay with several of his new
    stormtroopers. He spins on his heels in the hopes of escaping Kylo's notice.

    KYLO: Stop that ship.

    Kylo's stormtroopers open fire on the shuttle. Major Verrader hits the deck. The engine sputters and
    the ship rises. Captain Phasma joins Kylo.

    CAPTAIN PHASMA: Hold your fire!

    Kylo and the stormtroopers ignore her.

    CAPTAIN PHASMA: Sir, I have a tracker onboard. She'll lead us to Skywalker.

    Kylo raises his hand and the stormtroopers cease-fire. Leia's ship passes through the magnetic field
    and flees. Major Verrader raises his head to find Kylo, Captain Phasma, and the 501st stormtroopers
    around him. Using the Force, Kylo grips Major Verrader's throat and lifts him off the floor. He claws at
    the invisible hand and gasps.

    KYLO: Major Verrader.

    CAPTAIN PHASMA: Strange. You're the one who told me where to find General Leia, and now you help
    with her escape. I venture to guess you are the one who placed the vibroknife in her stateroom.

    Major Verrader turns blue as he fights for breath.

    KYLO: What else have you given her?

    EXT. HALMAD ORBIT - DAY

    Poe and his squad maneuver into flight formation as the fleet prepares for the jump to hyperspace.
    Poe's radio pops.

    MYRI: Black Leader, position your squad after Vanguard.

    POE: Copy that. (switching frequencies) Okay, Black Nerf Squadron, we're shuffling the deck again.

    Black Squadron drops out of their positions and head toward the rear of the convoy and toward the
    Prominence. Kare' pounds angrily on the canopy.

    JESSIKA PAVA: Hey, Dameron. Your girlfriend's taking us out of the game.

    POE: Relax, Pava. There will be plenty of action once we reach Obroa-Skai. Our job is to protect the
    Prominence. Let the New Republic take point on the Solstice. It's their ship.

    Poe's team positions itself next to Green Squadron.

    NIEN NUNB: Poe, I didn't expect to see you here with the rest of the rebel scum.

    POE: Bashier wanted me to keep an eye on you. There were complaints about Green Squadron
    cheating at Sabacc.

    YOLO ZIFF: Poe, is it true that Specter Base has been overrun?

    POE: That hasn't been confirmed. Comms went down shortly after we left.

    NEV LEK: They say that survivors escaped and are holed-up on Bothawui. And, well, Wedge-

    POE: Wedge can do what he wants. Rogue Squadron isn't officially part of the Resistance.

    BASTIAN: Since when did we become so formal? We're not Republic Defense. I know, because they
    won't let us forget it.

    POE: I've never abandoned a mission, and I'm not going to start now.

    L'ULO: Poe, we may need to pull out of this. Our mission to reunite the New Republic fleet is failing.
    We've lost more ships than we've saved.

    KARE' KUN: Why are you so loyal to them? They didn't even try to save the Echo.

    POE: Look around you. These are your brothers now. They need us. They must survive if we're to have
    any chance at defeating the First Order.

    ODDY MUVA: I'm staying.

    JESSIKA PAVA: Me too. I'm here to fight.

    L'ULO: I'll stay. I won't be the one to deliver the bad news to your father.

    NIEN NUNB: It's because of bureaucrats exactly like Admiral Bashier that we formed the Resistance.

    BASTIAN: I'm sorry, Poe.

    Several Resistance starfighters drop out of formation.

    MYRI: Black Leader, get your pilots back into formation. You're in the New Republic now. Orders are not
    optional.

    They jump into hyperspace. More starfighters drop out.

    POE: They're not stormtroopers. Their loyalties lie with those who are loyal to them. The New Republic
    hasn't exactly earned their respect.

    MYRI: Why are you still here?

    POE: My loyalty resides in the mission. Besides, what's the point of being the best pilot in the galaxy
    if you're not around to see it?

    MYRI: Hilarious. If you're staying, merge what's left of your squad with Rapier, but I need you to
    command the wing.

    Poe smirks as he calculates coordinates on his navicomputer.

    POE: A promotion? And here I thought you didn't like me.

    The starfighters power up and jump to hyperspace group by group, followed closely by the Prominence.

    EXT. BOTHAWUI - DAY

    The Falcon skims through craggy, snowcapped mountains, into a valley, and toward a towering
    metropolis.

    EXT. SLUMS OF DREV'STARN - DAY

    The Falcon drifts over dense slums of tall, skinny buildings composed of repurposed cargo containers
    and transports. The Falcon settles into the center of a dilapidated arena. Telescopic booms extend out
    around the roof perimeter followed by a canvas patchwork of awnings to enclose the field.

    INT. SAFEHOUSE - DAY

    Lando, Finn, Threepio, and Chewie disembark into the refugee camp of old portable buildings and dusty
    sunbeams. Resistance fighters mill about, despair written on their faces. The white-bearded MAJOR
    CALUAN EMATT greets them.

    THREEPIO: Major Ematt, where is everyone?

    MAJOR EMATT: This is it. What you see here is the last of the Resistance.

    LANDO: Chewie, get a doctor. Who's in charge?

    MAJOR EMATT: You are, sir.

    LANDO: No, no. I haven't been part of the Resistance in a long time.

    MAJOR EMATT: Your actions at Specter Base had me believing otherwise.

    LANDO: Then put Finn in charge. He's the hero of Specter.

    Finn does a double take, blindsided by the complement. Major Ematt shakes his hand. Finn fills with
    pride.

    MAJOR EMATT: Excellent work, son.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - CREW QUARTERS - DAY

    Rey anxiously watches DOCTOR KALONIA apply bacta bandages as an FX-7 medical droid sets up an IV.

    KALONIA: I'll take care of him, love.

    REY: He'll live?

    Dr. Kalonia smiles warmly.

    KALONIA: I'm afraid that's not up to me.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - MAIN CORRIDOR - DAY

    Rey finds Finn waiting for her.

    FINN: You saved his life.

    REY: Maybe.

    Finn makes an awkward attempt to hug her. She recoils.

    REY: What are you doing?

    FINN: Sorry. Did I do it wrong?

    REY: (realizing) Oh. No, it's me. I'm sorry. I'm not used to it. There's not a lot of hugging on Jakku, at
    least not for free- not that I-

    FINN: Oh, yeah, no. I know. I mean it's not like stormtroopers hug at all. They're kinda the opposite of
    hugs. I just remember my mom, she used to hug me, like a lot. It's one of the few memories I have of
    her.

    REY: My dad too. He always smelled so bad from working in the mines all day, but I didn't care. It made
    me feel safe, ya know?

    FINN: You're safe here.

    Rey moves in close to him. He takes her into his arms and they push through the unfamiliarity into
    genuine affection. They hold each other for a long moment. Rey sheds a tear and then composes
    herself as they separate.

    REY: Thanks. You're a good friend, Finn.

    EXT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - DAY

    Finn floats down the ramp. Lando nears with a raised eyebrow.

    FINN: We're good friends. Rey and me, not just friends, good friends.

    LANDO: (shaking his head) That's too bad.

    Finn frowns. He chases after Lando.

    FINN: Bad? Wait. What do you mean 'bad'?

    Lando nods to Major Ematt. He and several armed soldiers crank open a large door to the outside. A
    short, masked MERCENARY clad in thin armor and several lion-faced BOTHANS enter with a repulsor
    trolley of supplies.

    FINN: You don't think she likes me?

    MERCENARY: (raspy synthetic voice) Don't listen to him, kid. He's a scoundrel, that one.

    Lando and Finn look to the mercenary as she pulls off her mask to reveal Leia.

    LANDO: Leia! (stumbling) I'm glad you're here to see you.

    FINN: (under his breath) Smooth and confident.

    Lando elbows him in the ribs.

    LEIA: What are you doing here? Thought you left the Resistance for something more profitable.

    LANDO: When I heard you were captured, I couldn't stand by and do nothing.

    Leia gives him a coy smile.

    LEIA: You've always been a good friend.

    MAJOR EMATT: You're here, so you've heard about Specter Base.

    LEIA: Did Admiral Statura make it out?

    MAJOR EMATT: No. The list of survivors is short. He did brief me on your mission. You took a great risk.

    LEIA: If the intel from my informant is accurate, it was worth it.

    Leia hands him the transponder and data device.

    LEIA: We need a plan, and soon.

    MAJOR EMATT: One transponder and a few dozen men. We don't do things easy, do we?

    LEIA: We make the most with what we have.

    MAJOR EMATT: Yes, ma'am.

    LANDO: Leia, Luke's here. He's in pretty bad shape. The doctor isn't sure if he's going to make it.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - CREW QUARTERS - DAY

    Kalonia gently slices through the bloodied bandage on Luke's face and peels it back to the ugly mess
    underneath. Leia enters as the doctor cleans the surface of his cheek but finds only a fading bruise.
    Artoo beeps. Chewie grunts a greeting and stands.

    LEIA: How is he?

    KALONIA: It's hard to say. He's suffered severe burns. It'd be just a matter of time if he were anyone
    else.

    Leia leans in close.

    LEIA: Luke, it's Leia.

    Luke doesn't respond. She takes a moment with him and strokes his hair, happy to see him again, but
    deeply concerned.

    LEIA: Oh, Luke.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - LOUNGE - DAY

    Rey lowers her goggles, aims a power coupler, and shoots an electrical arc at Luke's prosthetic hand
    holding his weapon. The blade's brightness intensifies. The dejarik holographic game pieces flicker. The
    whole table sparks and smolders.

    REY: Whoops.

    She shuts off the power and wafts away the smoke. She gently removes the lightsaber and tests the
    prosthetic. The fingers move one by one, ball into a fist, then relax. She sits back, satisfied with her
    work, and gives Luke's lightsaber a wistful inspection. She tightens her grip and concentrates. She
    closes her eyes. Luke's voice echoes.

    LUKE (V.O.): I'll come back for you.

    VISION BEGINS: EXT. TATOOINE - LARS MOISTURE FARM - DAY

    Human contractors repair and paint the adobe of the sunken courtyard with the help of several
    construction droids. A blue female and brown male Twi'lek, with long head-tails, install a vertical
    hydroponic garden. A walrus-faced Aqualish grunts orders to three little hooded Jawas as they tilt up a
    new harvest purification system.

    INT. LARS MOISTURE FARM - NURSERY - DAY

    Han swaps Luke's old tri-winged T-16 skyhopper scale model, suspended above the crib, for a YT-1300
    light freighter.

    INT. LARS MOISTURE FARM - KITCHEN - DAY

    A pregnant Mara Jade pours a glass of blue bantha milk as Han enters with a stuffed Wookiee doll
    wrapped in a bow. She smiles, but it collapses into depression.

    HAN: I know, Tatooine isn't a cultural center, but it's safe and quiet and a perfect place to raise a child.
    No one is going to find you here.

    MARA JADE: I can't do this. I'm not a mother.

    HAN: What are you talking about? The sharecroppers will handle the farm, you'll have a nanny to help
    with little Biggs, and I'll drop by all the time to check on you.

    MARA JADE: His name's Anakin, and he needs his father.

    Guilt pierces Han, and he fumbles his excuse.

    HAN: Mara, he has an obligation. He wants to be here, he wants to teach him the ways of the Force
    and watch him grow up, but I... he can't.

    He instantly regrets his words. Mara gives Han Luke's lightsaber, from her pocket.

    MARA JADE: He'll be looking for this.

    Han rolls it in his hand, then gives it back.

    HAN: No. He can come and get it himself.

    Mara puts on a weak smile.

    EXT. LARS MOISTURE FARM - DAY

    Through a pair of macrobinoculars, the Falcon lifts off, and Mara returns to the farmhouse.

    INT. LARS MOISTURE FARM - NURSERY - NIGHT

    Mara enters the dark room with the Wookiee doll. She switches on the light and gasps to find Young
    Kylo in the middle of the room holding the model of the Falcon. She turns to the door, but it slides
    shut. She trembles.

    MARA JADE: Who are you? What do you want?

    Kylo smashes the model against the wall. She jumps.

    KYLO: You should have never gotten involved.

    Kylo pulls a small blaster.

    MARA JADE: No, please don't!

    KYLO: You won't take my father from us.

    MARA JADE: Father? (realizing) Ben? No, Ben. Wait!

    Mara reaches for the lightsaber. He shoots, and she crumbles to the floor. Kylo breathes heavily, his
    hands shake. He picks up the lightsaber and realizes to whom it belongs.

    VISION ENDS: INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - LOUNGE - DAY

    Rey looks up from the lightsaber to see Leia.

    REY: How could he abandon his wife and child?

    LEIA: He had no choice, and he didn't abandon them.

    REY: He did have a choice.

    LEIA: You don't understand. If he stayed, they'd all be in danger. It's what happened to our mother
    and father.

    REY: If abandoning your child on a desert planet is what it means to be a Jedi, I want no part of it.

    LEIA: You think you're the only one who's suffered? My son murdered my husband. My father
    murdered my family. Yet I continue to fight for your freedom. You've been given a great power, and
    you think you have no obligations?

    REY: You used me. That's why you sent me to Luke, not to bring him back, but to make me a soldier
    for your war.

    LEIA: Without the Jedi, the galaxy will fall into darkness. I can't allow that.

    REY: A darkness brought on by your family. Find someone else to absolve your guilt.

    Rey pushes Luke's lightsaber onto Leia as she passes. Leia angrily pounds the bulkhead, defeated.
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    INT. SAFEHOUSE - OPERATIONS - DAY

    The holoprojector glow illuminates the small metal prefab. Major Ematt strokes his white beard as the
    model of a First Order Capitol rotates. Finn and Lando examine it closely.

    MAJOR EMATT: With the transponder and codes, getting to Raithal will be easy, but as soon as we get
    near the city-

    LANDO: Stormtroopers with blasters. We'll need a diversion.

    Lando zooms out to show the surrounding area.

    LANDO: Something that will make them think we have a different agenda. Something far away.
    What's this?

    MAJOR EMATT: That's the Military Academy.

    FINN: It was once. Now it's an indoctrination facility.

    Finn loses his attention as memories haunt him.

    MAJOR EMATT: Nonetheless, it's full of stormtroopers.

    LANDO: Damn. Well, that's off the table. How about this?

    MAJOR EMATT: That's a commissary. No matter what we chose as our target, this is all academic
    without air support.

    He points to a Tie Fighter airfield. Lando rubs his chin.

    INT. SAFEHOUSE - DAY

    NIC TEED, a HAMADRYAS with green skin and a thick brow, and KAYDEL KO CONNIX, a young human
    female with blond hair pulled back into two buns, open the crates from the Bothans. Kaydel Ko pulls an
    old, well-used E-11 blaster from the haphazard pile and examines it.

    KAYDEL KO: Do you know how to use this?

    NIC TEED: Ask the Imp.

    He nods toward Finn exiting the operations prefab.

    KAYDEL KO: Hey! Have you ever used one of these?

    FINN: Yeah, of course.

    Finn pulls out another banged-up blaster from the crate. He points to the switches on the side.

    FINN: Sting, stun, single, burst, and full-auto. Here's your plasma gauge, magazine catch, and scope.

    Finn looks through the scope.

    FINN: The targeting will need to be adjusted before they'll shoot straight.

    NIC TEED: (chuckling) That explains a lot.

    Kaydel Ko glares at Nic. Finn ignores the comment and pulls out another blaster to examine. Nic opens
    a container of medpacs and wrinkles his nose.

    NIC TEED: (grimacing) Bothans smell worse than sarlacc breath.

    KAYDEL KO: Show some respect. Many Bothans died to bring us this medication.

    FINN: I dunno, I kinda like it... Musky.

    Kaydel and Nic laugh. Finn chuckles and then looks up to see Rey packed and headed for the doors. He
    runs to catch her.

    FINN: Hey, where you going?

    REY: I'm done with all of this.

    FINN: What do mean? You can't quit now.

    REY: This war's insane. I'm better off on my own. Why don't you come with me?

    Tempted, Finn looks back at the camp.

    FINN: I... I want to, but I can't. There's too much at stake.

    REY: Yeah, I've heard that, but look at the way they treat you after all you've done for them. They
    don't deserve you.

    FINN: It's not about me. It's bigger than that. Regardless of what they think of me, they need my
    help. Besides, they're starting to come around.

    KAYDEL KO (O.S.): Get back to work, buckethead.

    Finn grins sheepishly. From the upper balcony deck, PI'QI, a long-horned IKTOTCHI with red leathery
    skin, shouts.

    PI'QI: Stormtroopers!

    An explosion shakes the arena. Resistance soldiers instantly respond and scramble toward the breach.

    FINN: You'd better go while you can.

    Finn takes off. Nic tosses Finn a blaster as he joins them.

    Another explosion and Rey automatically reaches for her lightsaber but finds it missing.

    EXT. SLUMS OF DREV'STARN - DAY

    Rey slips outside and sees the 501st navigate the narrow, garbage-strewn, earthen streets. She ducks
    into a fuselage. The stormtroopers join their recon team in the siege of the arena. They charge straight
    toward it, seemingly oblivious to the incoming fire from the resistance snipers above.

    EXT. SAFEHOUSE - ROOF - DAY

    Lando gets to the roof to see JUMPTROOPERS with jetpacks zoom up over the arena and attack from
    above. One jumptrooper uses a flamethrower to torch the canvas awning. Lando fires at the
    flamethrower and hits the tank. It explodes. Fire rains down and sets the canvas roof ablaze. Lando's
    comlink crackles.

    LEIA: The roof is on fire. We're exposed.

    LANDO: Copy that.

    Finn joins Lando as Tie Fighters scream by overhead.

    FINN: They know our location. Bombers are on their way.

    Another explosion and the comlink crackles again.

    MAJOR EMATT: Stormtroopers are inside the base.

    FINN: We've got to get out of here.

    Lando keys the comlink.

    LANDO: Chewie, prep the Falcon and load everyone on board. We're getting the hell out of here.

    FINN: Can we all fit?

    LANDO: It's a freighter, isn't it?

    EXT. SLUMS OF DREV'STARN - DAY

    In the dirt along a failing masonry wall covered in graffiti, stormtroopers aim blasters at the heads of
    kneeling Bothans. Kylo paces impatiently before them.

    AL-2112: They've located the resistance base.

    KYLO: Move out.

    AL-2112: Execute the prisoners.

    KYLO: No. Let them go. Their deaths serve no purpose.

    They leave the Bothans in bewildered relief.

    INT. SAFEHOUSE - DAY

    Doctor Kalonia leads her patients to the Falcon followed by her FX-7 medical droid. A soldier stops her.

    RESISTANCE FIGHTER: There's no room for droids.

    Kalonia nods with disappointment and continues inside. Artoo and Threepio arrive as the soldier shoots
    the medical droid. Artoo lets out a shriek. Threepio throws up his hands.

    THREEPIO: Don't shoot!

    RESISTANCE FIGHTER: We can't risk intel falling into enemy hands.

    He raises his blaster.

    THREEPIO: There's no need for that. We won't talk. I hardly talk at all. If fact most of my time is
    spent-

    LEIA: Soldier! They're with me.

    The fighter reluctantly waves them on. The droids quickly follow after Leia as she boards. Finn and
    Lando exit the stairway and run toward the Falcon. An explosion knocks them off their feet. Major
    Ematt and his team fire at the stormtroopers as they appear in the seating levels. The stormtroopers
    return fire and jump the rails onto the field. The team falls back into the Falcon. Finn helps up Lando
    and half carries him to the Falcon. The Falcon's AX-108 "Ground Buzzer" drops and lays down a barrage
    of rapid cover-fire for Finn and Lando.

    EXT. SAFEHOUSE - ROOF - DAY

    Rey watches as more jumptroopers rocket to the roof, armed with missiles. She runs toward a half-
    collapsed stairway. Around the roof perimeter, troopers fire on the Falcon. TIE bombers approach in the
    distance. Rey gets to the top of the stairs as a jumptrooper takes aim at the Falcon with his rocket. He
    pulls the trigger. The rocket fires, but Rey Force pushes it. It tumbles, knocks into the ship, takes off
    after a Tie Fighter, and destroys it.

    Another jumptrooper turns and fires on Rey. She whips her staff around and deflects the blaster bolt,
    which slices her staff in two. She tosses the pieces aside. With the TIE bombers almost on them, the
    Falcon rises level with the arena roof. The jumptroopers rocket over the edge and onto the back of the
    Falcon. Rey backs up, sprints, and Force jumps over the parapet and onto the Falcon with the rest of
    the jumptroopers.

    EXT. SAFEHOUSE - DAY

    Kylo and his stormtroopers arrive to see the Falcon rise out of the arena. The scream of approaching
    TIE Bombers increases.

    AL-2112: TAKE COVER!

    AL-2112 shields Kylo with his body as the TIE bombers strike engulfs the arena in a massive fireball.

    EXT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - DAY

    The explosion shockwave rocks the Falcon. Rey desperately clings to the deck, but the jumptroopers'
    magnetic boots hold tight as they fire on the hull.

    EXT. SAFEHOUSE - DAY

    Kylo pushes AL-2112's dead body off of him. The surviving and injured stormtroopers rise to their feet.

    KYLO: Call up the remaining squads! Bring that ship down!

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT - DAY

    Lando, Chewie, Finn, Leia, and the droids peer out as two jumptroopers take aim at them through the
    window.

    LEIA: Shake them off!

    LANDO: We're too heavy. I'd lose control.

    Suddenly, the jumptroopers fly off the hull, revealing Rey behind them, arms stretched forward with a
    Force push.

    FINN: Rey!

    Finn snatches the lightsaber from Leia and slips out. He pushes through the crowded corridor to the
    top hatch lift.

    EXT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - DAY

    Jumptroopers descend upon Rey, who hunkers down in the valley of the cockpit access tunnel. The
    hatch opens and Finn crouches in the well with a blaster. He shoots a jumptrooper and gets the
    attention of the others. Incoming Tie Fighters and the Falcon's cannons trade fire. Finn tosses the
    lightsaber to Rey. She reaches out, but as Tie Fighter bolts strike the ship, she misses. The lightsaber
    clanks onto the deck, rolls to the edge, and stops by a thin line of conduit. She gives Finn an annoyed
    look.

    FINN: It's not my fault.

    Another Tie Fighter strafes the ship. Finn and Rey take cover, and the jumptroopers advance on them.
    The quad-laser cannon swivels and knocks a jumptrooper off the ship as it shoots down one of the
    evading Tie Fighters. Three more pick up the chase. Rey stretches for the lightsaber as it bounces on
    the edge. Finn frantically fires at the jumptroopers as Tie Fighters pepper the Falcon. The hull smokes
    and sparks.

    FINN: I changed my mind! I don't want to be a hero!

    Tie Fighters zoom past. Finn looks up as seven more join the others. They bank and come about into
    an attack position. Suddenly, red cannon fire crosses their path and blows two Tie Fighters out of the
    sky. The Tie Fighters scatter and X-wings streak past.

    INT. X-WING - DAY

    Kare' Kun lets out a victorious cheer.

    KARE' KUN: Eat dirt, sleemo!

    EXT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - DAY

    More X-wings whoosh by. Their shockwave rocks the Falcon and dislodges the lightsaber. It floats freely
    off the edge. Rey reaches for it and snaps it out of the air with the Force. A jumptrooper
    approaches from behind. She ignites the blade, whips around, and slashes him. His body falls from the
    ship as Rey stands and approaches the remaining jumptroopers.

    FINN: Rey! What are you doing?!

    The jumptroopers fire, but she confidently deflects the shots.

    FINN: Oh.

    She swings and swipes as she closes in on them and sends them off the ship one by one. She slashes
    at the last. He rockets up out of her range and fires. She deflects the shots, sending one shot into the
    replaced sensory array antenna. It flops forward.

    REY: Oops.

    Finn fires and hits the rocket pack. It spins the jumptrooper around in circles, flies him off, and he
    explodes. Finn and Rey share in the adrenaline-filled victory dance. Finn stumbles a bit and gets a
    glance over the edge.

    FINN: I'm glad you're back, Rey, but can we get inside now?

    EXT. WHITE MOUNTAINS - EVENING

    In the mountain's shadow, two GR-75 transports, half buried in a snowdrift, consume most of a valley
    floor with the X-wings and Falcon parked scattershot.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - LOUNGE - NIGHT

    Finn, Rey, the droids, Wedge, and the rest of the senior staff gather around the dejarik table.

    FINN: I can do it. I can create the diversion, but I'll need the transports.

    LANDO: But we only have the one transponder.

    MAJOR EMATT: Not too worry, the transports are equipped with cloaking devices, thanks to General
    Solo. I don't know where he got them. I didn't ask.

    LANDO: (chuckling) Han Solo, you pirate. I know who he got them from, and you're right. It's better
    not to ask.

    MAJOR EMATT: It's still a hell of a gamble.

    WEDGE: Let us worry about the local flyboys, but if a Star Destroyer shows up we won't last a parsec.

    THREEPIO: Excuse me, sir, but a parsec is a unit of distance-

    MAJOR EMATT: Even if we take out Snoke, that's no guarantee the First Order will fall.

    LEIA: No, but a power vacuum could fracture their organization and give us time to rebuild the
    Resistance. If anyone wants out, now's the time.

    The room remains silent.

    LEIA: All right, then. Good luck.

    EXT. OBROA-SKAI ORBIT - DAY

    The Prominence and X-wings drop out of hyperspace into the middle of a frenetic battle. The X-wings
    feverishly scatter and instantly come under fire. Poe lets out a long wail as he dodges and banks,
    nearly crashing into another X-wing. A TIE comes into his firing sights. Instinctively, he shoots it down,
    then another. His wits return and he manages to get a handle on the dicey situation. Beyond the
    chaos, three Star Destroyers mercilessly unleash hell onto the helpless New Republic frigate, Solstice.
    Poe, now in control, actively seeks and destroys targets. A lock alarm sounds and shots fly past him.
    Snap swoops in and picks off the pursuer.

    SNAP: First round's on you.

    POE: I'll buy all the rounds if we survive.

    Myri grits her teeth as she fires, weaves, and dodges.

    MYRI: Where is your spine, Black Leader?

    POE: It's attached to my body, and I'd like to keep it there, thank you.

    MYRI: Look out!

    Poe's ship makes physical contact with a Tie Fighter. BB-8 takes a fatal blow. His ship spins out of
    control.

    POE: Kriff!

    Several Tie Fighters close in to finish him off. Myri rushes in recklessly. She takes several hits but
    manages to fend off the closing Tie Fighters.

    MYRI: Poe! Are you all right?

    POE: No. I'm venting plasma and I lost BB-8.

    Two more Star Destroyers appears from hyperspace and maneuver toward the battle.

    MYRI: Enough already!

    INT. BATTLECRUISER PROMINENCE - BRIDGE - DAY

    A frustrated Captain Canady pounds the console. Admiral Bashier maintains a cool and collected facade
    as they watch the battle grow insurmountable.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: Admiral, we must retreat. We have no chance against those Star Destroyers.

    ADMIRAL BASHIER: No! We stay and fight. We are the face of the New Republic. We must demonstrate
    our superiority or risk losing everything we've fought for.

    CAPTAIN CANADY: We will lose everything if we continue to stay here and fight!

    INT./EXT. X-WINGS - DAY

    Alarms sound in Poe's cockpit.

    POE: I've taken too much damage.

    MYRI: Hang in there. We'll be pulling back any minute.

    ADMIRAL BASHIER: All fighters focus on the bridge of the closet Star Destroyer.

    The Prominence unleashes all cannons in a maelstrom of fire.

    MYRI: Okay, listen up. We're going in with a delayed pincer move, but attack the bridge from behind.
    The Prominence will barrage the front. Watch out for their over-spray.

    BASTIAN: What about the other Star Destroyer? They'll blast us into star dust.

    POE: They won't risk firing at their own ship, so stay close to the hull. Keep an eye open for
    turbolasers.

    MYRI: I'll take point. Try not to die.

    POE: Hey, Myri. I realize this isn't the right time or place, but you're the best pilot I've ever seen.

    Myri's eyes well up a little.

    POE: It's been a real honor to serve with you.

    MYRI: Even though you guys are reckless and unruly, I'm glad you're here.

    Poe smiles.

    SNAP: Hey, Poe. I thought I was the best pilot you've ever seen.

    POE: I only said that so I wouldn't embarrass you in front of your mom.

    The squadron pilots burst out in laughter as they speed off toward certain death.

    EXT. STAR DESTROYER - DAY

    Compartment doors slide open along the port edge. Inside, two missiles shift into launch position. The
    tips slowly illuminate into a bright red glow, then launch. The missiles and X-wings fly by each other.

    KORTU: Prominence, incoming missiles.

    INT. BATTLECRUISER PROMINENCE - BRIDGE - DAY

    Turbolasers rain hellfire at the missiles and shoot one down, but the second finds its target. The bridge
    explodes with flame and debris. Captain Canady grabs the console and pulls himself to his feet. Blood
    and burns cover his face and arms. Air leaks through the bulkhead, and the dead and injured litter the
    floor. Captain Canady finds Admiral Bashier with a large shard of durasteel protruding through his neck.
    The Captain drags him across the floor toward the lift. Admiral Bashier's bloody hand reaches up and
    grabs Captain Canady by his jacket.

    ADMIRAL BASHIER: (in a weak raspy voice) I've done my duty. Save the fleet.

    EXT. RAITHAL - CAPITAL CITY - NIGHT

    The once great Imperial City is now war-torn and neglected, except for the new towering Capitol
    building topped with a geodesic sphere.A large cargo vessel taxis from the spaceport as a Tie Fighter
    patrol whizzes past.

    INT. SPACEPORT TRAFFIC CONTROL - NIGHT

    OPERATIONS COMMANDER BLANN lazily sips his caf as he watches the cargo vessel float away.

    AIRMAN TAGGI stands to formally address Commander Blann.

    AIRMAN TAGGI: Commander Blann, long-range sensors have detected a recruit transport on approach,
    but it is not within a designated flight path.

    COMMANDER BLANN: Have they the proper clearance codes?

    AIRMAN TAGGI: Yes, sir.

    COMMANDER BLANN: Then correct their heading and grant them clearance. With all the new recruits,
    I'm surprised there is any room left on the planet.

    AIRMAN TAGGI: Sir, no recruit transports are scheduled until tomorrow. Protocol-

    COMMANDER BLANN: Airman Taggi, not every wrinkled collar suggests a conspiracy.

    AIRMAN TAGGI: Sir, may I suggest visual confirmation?

    Commander Blann clangs his cup onto his saucer and sighs with annoyance.

    COMMANDER BLANN: Fine. If it makes you feel better, send a patrol.

    AIRMAN TAGGI: Very good, sir.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT - NIGHT

    Lando and Chewie watch as the clouds clear to reveal the spaceport.

    AIRMAN TARKIN: Recruit transport four nine. You are clear for landing. Come to mark eight point two
    five.

    FINN: Eight point two five, copy that. (clicks off the comm) Okay, they bought it, but as soon as we dip
    below their sensor array-

    The proximity alarm flashes and two Tie Fighters flash by.

    LANDO: There goes our cover. Prep your team.

    Finn slips out as Lando keys the comm.

    LANDO: Ematt, the party is starting early.

    EXT. CAPITAL CITY - NIGHT

    High above the city, a blue electricity crackles, and the two GR-75 transports solidify from the cloaking
    device. The rear transport doors open in flight. X-wings launch from inside and dive toward the city.
    Three Tie Fighters lift off from the air base. The X-wings quickly engage them. Y-Wing bombs obliterate
    a parked column. The two quad-cannons of the Falcon fire on the patrol.

    The X-wings sweep the city and take out turbo cannon placements, laser towers, and encampments.
    Wedge, Kare', and Nien Nunb circle the military academy as the two massive transports land outside
    the complex. B1 battle droids scurry from rusty bunkers like fire ants from a disturbed mound.
    Many struggle with frozen joints and disabled blasters. Wedge and his squad ravage the droid army.

    WEDGE: This is easier than I thought.

    KARE' KUN: Too bad.

    Nien Nunb chuckles in his weird laughter.

    EXT. OLD IMPERIAL ACADEMY - ROOF - NIGHT

    The Falcon's ramp lowers and Finn's team jumps out. Artoo's rockets glide him to the deck. Finn leads
    Rey, Kaydel Ko, Nic, and Artoo towards a service hatch. Finn blasts the lock.

    INT. OLD IMPERIAL ACADEMY - NIGHT

    Nic slides down the ladder last. The clank of boots on the loose deck grate deadens inside the sloped
    walls, regularly interrupted by thick braces. They cram into an elevator. Finn mashes the button, but
    nothing happens.

    REY: Artoo, see what you can do.

    Artoo tweedles and accesses the data port.

    FINN: The control center is in the basement.

    The elevator chimes and the door closes. A Muzak version of the Imperial March plays overhead.

    FINN: We can unlock all the cell doors from there.

    NIC TEED: What?! The plan is to blow the reactor.

    FINN: Change of plans.

    The doors open, and the team is met with blaster fire from a long corridor. Nic takes a hit. Finn pulls
    him back inside.

    KAYDEL KO: Nic!

    Rey and Kaydel Ko fire back from what little cover they have. Nic slumps dead in Finn's arms.

    KAYDEL KO: They're stormtroopers! Is this really worth it?

    Rey looks questioningly to Finn. Finn nods. A thermal detonator rolls into the elevator. Finn, Kaydel Ko,
    and Rey hold their breath, but Artoo kicks it away. It sails back into the control room and explodes.
    Through the smoke, the team enters the control room, strewn with bodies and the sparking wreckage
    of the console.

    REY: Is there another way to open doors?

    FINN: Yeah. One by one.

    KAYDEL KO: We don't have time for that.

    REY: Let me try.

    EXT. OLD IMPERIAL ACADEMY - NIGHT

    Nien Nunb runs recon and spots bipedal AT-ST walkers and stormtrooper squads en route to the
    Imperial Academy.

    NIEN NUNB: We definitely have their attention.

    LANDO: Copy that, Nien Nunb. We're en route.

    NIEN NUNB: Leaving soon. Be quick.

    INT. OLD IMPERIAL ACADEMY - DORMITORY - NIGHT

    Rey stands before a dimly lit hall. A steam pipe mists and drips, and the lights that work flicker. Finn
    and Kaydel Ko stand behind her.

    KAYDEL KO: If this doesn't work, we have to blow the place.

    FINN: It'll work.

    Rey takes a deep breath, closes her eyes, and reaches out. Nothing happens. Rey peeks through one
    eye. She takes another breath and lets it out slowly. Kaydel Ko is not impressed, until doors rattle. The
    rattle turns into a shudder. Finn and Kaydel Ko take a step back. The doors buck and stress as if holding
    back a monster, until multiples burst from their thresholds. A domino effect of smashing doors echoes
    down the hall.

    Finn and Kaydel Ko share a dumbfounded look. Children's faces, boys and girls from five to fifteen,
    cautiously peep out from the doorways. Rey, surprised at herself, beams with pride. Finn hugs her.

    FINN: Thank you.

    Kaydel Ko revives her pretentious attitude.

    KAYDEL KO: That's great, but let's get a move on? There's a lot more doors to open.

    Finn waves out the cadets.

    FINN: Come on! We're going home.

    The children scurry out of the rooms and follow him.

    EXT. CAPITAL CITY - NIGHT

    The Falcon flies low through a hazy city of decrepit steel and glass buildings pockmarked with lights.
    Ahead looms the castle-like First Order Capitol tower.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT - NIGHT

    The view of the grand Capitol fills the windows.

    LANDO: I've got a baaaad-

    LEIA: Don't... The formal landing berth is on the north side, near the top. Just below it is the valet
    docking bay and service entrance.

    LANDO: They may not be expecting us, but they will be prepared, Princess.

    LEIA: We're not here for a gala. Let's just hope they aren't too prepared.

    EXT. FIRST ORDER CAPITOL - NIGHT

    The Falcon tilts up and flies straight up the building toward the underside of a cantilevered landing
    platform.

    INT. FIRST ORDER CAPITOL - SERVICE BAY - NIGHT

    The sound of cannon fire startles the squad of stormtroopers on guard among the scattered crates and
    repulsor trolleys of the utilitarian service bay.

    EH-5177: Don't worry. They can't get through those durasteel blast doors.

    The blasts continue until the doorframe creaks, sags, and pulls free from the wall. The whole door
    tumbles away to unveil the bottom of the Falcon. The squad is face-to-face with a quad-laser cannon.

    CUT TO: The ramp descends, and four soldiers take defensive positions in the burning tatters of the
    service bay.

    A commando team in mismatched Mandalorian armor, a few in the iconic T-shaped visor helmets, file
    past Leia. The last gives her a small salute off his blue-accented helmet.

    PARUS, 30s, quarterback-like in red and yellow armor, peeks into the corridor and signals all clear.

    INT. FIRST ORDER CAPITOL - CORRIDOR - NIGHT

    The commandos' rear guard advances past the cover team in a leapfrog-like maneuver through the
    curving corridor. Unnoticed by the commando team, the blast door closes behind them. Through the
    shrinking aperture, a red lightsaber with cross guard flashes. The last commando looks behind too late
    to see it.

    PARUS: Contact!

    Four box-headed, heavy battle droids with dual rotating barrel blasters deploy as a wide line across the
    corridor. Their tall, rectangular energy shields form an impenetrable wall. The strike team fires at the
    droids, who return fire and kill two commandos. The strike team retreats to the closed blast door.

    MAHOTI, in red and gray armor, presses the button on the control pad. When nothing happens, he
    pounds on it.

    MAHOTI: It's locked!

    The droids round the curved corridor followed by four squads of stormtroopers.

    The blue-helmet commando activates two thermal detonators.

    He tosses them over the droid shields and into the nest of stormtroopers. The team braces against the
    wall.

    The stormtroopers scatter but not before the explosions take them and the droids out. The energy
    shields last long enough to contain the blasts and protect the strike team.

    As the team advances, a battle droid reaches for a blaster.

    Mahoti shoots it point-blank, and its hand goes limp.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - LOUNGE - NIGHT

    Kylo runs his fingers over crooked, blocky letters that spell "BEN" etched into the engineering station
    console.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - CREW QUARTERS - NIGHT

    Flanked by stormtroopers, Leia kneels on the floor in anguish as Kylo enters. He pays no attention to
    her.

    Kylo gives Luke's cloak in the unoccupied bunk a cursory exam and then tosses it onto the galley
    counter.

    KYLO: Take her away.

    The stormtroopers lift her up and escort her out as Kylo opens the cabinet and to his surprise finds a
    green glass cookie jar. He removes a cookie and smiles briefly.

    His smile turns to anger at himself for giving into his weakness. He crushes it in his fist and smashes
    the jar.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - MAIN CORRIDOR - NIGHT

    Kylo stops at the ramp and glances at the secret compartments.

    With the Force, he flips open covers.

    Empty.

    EXT. OLD IMPERIAL ACADEMY - DORMITORY - NIGHT

    X-wings circle overhead as transport cannons, manned Z-6 rotary blaster cannons, and soldiers behind
    durasteel barriers keep the First Order troops at bay.

    The doors to the academy slam open. Several Resistance soldiers spin reflexively, guns at the ready.

    Cadets stream from the buildings. The soldiers aim at the children but can't bring themselves to shoot.

    PI'QI: Hold your fire!

    His orders bounce around the soldiers.

    Pi'Qi heads off the wave of children shouting.

    PI'QI: Stop! Go back! This is a combat zone!

    The children stop at the sight of the armed men. A small, crying girl, 5, breaks from the crowd and
    latches herself onto Pi'Qi's leg.

    GIRL: I want my mommy!

    Pi'Qi panics at first, but, with an incredulous sigh, he shoulders his rifle and picks up the girl with one
    arm.

    PI'QI: Open the cargo hold. We're taking on passengers.

    The soldiers lift their blasters and hurry the children toward the transport as the great doors swing
    open and the ramp extends.

    X-wings streak by low and fast.

    They zero in on the AT-ST walkers. The walkers' heads explode and their legs crumple to the ground.

    Wedge banks, does another pass over the ground team, and sees the flood of children. Before he can
    say it-

    KARE' KUN: What the hell is going on down there?

    PI'QI: Mission creep. Just watch our backs.

    WEDGE: (vexed) Copy that. (under his breath) Damn fools.

    Wedge pulls up for a pass over the academy. He looks down to see the blue-haired boy alone on the
    roof.

    WEDGE: Viper Six, this is Rogue Leader. One of your strays is on the roof.

    PI'QI: Which building?

    WEDGE: It's the one with the pointy top.

    PI'QI: The Tarkin Building?

    WEDGE: I don't know. It's the northeast- Forget it. I'll get him myself.

    Wedge comes about and lands on the roof among a nest of mechanical units. The roof creaks under
    the weight.

    Wedge pops the top and beckons to the boy.

    WEDGE: Come on, kid! Hurry, before the roof collapses.

    The boy picks through the maze of equipment toward the ship.

    He climbs atop a large vent fan and reaches up to Wedge's hand. Wedge pulls him in and sits him on
    his lap.

    The boy marvels at the cockpit as the canopy closes.

    WEDGE: Can you fly?

    BOY: (worried) No. Can you?

    WEDGE: A little.

    The X-wing lifts off. The boy jolts up with both fear and excitement. Wedge gently drifts the ship down
    to the ground.

    He lowers the boy down to Major Ematt's outstretched arms.

    WEDGE: I never thought I'd be saving stormtroopers.

    MAJOR EMATT: Things aren't as dark and light as they used to be.

    Rey, Finn, and Kaydel Ko meet up with Major Ematt. His comlink crackles.

    PI'QI: Viper Actual, this is Viper Six.

    MAJOR EMATT: Actual, go Six.

    PI'QI: Sir, sensors have picked up another wave of fighters approaching from the south.

    MAJOR EMATT: How many?

    PI'QI: Uh... A lot. They're coming in from orbit.

    WEDGE: Star Destroyer. Get those transports out of here while we still have a chance. We'll hold them
    off.

    Wedge closes his canopy and lifts off.

    FINN: It's too soon. They must have known we were coming.

    REY: Then the strike team is headed right for a trap. We have to warn them.

    MAJOR EMATT: There's no way to contact them. They're under comm silence.

    FINN: I can do it. I know my way round.

    Finn takes off toward the Academy with Rey at his heels.

    INT. GR-75 TRANSPORT - COMMAND POD - NIGHT

    Major Ematt enters as the ship takes a hit that shakes the bridge. He steadies himself.

    TRANSPORT CAPTAIN: A Star Destroyer has entered a geosynchronous orbit directly over the city. It's
    the Finalizer, sir.

    MAJOR EMATT: Plot us a course outside of their weapons range but close enough to lure them away
    from the city.

    Another strafing run rocks the ship.

    TRANSPORT CAPTAIN: I can't get through those TIEs. They're targeting our shield generator.

    EXT. OLD IMPERIAL ACADEMY - NIGHT

    A large door groans and grinds as it slowly opens, but as it lifts a fraction, a white,
    aerodynamic sport bike with black trim shoots out and races toward the city.

    Rey holds onto Finn as they lean forward and straddle what amounts to a ramjet engine with a seat.

    Finn steers with levers behind a small windscreen. As they approach advancing hover tanks and AT-ST
    walkers, Finn weaves through them and fires with the two sets of three cannons mounted on either
    side of the speeder's cowling.

    They punch through the line and race off into the city.

    Wedge takes out three Tie Fighters in succession. He sees that the First Order ground forces have
    surrounded the area but have ceased their advancement.

    WEDGE: Viper Actual, I don't know what those troops are waiting for, but we'll clear you a path
    through these TIEs. Be ready to launch.

    MAJOR EMATT: Rogue Leader, there's more TIEs incoming. Too many even for you. Don't worry about
    us. They won't attack with the cadets onboard, but you need to leave while you can.

    WEDGE: And what happens once you're boarded? Forget it, we're staying. You can court-martial me
    later.

    Rogue Squadron preps for the oncoming tsunami of Tie Fighters that looms on the horizon. Kare' Kun
    takes a deep breath.

    Nein Numb double-checks his instruments.

    WEDGE: Keep a tight defensive perimeter. No hunting trips.

    As the wave hits, hundreds of Republic Defense fighters join the battle, and a frenzy of dogfights
    ensue.

    WEDGE: What the-

    Myri's EX-1 whooshes past.

    MYRI: Rogue Leader, leave the area. You are operating within New Republic Defense jurisdiction.

    Poe flies up alongside Wedge.

    POE: Myri found my tracker. She stuck it on your ship.

    Wedge gives a fictitious sigh of disappointment.

    WEDGE: She did the same thing with the tracker I installed when she first started dating.

    POE: Come on. Let's get these transports out of here.

    EXT. FIRST ORDER CAPITOL - NIGHT

    Rey waits impatiently as Finn tries to rewire a lock on a service door. Rey ignites her blade.

    REY: Move.

    FINN: No, you'll set off the alarm.

    REY: Fine.

    Rey sheaths her lightsaber and jumps with incredible height to a small handhold and scales up the
    wall.

    Finn watches Rey disappears over a balcony.

    FINN: (stage whisper) Hey, what about me?

    Finn makes futile attempts at the handhold. He gives up and reexamines the door but jumps in fright
    when a stormtrooper almost lands on him. He looks up as if expecting more bodies.

    INT. FIRST ORDER CAPITOL - THRONE ROOM - NIGHT

    Two two-story tall doors quietly open into a geodesic sphere of transparisteel windows with
    breathtaking views of the capital city. The commando team enters onto a floating, multi-level walkway
    made up of steps and ramps in a sculptural design.

    In the center of the sphere, a tall riser topped by Snoke patiently seated on his throne with Kylo and
    General Hux on either side of him. The Knights of Ren stand spread out on the steps.

    At the base await Captain Phasma and a company of stormtroopers intermixed with Kylo's 501st. At
    their feet kneels Leia, Lando, and Chewie.

    SNOKE: If you've come to restore order to the galaxy I'm afraid you are too late, Jedi Skywalker.

    Leia looks up in surprise.

    The blue-helmet commando steps forward. Luke reveals himself.

    LUKE: I'm not here for you, Snoke. I've come to bring Ben back to the light.

    SNOKE: The New Republic is gone. The pitiful Resistance is now nothing but a whisper on the lips of old
    men. With your death tonight, the Jedi legacy end and a First Order galaxy will rise.

    The commandos step up behind Luke. The stormtroopers jab their guns into the captives.

    Snoke puffs out a dismissive laugh.

    Luke waves them back and hands Parus his blaster.

    SNOKE: As we speak, the remnants of the New Republic fleet are being swept away. Nothing left but a
    memory, which we will rewrite.

    Kylo ignites his sword and descends the steps, with Luke's lightsaber strapped to his belt. His knights
    follow.

    LUKE: Neither the Jedi nor the Republic fosters the Resistance. You are its father. There is no resistance
    without oppression. Even within your own ranks dissension exists. How will you rule the galaxy when
    you can't even retain the loyalty of your own apprentice?

    KYLO: Hypocrite! How can you speak of loyalty when you break your own vows?

    LUKE: I paid dearly for that mistake.

    KYLO: It's not enough.

    The stormtroopers part for Kylo. As he passes Leia, she grabs Luke's lightsaber and runs. Two
    stormtroopers quickly stop her. A third stormtrooper yanks it from her grasp.

    Captain Phasma approaches with her hand extended toward the Jedi weapon. The stormtrooper chucks
    it to Luke who snatches it out of the air and ignites the blue blade.

    Two 501st stormtroopers grab the rebellious stormtrooper.

    Captain Phasma removes his helmet to reveal Finn.

    CAPTAIN PHASMA: FN-2187. You held such promise. You will again after reeducation.

    Kylo drags the tip of his blade and burns a line on the floor.

    The Knights of Ren follow at a distance.

    LUKE: I know why you wear the mask, but you cannot hide from yourself. You must accept who you
    are, but do not let Snoke - or me or anyone else - define you.

    KYLO: That armor won't protect you from my blade.

    LUKE: Your friends won't protect you from Snoke.

    Kylo swings. Their blades clash.

    KYLO: They'll do as I command. They have sworn their allegiance to me.

    LUKE: That means little in a culture that rewards treachery.

    Luke spins out of the way of Kylo. Kylo whips around for a quick second attack, but Luke blocks this
    too. Kylo sneers at Luke through crossed blades.

    LUKE: Ben, if this is who you really are, and not what you think you've become, then I'll accept it, but
    you must convince me.

    KYLO: I can be very convincing.

    Kylo pushes Luke back and attacks with ferocious strikes.

    Snoke watches on with macabre enjoyment as they duel.

    Leia turns away, but General Hux grabs her chin and twists her head back around. His eyes are wild
    with ecstasy.

    GENERAL HUX: You should watch. This will be the last time you look upon your family.

    Luke changes tactics and goes on the attack. Kylo now struggles to keep up with Luke's effortless
    swordplay, proof he is a true Jedi Master.

    Kylo gives up ground and even the Knights of Ren step back toward the line of stormtroopers.

    Kylo slashes low, but Luke flips and gives Kylo a swift kick to the chest. Kylo hits the deck and slides to
    the feet of the Knights of Ren.

    Kylo stands and lets out a stream of Force lightning.

    Luke shields himself with his blade, and this time his hand maintains functionality. His blade turns from
    green to a blinding white.

    As Kylo shades his eyes, Luke switches his lightsaber into his left hand gets in close to Kylo.

    Kylo blindly swings and Luke catches Kylo's blade with his prosthetic hand. Sparks fly, energy chirps
    and crackles, but his prosthesis resists damage.

    Kylo grabs Luke's other hand and they stand deadlocked. Kylo's hilt smokes and burns into his flesh as
    it overheats.

    The Knights of Ren move in but stop as blaster bolts strike around them. From the superstructure, Rey
    fires a blaster as she leaps to the platform.

    LUKE: Rey, no!

    She lands behind the Knights of Ren and extends her green blade. Stormtroopers fire, but she turns
    and deflects their shots. The commandos open fire on the stormtroopers.

    CAPTAIN PHASMA: Focus on those fighters. The Knights can handle one small girl.

    Rey whips back around to see Lascendu and Skhal light their blades. She takes her practiced fighting
    stance.

    They face each other in a standoff, until Lascendu lowers her blade. She and Skhal share a look behind
    masks. Lascendu pushes back her face shield.

    Through the transparisteel windows, orbital cannons rain down on the city. Explosions erupt in the
    distance, accompanied by a low rumbles.

    LASCENDU: Helana?

    Skhal pulls off his helmet, eyes fixed in wonder on Rey.

    SKHAL: It can't be. We saw you die on Jakku.

    Rey drops her defenses. Her mouth hangs agape and she steps back in disbelief.

    Kylo, unable to hold onto the burning hilt any longer, drops the blade. It tumbles away over the
    platform. Kylo clutches his burnt hand and kneels before Luke.

    Lascendu opens her arms. Rey hesitates. Her eyes redden, but, finally, she rushes into their embrace.

    Finn watches, dumbfounded and forlorn from a distance.

    FINN: Rey! Rey, what are you doing? Rey!

    Luke and Kylo watch as they usher her up toward Snoke. Snoke stands and attempts to look fatherly.
    His eyes meet Kylo's for a moment and then he turns away as they escape together.

    KYLO: No!

    Kylo looks up at Luke.

    KYLO: If you won't kill me, then leave me. I'm not going back.

    LUKE: You know I won't abandon you.

    Kylo stands and looks Luke straight in the eye.

    The orbital strikes grow closer and louder. The room vibrates.

    KYLO: Kill me, or be killed.

    Luke raises his blade. Kylo doesn't flinch. They stand face-to-face. Luke grabs Kylo's wrist and slaps the
    lightsaber hilt into it. Luke steps back and raises his arms, daring Kylo to strike.

    Kylo, taken aback, looks at the blade and then at Luke.

    Luke glances toward Leia and gives her a loving smile. Leia shakes her head in disbelief.

    Kylo raises the blade. Luke closes his eyes.

    Kylo hesitates then swings. As the blade swipes through the armor, Luke's body disappears.

    Leia screams out uncontrollably. Lando turns his face away.

    Chewie lashes out, and stormtroopers desperately try to shock him back into submission.

    Kylo turns to find the Knights blocking his way. General Hux stands behind Leia and raises the
    vibroblade for him to see.

    Kylo's expression turns to horror. He tries push through the Knights, but they grab and hold him.

    With a sick, bare-toothed grin, General Hux thrusts the knife through Leia's back.

    Leia gasps and looks down at the protruding blade and blood.

    Lando cries out in horror.

    LANDO: Nooooooo!

    An orbital blast strikes the building. The transparisteel cracks and the superstructure groans.

    Kylo pulls away desperately, and the Knights draw their swords.

    Kylo's 501st stormtroopers fire on the Knights, and the remaining stormtroopers attack the 501st.

    Unsupervised, Lando runs to Leia's side. He cradles her in his arms. Tears stream down his face.

    LANDO: Leia, don't die. Don't die. I love you. I love you.

    Leia weakly looks up at him. Blood covers her face and mouth.

    Pained, she reaches up, touches his face, and gives a smile.

    LEIA: I know.

    Her hand falls from Lando's face and leaves a swipe of blood.

    Her last breath escapes and she closes her eyes forever.

    Lando holds her close and sobs quietly.

    General Hux and Captain Phasma make a quick exit.

    Kylo outmaneuvers Taug and sends the lug crashing to the floor. With Kylo's back turned, Arigav jumps
    and bring his purple lightsaber down hard.

    Kylo spins, but the tip catches his shoulder. He cries out, then internalizes the pain and uses it to make
    him stronger.

    Finn appears next to Lando and removes his binders.

    FINN: We've got to get out of here.

    He removes the binders from Chewie and helps him up.

    LANDO: We can't leave her here.

    Chewie picks up Leia in his giant hairy arms. Finn helps up Lando and they flee toward the beckoning
    commandos.

    Taug bum-rushes Kylo, but again Kylo evades him, only this time Skhal gets in a punch to Kylo's face.

    Bez sneaks in a swipe across the dazed Kylo's visor.

    Kylo howls and falls to a knee, blinded. He throws off his mask and covers his eyes with his arm.

    The knights back off and watch as Kylo stands and pathetically swings at nothing. He almost falls off
    the platform as the room shakes again from another orbital strike.

    ARIGAV: I'll finish this.

    Arigav toys with him. He waves his lightsaber to Kylo's right.

    The electric hum prompts Kylo to swing in that direction. He drops his arm from his eyes, a black burn
    across his face.

    LUKE (V.O.): Stretch out with your feelings.

    KYLO: Luke?

    Arigav slashes Kylo across his back. Kylo howls again.

    LUKE (V.O.): Let go of your anger and feel the Force around you.

    Kylo relaxes and stands up straight, ready.

    MYRKKY: Finish him!

    Arigav gives a nod then attacks.

    Kylo blocks the strike. Myrkky attacks next, and Kylo blocks his strike too, then gives him a slash across
    his chest.

    Arigav and Taug go in for the kill, but Kylo stops every strike and anticipates every move. Arigav
    overextends and Kylo slices off his leg. He tumbles off the edge.

    Pieces of the frame fall around them.

    BEZ MILOSTI: Leave him.

    The Knights slip through the retreating stormtroopers, as they fend off the 501st and escape out the
    back.

    INT. FIRST ORDER CAPITOL - SERVICE BAY - NIGHT

    An explosion rocks the bay. Finn, Chewie, Lando, and the remaining commandos stagger as they
    navigate through a maze of flame and debris to the Falcon.

    INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT - NIGHT

    Lando and Chewie run through the startup sequence. Another explosion shakes the ship.

    EXT. FIRST ORDER CAPITOL - SERVICE BAY - NIGHT

    The Falcon rises and slips out of the mangled door opening.

    EXT. CAPITAL CITY - NIGHT

    Poe and Myri's X-wings join them as they angle up into the night sky. Orbital cannons fire at the capitol
    building, and it crumbles as it collapses in flames.

    EXT. RAITHAL ORBIT - NIGHT

    A dozen terribly damaged Republic Dreadnoughts pound the Finalizer with large cannons. The Finalizer
    burns and splits in two, then explodes.

    Dozens of Star Destroyers appear from hyperspace.

    POE: Okay, the party's over. I'll see you at the rendezvous on Galaan.

    LANDO: Take us home, Chewie.

    The Falcon, the X-wings, and Republic Fleet jump away.

    INT. GALAAN - CLOUD CITY - CURATOR'S QUARTERS - MORNING

    Darkness.

    Suddenly, blue and red LEDs flicker.

    A flash revealing an old man's sleeping face. The light fades in to reveal the cyborg LOBOT.

    His eyes blink open from a long slumber.

    EXT. CLOUD CITY - LANDING BAY - MORNING

    A white planetary ring looms at an angle beyond gold and purple clouds. X-wings fly by alongside the
    Falcon.

    The Falcon touches down on Platform 327.

    Lobot and MAZ KANATA wait as Lando caries Leia in his arms, followed by Finn and Chewie. Maz
    breathes a heavy sigh.

    MAZ KANATA: I'm sorry, Lando.

    EXT. LOADING DOCKS - MORNING

    Several platforms extend to the two transports moored off the edge of city.

    Resistance soldiers direct the hundreds of refugees, awed by the dazzling beauty of the gas giant's
    sunrise.

    Mixed in with the crowd, Artoo and Threepio stroll toward the city gates.

    THREEPIO: Who do you suppose our new master will be?

    Artoo sounds out a melancholy series of tones.

    THREEPIO: Chewbacca?! Oh, no.

    INT. CLOUD CITY - GRAND PLAZA - MORNING

    Lando lays Leia down inside a glass case. He lovingly arranges a loose strand of her hair.

    Finn watches from a distance as Lando seals the case on a riser in the center of the white, circular
    plaza.

    Poe and Myri join Finn. BB-8, wounded but operational, catches up to them and rolls around at their
    feet.

    The morning rays break over the edge of the glass atrium held up by white spindly columns.

    Through the glass, they see a battlecruiser float by accompanied by starfighters.

    EXT. CLOUD CITY - MORNING

    The battle-scared New Republic Fleet descends upon the great city in a radial pattern as a variety of
    starfighters whoosh by.

    Hope survives.
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  5. Hopefulwriter Jedi Knight

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    Interesting format. A lot of work went into this presentation.

    Lynda V.
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  6. Cowgirl Jedi 1701 Jedi Knight

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    You are a very creative person, but I 've a hunch Disney/Lucasfilm has something a little different in mind. :D
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  7. RogueFun Jedi Youngling

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  8. gr_raven Jedi Youngling

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    Mav Edit: Removed
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  9. RogueFun Jedi Youngling

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    What about it?
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  10. Jester J Binks Jedi Knight

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    So far I just glanced over it and read the parts that interest me the most (the Kylo / Luke / Rey parts). This is in fan fiction, so I'm assuming it is just that. If @RogueFun wrote this then good work. The dialogue was interesting, but also the way it tied in with the first movie was well thought out.

    Barely read the Poe, Finn, Resistance fighter stuff. I'll try to read the whole thing eventually. I have to fight my urge to read quickly and slow it down so my mind can savor the mental images.
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  11. Kyla Ren Jedi Padawan

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    A blurry copy of that script with water stains on it was uploaded to scribd.com long before you posted it here. It had been there since at least the middle of December and was taken down just a few days ago. Some people are convinced that it was really the leaked script for The Last Jedi, since it had the correct title way before it was officially announced. And now that it's been removed from scribd, some people are convinced more than ever that it's real and think that Disney made them take it down.
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  12. RogueFun Jedi Youngling

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    Did you read the following posts?
  13. Kyla Ren Jedi Padawan

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    Mar 12, 2016
    I browsed through some of them. But the people who seem to be convinced that it's real are mostly on another site, not this one.
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  14. RogueFun Jedi Youngling

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    It's posted as fan fiction, because it's fan fiction. The PDF is also posted as fan fiction. I linked to it earlier in this thread.
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  15. Kyla Ren Jedi Padawan

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    Oh, yes, I know. I haven't read the whole thing from start to finish but I browsed through it and it's very entertaining. But people are saying that they found the link on scribd.com back in December and now that they've discovered it was posted on fanfiction sites, they're still debating whether it's real or not because the blurry copy on scribd was posted before the date that is posted on the fanfiction sites. Did you post it on scribd first?
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  16. RogueFun Jedi Youngling

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    That link doen't work. I've never posted it to Scribd. I've only ever posted it to fan fic sites like this one. Sounds like a prank. Why would I try to pass off fan fiction as the real thing AND post as fan fiction? That would completely undermine the effort, no? Perhaps someone posted my PDF from my DeviantArt site. Did you see it? We're they calling themselves RogueFun? I only post under that handle, except for Reddit. There I'm RouguePun.
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  17. Kyla Ren Jedi Padawan

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    The link doesn't work anymore because the script was taken down. Some people who think it's real think that Disney made them take it down. But in any case, I guess whoever put it on scribd.com could have gotten it from your DeviantArt site, although I just checked and according to DeviantArt, the upload date for your script is December 30, 2016. The document on scribd was posted at least as far back as the middle of December 2016. Maybe before that, but I don't know. Did you post it anywhere else online before the middle of December?

    I did see the script, but I don't remember seeing your handle anywhere on scribd. The script seems to be the same as the one on your DeviantArt site, although like I said, it was a very blurry copy. It looked like it had at one point been printed or copied onto 3 hole punch paper and then rescanned or photocopied. There were also what looked like water stains on a few pages, as though a glass or a can had been put on the paper. But anyway, if you didn't post it to scribd, it seems that someone went to a lot of trouble to make it look like a messed up PDF copy.
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  18. mavjade It's so FLUFFY! Fanfic Manager

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    Okay guys 2 points:

    1) The storyboards are not the place for conversation. They are for the posting of fanfic and comments about those stories. A quick question/answer about the fanfic itself is fine, but this is not.

    2) If you suspect someone has plagiarized something -or whatever accusation that is going on here- you need to PM a mod or report it, not take it into your own hands.

    We take plagiarism very seriously, but find no proof that this is anything other than a fanfic written by this author.
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  19. Jester J Binks Jedi Knight

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    @RogueFun can you share what went into creating this script? How much prep? How much outlining? How much checking to make sure it lines up with the previous films and did you ever have an idea that you felt was more creative, but withheld and changed it so it didn't conflict with the previous films? At what point did you turn general arcs into actual dialogue?

    Right now I'm viewing it from the angle of fanfic, which probably has me in a more lenient frame of mind. So I found it entertaining and well prepped. I'd probably read it in a different frame of mind if I knew it was going to be the actual movie, and therefore more critical
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  20. RogueFun Jedi Youngling

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    I'll do my best to answer your questions. I hope this satisfies your doubts.

    What went into creating this script?
    After watching The Force Awakens, we suddenly had a list of new characters that no one knew anything about. I left the theater with lots of questions and began to speculate about who they were and what motivated them.

    How much prep?
    I didn't do much research before I started writing. Having only every watched the movies, I delved into The Clone Wars cartoon and read as many books as I could, about 30+, during the writing and made modifications as I went along.

    How much outlining?
    I made four throughlines, one for Rey, Finn, Poe, and Kylo, and connected them with a common theme. Then I developed subplots weaving in the original characters to create a bridge between them and help phase out the older character while handing off the proverbial baton to the new ones.

    How much checking to make sure it lines up with the previous films?
    I knew the original trilogy well enough. For additional film references, I turned to Lawrence Kasdan's TFA script.

    Did you ever have an idea that you felt was more creative, but withheld and changed it so it didn't conflict with the previous films?
    No, once I had it outlined, it gave me a straight forward path to the end and prevented me from too much deviation. I did shorten quite a few scenes due to the pacing.

    At what point did you turn general arcs into actual dialogue?
    I wrote out each scene onto colored notecards. Once I had the story done, I imported them into my screenwriting software and went down the list. If I didn't feel ready to tackle a specific scene, I'd skip it and go onto the next.
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  21. Jester J Binks Jedi Knight

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    Thanks. FYI, I wasn't asking because I doubted you wrote it. I was just interested in the process. I'm not a writer. But I did notice that your story didn't suffer from "pointless adventure", but instead seemed to have a series of events that worked off each other leading to a definite end. So I was interested in what it took to achieve that. The mixture of pure creativity coupled with organization and research.

    Is this something you do as a career, in hopes of making a career or just for pure fun?
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  22. mavjade It's so FLUFFY! Fanfic Manager

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    Again, this isn't really the place for conversation. It's for posting and commenting/feedback directly about the fanfic that is posted. (See the Fanfic FAQ excerpt below)
    For general discussion on the writing process, etc., we have Fanfic Writer's Resource. For more personal questions, take it to PM, please. Thanks.

  23. Doctor13 Jedi Youngling

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    Link Removed.
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  24. Briannakin Grand Moff Darth Fanfic & Costuming/Props Manager

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    As Mav has said, we really have no proof that this user did not write this fanfiction. If you suspect plagiarism, you need to PM a fanfic mod.
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  25. MartyAvidianus Jedi Padawan

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    I read the first 2 dozens or so lines.
    I confess reading scripts/plays take more effort for me.
    They are good in the sense that all the words are succint and to the point.

    However, I pray to the Force that I have not been spoiled.
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