Star Wars Haiku

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  1. deltron_zero Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Feb 1, 2002
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    Having a star wars haiku moment?

    here's a place where you can go... :)

    For those who don't know Haiku is an ancient tradition in poetry, that usually features a "5-7-5" structure... meaning the first line has 5 syllables, the second 7, and third 5.

    here are a couple of simple ones to start it off...

    Luke, Leia and Ben
    A galaxy far away
    The force was with them


    or

    Help me Obi-Wan
    Please bring this droid to my dad
    You're my only hope
  2. deltron_zero Force Ghost

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    Feb 1, 2002
    star 6
    okay, here's another :)

    Be mindful jedi
    Hard to see the dark side is
    But it starts with fear
  3. deltron_zero Force Ghost

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    Feb 1, 2002
    star 6
    On the rebel base
    Chewbacca laughed at Solo
    "Laugh it up fuzzball"
  4. deltron_zero Force Ghost

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    Feb 1, 2002
    star 6
    okay one more, than it's up to you guys...

    Yoda could raise ships
    Skywalker did not believe
    That's why he failed
  5. Lars_Muul Chosen One

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    Oct 2, 2000
    star 6
    Vader is a crook
    Leia wants to see him dead
    Skywalker helps her
  6. deltron_zero Force Ghost

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    Feb 1, 2002
    star 6
    oooh good one :D

    okay,

    Ani was a slave
    The chosen one he may be
    Qui Gon thought it so
  7. deltron_zero Force Ghost

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    Feb 1, 2002
    star 6
    Anakin was born
    To bring balance to the force
    He became a Sith
  8. KongZilla Jedi Master

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    Mar 29, 2001
    star 4
    Hey :) it's SW haiku! :D

    Vader wears a mask
    For him it is hard to breathe
    Do not unplug him

    Go HERE to read more SW haiku. :)
  9. Lars_Muul Chosen One

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    Oct 2, 2000
    star 6
    Thanks, your´s are not bad either :D

    Luke said "Biggs is right"
    He would never get away
    But it wasn´t so


    :confused:

    Anakin was brave
    He blew up the control ship
    Thus Naboo was saved
  10. deltron_zero Force Ghost

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    Feb 1, 2002
    star 6
    those are great!


    Obi Wan had known
    that Vader was Luke's father
    a secret he kept

  11. Kiame_Jinn Jedi Knight

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    May 21, 2001
    star 2
    Once upon a time
    A galaxy far away
    The force was the key
  12. Kiame_Jinn Jedi Knight

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    May 21, 2001
    star 2
    Yoda said to Luke
    No! Try not Do or do not
    Luke listened and did
  13. deltron_zero Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Feb 1, 2002
    star 6
    There was a jedi
    He was known as Yarael Poof
    Sadly he is dead


    :(
  14. Kiame_Jinn Jedi Knight

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    May 21, 2001
    star 2
    The man in the mask
    was saved as he lay dying
    his ghost was content
  15. Kiame_Jinn Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    May 21, 2001
    star 2
    The Jedi Council
    is much more interesting
    than my lesson plan
  16. deltron_zero Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Feb 1, 2002
    star 6
    Yoda said to Luke
    Luminous beings are we
    Not this crude matter
  17. MynDonos Jedi Knight

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    Jan 30, 2002
    star 3
    the jedi master
    fighting evil where he goes
    he kicks the sith's butt
  18. deltron_zero Force Ghost

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    Feb 1, 2002
    star 6
    Darth Vader is mean
    More machine than human now
    Twisted and evil
  19. deltron_zero Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Feb 1, 2002
    star 6
    She said "I love you"
    He responded with "I know"
    but his eyes said more
  20. PloKloon1138 Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Apr 5, 2001
    star 4
    Padme is real hot
    A former queen of Naboo
    With a great body

    [face_love]
  21. Tobie_Wan Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Mar 1, 2002
    star 4
    She's beautiful
    It sounds like she's in trouble
    We?ve got to help her...

  22. Tobie_Wan Jedi Master

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    Mar 1, 2002
    star 4
    Do not trust your eyes
    You will know, when you are calm,
    Do not be afraid

  23. deltron_zero Force Ghost

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    Feb 1, 2002
    star 6
    We know all the lines
    Our religion is the Force
    We are Star Wars fans
  24. Tobie_Wan Jedi Master

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    Mar 1, 2002
    star 4
    Civil war begins,
    Rebels versus the Empire
    A long time ago?

  25. Tobie_Wan Jedi Master

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    Mar 1, 2002
    star 4
    He will bring balance,
    Clouded this boys future is,
    The circle, complete?

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