Before - Legends Star Wars Pre Saga Episode 1 "Mystery of the Sith" Choose your own Adventure

Has everyone seen the front of this site they have put up a link for scooby dooku's cyoa thread.

 

Any day is good for me Cody. Wednesday or Friday I guess. However you want to do it and whatever is best for imright87 and Teg.

 

Okay I can write on Mondays and Fridays, this Wednsday was a fluke that I even got online. Imright87 is out of town for a while he went to I think Chicago. any way since every one voted for Palpatine I guess that that is our next scene. voting is now locked and we will have the next segment up later today.

 

Sorry it is so late guys here is the next segement.

[Cut]

Ext. Gardulla?s Palace

The binary suns begin to set on the desert hills where Gardulla the Hutt?s palace sits.

[Cut]

Int. Gardulla?s main audience chamber

The camera pans across the room showing many different races and cultures socializing together. It then shows a waitress droid strolling around the room with a tray serving drinks and death sticks. The camera pans to the stairs entering the room where a Twilek man escorts Palpatine and Aurra Singh to meet with Gardulla. Except Palpatine is now wearing a black robe, instead of his dignitary robes, and going by the alias Darth Sidious

Twilek: (in subtitles) You will have to wait in line to speak with Gardulla

Darth Sidious: I am not a person with a lot of patients, (waves his hand) Do what you can to make sure I am seen quickly.

Twilek: You will be the next person in line.

Darth Sidious: Thank you very much I appreciate your help.

The Twilek man walks Palpatine to the front of the line. Gardulla is sitting and talking to a very scruffy looking human male named Ilger who came with his slave to bet on races.

Gardulla: (in subtitles) you wager your businesses on Malastare, and I will wager 900,000 credits.

Ilger: Yes, but you better be careful though Gasagano is doing very well this year.

Gardulla: (in subtitles) I have been told this newcomer Subulba is very good, just had your titles over to the vendor he will make sure that I get it after the race.

Ilger: hahaha We?ll see (the man turns to walk to the vendor) Shmi come on.

Shmi: yes Ilger.

The man and his slave are walking away and Shmi bumps into Palpatine.

Darth Sidious: Be careful I wouldn?t want you to get hurt

Shmi: (looks down to the ground almost bowing to him) I am very sorry sir

Ilger: Shmi you clumsy woman,(to Palpatine) forgive my stupid slave girl

Darth Sidious: it is okay I just wouldn?t want here to hurt the little one

Shmi: I?m not sure what you mean sir

Darth Sidious: you are with child

Ilger looks at Shmi, clearly angry at her, then he hits her with the back side of his hand causing her small frame to collapse to the floor.

Ilger: I?ll teach you to go behind my back to make money

Shmi: I promise I haven?t done?

Ilger: your gonna be bantha poodoo

Ilger rises up his leg as if to stomp the fragile woman, she covers her head with her arms hoping to ease the pain. As his leg begins to crush the woman Darth Sidious pulls a saber from his robe. The red blade appears and moves toward the man with such speed that before his foot reaches her his leg is severed. The man lies in the floor screaming in agony, and Sidious puts the Saber away. A medical droid comes over and gives him shots to ease the pain and begins to seal the wound.


Darth Sidious: you will not hurt that woman or her child, do you understand me

Ilger: yes sir, I?I?I will give her to you if you would like

Darth Sidious: no you will care for her. I will watch you from a distance and if you harm her you will die. Take care of her and I won?t do anything to you.

Ilger: y? y? y? yes sir (to Shmi) Go to the sail barge.

Gardulla: (in subtitles) Why have you disturbed my party jedi?

Darth Sidious: I am not a jedi, I have come to you to gain support for Representative Palpatine of Naboo he intends to run for Senate. We have already gained support from the black sun. You will use all your resources to help him.

Gardulla: (Hutt laugh) Ho ho ho ho your sword doesn?t scare me boy, tell me what?s in it for me.

Darth Sidious: for a start we will make sure the republic stays out of the Outer Rim, and your illegal smuggling will be ignored.

Gardulla: I will accept your terms on one condition. My guests need more entertaining. I have recently captured a jedi and his learner fight them and I will support this politician.

Darth Sidious: very well

Sidious begins walking toward Gardulla?s rancor pit to battle the Jedi but stops to look down upon Ilger as a rodian helps him up. Sidious

 

although itd make a really long scene stay with sidious

 

#1.

 

I pick NO.3.

That was a great section with sidious, i liked it a lot.

 

Stay with Sidious, 3. (Rage it doesn't matter if it's long, as long as it's good!)

 

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Good segment. Who writes next?

 

I also vote #3


Great scene. I love Palps attitude in this scene, and the Shmi idea was pure genius.

 

I also vote #3


Great scene. I love Palps attitude in this scene, and the Shmi idea was pure genius.

 

Luke is up next

 

#3 for me.

Yep. It's official...






TF.N doesn't recognize CYOA's as important, so they haven't given us a thread here. Anyway, that's probably for the better, better for the CYOA's I mean, not them, if you catch my drift...

 

#1

 

Oh well, the tighter they make their grip the more fans will slip through there fingers.

also for the official count put in
1 for #2 and 2 more for #3 from our other source.


We the fans have started the rebellion against the evil galactic Empire.

 

Why can they not see that we are a big fan base for the cyoa, why do they not give us what we want.

 

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Anyone coming to the hideout?

 

I vote #1. But I hope we can get back to Palpatine and more saber action later in the story.

 

New scene at Episode 1.5. go and see the chosen one tap into the dark side. Or did he? Decide for yourself!

 

It looks like NO.3. has won at this point in time.

 

i vote #3

 

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We moved

 

So dose thatmean it will not get updated here then.

 

If that site will let me post replies at some point I'll be there. I resistered and am logged in, but then it'll tell me I've got to log in, so I try to log in, and it tells me all my information's wrong (though I've checked; it's right), then I try to see if I can get my password sent to me again, and it tells me that me e-mail address is not valid. I'm pretty frustrated with it.

 

If you are not going to update the story here then you should lock it.