Before Star Wars (Pre Saga) Episode I Mystery of the Sith "Choose Your Own Adventure" Complete

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by CodyMonKenobi, Oct 8, 2003.

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  1. PadawanKitara Force Ghost

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    *waives hand* you have not seen a lurker named Kitara on this thread*

    but incase you do remember me- #2
  2. CodyMonKenobi Force Ghost

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    *Blank stare* I haven't seen any lurkers on this thread :p


    I am glad you guys enjoyed that I was afraid that it wouldn't be very good because I threw it together just so I could post something.
  3. DarthNeil Jedi Master

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    I thought it was great.

    I have already voted in the other place.
  4. PadawanofQui-Gon Jedi Master

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    Chants: we want more! we want more! we want more!
  5. deathmaster Jedi Padawan

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    #2.

    InquisitorsHand was evil today, that's why I'm here.
  6. CodyMonKenobi Force Ghost

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    Hey guys I will try to write somemore tommarrow, but I was in a car accedent and it really depends on how I am feeling. I am okay I'm not going to die, but I am very sore and have a sprained right ankle and left sholder.
  7. DarthNeil Jedi Master

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    I am sorry to here that you where in a car crash.

    get well and take as long as you want i am going no where.
  8. CrystalKenobi Jedi Master

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    Oh my goodness. I hope you are okay. Take your time and get well.
  9. PadawanKitara Force Ghost

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  10. DarthNeil Jedi Master

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    Was it a bad car accedent.
  11. CodyMonKenobi Force Ghost

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    My brand new 2004 dodge stratus (one month old) was totaled, I have a sprained sholder and ankle. Back on subject I will write the next section very soon.
  12. DarthNeil Jedi Master

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  13. tatooinewizard Jedi Master

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    Well, I hope you feel better soon, Cody, and sorry about your car.
  14. imright87 Jedi Knight

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    cody should post his address so we can all send him get well cards
  15. CodyMonKenobi Force Ghost

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    [Cut to]

    INT. Malice?s Hideout Hanger

    A long black ship lands in the hanger where Darth Malice and young Maul stand waiting. The ship lands and Einar Zla?Tan walks out with nine commandos wearing black armor with a sun insignia on it, each commando carries with him a plasma rifle wear bandoliers with five thermal detonators. Each soldier stops and salutes Darth Malice, and Maul glares at them and their insignia suspiciously.

    Einar: This is our flagship, we have the others on standby, and they await our departure.

    Malice: Good, we will have to be ready as soon as we leave hyperspace; I sense that my apprentice will be suspecting us.

    Einar: If our ships make it to the surface, we will have very little resistance.

    Malice: Shall we

    The men all climb aboard the ship, Einar and Darth Malice go to the cockpit and young Maul is sent to the back with the commandos.

    INT. Cargo hold of the ship

    Maul: (to commando Lt) This is a nice ship.

    Lt.: Yes the finest ship in all the black sun she was designed for us to capture a sith lord if we ever needed to, we have named her the Sith Interceptor.

    Maul: Why would the black sun be concerned with the sith or even know of their existence?

    Lt.: Well because our leader Ares Garyn has instructed us to.

    Maul: I would very much like to meet this man

    Lt.: (with a puzzled look on his face) But you have, he is on the ship.

    Maul: Where?

    Lt.: I believe you call him Lord Malice.

    Maul: He is the leader of the black sun? He is the murd?but?how can this be? (hatred begins to swell in his face)

    Lt.: Yes he and his wife Alexi, They are two of the most powerful people in all the galaxy.

    Maul stands and walks back to a dark corner where he sits alone tears roll down his black and red face, and he begins to whisper in the dark.

    Maul: (in a quiet voice) He killed you, the Jedi sent you to him to be murdered. I am sorry father I swear upon the force that I will have revenge upon those who did this to you. I will learn the Sith arts and I will destroy both the sith and the jedi?they took everything from me?tortured me and you?they made me into a killer?I hate them?I hate them all.

    EXT. Space

    The Sith Interceptor is seen flying out of Couracsant and is meet by four other ships (corrillian made). The Ships all group together and then make the Jump to light speed.

    [Cut to]

    INT. Csillia Palace

    Palpatine walks into the throne room escorted by Aurra, Jaron, and little Donda. The walls are made of marble and it is very luxurious (similar to the Tas Majal) he is met by three Chiss delegates who stand by a throne that is turned to where you can?t see who is sitting in it.

    Chiss Governor: Thank you for warning us Lord Palpatine, we can not let Prince Ares back, with his father dead he will try to reclaim the throne.

    Palpatine: It is my pleasure, however I wonder who will rule the kingdom if you have no King?

    The throne turns around and a Chiss Naval officer of very high rank sits on it.

    Thrawn: We will establish military rule.

    Governor: Oh Ambassador Palpatine we would like you to meet Grand Admiral Thrawn. He is our highest-ranking military officer.

    Palpatine: A pleasure. I must warn you however, this will not be easy Ares will bring more soldiers with him and there will be a lot.

    Thrawn: The royal Navy can handle any thing that is comes at them. There is none that can match our power in the galaxy.

    Palpatine: I hope so. This is the markings of his ship (hands them paper) let it land I will take care of your prince myself.

    Thrawn: Very well, we will be sure that we do. Now if we are finished then I must return to the Behemoth.

    Palpatine: Thank you for your time, I will return with my staff to our quarters.

    Thrawn and the Chiss delegates leave and Palpatine and his crew walk down a corridor to their rooms.

    Palpatine: Aurra, I want you to contact Gardulla the Hutt. (she nods) tell her a favor is needed and that we need soldiers to fight off the Black Sun.

    Aurra: Yes M?Lord.

    Aurra walks away and Palpa
  16. PadawanofQui-Gon Jedi Master

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    # 1 sounds very page turning....
  17. Keeper_of_Swords Force Ghost

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  18. imright87 Jedi Knight

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    i already voted on the other site but ill vote here too #2 please
  19. DarthNeil Jedi Master

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    I have already voted.

    That was a great section i can not wait for the battle.
  20. CrystalKenobi Jedi Master

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  21. CodyMonKenobi Force Ghost

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    ***Official Talley***

    1) 3 votes

    2) 3 votes

    When I get a tie breaker I will start writing.

    there are now eight sections (give or take a couple) left of Mystery of te Sith.


  22. Sith9211 Jedi Knight

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    I VOTE #2!!!!!!!!
    This is great! Keep it up!!!
    ~sith
  23. tatooinewizard Jedi Master

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    My vote's not needed by I want #2 as well.
  24. DarthNeil Jedi Master

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    I can not wait for the next section.

    Keep up the good work CodyMonKenobi.
  25. CodyMonKenobi Force Ghost

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    Okay voting is locked.


    ***Official Talley***

    1) 3 votes

    2) 5 votes



    I will try to finish it tonight but probablywon't get to post it till tomarrow, I have to go to work in a bit.
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