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Star wars Prequels Envisioned by Big Boss_92

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction and Writing Resource' started by Big Boss_92, Dec 1, 2013.

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    Big Boss_92 Jedi Knight

    Dec 1, 2013
    Hi, I'm new to the forum and I've been thinking about a story for the prequels. I used the titles I've seen on this page: and I have relied on those movies to create the prequels, with some changes.
    In my version the Clone Wars have begun three years before Episode I, The Mandalorians discovered the secret of cloning led by General Kruul and attacked the Republic. In response, the Senate create The Grand Army Of The Republic (GAR), an army of volunteers led by the Jedi Knights.
    Here I leave the summary plan of the prequels then try to go to script.

    Obi-Wan Kenobi (33 y.o) investigates the planet Kamino in search of the main cloning facility of the Mandalorians, but is caught and knocked on the planet Tatooine.

    On Tatooine meets a family of farmers, Anakin Skywalker (19 y.o), his sister Beru and her boyfriend Owen Lars. Obi-Wan discovers Anakin 's parents were killed during an attack by Mandalorians at the beginning of the Clone Wars. Obi-Wan tells them to look for a pilot, Anakin is a pilot on a cargo ship and offers to take back Obi-Wan to Alderaan or Coruscant. Owen opposes, he tells her that he is a great pilot, and must remain on Tatooine where it is safe, and should not get involved, Anakin tells Owen says it's a dead end for him to be here, and wants to fight to avenge the death of his parents, Owen comes to accept his decision and gives him a hug and tells him to take care of yourself. Anakin thanked Owen for taking care of him and wishes him the best in his moisture farm.

    During the output of Tatooine are attacked by the Mandalorians who had followed Obi-Wan, Anakin and Obi-Wan work together and shows Anakin's skills as a pilot, they escape and reach Alderaan or Coruscant. Obi-Wan meets with Bail Organa, and tell him discovered on Kamino. While Anakin meets Senator of Alderaan, Arcady (19 y.o), a member of the party of Organa, who at first displays a cold attitude to Anakin's rather brash personality. But she admits that under Anakin's rash personality there is a good man, and their friendship soon turns into love. Senator Palpatine authorizes an attack on Kamino. Obi-Wan with Anakin who have enlisted as pilot for the Army Of The Republic, and travel to Kamino.

    The goal is to destroy the main cloning facility, Anakin fought in the air while Obi-Wan disconnect the defenses of the planet. Obi-Wan disconnect the defenses, but General Kruul appears, who heads the clone army, which happens to be trained in the Sith arts, combat is equal but Obi-Wan is losing, During combat, Anakin destroys plant cloning and Kruul before the arrival of the troops of the GAR is forced to flee. After the destruction Anakin and Obi-Wan back to Coruscant where they are greeted by the new Supreme Chancellor Palpatine and the Jedi Council. Seeing that the Force is very strong in Anakin, Obi-Wan decides to take him as his apprentice, despite warnings from Yoda, who feels Skywalker is full of anger and fear.

    Meanwhile, in the Jedi Temple, the Council continue to review disclosure of Obi Wan on the resurgence of the Sith and what role they are playing in the strange events that have been deployed recently.

    The film ends with a celebration similar to the Episode IV, Obi-Wan and Anakin receive medals from Chancellor Palpatine.


    Has been five years since the destruction of the plant on Kamino, The end of the Clone Wars is near. Obi-Wan and Anakin have fought together during this time and so close that most people just assume that they are brothers. Obi-Wan has trained Anakin during this time, Anakin 's progress is very fast and has even built a lightsaber.

    During this time Anakin has married with Arcady, has also developed a relationship with Palpatine whom he considers as a father. The General Kruul sends all its forces to attack Alderaan, the producer of weapons of The Grand Army Of The Republic .

    Supreme Chancellor Palpatine sends Obi-Wan and Anakin to lead the defense of the planet. The battle is huge and devastating, the Mandalorians used suicide tactics and manage to land on the planet. Anakin and Obi-Wan face the General Kruul. This fight is different from the one they had on Kamino, Anakin and Obi-Wan fights coordinated against Kruul, but is not enough. Obi-Wan almost dies and becomes unconscious, Anakin fight alone with Kruul and unleashes his hatred and anger at being responsible for the death of his parents, Kruul is defeated and killed by Anakin, completing his revenge.

    In the end, the Mandalorians were defeated, finally ending the Clone Wars. But Alderaan has paid a heavy price. Their cities destroyed, its population decimated, Alderaan 's leaders (including Bail Organa) states that no longer produce more weapons, Alderaan will become a peaceful planet, and will have no weapon at all. Back on Coruscant, Anakin and Obi-Wan are greeted as heroes of the Clone Wars .

    After the celebration Ob-Wan visits the house of Anakin and Arcady but Anakin is gone. Arcady reveals to Ob-Wan that she is pregnant.

    Anakin goes to see Palpatine, to tell what happened to Kruul, amazed at the power that has been shown to use those emotions. Far from scare, Palpatine encouraged to follow that path to power. Palpatine reveals that he is the mastermind behind the Clone Wars, the Sith Master cloning technology shared with the Mandalorians. He tells Anakin to the Sith, an ancient race who had learned to harness the power of the dark side of the Force, and how the Republic, led by the "propaganda" Jedi, led eradication. And now that his apprentice Kruul been killed by Anakin, Palpatine should take a new apprentice and he offers to be Anakin. He can teach you things that Obi-Wan Anakin never dared to imagine, he can teach him to control that power and together we can rule the galaxy. Anakin accepts the offer and is renamed as Darth Vader.

    It's been a few months since the end of the Clone Wars, but the Republic is still in danger. The Jedi Knights are being hunted by Anakin under the name of Darth Vader, Obi-Wan discovers the truth and goes to Mustafar to meet his friend.

    When Obi-Wan arrives, Anakin has killed a group of Jedi. Obi-Wan tries to get Anakin back to the light but he refuses, Anakin tells Obi-Wan that the Jedi are weak. Jedi seek to be poor and powerless. Anakin says that the dark side offers riches beyond the wildest ambitions of any man. Anakin called Obi-Wan an idealistic foll for staying with the Jedi. The two begin to argue and the DUEL begins.
    Sensing danger to his apprentice, Palpatine goes to Mustafar, but before gives a mission to Tarkin, the retention of Arcady Skywalker.

    Anakin is more powerful than Obi-Wan , but his arrogance is his downfall, Obi-Wan cuts off Anakin's right arm and legs, telling the pain he causes his treason , Anakin then burned by the vapors of the lava, Obi-Wan grabs Anakin's lightsaber and leaves. Palpatine arrives to Mustafar and takes his wounded apprentice back to Coruscant.

    Obi-Wan meets with Bail Organa and Yoda on Polis Massa to communicate the "death" of Anakin, but Yoda reveals that Anakin is not dead, but grave danger looms over his wife. His mission now is to rescue her, Bail Organa and his henchman Captain Antilles offer their support for rescue. After a montage of scenes Anakin is introduced into the black armor that will lead to not die, Anakin Skywalker no longer exists is Darth Vader now.

    After the transformation, Palpatine entrusted Darth Vader to attack the Jedi Temple, following the departure of Vader, Palpatine ordered to make preparations for the execution of Arcady. Bail Organa, Antilles along with Obi-Wan come to Coruscant to rescue Arcady, they discover she's been kidnapped and taken to prison. When they reach the prison block rescue Arcady with the help of R2-D2 Antilles astromech droid, and escape.

    Darth Vader returns to report the success of the attack on the Jedi Temple , Palpatine assigned the mission to stop Kenobi. On the spaceport , Obi-Wan tells Arcady that Anakin fell to the dark side and he is the one who was killing the Jedi Knights, she tells Obi-Wan that for a while Anakin behaved strangely, at the time they reach the ears that the Jedi Temple has been destroyed by Darth Vader.

    Taking off from Coruscant the Republic fleet is heading towards them. Vader orders the capture of that ship, despite the struggle, the Tantive IV reaches hyperspace and lost, Darth Vader is silent on the bridge of the ship, the sensors activate the required area for any sign of the ship but negative results are deeply disappointed, ordered the withdrawal of the ships. At Dagobah Arcady gives birth to twins. Together decide to separate the twins, with the hope that they would join a day like brother and sister. Kenobi will take Luke to live with Anakin's sister, Beru on Tatooine, Arcady will take Leia to live as the daughter of the Bail Organa on Alderaan. In this way the children would have a better chance of survival of one (or the other) if caught by Vader. After many shed tears, Yoda is left behind on Dagobah.

    In the Senate Palpatine shows the recording of Arcady's escape, and marks the Jedi Knights as a traitors and and will be hunted down and destroyed. Demonstrating how weak is the Republic, is replaced as the Galactic Empire, with Palpatine appointed himself as the first and only Emperor.

    On Alderaan we see Arcady with C3PO singing a lullaby to Leia. On Tatooine, Obi-Wan delivers Luke to Owen and Beru, and Anakin's lightsaber. Owen reluctantly agrees that they will care for the baby, but firmly refuses the lightsaber that Luke does not want to follow the same path as his father.

    He accuses him of filling his head full of nonsense and religious idealists, and Anakin effectively lead to their doom. Obi-Wan understood the bitterness of Owen and agrees to watch from a distance, but I remember that there will come a time when the child should make their own decisions.

    What do you think about the prequels?
    What did you like?
    What did you change?

    Bri Edit: I am locking this thread because we don't allow discussions about specific stories here, nor to we allow summaries to be posted here or in the actual fanfiction thread. If you would like to know what is allowed in either forum, please read the FAQ or send either Briannakin or Mavjade a message.
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