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Star Wars Radiosity Test - C&C welcome

Discussion in 'Archive: Scifi 3D Forum' started by BCEmcke, Oct 27, 2005.

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  1. BCEmcke

    BCEmcke Jedi Youngling

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    [image=http://www.bcemcke.com/jedisith1000.jpg]

    Criticism and Comments welcome!
    Hope you enjoy.
    Cheers
    BCEmcke :)
     
  2. Macro_Roshuma

    Macro_Roshuma Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Aug 27, 2004
    That floor texture looks waaay too grainy...

    not to mention the saber blade. :p
     
  3. fireresq7

    fireresq7 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oct 24, 2002
    I'm not picky...I like it!
     
  4. superhara

    superhara Jedi Youngling

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    Jun 17, 2005
    It's cool. Crisp as heck but cool. Some noise, dirt, and blur would tighten it up. Especially around those shadows.
     
  5. Darksteps

    Darksteps Jedi Youngling star 3

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    actually, it's not too grainy to me, but, here's the thing... the columns on the inside near the wall have mounds of sand at their bases, yet there isn't a grain of it on the walkway between the columns... that just strikes me as odd... also, all of the mounds of sand are uniform to each other... other than that, I'd say it's a nice image...
    ;)
    Darksteps...
     
  6. GuanoLad

    GuanoLad Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Not enough sand, textures are too repetitive, and the foreground bricks bumpmap is too strong. My advice is to mix a few more dirt textures on everything at random scales, and reduce the strength of the bumpmapping.

    But in terms of atmosphere and composition and even the basic idea for the image, it's very nice.
     
  7. DarthRicmu

    DarthRicmu Jedi Knight star 3

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    Jul 3, 2005
    Very nice indeed :)

    I really love it...... :D
     
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