Beyond - Legends STAR WARS The Galactic War I-The Dark Age

I have been working on a new story. It takes place roughly 5,000 years after the formation of the New Republic. I have the Intro here. Please post your comments and suggestions. The story is around 70 pages long.


Intro-First half of Chapter 1

"We've waited a long time for this." The leaders of the corrupt Republic are destroying the galaxy. As the cloning business began to grow, it has become a household thing for the rice. It all started after a series of wars that lead to the divided state of the galaxy.

The CorSec rebellion happened after a high ranking leader was accused of building a personal army. He, being a former general of CorSec during the earlier war, he gave orders to his son to avenge him. His son called upon all of the people in CorSec to take up arms against the "Evil" Republic. So it began.

Slowly CorSec captured the entire system. Soon they controlled multiple trade routs. They soon extended into the Core. In their conquest, they captured Byss. In Mt. Tantus they found the old cloning tanks left by the Empire. After they rebuilt all of the tanks, they cloned a large army and headed deeper into the Core. They were ready to take the galaxy.

Unfortunately, the large amount of resources that went into the cloning project, made it so they had bad people to fly their vast ship armada. So the Republic caught wind of the secret location and sent a fleet. They clone project had moved off to Corriela. The Republic's fleet smashed through their lines. After Corriela was taken, the war was easy. Only a few stray admirals were around and most pleaded mercy.

Now Corriela is a barren wasteland of the battle that took place. When the researchers were looking over the field, they found a large chamber were they had cloned the army. It was said this was the biggest since the Clone Wars. Inside was a large CPU bank that had all the records of the project.

Now, two scientists are attempting to clone the strongest Force users in history. They searched far and wide in the galaxy to find DNA for the clones. After ten years of searching, they found all the DNA, and had the facility running. The Republic caught wind of the operation on Mustafar and invaded. The scientists managed to escape but they had to start from scratch.

Now on the planet Uttapu, deep in a large sinkhole, they continue their project. The Hutts were endoring the project so money wasn't a problem. They hoped that with a army, the could take over the remains of the New Empire.

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Lesmik slowly began to put the various DNA's in the numerous machines. Abkbar was surveying the power tubes. "That's it! All the DNA is in Ackbar!"

"We shouldn't do this. It would only help to worsen the galaxy's state. We sho-"

"Come on Ackbar. Don't go affectionate on me. Ethics aren't good. Besides, if we were ment to fly, we'd have wings. But we fly around all the time!"

Ackbar thought for awhile while Bevel checked the generators. As Bevel switched them on, a low hum filled the dark room. "Ackbar... you just can't hie from the fact that what we did, hve done, is a great scientific breakthrough. We can't stop now. We have to continue."

"Yes, your right." Ackbar began checking all the capsules for cracks. "I suppose. We should get under way. Dorga is impatient.

Bevel finished up and they met at the control panel. "Let's go." They board opened up were two keys had to be inserted. They placed the keys in the separate slots.

"One,' Ackbar smiled. "Two.....three!" They both turned their keys and the machine started. The room was filled with blue lightning crackling from all the capsules. The place was so charged with electricity, Bevel's hair was standing up. Soon fire caught.

"Bevel! Shut it off! This is madness!" Ackbar was worried but Bevel laughed.

"A few more seconds should do it..." Suddenly, the room went pitch black. Power came on and they saw all the capsules were open. They had done

 

Whoa! Nice intro! I'll be watching 4 more!

 

Chapter 1-2 will be posted by the end of the week.