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    icxggrethixzchain Jedi Youngling star 1

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    The Empires have invoked a government more commonplace to the
    people,after the latest incedent,but there is a new threat intent on
    thwarting the peace,an order similar to the Jedi,who may takeover and
    build again an oppresive and dark Empire....

    At the world of Te Kevl?ith Teihlsa spars in practice against Camineous
    Maleyf a jedi master in a building at night.She makes a 360 swash and he
    turns a bit and blocks,she repeats and blocks again are made a couple more
    times then she backflips and they turn off sabers,and lightly bow to
    eachother.

    ?these places are just the convisive and recurdled discipline
    honours,as you go to the world beyond all is a focus so true of might,a
    sensation and doubt shall never truelly lay on memory of practice but far
    greater natures,of all that surrounds and the force flaying the
    desperation of the honorous,and showing them the tomorrow with ever finer
    purity?C
    ?your words have quite a magic,i ponder such teachings Camineous Maleyf?T

    Beyond the city at a forest,lazer fire and 3 men in black,nearly military
    looking,running,chasing a beast.
    ?the beast is fast!?
    ?it may take us more than several wounds?
    ?to kill it!?
    A claw swishes one as they pass next to a tree.The beast is 12 ft tall
    with 4 arms a furry back and scales the rest of body,it?s claws vicious
    and it?s build is strong.The man falls to the ground as the beast makes
    away.The beast licks a bit of the blood from the wound it made,the furry
    of this hunt is uncertain to either side.
    ?damn it!-go go!?they look at fallen member then run towards the direction
    the beast went.
    They fire a few times again,then stop at an open area surrounded with
    trees.It smashes down from above,and they fire rapidly making it howl,1 of
    the 2 is bitten and falls to the ground,but another lazering and it falls
    to the ground too finally.The bitten man fires 2 times into it?s
    skull,finally killing it.
    ?are you ok??
    ?i?m hurt,this goddamn Gitterchavd is more intelligent than we
    thought,better throw me in the bacta tank?
    The 3rd arrives and pushes a remote that brings a ground flyer
    and they heave the carcass onto it.
    At the city T and C make their way to a park area.
    ?there Elgenked is,at the park square?T
    The men with the carcass pass in front of them as they cross the street.
    ?what was that??T
    ?a Gitterchavd,a wild animal,hunted for cruelty by many,feared by many?C
    ?they hunt here??T asks as they make to the bench E is at.
    ?yes,it?s a tradition that has never ceased?
    ?i see the game of practice is still with your interest Tiehlsa?E first
    speaking.
    ?yes,it?s quite a passage of makings with Camineous as my sparring
    teacher?
    ?dear Elgenked are the others to arrive soon??C
    ?yes tomorrow?




    The next day at the same place in the center park,with fauna
    ,a fountain,effectures,benches-sitting are Teihlsa,Camineous,Elgenked and
    before them robed and standing in the solitude ways of a Jedi are
    Marthengar and Gurqueel.
    ?again the Gelts move to make their order a source of power,...a darker
    nature they are of?G
    ?they have Sith foundation,and have sought to bring themselves to a
    conquering army,-over the past days they destroyed a council convoy to
    Laeghweiine,killing all-?M
    ?when shall the council move against them??C
    ?i fear they do not yet see an interest in it,the Corse****
    representatives were not the ones killed?G
    ?am i not of certainty-Jedi(to M and G)that they have freed the imprisoned
    traitors durring the blockade,perhaps for their own interests as planners
    or leaders?E
    ?they indeed did so- my own concern of their doings has reached a distance
    of trust with our governments who do nothing?G
     
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    icxggrethixzchain Jedi Youngling star 1

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    though the idea about a Laeghweiine sequel IX has been run through,it may lack the power of the the tital war of ultimate truth that the 3 Laeghweiine continuances of the original series were true in form to

    if anybody there has looked at 'Shallow treatchery and Mighty Fury'then the truth be said about what can be observant of greatetr ideals than a simple sequel IV

    ultimately if the story in an AU makes a finer twist of playing on the eternal warrior theme than having the LAE. sequels find there characters fade from glory than that is a good idea,however the re-building of an entire Empire and how it is that War and the sentient Jedi and their enemies revielle the unviverse and the powerfull ancient ways bonded as well to the theme,could be a truelly staggering effort of engeniusness
     
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    icxggrethixzchain Jedi Youngling star 1

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    this is the sequel to The Future Within the Laeghwiiene Battalion
     
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    icxggrethixzchain Jedi Youngling star 1

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    well if anybody wants to know the next one has Teihlsa set to 'Jedi' status
     
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    icxggrethixzchain Jedi Youngling star 1

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    that's power for you...too emmm... tuff
     
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