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Starlight II: Angels (Sequel to Starlight)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Marie D Padawannabe, Mar 5, 2000.

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  1. Alpha_Ferdante

    Alpha_Ferdante Jedi Youngling star 2

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    back to the front!
     
  2. Marie D Padawannabe

    Marie D Padawannabe Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Long sigh. I do apologize for allowing
    this to be banished to the depths of the
    forum. I will have a new post within the
    next few days, my life has been a bit crazy lately.

    marie
     
  3. little susie jedi

    little susie jedi Jedi Youngling star 1

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    to the top, from the last page,
    we will wait for more.
     
  4. Alpha_Ferdante

    Alpha_Ferdante Jedi Youngling star 2

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    any updates yet?

     
  5. Alpha_Ferdante

    Alpha_Ferdante Jedi Youngling star 2

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  6. Marie D Padawannabe

    Marie D Padawannabe Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Ok, you can all kick my online a$$ if
    I DO NOT POST THE NEXT PART TONIGHT.
    It's ready, but I have to be gone all day
    and it must wait until tonight.

    marie
     
  7. Alpha_Ferdante

    Alpha_Ferdante Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Hey Marie. I'm just keeping this thread near the top.

    I understand about the fun of moving in and getting settled.

    Just didn't want you to have to search for this thread when you updated it.

     
  8. Marie D Padawannabe

    Marie D Padawannabe Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Alrighty then, he we go...more story. I
    apologize for keep you all in the dark
    for so long....it's been tough on me to
    keep things organized since the move.


    .............................

    Two standard weeks passed before Anakin
    was able to sit up and speak. Out loud,
    that is. He'd been communicating with
    Obi-Wan and Amidala without words for
    quite a while now. Now, more than a month
    later, he had vastly improved.

    Much to the delight of the woman resting
    against him underneath the cloud-spotted
    Naboo sky. A lot could be said about the
    experiences they shared, about the
    challenges that they faced everyday. He
    wouldn't take back even a day.

    "I wouldn't either, love." Amidala
    whispered, bringing his arms tighter around
    her waist. Anakin was astounded at her
    raw courage and strength; A lesser person
    would have crumbled when faced with such
    vile slime as Terral. Not his Queen; She
    promptly pulled a fast one on everyone
    and killed him with one stroke.

    "You do realize that you've made me look
    bad? Me, the brave Jedi, nearly getting
    myself killed; While the one I'm rescuing
    saves all our lives." He kissed her cheek,
    taking in her sunlit smell.

    A quiet giggle escaped. "We saved each
    other, Ani. I would do it again in an
    instant." He sighed, What a woman.
    "My own personal bodyguard, what more
    could a guy ask for?"

    "Mmm, I'd be happy to do more than
    guard your body. Perhaps when
    you're fully healed-" She poked him
    gently in the thigh, where a bandage still
    remained. The last sign of Terral's
    fury.

    "Kick a guy when he's done, why don't you?"
    He pouted, feverently wishing all parts of
    his body were in perfect...working...
    condition. He still had trouble walking,
    and was banned from any real Jedi training
    exercises. He wanted nothing more than
    to take her into that big bed of hers and..

    "You have such a dirty mind, Jedi boy. I
    apprecitate it, but you are dirty."
    She twisted in his embrace, leaning up
    against his arms and kissing him fully.
    He fell back into the grass, pulling her
    along. They broke for air shortly after,
    and stared up into the eyes of a very
    amused Obi-Wan.

    "I see you two are taking advantage of
    the sun. I do not need to remind you that
    public indecency is against Theed law."
    His voice was so serious that, had they
    not been so in tune with each other, Anakin
    and Amidala would have had reason to take
    him seriously. Anakin laughed, the sound
    music to everyone's ears. "Yes, but not
    when you're dating the lovely woman who
    enforces said law."

    Obi-Wan took a seat beside them, frowning
    slightly. "I'm afraid that I am the bearer
    of some bad news."

    Both Anakin and Amidala sat up, cursing
    whatever conspired to interfere this time.
    That was, of course, until they found out
    what it was. "Amidala, word has come from
    a contact of yours that...your mother
    is gravely ill. She has asked that you
    join her as soon as possible."

    Amidala looked striken. My mother?
    "I...um, I don't know what to say. I
    haven't seen or heard from my parents in
    over ten years. They were present at my
    coronation, but then..." They felt
    that I didn't need them anymore.
    It was silly, she knew, to try and keep
    her thoughts from the two men around her.
    They were one now, ever since forging that
    bond that led them to her location.

    Anakin placed a comforting hand on her
    shoulder. "We will go with you, then. I
    won't allow you to have to face this alone."
    She wiped a tear from her eye and grabbed
    a hand of each of theirs, forming a circle
    between the three. "What would I do without
    you?"

    Anakin and Obi-Wan shared a glance. "You'll
    never have to find out, Amidala. Never."
    Anakin whispered, answering her rhetorical
    question. She smiled and they turned their
    brave faces up to the sun. There would be
    plenty of time to enjoy the day...right
    now, her mother needed her.

    To be continued.

    Marie
     
  9. Alderaan21

    Alderaan21 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yay! New story post!

    Beautiful job as always, Marie.
     
  10. Alpha_Ferdante

    Alpha_Ferdante Jedi Youngling star 2

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    An addition, and I've missed it by a week.

    I should be flogged!

    Nice job, as usual, Marie.

    I like reading your fanfic.
     
  11. Alderaan21

    Alderaan21 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I don't even *want* to remember what page I found this on.

    This story *better* not be being abandoned, Marie... I've been reading it for too long!
     
  12. Alpha_Ferdante

    Alpha_Ferdante Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Let's see how many stories we can convince Marie to work on at the same time.

     
  13. Marie D Padawannabe

    Marie D Padawannabe Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Ack!! I know! I overdid myself and now I
    get to pay for it!!! Ahhh!! eek.gif


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    The combined group of Obi-Wan, Anakin and
    Amidala arrived on the North side of Naboo
    the next day. Amidala had been instantly
    escorted by relatives to her mother's
    bedside, while the Jedi simply waited.
    Anakin was taken back at how simple and
    pedestrian Amidala's home looked in
    comparison to the Palace. Much the same
    as Coruscant looks compared to Tatooine.

    He took a seat near the window inside
    Amidala's old room. It was decorated with
    all the whimical flair of a ten-year old.
    An old holo, nearly faded from existence
    grabbed his attention. Surely she won't
    mind, right? Before he talked himself
    out of it, he activated it. The picture
    was black at first, then filled with
    the image of Amidala at her coronation.

    She was stunning, even then. It was dated
    at about 6 months before they first met,
    before all was turned on its rear. The holo
    changed then, to an image of the girl
    he knew. Padmé Naberrie, Princess of
    Theed. The caption read. She looked
    all of twelve, he thought. With one last
    look, he placed the holo back on the
    dressing table.

    Reaching out, he was beginning to feel
    her sorrow. She was speaking with her
    mother, and he knew better not to listen.
    There were many others around her, most
    talking quietly amongst themselves. Without
    creating too much of a stir, he gently
    reached out to her mind, sending her
    reassurance. Be strong, you can do this.
    .

    He felt the warmth as she replied.
    Ani, will you join us for a moment?
    He was taken back at the desperation in
    her voice, and quickly walked over. About
    a dozen or so pairs of eyes focused on him
    when he entered, and he searched for the
    ones belonging to the one he loved. She
    was crouched down beside her mother,
    holding onto her frail hand. The family
    resemblence was amazing, he thought.

    She called him over to her, motioning
    for him to sit beside her. "Mom, there's
    someone I want you to meet," She whispered,
    smiling at Anakin. "This is Jedi Padawan
    Anakin Skywalker." She said, pride
    evident in her voice.

    A smile graced the pale face of Aneela
    Naberrie, and she reached for his hand.
    "So, you're the one who captured my
    daughters heart? And a Jedi, no less!"

    Anakin blushed right up to his ears. "She
    captured my heart the moment I first met
    her, Mrs. Naberrie." He leaned down,
    placing a small kiss on Amidala's
    tear-streaked cheek. She laughed, wiping
    at her eyes. "Yeah, you were all of nine
    years old at the time, too."

    Aneela shook her head, enjoying the company
    of her daughter. "True love knows no
    bonds, or barriers, Amidala." She rasped,
    slightly short for breath. Anakin sensed
    the womans discomfort and gently willed
    the force to comfort her. He was, by no
    means, a healer, but had a good enough
    grasp on the force to be of some assistance.

    He was shocked when he felt Amidala join
    him. A tall woman around Obi-Wan's age
    stared at them in horror. "What are you
    doing to her? You'll-"

    "They have placed her into a deep sleep,
    so that she may have some comfort." Came
    the answer from the doorway. Anakin opened
    his eyes and smiled at Obi-Wan. "She will
    fine when she awakens, I promise you."

    The woman threw her hands into the air,
    exasperated. "More Jedi? That's all we
    need. This is why I did not want Her
    Royal Highness here." She glared at
    Amidala and hurried from the room. various
    other relatives looked at the Queen with
    compassion.

    "Who is that woman, Aunt Brynn?" She asked
    the older woman sitting opposite her.

    "Your mother's housekeeper, I'm afriad.
    She's got quite the temper, that one. Is
    convinced that the Jedi are responsible for
    the death of her husband, although we know
    that's all poodoo, don't we?" Amidala
    looked over at Anakin and Obi-Wan, confused.
    What's this all about?

    "Why would she blame the Jedi?" Anakin
    asked, keeping his voice low.

    Brynn shook her head. "Her husband was
    rejected by the Jedi as a boy, and never
    got over the rejection. Or so she claims.
    He supposedly made one last attempt not
    too long ago, but died on his way home
    from Corusca
     
  14. Alpha_Ferdante

    Alpha_Ferdante Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Thanks for the update Marie!

    And so quickly, too.

    btw, since this doesn't convey tone, I was actually kidding about having to juggles all the stories.
     
  15. Alpha_Ferdante

    Alpha_Ferdante Jedi Youngling star 2

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  16. Lilu

    Lilu Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Let's get this up where it belong.
     
  17. little susie jedi

    little susie jedi Jedi Youngling star 1

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    up to the top with thee.
    you will be posting more, won't you?
     
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