~~~Storm~~~ (Some angst and torture)

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  1. SiriGallia Jedi Master

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  2. PadawanKitara Force Ghost

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    I missed some good posts last week. Can't wait for more.
  3. Nat Jedi Master

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  4. Ganki Force Ghost

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    UP UP AND please don't go away! Great posties!
  5. SiriGallia Jedi Master

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    Nat: *giggle* Too true! Ah well, Obi's been through worse! ;)

    Kitara: Well good to see ya again! :)

    Ganki: Why thank you!


    LAST POST!!

    I just want to say a BIG thank you to you deticated readers! Thanx for hangin in there! I'm going to have a couple new stories soon if you're at all interested. Anyway, thank you for reading! *bows* You've been a wonderful audience ;) :p :D

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    Chapter 8

    Everyone was stranded in the mountain retreat for a week. Obi-Wan had plenty of time to recover and the damage was taken in. Everyone was very glad to leave the mountain and see what was left of their homes. Jerris, Draike and the two assassins left of Draike's group were all to be sent to trial, along with Senator Porshe' who was found to be part of the scandal. Two days later Centon came to take the Jedi back to the Temple. Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan said good-bye to Tres and Heana at the landing pad.

    "We thank you for all your help Jedi." Heana said with a smile.

    "You are of course welcome to come visit again." Tres invited. "But please let us know if you go through any large clouds, with lightning, vapor and fog."

    "Especially fog." Obi-Wan nodded, and smiled at them.

    "Thank you for all your help too, Tres, I hope we meet again." Qui-Gon said. Tres nodded.

    "As do I Qui-Gon Jinn." Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon boarded the ship. Obi-Wan told Centon the whole story as they went, and at the end Centon let out a whistle.

    "I said there was something not right about that cloud."

    "You were right." Obi-Wan smiled.

    Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan sat down and Obi-Wan realized it had been the first time in a while he had really sat down. Even in the retreat he had been lying down most of the time. "Well," Obi-Wan smiled. "I survived another mission master, thanks to you." Qui-Gon smiled.

    "No, if I had really saved you, I would have made sure you didn't get beaten up, and shot."

    Obi-Wan grinned. "Well at least I'm not dead."

    THE END

  6. Angel_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Great end of an interesting story!!!

    Obi and Qui-Gon are too cute :) !!!


    Angel_Skywalker

  7. Nat Jedi Master

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    :_| :_|No-o-o-o :_| :_| *snif* It's over! :( *snif!* But it *snif* c-can't b-b-be! It's too soon!! :_|

    But it was great! :)I had a really good time reading it. *Standing ovation* I'll be there for "Running From The Galaxy" and I'm waiting for other stories! ;)

    Farewell, and thank you for the entertainment. *bows and leaves*
  8. Ganki Force Ghost

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    OVER DONE! So soon. That was great. Hope to see more from you soon!

    Oh and let's up this thing! UP!
  9. PadawanKitara Force Ghost

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    Finished??? Oh.... what am I going to do with these ruby slippers?

    here's wishing you more plot bunnies for more stories :)
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