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Strange customs and unknown enemies(Obi torture)Completed 12/13/01!!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Jacinta_Kenobi, Nov 5, 2001.

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  1. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl

    Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Padawan star 4

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  3. Jacinta_Kenobi

    Jacinta_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Ok, you asked for more, you got it. My very last post.....sniff...end of story....sniff....now I REALLY need chocolate, coffee, and a hug....sniff...

    Qui-Gon ran to the healing room, gently laying his padawan on the bed. Obi-Wan moaned. Qui-Gon?s breath caught in his throat as he looked at the wound.

    The healer ran over. ?My word?.This boy has a curse on him or something, I think.? She said as she went and called a few more healers.

    ?I need you to leave.? The healer said.

    ?No.? Qui-Gon replied.

    ?Do you want your padawan to live?? She asked. Qui-Gon nodded. ?Then let us do our job.? She said as she steered him out the door.
    *****
    Feria paced the floor. ?I am so sorry, Master Jinn! I didn?t mean to shoot him?? She collapsed into tears.

    Qui-Gon looked at her. ?I know you didn?t. It?s not your fault. My padawan just seems to attract anything that inflicts pain.? He said dully.

    Feria almost smiled at that, but the situation was to serious.

    A messenger came in. ?Miss Marih?..I have come to tell you that Teru Depof is dead. The people killed him. They wish to see you.? He said.

    Feria looked at him. ?Tell them I am sorry, but a?.good friend has been?injured quite badly in the battle, and I must wait to see if he will be alright.?

    ?But Miss Marih?.?

    ?I will not change my mind.? Feria said. The messenger nodded slowly and left.

    ?This is much more important?? Feria muttered as she sat.
    *****
    A few hours later, a healer came out. She looked at them and smiled.

    ?He?ll be ok?? Feria asked happily.

    ?In a few days. He is a strong lad. I don?t see how he does it, but he always seems to pull through.? The healer said, shaking her head. ?He?s awake if you want to see him.

    Feria stood at the same time Qui-Gon did and ran in the room. Obi-Wan looked over at them and smiled faintly.

    ?I am so sorry, Obi-Wan! I am so sorry!? Feria cried as she ran to his side, fresh tears coming.

    Obi-Wan smiled slightly. ?It?s alright, Feria. You were trying to help. It?s ok.? He said, his voice a bit hoarse from not being used.

    Feria smiled thankfully, then her eyes twinkled. ?I am glad you have your voice back Obi-Wan. Did anyone tell you how lovely your voice sounds? It would have been a shame to waste it.?

    Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon started laughing as Feria realized what she had said, and her cheeks went red.
    *****
    A few days later, Obi-Wan looked up from the datapad he was reading and grinned at Feria. ?Hi.?

    ?Hi.? She replied, sitting next to his bed. ?Qui-Gon said you wanted to see me??

    ?Yes. Now that the crisis is over, we will be returning to Coruscant. I asked my master, and he said it was alright if you wanted to come with us to the Jedi Temple. With your healing skills, you could be a great healer.? Obi-Wan said.

    Feria smiled. ?I?m sorry, Obi-Wan but my place is here. My mother loved this planet. I grew up here. And now that Teru is dead, the people have asked me to be queen.?

    Obi-Wan started. ?Queen Feria?? He asked with a raise of his eyebrow.

    Feria slapped his arm. ?Hey. I don?t know, I am not sure. But the people feel it was because of me that we defeated Teru.?

    ?And it was.? Obi-Wan said.

    Feria blushed slightly. ?Thank you. I think I will accept, merely because I don?t want to see what happened before happen again. I also want to try to convince the people to join the republic.? Feria said.

    Obi-Wan grinned mischievously. ?You just want to be called Queen Feria.?

    ?So what if I do?!! Hey, you have to admit it has a nice ring to it!? Feria laughed.

    ?I think that this is right Feria. You have natural leading qualities about you.? Obi-Wan said.

    ?Thank you. I will do my best, that I know.? Feria said.
    *****
    Feria stood waving slightly as the ship disappeared in the atmosphere. Then, with a slight sigh, she turned and went inside the council to start her life as ruler of the Shalu.

    ?I will never forget you, Obi-Wan Kenobi.? She whispered.

    //Nor I you. May the force be wi
     
  4. Lonewolf89

    Lonewolf89 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Obi-Wan really does seem to be attracted to pain, doesn't he? Cool job!
     
  5. TheSwedishJedi

    TheSwedishJedi Jedi Master star 4

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    Oh that was sweet. Nice ending. Hmm, yes, Obi-Wan does attract pain doesn't he. :D

    Do you mind if I use some of the quotes in the story? I though they summorized Obi very nicely. [face_devil]

    ~Swede :p
     
  6. Jacinta_Kenobi

    Jacinta_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hey, sure Swede, I'm flattered. Do me a favor though? Let me know which ones you use, and give me credit if you do? I'd be interested to see which ones you liked.
     
  7. TheSwedishJedi

    TheSwedishJedi Jedi Master star 4

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    No prob. Like I would take credit for something like that. :D
     
  8. Jacinta_Kenobi

    Jacinta_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Didn't say you would! Thanks. Glad you liked them
     
  9. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hey Jacinta!
    That was an awesome story!
    Thanks so much for posting it!!!
    S-W K
     
  10. I love Sci Fi

    I love Sci Fi Jedi Master star 4

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    great story!!!
     
  11. Lonewolf89

    Lonewolf89 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Wow, I can't believe it's over! You've done a wonderful job!
     
  12. JediClare

    JediClare Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Geez, can't believe I missed the ending. Anyway, nice job. :) Dunno whether you still want coffee now, but here's some. *Pushes over a pot of hot coffee* Chocolate's in the fridge if you want more. :D

    x Clare x
     
  13. Jacinta_Kenobi

    Jacinta_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thanks....(Jacinta drinks coffee, eats bar of chocolate, and goes to get a hug from her friend Summer.)
     
  14. jacen200015

    jacen200015 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    great story.
     
  15. KenobisGirl

    KenobisGirl Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Hey, Jacinta! Thought I'd up this for ya, as a reward for your lovely posts on your new Obi-torture story. Good stuff! :)

    READ THIS, EVERYONE!

    KenobisGirl :p
     
  16. Jacinta_Kenobi

    Jacinta_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    *Jaci looks at upped story....stares...and faints*

    Thanks! Man, this is old! I was like, HUH? when I saw it.
     
  17. KenobisGirl

    KenobisGirl Jedi Grand Master star 4

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  18. jedi7

    jedi7 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    That was great, U are the queen of torture, and I must be sick cause I couldn't help laughing and looking forward to the next torture session. 7
     
  19. Jacinta_Kenobi

    Jacinta_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    COOL!

    *turns and yells* DID YOU HEAR THAT? I'M THE QUEEN OF TORTURE!

    hm...no, I think Jane Jinn goets that title...I'll settle for princess, alright? :D

    Hehe.

    Thanks, jedi.
     
  20. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Aww man this is soooooooo great!!!! ERRRRRRRRR! Cliffie master! Don't do this to me! please!!!!

    ***gasps for breath*** MUST.............HAVE...........NEW..........POST!!!!

    If I die because of this, it's ur fault!
    LOL!
    Just kidding but please post!
     
  21. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    O that reply i made that was for a section in ur story. sorry for the confusion
     
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