Beyond Surprise!!! H/L Luke, Chewie... etc. Completed on 2/22/04 - replies to comments 6/2

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  1. GreatOne Force Ghost

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  2. DarthMasan Jedi Master

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    YEAY!! a new fic by GO!!!!!!
    happy B-Day GO! :D
    DM
    cant wait for more!!
  3. Jaina_and_Jag Force Ghost

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    Really awesome!!! :D Can't wait for more! :)
  4. Laine_Snowtrekker Force Ghost

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    So hilarious!!! This is sweet. More, wanting more. Please!
  5. darkladyhannasolo Jedi Knight

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    Yah!!! A new story. Great one don't forget to post it at the other site. I can't wait for the next installment. I love it when Chewie calls Han Cub. It so cute.
  6. Eowyn_Jade Force Ghost

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    lol! That's cute! I never thought about that ebfore but it's true! Poor Han! no life day presents at all :( It's gonna be a heck of a party ;)

    EJ
  7. RogueSticks Jedi Knight

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    Ohhhh how fun! A fun happy story with NO ANGST! WOO!
  8. StarForce Jedi Knight

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    Happy Birthday GreatOne!

    This sounds like it's going to be a fun story. And that's the best for throwing surprise parties: when the person doesn't know it's his/her birthday!
  9. _3MD_PsychoSniper Jedi Youngling

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  10. Solo_Fan Jedi Master

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    "Your dad doesn't know when his life-day is, so we never celebrated it."

    I know this is going to be a happy story, but that line was just so sad. Poor Han! Can't wait to see if he is surprised.
  11. Calandria Jedi Master

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    :eek: I helped inspire that? thanks :D


    and great start... I can't wait to see where this goes :D [face_devil]
  12. GreatOne Force Ghost

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    WOW! Look at all the responses! :D

    DarthMasan - Thank you!! I had a nice BD! This story is going to be a real short one, so I hope you're not disappointed.

    Jaina_and_Jag - Thanks! :)

    Laine_Snowtrekker - I hope this story is sort of funny. Thank you for reading. :D

    darkladyhannasolo - I love it when Chewie calls Han Cub. It so cute. - And Han never even objects! I will post it on the other site if it turns out fairly good. I'm only typing Chapter two right now, so we'll see. ;)

    Eowyn_Jade - Poor Han! no life day presents at all - Ahhh. A poor Han already! My story is complete!! LOL!!

    RogueSticks - NO ANGST ?? - hmmm. *gives RogueSticks her flamethrower back* Maybe not too much, anyway. :D :D

    StarForce - And that's the best for throwing surprise parties: when the person doesn't know it's his/her birthday! - hehe. Poor Han.... he is going to be sooooo confused... [face_devil]

    _3MD_PsychoSniper - Welcome!! Thank you. :)

    Solo_Fan - Can't wait to see if he is surprised - *grins evilly* - You don't think I'm going to make this go smoothly , do you??

    Calandria - Yep, you sure did!! I was feeling so bad that your family forgot your birthday, I came up with this story. (once is bad enough... except Han's life-day has ALWAYS been forgotten! :( )

    Chapter two... NOW!!
  13. GreatOne Force Ghost

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  14. merkuria Jedi Knight

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    This is hilarious! Poor Han! :)
  15. darkladyhannasolo Jedi Knight

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    ROFL....I can't believe that Han thinks that Leia put a hit on him. His babbling is so funny. Poor Leia 200 hundred guests that quite a lot. I hope she reminder to invite the Fetts. ;)
  16. kayladie97 Force Ghost

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    A new story from you, GreatOne! I love it!

    Poor Han, never having a Lifeday celebration. :( For that matter, do Luke and Leia even know how old Han is?

    I really had to laugh at the 2nd chapter...

    "What would you like? I'll make you anything at all. Or should I make the kids favorite? I could do both. Have I told you how beautiful you look today?" SHUT UP, SOLO!!!

    "Have you been drinking?"

    "No! W..what makes you think that? I haven't had a drop. I'll go start dinner right now," Han stammered and practically ran to the kitchen.


    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] I can only imagine the chaos that is about to ensue! All that whispering around a guy who has a suspicious nature to begin with is bound to cause a lot of trouble.

    Can't wait for the next part! :D :D :D
  17. RebelMom Jedi Grand Master

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    Poor Han. That is funny though. the man should have a little more self confidence. ;)
  18. LaYa_ Jedi Grand Master

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    [face_laugh] lol This is excelent! :)

    Can't wait for more ;)
  19. DarthMasan Jedi Master

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    :D :D
    it's short but funny! dont worry!
    hehe cant wait for more!
    DM
  20. RogueSticks Jedi Knight

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    YOU'RE the one who had my flamethrower? I really needed that for LP's fic.

    LOL, of COURSE the first thing Han assumes is that Leia is trying to knock him off. Again, WHERE do you get your plots? You have to be stealing them from somewhere. Or your poor, battered muse is sobbing a dark room somewhere begging to be set free.
  21. StarForce Jedi Knight

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    This is so funny!

    But poor Han. It's just like him conclude the worst after only getting a couple clues.

    I loved how he twisted Leia's words to fit into his paranoid interpretation.

    At least Han knows the date, so he can be extra careful that day, and watch out for the hitmen his wife sent after him!
  22. Calandria Jedi Master

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    *falls off her chair, laughing*

    this is getting better and better...

    She thinks he did something. He thinks she wants to get rid of him. Oh this is priceless.
  23. starwarsfan68 Jedi Knight

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    Happy Birthday Greatone. I love this story. Keep it up.
  24. A-Windsor Jedi Knight

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    Yes, Han.... they're trying to off you!

    LOL.... Nice job...


    Can't wait for more!


    A. Windsor
  25. _3MD_PsychoSniper Jedi Youngling

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    Haahahha

    I can see it now, Leia sends Han to pick something up from the banquet hall, its dar there.

    Suddenly, the lights come on, and Han sees a crowd.

    He draws his signature DL-44 and opens fire.


    I hope he hits Fel'ya.
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