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Beyond - Legends Sword: A Jaina Poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Deneveon, Mar 23, 2003.

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  1. Deneveon

    Deneveon Jedi Master star 4

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    SWORD


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    In this world of war
    Where no one knows who they are
    I stand alone
    I am solo
    Darkness haunts my memories
    Ruin is my only reverie
    Ghosts are my only company
    Around me my world is crumbling
    Dissipating, disintegrating
    Upon itself it is imploding
    Tolling ever is mortality?s bell
    I have no word for life but hell
    I live one day to die the next
    As voices ring in my head
    I stand alone
    I am solo
    My destiny is engraved in time and space
    I have allowed myself no grace
    Corroding ever is my soul
    I have but one way to go
    But like a rusting jeweled crown
    That one way is only down


    I am drowning
    Slowly slipping
    I take no outstretched hand or rope
    For me no longer do I trust hope
    I have but one salvation
    I have but one escape
    I have but one redemption
    I have but one placation
    Death, hold me in your sweetened grasp
    As the moments sleek slowly past
    And in death as well as life
    I am alone
    I am solo

    I am the Sword


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    --Den
     
  2. Lt_Jaina_Solo

    Lt_Jaina_Solo Jedi Knight star 5

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    May 27, 2002
    nicely done!
     
  3. Ultima_1

    Ultima_1 Jedi Knight star 5

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    May 16, 2001
    Bravo! Great poem.
     
  4. Matthew_Wolverine

    Matthew_Wolverine Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Nov 25, 2002
  5. duskwings

    duskwings Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jan 10, 2003
    Nice poem! Poor Jaina.

    -duskwings
     
  6. ZaraValinor

    ZaraValinor Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    May 31, 2002
    Remarkable and moving. Your wording breathtaking.
     
  7. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Apr 1, 2001
    that poem was so incredibly powerful, it held me through the last line.

    ~aeryn
     
  8. ElijahFan9

    ElijahFan9 Jedi Youngling

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    Mar 22, 2003
    That was wonderful! Good one Den!
     
  9. Deneveon

    Deneveon Jedi Master star 4

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    Jun 6, 2002
    Thanks all.

    --Den
     
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