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Beyond - Legends Symbols - L/M AU Romance - Author's Note 12/19/12

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by RedGold, Mar 16, 2010.

  1. mara_jade_rox

    mara_jade_rox Jedi Master star 2

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    Jun 18, 2007
    I like this fixing you do. 'Tis nice. Anakin's thoughts made me chuckle.

    Nice post!

    MJR@};-
     
  2. PadmeSkywalkerSHM

    PadmeSkywalkerSHM Jedi Padawan star 2

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    Nov 25, 2010
    YESSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!

    This totally and completely makes up for the last chapter!
     
  3. dm1

    dm1 Jedi Master star 4

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    Jun 9, 2004
    Good for Mara! Good for Luke; yes, he's his father's son, no doubt about that!

    Let the babies work out their problems and come to the adults when they have something useful to say!
     
  4. LVB

    LVB Jedi Master star 1

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    Feb 23, 2005
    Well you certainly fixed that ugly mess! Your characterisation of Mara was spot on in this; the 'get frelled' attitude really works on her.

    Anakin's thought process at the end was great!!

    Much love :)
     
  5. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Force Ghost star 7

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    Aug 31, 2004
    Jinkies+yeehaw=jinkeehaw [face_laugh]

    Oh lovely, lovely! Strong, kick-butt Mara is always cool; :* She and Luke are right. Until the Empire and Republic really want peace and not just cutesy tootsy figureheads to smile and milk the cams :p then they're better off living their lives in neutral territory.

    hahaha! Luke is like his dad in the best way.

    Adored how quick they came to their true choice and first priority - peace between governments and they for each other.

    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] Now JL and ginchy can get their ... wishes for more action (As if yours truly would object, either) [face_mischief]


    [face_dancing]

    [:D] !!

     
  6. the-Naboo-council

    the-Naboo-council Jedi Youngling

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    Apr 11, 2010
    YYYYYEEEEESSSSS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![:D] that was way better than the last chapter!
     
  7. Piper057

    Piper057 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Nov 26, 2009
    Well done, Mara! =D=

    Poor kids. :( The governments should really stop to manipulate their lives like this! [face_shame_on_you]
    *trying to imagine if someone told me: "Hey, you're getting married" and then " it's time for divorce". [face_hypnotized]


    I've never thought I'd love Anakin.[face_laugh]




     
  8. Jade_Pilot

    Jade_Pilot Jedi Master star 5

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    Dec 10, 2005
    I LOVE IT!!!!!! [face_love] Great post, girl! Hee hee! You have made my day!

    Bravo, bravo! =D=
     
  9. Darth_Kiryan

    Darth_Kiryan Jedi Master star 4

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    Mar 13, 2009
    That was absolutely brilliant. [face_laugh][face_laugh]=D==D=
     
  10. wbsaw

    wbsaw Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Oct 31, 2008
    Redgold;
    This was unexpectedly excellent.

    I had expected you to make Mara say she wanted a divorce and that they would separate for 6 months or some amount of time...Missing each other immensely the whole time. Then Luke goes on some secret mission and captured and tortured for weeks by some super secret imperial spy agency. Who then show him to Jade, so she can gloat over him..Who THEN decides to want him back. Two years and 4-6 chapters later they get together...

    You just like to torture Luke waay too much..Especially is Mara if holding the whip. Glad you restrained yourself!!
     
  11. Jedi_Lover

    Jedi_Lover Force Ghost star 5

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    Nov 1, 2004
    DON'T GIVE HER IDEAS!!!:mad: :mad:
     
  12. JordanCHFel

    JordanCHFel Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Mar 12, 2009
    See!!! There's the part you left out!!!
     
  13. lost_lauries_grapes

    lost_lauries_grapes Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Jun 27, 2006
    They should just have spaced the Imperials and bel Iblis and left for the cluster so they can kriff each other's brains out in peace. :D

    Peace,
    Bea
     
  14. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Master star 5

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    May 15, 2005
    ^^ I'm totally going to forget that wbsaw even made that suggestion... o_O

    You know what they say when someone makes an assumption?

    Yep. ;)

    ?I asked you to let us tell her together,? Doruk turned to the senator, ?as a courtesy.?

    ?Where was your courtesy on Ryloth?? bel Ibis shot back. ?Perhaps you should have thought of that before excluding her from such important talks??


    For every fault that both are showing, there's this one grace... and Bel Iblis rocks for calling him on that.

    ?One moment I?m forced into a marriage, the next I?m being forced out.?

    Anakin raised one brow, ?I thought you?d be pleased.?


    And apparently, Anakin needs to talk to his son more...

    ?Why not make a new treaty?? Jade asked. ?Spend this time making a workable treaty instead of backtracking into possible war??

    ?Because it will never work,? bel Ibis answered. ?The New Republic and Empire simply cannot get along.?


    Not with an attitude like this one, no.

    And... okay. Entirety of Mara putting politicians in their place and telling them to make nice or else? Loved it. Awesomely done, RedGold. :)
     
  15. CurtisZidaneZiraa

    CurtisZidaneZiraa Jedi Padawan star 1

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    Nov 18, 2010
    Oh wow. I am sooooo behind. For some reason, I wasn't getting the PM notices and life was too nuts to go looking for them. Such an amazing chapter. And yes. Luke is totally his father's son. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAA[face_laugh] awesomeness. Mara finally got sick of being the figurehead. This has such intricate character development without going through every little detail of their lives. The fic really flows (though I do have some problems keeping track of timing - is it just me? Cause it's listing Luke's birthday, then the wedding after a certain time, then the one year anniversary, which are implied as being months apart, but seem to have little time in between)
     
  16. Valiowk

    Valiowk Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Apr 23, 2000
    Tee hee, will be interesting to see how the governments try to amend their plans now that Luke and Mara aren't on their side... :p
     
  17. JadeLotus

    JadeLotus Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Mar 27, 2005
    Good for both of them for standing their ground.

    This was a surprisingly non-evil chapter. I am so disappointed in you RG!


    ...

    Not really - loved it!
     
  18. wbsaw

    wbsaw Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Oct 31, 2008
    nightmare, actually....
     
  19. the-Naboo-council

    the-Naboo-council Jedi Youngling

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    Apr 11, 2010
    New post soon?[face_praying]
     
  20. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Force Ghost star 7

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    Aug 31, 2004
    I echo the strong request above. [face_batting]

    @};-

     
  21. LoriLynn

    LoriLynn Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Aug 13, 2011
    I concur. Let's start chanting! More Symbols, more Symbols, more Symbols!! [face_praying]
     
  22. Jedi_Lover

    Jedi_Lover Force Ghost star 5

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    Nov 1, 2004
    I think she just likes to see us beg.
     
  23. LoriLynn

    LoriLynn Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Aug 13, 2011
    Probably. Isn't that a characteristic of a sociopath? [face_thinking] :D
     
  24. Lady_Jedi93

    Lady_Jedi93 Jedi Knight star 4

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    May 11, 2010
    Oh please update soon! [face_praying] [face_batting] [face_praying]
     
  25. PadmeSkywalkerSHM

    PadmeSkywalkerSHM Jedi Padawan star 2

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    Nov 25, 2010
    I agree with everyone else. You NEED to update.