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Saga Tales of the Temple Terrors: The Sliding Menaces (10 year old Anakin gets in trouble. One poster.)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by ShaydremMoon, May 16, 2003.

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  1. ShaydremMoon

    ShaydremMoon Jedi Youngling star 2

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    This is just something I wrote for no apparent reason. I might write more of these, they're just fun to write!




    Tales of the Temple Terrors:
    The sliding Menaces

    Two dark figures moved silently through the shadowy halls of the jedi temple. The lights of Coruscant fell silently through the huge windows, giving the scene a surreal appearance that was not lost on the two excited padawans.

    The first was human, the city lights played in his short blond hair and across his face, giving his blue eyes an excited glint. His companion was a tiny thing, bearly reaching his lower chest. She slid in and out of the shadows naturally, her short, sleek fur barely distinguishable from her black hair that fed into a long, tousled braid. Big green-yellow eyes beneath eyelashes that would have been abnormally long on a human,glowed with a soft light of their own.

    ?How much trouble do you think we?d get in if we got caught?? Anakin Skywalker whispered to his best friend, Kittenira Nite.

    ?I dunno, but lets not find out.? They hurried through mazelike hallways of ancient stone, watched by stern statues of long gone jedi masters. To the two young culprits, they seemed to glare at them, although had anyone else been watching they would to have seemed to be smiling gently in remembrance of their own days as adventure seeking padawans, before those very adventures had taken their lives.

    Finally, the two stopped, looking up in anticipation.
    ?There it is, the longest stair rail in the temple.? Anakin whispered, staring up at it in awe.

    ?Well don?t just stand there staring at it, come on!? His friend whispered back, grabbing his hand in her furry one and pulling him up the stairs.

    By the time they reached the landing at the top of the stairs they were both out of breath.

    ?I think maybe we should have risked it and took the turbolift.? Anakin panted. They took a few minutes to get their breath back, then turned to the stairwell.

    ?I?ll go in front.? Anakin said, swinging himself up onto the banister.

    ?Why?s that?? Kitty demanded, furry little hands on her hips.

    ?Because I don?t want you to get hurt at the bottom if something goes wrong.? To anybody else this would have just seemed to be a lame excuse to be in front. But Kitty knew better. Ani was very protective of her, even though he was only 3 1/2 standard years older. It got annoying sometimes. But Kity let it go, this time.

    She sprang up behind him with feline grace and put her arms around his waist, grinning in excitement.
    ?Ready?? Anakin asked over his shoulder.

    ?Ready.?
    ?Go!? They both corused at the same time. And with that they were off. It was exhilirating! They picked up speed as they went, and somewhere along the way they forgot to be quiet. Kitty?s braid came loose, releasing a torrent of black curls behind her.

    Above them, through the single door off the landing they had just left, jedi master Yoda was snapped out of meditation prematurely in the council room. He had been troubled by strange visions and had gone to the council room in order ro seek peace in order to become closer to the force. No such luck. With a tired sigh Yoda levered himself out of his seat and hobbled out onto the landing just in time to see the temple trouble makers slide out of view. He smiled, after all there was no one here to see him.

    Ever since Anakin Skywalker and Kittenira Nite had met when Anakin first came to the temple they had been inseperable The jedi order would never be the same.

    From jedi masters died bright pink to mysterious ?leaks? that somehow managed to soak whoever tripped over a ?misplaced? wire, they had come to be known as the temple terrors. Perhaps his trepidition concerning Skywalker being trained had sinply been a warning of what was to come when he met a certain young Feralian. Quickly swallowing his smile, the venerable jedi master hopped to the banister and stepped over the edge, letting gravity pull him faster than the temple terrors could slide.

    When the two padawans reache
     
  2. returnofthejeni

    returnofthejeni Jedi Youngling star 1

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    I'm new at this whole thing, and this is the first time I'm posting EVER. (just so you know)

    I really liked it, short, cute, and funny.

    Good Job!!

    I'd like to read more of them!
     
  3. ShaydremMoon

    ShaydremMoon Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Welcome to the JC boards! If you need any help with anything, let me know.
    Glad you liked it, I've actually got another one floating around somewhere, it's sort of a prequal. It's how Kitty and Anakin meet and has some background on Kitty. You can access it through my profile. Thanks for reviewing!
    Shay ^_^
     
  4. kasiaskywalker

    kasiaskywalker Jedi Youngling star 3

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    :D
    it was really good!!!!!
    you have to write MORE
     
  5. ShaydremMoon

    ShaydremMoon Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Thank you!
    I actually do have another one written. You see I, uh, sort of posted both of my Temple Terror stories on the wrong board so (Oops, brain dead Shay, that's me! School is a mental health hazard, just like I've always said!) I, um, moved them. So the message right before the story talking about writing more later is actually a little out of date and there is another already written. It's called 'Tales of the Temple Terrors: The begining of the Terrors'
     
  6. ShaydremMoon

    ShaydremMoon Jedi Youngling star 2

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    ShaydremMoon Jedi Youngling star 2

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  8. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    Funny! Great characterization of everyone and liked Kitty.
     
  9. CrystalKenobi

    CrystalKenobi Jedi Master star 4

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    ?Yeah well chasing me into the council chambers with only your towel on didn?t help much! Ow!"

    That I could just see. This is excellent cute and funny. I would love to read the other Tale of the Temple terros., Which board is it on.

    Hope to see more from you.
     
  10. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    AH! THAT WAS HI-LARIOUS!!!!!! IS THERE MORE TO THIS??????????!!!!!!!!!!!??????????
     
  11. ShaydremMoon

    ShaydremMoon Jedi Youngling star 2

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    And here I thought I'd lost this fic in the depths of the boards!

    Thanks so much everyone!

    Shay ^_^
     
  12. ShaydremMoon

    ShaydremMoon Jedi Youngling star 2

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  13. Gina

    Gina Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    Sliding down the Temple banister. That's priceless!


    With a tired sigh Yoda levered himself out of his seat and hobbled out onto the landing just in time to see the temple trouble makers slide out of view. He smiled, after all there was no one here to see him.

    Awww.. So Yoda's a softie after all. :p


     
  14. JediNemesis

    JediNemesis Jedi Padawan star 4

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    [face_laugh]

    Priceless.
     
  15. ShaydremMoon

    ShaydremMoon Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Thanks again everyone!
     
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