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Before - Legends Taryn's Guilt - 2007 diary challenge humor ( 12/ 14 / 7 up ) - She's back!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Lea-El, Jan 1, 2007.

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  1. NerdWOMAN

    NerdWOMAN Jedi Youngling star 2

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    One day/one post...it's sooo suspenseful! I can't wait to read tomorrow's!
     
  2. Lea-El

    Lea-El Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    2/6/7

    Where do I start? I can hear the voice clearer now but it keeps saying "Zee, can you hear me!" over and over and over.

    I've tried screaming. I've even tried banging on the walls, still he keeps calling for Zee.

    I recognize the voice as her friend Moth I think his name is. Why am I hearing someone calling for Zenella?

    I would run screaming into the darkness if I thought it would help but I can still hear him in the hall and?

    And I really don't want to be in the darkness again. Even this dimness is better than nothing at all.

    This is so confusing.

    Not only are the instruments not working in here but also there are no pain medicines in the healer ward. My Jedi calming techniques are not working either. My head is splitting with pain.

    There is one thing I haven't tried ...Could it be that simple?

    I have nothing to loose but my sanity and that will go soon if I can't get through to him.

    I'm going to lay down on the exam bed and try to answer him as I would if it was Bantn.

    I know that sounds ridiculous but so is being alone in the dark in the temple.

    Here goes!

    ~`~`~`~
     
  3. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Oooohhhh....I have a feeling Taryn is finally going to get some answers. I just hope she can handle the reality.

    very nice update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  4. Noelie

    Noelie Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Wow, I hope she starts to get those answers.
     
  5. NerdWOMAN

    NerdWOMAN Jedi Youngling star 2

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    I hope it works. [face_worried]
     
  6. Lea-El

    Lea-El Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    2/7/7

    I tried to make contact but nothing happened so I am going to rest and try again.

    I am turning the datapad to auto record in case? in case what I don't make it back from where ever I am?

    In case I get lost but who would find it? There is no one here but me.

    Oh! Stop trying to analyze this to death and just do it!

    "Bantn, can you hear me?

    Can you make him stop calling Zenella?

    Relax Taryn breath deeply and think of Bantn. Bantn, where are you?"

    Zee, are you there?


    No! I am not Zenella? I am Taryn! ~ 'At last I've made contact.'

    Taryn? Are you saying, you are Taryn?

    Yes? I know its dark and you can't see me but I am Taryn not Zenella. Where's Bantn?

    Bantn, my brother, Bantn? He is on our home planet where he lives. Why are you asking for him?

    Jedi don't live on their home planet. We were padawans at the same time. I know Bantn is a Jedi. Where is he?

    Zee? Taryn, you and I were Jedi at the same time. Bantn is my twin brother and married to the Princess of Pyotr. He was never trained as a Jedi.


    Turn on he lights so I can see you.

    The lights are on here. We don't know why you can't see them.


    Here? Where is here?

    We are in the healer ward. Where do you think you are?

    I've been alone in the dark in the temple for days then I could hear you calling for Zee but I couldn't get through to you, to tell you I wasn't Zee. I am Taryn. My head is splitting in pain could someone get me something for it.

    Yes, they are giving you a shot ... now.

    Ouch! I felt that but there is no one here. What happened? What happened to me to cause this?

    You were injured on a mission six years ago and? and you were not . . .

    You were essentially brain dead. For some reason an undamaged part of your brain started working. They think that you set up a new personality and when you saw yourself as you are... well it overwhelmed you.

    I am Zenella?

    Yes, Master Taryn Zenella You have had enough excitement for one day. The healer said the shot would make you sleepy. I will be here all night. Rest!

    ~`~`~`~
     
  7. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    :eek: :eek: :eek:

    Well now she knows....I can't wait to see what her raction will be.

    Very nice twist

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  8. NerdWOMAN

    NerdWOMAN Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Oh wow! Exciting turn of events!! =D= =D=
     
  9. Noelie

    Noelie Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Well finally.. the two names blend :)

    Now.. there is a ton of back story that is absolutely intriguing!
     
  10. BrentusofGath

    BrentusofGath Jedi Master star 4

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    So now we're back to where I thought we were when everything went Twilight Zone. Zenella and Taryn are the same, or are they? You've twisted us along for a while and I'm very interested in seeing where the road is leading us. Very good updates, I loved the suspense in the darkness. ;)
     
  11. MsLanna

    MsLanna Jedi Master star 6

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    W00t, w00t, w00t?
    Did I miss something here? Hello? *raps on her head*

    What a turn, I did not exppect that at all.:eek:

    Can't see how this is going on, and not only because it is not making sense to me yet.
    =D=
     
  12. Lea-El

    Lea-El Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    An: So the secret worked. I was afraid it was to obvious. Now you know why she didn't just go over and say Hi! Okay guys here's more.


    2/8/7

    Zee ? Zee ?

    Zee ? aaah? Taryn

    Taryn, can you hear me?


    Yes! I can hear him calling.

    At least he is calling Taryn.

    I don't want to answer. I don't want to believe.

    It can't be true.

    Taryn are you there?

    No apparently I don't exist.

    You do exist. You are real. You just aren't who we ... you thought you were.

    That's for sure! I had a life, a job, friends, even a stuffed bantha now... what am I?

    You are a miracle! You are the woman I love. Oh! God! Yoda just heard me say that!

    You mean Yoda was real! The little green guy that talks funny.

    Yes! He's real and he says we are the ones that talks funny.

    Oh! Don't make me laugh, I can't breath when I laugh.

    Are you touching my face?

    Yes! Can you feel this?


    Yes and I felt it the other day too.

    Why can't I see?

    The healer thinks you were overwhelmed by? this and disrupted something in your system. They think it will come back soon. Once you accept ... this.


    Tell me something real, something about me.

    You were hurt saving me and our assigned charge.

    You are loved and respected by the Jedi Order.

    And yes you have a stuffed pink bantha named Bantie. I tried to get you to change his name to Kotn but you thought that was ridiculous.

    Am I Corellian?

    No! You are from Alderaan.

    Brown eyes and brown hair?

    Red and green! Actually green and red!

    What did I say about making me laugh?

    They want you to rest. I will be right here if you need me.

    So Yoda's real. Who would have thought...

    ~`~`~`~

     
  13. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Her biggest concern right now is Yoda being real?

    Well, I guess that's easier to think about than the reality she and Zanella are the same person.

    You are the woman I love. Oh! God! Yoda just heard me say that!

    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    I hope he doesn't have his gimer stick handy! :p

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  14. VaderLVR64

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    You are the woman I love. Oh! God! Yoda just heard me say that!

    Hilarious! [face_laugh] I love it. =D=
     
  15. Noelie

    Noelie Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Adorable update :)
     
  16. NerdWOMAN

    NerdWOMAN Jedi Youngling star 2

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    I loved this post! =D= =D= =D=

    You are a miracle! You are the woman I love.

    I am such a hopeless romantic! That part was awesome![face_love]
     
  17. BrentusofGath

    BrentusofGath Jedi Master star 4

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    You mean Yoda was real! The little green guy that talks funny.

    Yes! He's real and he says we are the ones that talks funny.




    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    That was horrendously funny! Rice almost came out of my nose!

    Another great diary entry!
     
  18. Lea-El

    Lea-El Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    2/9/7

    Taryn

    Kotn? It is Kotn isn't it?

    Yes!

    Sorry, I have a little trouble with my memory lately.

    Really, I haven't noticed.

    Is it still dark in there?


    Not as dark but I still can't make out things too clearly and I am alone except for your voice.

    I brought Bantie can you fell him?

    Yes, he rubbed my cheek and now he's in my hand.

    Is there anything else you need?

    I wish I could feel the sun on my face.

    Whoa! Warn a girl before you pick her up!

    You said you wanted sunshine I can fix that!

    Oh! This has to look weird. Please tell me I'm not wearing one of those infirmary gowns with the back out.

    No! You're wearing a shift dress, like you wear under a dress robe and you are wrapped in a blanket. I'm wearing the infirmary gown with the back out.

    Oh! Please don't make me laugh! I sound like I'm dying when I laugh.

    There! Safe and sound in your favorite chair in the east lobby. Can you feel the sun on your face?

    Can you hear that?

    It sounds like applauding.

    Yes, everyone is applauding to see you up and about.

    Take a bow for me and don't forget to hold your gown shut in back.

    I feel like I just got a huge warm Force hug from everyone.

    The healer says we can only stay a few minutes then you need your rest.

    Then just sit here with me while I absorb as much sun as I can.

    I feel sleepy.

    I think I'll take a nap.

    Sleep. I'll be here watching over you.

    ~`~`~`~
     
  19. NerdWOMAN

    NerdWOMAN Jedi Youngling star 2

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    oh so sweet! He is so kind:)
     
  20. VaderLVR64

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    I feel sleepy.

    I think I'll take a nap.

    Sleep. I'll be here watching over you.


    Loved it! =D=
     
  21. BrentusofGath

    BrentusofGath Jedi Master star 4

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    I'm wearing the infirmary gown with the back out.

    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    I'm glad I wasn't eating when I read that.

    Looks like Taryn is finally settling down and starting to accept things.

    [face_thinking] I wonder what you're going to do next to stir things up. :p
     
  22. Noelie

    Noelie Jedi Padawan star 4

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    that was a perfect installment. What a sweetheart and how wonderful that she has someone to talk to in her solitude..and better yet that she could feel their hugs!
     
  23. Lea-El

    Lea-El Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    AN: Hi! Everyone thanks for reading and sorry for the food out the nose thing but it's so much fun to do. No! I'm not out of ideas for twist and turns. I may not be able to do 365 straight post but it is my goal. Here is todays installment.

    2/10/7

    Taryn

    Taryn are you there?


    Where else would I be?

    You might be out to lunch.


    Speaking of lunch I haven't eaten since this all started.

    I thought about that too so I have a treat for you. Now open your mouth and try this.


    Yumm! Stew, your special recipe.

    You remembered that! Good! One more bite.

    Now try this, can you tell what this is?


    Corellian Chocolate my favorite!

    Good! Now this?

    Alderaanian Strawberries

    And one more thing.

    Iced cream from Naboo.

    Wow! You're good at this. You always said food was your life.

    Can you tell me what this is?


    A kiss!

    Better not let Yoda see you doing that.

    I suspect Yoda knows what a kiss is.

    There are rumors of his leaving on secret missions for months at a time. I suspect he has a secret family somewhere with lots of little Yoda's running around.


    Ooooh! I bet you could get in all kinds of trouble for starting that rumor.

    Where do you think Yaddle came from?

    Ooops! I hear a familiar tapping!

    Subject change!

    Tell him I said, Hi!

    I think it's time for my nap!

    Great abandon me in my time of need!

    Zzzzzzzzzz

    I know you are pretending to be asleep!

    Zzzzzzzzzz

    Mynock

    Zzzzzzzzzzzz

    ~`~`~`~
     
  24. Noelie

    Noelie Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Lol.. secret missions? Lots of little Yoda's? That is just too cute.

    I really do love this 'secret' conversation they are having.
     
  25. NerdWOMAN

    NerdWOMAN Jedi Youngling star 2

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    lol nice post!

    Can you tell me what this is?

    A kiss!


    YAY!
     
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