Discussion in 'Big Brother 4' started by Suzuki_Akira, Jul 27, 2007.
Why does my character always end up knocked up?
Erm... I got bored. So I wondered about a start to the story. Here' a crack at it:
ACT ONE, SCENE ONE (and a bit more)
Dusk. NUBIAN and MINDELLA are sat atop St. Peters, looking out over Rome. NUBIAN is concerned. He suspects MINDELLA, who is white, is planning to use her mind control device on him once Petrus Romanus has been dealt with. Dare he broach the subject?
A little later, after a revelation, NIGHTSHADE appears and informs NUBIAN (by way of a diagram on a piece of paper - because she doesn't talk much) that BEARDED NINJA TURTLE GUY WITH STICKS - would be defender of the current Pope - has been spotted on the VATICAN COMPLEX.
NUBIAN is enraged, and says that the diagram could've been manipulated by THE GREAT ORIGAMI (who may also be lurking about disguised as ANYTHING!!!) to show false intelligence! He continues to bellow that BEARDED NINJA TURTLE GUY WITH STICKS could now be anywhere on the COMPLEX. Petrus Romanus could already be safely hidden away!
He despatches NIGHTSHADE to track BEARDED NINJA TURTLE GUY WITH STICKS down, and destroy him.
What will happen? Something... hopefully.
NUBIAN retreats top his invisible floating lair in the sky. There, he struggles with his major internal conflict. On the one hand, he wants to destroy Mindella because she's white and all white people are dangerous. On the other hand, she's really hot. It's a conflict that dominates his thoughts....
~Nightshade jumped from rooftop to rooftop, swiftly avoiding the attention of that silly looking BEARDED NINJA TURTLE GUY WITH STICKS~
~Why Nubian wanted him dead, was neither of any interest nor consequence to her. She didn't care either way, she had her own agenda to follow, and this was a means to an end.~
~She did, however, decide to see where this creature would lead her, to see if she might learn anything of use, by keeping tabs for the moment.~
~MINDELLA couldn't stop wondering whether to control NUBIAN's mind to keep him from killig her (yes, she had been reading his thoughts) or to tell him the truth. Afterwards, it was just a matter of time before her pregnancy became evident~
Bearded Ninja Turtle Guy with Sticks is glad that he can't possibly have any parental responsibilities.
I thought Mindella was Latina.
I didn't think so.
~The air was cool around him; the wings on his feet beat at an unfathomable speed and propelled him through the night. Up here it was peaceful, yet down there lay his only way back to the all encompassing Love that was the parent of his soul. That WAS his very soul.
~Archangel Michael felt Love inside of him. He felt that he didn't deserve such grace for what he had done, but he felt it nonetheless. He had come to understand since his fall, that here, in the temporal world, it was his instinct that he needed to trust. That was how God communicated with him; spoke to him, in his heart.
~When he had trusted his feelings in the temporal realm, things had gone as they needed to for White Lightning - the name he had given himself in this world. When faced with the challenges he had come to embrace, the answer was always the same: What would Love do now?...
~Right now, his instinct, Love, was speeding him across the earth; speeding him to Europe; propelling him towards what he knew in his heart was his destiny in this world....
~A white bolt sped across the sky. To those below, it might have looked like lightning, streaking over the heavens above....
*ON TOP OF ST.PETER'S*
<AFTER CAMERA WATCHES NUBIAN FLY OFF TO HIS RETREAT, MINDELLA CAREFULLY DECENDS BACK INTO THE CATHEDRAL, AND NIGHTSHADE HOPS OFF OVER THE ROOFTOPS, IT PANS AND ZOOMS TO ONE OF THE GARGOYLES.>
The rooftop is empty
The Gargoyle's eyes move, darting from side to side.
Cracks begin to appear in the stone and parts flake off.
A great ripping sound is heard as THE GREAT ORIGAMI emerges from his hiding place.
He has seen and heard everything that NUBIAN, MINDELLA and NIGHTSHADE were planning.
"I must warn the team that they NUBIAN has taken the bait..."
He quickly folds a piece of paper into a communicator that lights up immediately.
"Craneman to Shaggy! Can you hear me?"
He had to warn BEARDED NINJA TURTLE GUY WITH STICKS that NIGHTSHADE is coming after him!
~Suddenly, out of nowhere, Origami's hands were pinned to the wall. Each of his hands penetrated by a sai, making his powers virtually useless.~
~The communicator squeaked loudly, with a voice repeating "Hello? Hello?"~
~Nightshade walked over and stepped on the makeshift radio unit, slowly glaring at Origami~
"Not so fast, Papercut", said NUBIAN
"Good eyes, Nightshade" Nubian complemented to the assassin
~Nightshade nodded, and slowly melted back into the shadows~
"Well now" NUBIAN started, glaring at Origami, "Let's get started, shall we?"
Some other ACT
NUBIAN and THE GREAT ORIGAMI square off. Suddenly, a white flash is rent across the dark VATICAN COMPLEX skyline. NIGHTSHADE is revealed for a moment. NUBIAN has handed her the Quantum Quill. Why would he do that? NUBIAN glances upward. Does NIGHTSHADE take out her 'master' and risk the re-focused wrath of THE GREAT ORIGAMI, or go after the source of the mysterious white flash?
Meanwhile, MINDELLA is satisfied that the Quantum Quill is no longer in the hands of NUBIAN, but instead in the hands of the unpredictable NIGHTSHADE; her mind control on the Papal pretender is working a treat. She climbs down from the top of St. Peters. She can sense that NUBIAN has engaged THE GREAT ORIGAMI. Suddenly (for everything happens suddenly), BEARDED NINJA TURTLE GUY WITH STICKS appears infront of her. He has Petrus Romanus with him. There is a dramatic pause before something shocking happens.
SHANIQUA, alone at NUBIAN's Blessings from out Black Saviour estate, is restless. Finally, he poops. Worried about MINDELLA's pregnancy, he locks up the estate and heads for the VATICAN COMPLEX. Accompanying he is the most mysterious superhero in NUBIAN's employ... MYSTIC KITTEN. SHANIQUA intends to challenge NUBIAN about pay and conditions. He is also concerned about the lack of LOVE in NUBIAN's plan.
So you didn't read her bio. smh.
Also, this all needs to be faster, and more intense!
With superhuman strength, The Great Origami rips his hands from the wall sending the tiny swords flying over the rooftops.
Ignoring the pain, he quickly folds a sword and shield which become real,colored crimson by his bloody hands which appear to be clotting over. He waves the sword before NUBIAN, daring him to advance.
"With the protection of my valley folds against deep darkness, I fear no harm ..."
~Sensing NUBIAN's danger, Mindella walks back to the top of the cathedral struggling to make a quick decision: Should she risk momentarily lifting her mind control over her puppet Nubian to force Origami into a retreat, or leave him under her control and possibly more vulnerable against the paper-handed fiend? If she did nothing to stop Origami herself, Mindella could possibly lose Nubian, and with him, the best chance she's ever had to control the Vatican...~
~ Thinking fast, Mindella lifts her mind control of Nubian for a couple of seconds (leaving him momentarily confused) and enters Origami's mind, sowing the seed of doubt and making him believe he can't possibly win this battle...Nubian seizes this opportunity to counter his attack and soon a very frightened Origami is forced to flee the cathedral, chased what in his mind seems an almost invincible villain Master Mind ~
~ When immediate danger has passes, Mindella smoothly shifts her controlling powers back to the Nubian, who is now returning to the cathedral with a victorious smile on her face~
Whew, that was a close call. If only I could get my MassMind Controlling machine to work...
~ With a satisfied smile on her own face, Mindella walks into view to greet back her "leader" ~
BEARDED NINJA TURTLE GUY WITH STICKS has seen that MINDELLA can only control one mind at a time. He takes to opportunity to strike at her, knowing that his strength, and her focus still on NUBIAN, could leave her vunerable.
~ Mindella quickly reacts to this attack by activating the Master Blasters for a physical attack on BEARDED NINJA TURTLE GUY WITH STICKS. She shoots twice and BEARDED NINJA TURTLE GUY WITH STICKS falls to the floor, stunned. ~
Never underestimate a pregnant woman, ****
~ As he had raced across the European lands, far below, White Lightning had known that something was wrong. He could feel it, inside. His friend, The Great Origami, was in trouble; NUBIAN had made his move and the ramifications could prove deadly.
~ Pushing harder and faster than before, Archangel Michael shot like a bullet across the darkening skies, heading towards Rome; heading towards his friend; heading towards his destiny...
~ Whilst he knew that something felt wrong, he also understood that 'right' and 'wrong' were merely pairs of opposites, that worked at either end of the same linear pole. In the temporal world they may appear to be separate, but in the eternal realm, they were two extremes of the same whole.
~ It might feel 'wrong', but Michael understood that this was the time. That the time was also 'right'. He was compelled forward at a frightening rate. Scorching across the Rome skies, he shot over St. Peters, landing atop a roof at the rear of the Vatican complex...
In a steamy sexual scene, Shaniqua hides in the janitorial closet and experiments with rectums and mop handles.
In the brief moment that Mindella's influence was lifted, NUBIAN quickly sized up the situation. How could he have been so stupid to lower his guard around a woman--a white woman?!?! A very attractive white woman, yes, but still!
Thinking quickly--having to dispatch Origami at the same time--NUBIAN had activated the mind-nullifyer a special device that he created to block external influences on his mind. If amplified, he could use it to reflect an attack from Mindella back at her. Once the fight with Origami was properly in hand, however, NUBIAN had decided to allow the white devil of a woman to think she retained control.
As Origami dashes away in terror, under the influence of Mindella, NUBIAN walked toward the cathedral with a victorious smile on his face, convinced that this was what Mindella wanted him to do.
Then, in a rush, his proximity alarms alerted him to the impending arrival of his arch-nemesis. The most devilish of the white supremacists! The one that believed he was doing "God's work"--White Lightning.
i want to have a steamy scene
*films the previous scene at 2000fps, resulting in super-unnecessary slo-mo*
You really do make lol sometimes, Tiff.
OOC: Which scene exactly are you talking about?
The one with the mop handles or the White Lightning appearing one?