"Tears of An Angel" -- Obsessed with Ani&Ami? Come in, come in!

I'll think of something..

 

UUPPPP !!!!

 

Thanks morgana. I'll have the final part soon.

 

I forgot I was gonna post a little snippet here!

 

UP again
Post, TJG

 

Hmmm, maybe I will? What should I do Chocos?

 

Just some idea about Ani/Ami....

 

I know I haven't contributed much here lately, but I will at least fill my role as the encouraging threadmaster and say "Post! Please! I would love to see anything anyone thinks up!"

 

;(

 

UP

 

Post something guys! Come on!

 

I will most likely post alittle ditty tonight. So, watch for it!

 

edit

 

Uppsies!

 

blah blah edited blah blah

 

*sigh* That last part about the warm, soft kiss...

//faints

Ahem! Well, who couldn't use a warm, soft kiss from Anakin?

btw: you're all welcome in the "Lovers Cantina" over at the new Writers Resource board It's an Ani/Ami only cantina!

aa

 

Thank's AA!

 

Oh that was absolutely perfect! I loved it!

azn

 

Yay! Beautiful.

Thanks for the invitation, AA. I'll take a look at it!

 

Thanks you guys

 

Nice, TJG, nice

HEY !!! THIS NEEDS AN UP !!!

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It does need an UP!

 

UP!

 

I second that(or maybe third!) Up!

 

Good heavens! It's been a billion years since this was last posted upon. Yes, I know I am prone to spout off ridiculous hyperbole. It hasn't been quite a billion years. Close, though.

Well, what do you know! I have a poem! It's...er...well, I'm always nervous about posting poetry, because I never can tell whether it just plain sticks. Aw, I'll post it anyway! Italics is Amidala, normal is Anakin.
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Rustled folds of skirt, perfuméd air
Palatial ceilings, footsteps ringing sharp
The talking - more than you could ever bear
Endless strummings on a tuneless harp
I've lived this world, could you? Not you
My friend, how lonely, empty it would be!
For you - your world has quite a different view
I know what there I've felt, and what I see

Storms of sand and dust and grit - more sand
And suns of fire and unrelenting light
Precious shade, no water spared for hands
Wait day-long for blessed gift of night
One day was all, I knew I could not stay
No part of me could love this dusty life
One night, not near enough to think I may
No part, to live on treacherous edge of knife

Yes, my world is in me
And surely yours in you
Yet cannot there be something more
Not where we are - but who?
Consider for a moment
This world where you have grown
Is it what you want, my love -
Though it's all you've known?

Aha! you falter, flushed
You know of what I say
I, too, have known the yearning times
The need to get away
I, too, have often felt it
Misplaced, wrenched to lonely
In my own home become a stranger
Too much to know of me

Could we find more together? Could it be
That you and I are so alike as this?
I cannot know, we cannot know
Uncertain as a faltering kiss
Can we not try, at least, my friend?
My love. We'll surely try
And if no world can hold us both
We'll meet beyond the sky
We'll meet beyond the sky.