Tears of Glass sequel to Images of Angels (Obi angst torture mentally and physically)

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  1. Ganki Force Ghost

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    Chapter 1
    Title: Tears of Glass
    Author: Ganki
    Rating: PG

    Summary of Images of Angels: Obi-Wan sets off on his first solo mission and ends up being captured and tortured by the evil Kurai. He then escapes and is captured by what he thought of as a freind (Neild). Then Qui-Gon comes to save him but fails and ends up being shoot by a blaster by Kurai and Obi-Wan was knocked out and draged away by Kurai the Sith. Qui-Gon while slowly passing away *or is he* and the council later feel a surge through the force and realize that Obi-Wan Kenobi has died or has he?
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    Deceiving Darkness series

    Seeking Light (Nanashi)
    Images of Angels
    Tears of Glass
    Crumbled Souls
    more to come....

    Tears of Glass


    It was regular day in the temple. The young initiates were laughing and playing, while the Padawan spared and studied for the upcoming finals. The Knights were resting after long missions and the conical were discussing new missions and the newly Knighted Padawans.

    All seemed well in the temple and all were happy. Except for a very small few who were mourning the seventeenth birthday of a lost friend, teacher, and son. In the Jedi temple the seventeenth birthday was an important day to all Padawans because it marked usually the five year anniversary of being a Padawan and marked the coming of age. It meant that the Padawans were now considered senior Padawans.

    Bant was sitting down in the quarters she shared with her master Thal. Remembering the times she spent with Obi-Wan and how much she missed him. Her master sat besides her with a hand on her shoulder trying to comfort the young girl.

    They sat oblivious to what was happening around them. Qui-Gon Jinn was standing the middle of the council halls being so called briefed about a new mission. He thought it was the councils way of keeping his mind off of obi-Wan that day. Ever since the death of obi-Wan Qui-Gon spent most of his time at the temple in the council chambers.

    He buried his self in missions after missions, locking his self away from others. Even his best friends mace and Thal. Each one had tried to open his heart again but none of there tries succeeded. Now all the two could do was try hopelessly over and over and fail each time.

    "Qui-Gon Jinn you are being sent to the planet Kokai, there you must settle the confrontations between the two sides of the planet and attempt to bring lasting peace. This planet has been at war for as many years as Yoda can remember."

    "Thank you." he was about to bow and exit until he realized that the small green master was eyeing him. as if wanting to say something. curiosity taking the best of the Master he spoke. "Master if I may, is there anything else?"

    "Great danger awaits you. Careful you must be or suffer you will. The dark side hard to see yes but not impossible. Darkness you will meet but darkness will you defeat? The past will destroy you."

    No words were spoken while Qui-Gon excited. Each masters mind filled with the concern for the other master. Each holding there own questions about the wisdom or curse that Yoda spoke off. The dark side had awaken they know that but what dose it want is the real problem. A problem they hoped to solve before it was to late.
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    "Young Apprentice the time has come to prove your self to the Sith."

    "What must I do?"

    "You are to assassinate a couple of Jedi."

    "Yes my lord." There was no emotion in his eyes. They were only blank. The once beautiful Blue/Green eyes were now a swirl of black.

    "There names are Yoda, Mace Windu, and Qui-Gon Jinn."

    "Yes my master, find and destroy."

    "Yes my young apprentice." A smile crossed the monsters lips. "With the death of the few Jedi the rest will crumble and no one will be able to stop the rise of the Sith. No will be able to stop my child of darkness. Now they will know that the darkness can even corrupt the moot innocent and loving Jedi. Wonder what will happen when there child of light turns out to be the new child of darkness."
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    A cold chill ran through out the tem
  2. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    Yay! You've posted the sequel........

    ::sniff:: so sad though...Obi's gone bad :(
  3. Ganki Force Ghost

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    snowbee-wan kenobi thanks I am glad to see you like the first chapter!

    to any one else: Are you guys out there *puts on glasses* nope I don't see any one. *really loud* COME OUT COME OUT WHERE EVER YOU ARE!
  4. Arwen-Jade_Kenobi Jedi Grand Master

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    OMG!!!!!

    that was great

    more soon!!

  5. Ganki Force Ghost

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    Deceiving Darkness series

    Seeking Light (Nanashi)
    Images of Angels
    Tears of Glass
    Crumbled Souls
    more to come....

    The blue lightsaber met the green one. The Jedi master was just waking up when the attack was in pursuit and just had enough time to jump out of his bed and just miss the lightsaber.

    The battled in the room for as long as the could. Mace sent a wave of the force towards the man. The force of the wave shoved the body into the wall but his attacker wasn?t injured. Instead he pushed the wave right back to the older person. Knocking him of his feet and bringing a red hot pain through his lungs.

    Both lightsaber clashed once again. The dark figure wasn?t going to stop until his mission was completes. Mace Windu could see that the mission was a search and destroy mission and he was the prey.

    Right step, parry, left, block, kick, jump, parry, left. This routine went on for only minutes but already the Master was tiring. Some how during the battle they had reached outside and now were in the gardens. Usually the gardens were a place of relaxation and peace. Now it was a stage for a battle.

    Mace kicked the dark figure to the ground. It?s body jolted right back up from the attack but the attackers hood was now down and you could see it?s identity. The blank Blue/Grey eyes of just a boy still. A familiar boy. No it couldn?t be. It is impossible the child had died a few years back. Ghost weren?t real so it must be a ?clone?.
    He had known that face because it was his best friends dead padawan. They had all felt death. Probably almost every Jedi in the order felt it. Most had forgotten the face of Obi-Wan Kenobi but Mace wouldn?t and couldn?t.

    "What sick person created you. What person would shame the name of a fallen Jedi?"

    "Created? I was created to serve and to kill."

    "Now I know you must be a clone. Obi-Wan Kenobi."

    "Obi-Wan Kenobi?" The blankness is the boys eyes changed to confusion. The whole figures body relaxed. As if searching in his mind for something. oblivious to the out side world.

    Then all of a sudden it fell to it?s knees. Clutching his head in pure agony. Mace stared at the incident unraveling before his eyes. For some reason he couldn?t kill this "thing"

    Once again the figure movements changed. Standing to it?s feet and it?s blank expression was now replaced with a refection of hate. "My master told me about you Jedi. He told me how they killed out of no reason and they must be stopped. I shall kill you. Don?t forget that, but you are weak and are at the least of my concerns. Anyways this Ob-Wan you speak of I have never heard of. If he is a Jedi then I don?t want to know anything about him. He also warned me of you mind tricks. I won?t fall for the pictures you put in my head. You will die soon!"

    Mace didn?t know what hit him until his body was thrown against the wall like a unwanted rag doll. Who was this person and what did he mean by mind tricks. he is powerful and young. He will be trouble for the Jedi and his master. For some reason he couldn?t sense any darkness in him or light. As if no one occupied the figure as if he were a ghost.....
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    ///Kurai dragged the battered form through the temple until he reached the room he was looking for. the room the ancient ones used to destroy souls of there enemies. Kurai was now going to follow the ancient way of his ancestors.

    Staring at the boy, the boy that was once the Jedi?s hope, was now it?s nightmare. A nightmare he would create. All he had to do was destroy the soul of the boy and all will feel his death and he wouldn?t remember anything. Everything would work out perfect unless the little brat died. If so, oh well another Jedi destroyed in the hands of Kurai.

    It was time.

    Kurai closed his eyes focusing on the darkness. Slowly making his way through the boys mind he found the inner spot. A spot of pure light and peacefulness. Now all he had to do was destroy it. An explosion of dark energy raked the mind.

    Waves after waves of darkness swam through out the area. Destroying the bo
  6. Arwen-Jade_Kenobi Jedi Grand Master

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    I am LOVING THIS!!!!

    MORE!!!!!
  7. SilverWander Jedi Master

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    Oh lookie lookie what I've found another story to read. good posts

    Heak ive got so many storys im reading im having trobble not getting them all mixed up :) :D
  8. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    Hey great post Ganki!
    Ooh...dark Obi is kinda freaky....
  9. SilverWander Jedi Master

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  10. Ganki Force Ghost

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    Thank you all for your great replies. Also for kicking this thing up. I am sorry to say that writers block has set in! *NOOOOOOO!* but I will have a small post up by tomorow. Thanks again for the replies! Love ya for it :)
  11. SilverWander Jedi Master

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    ahhhhhhhhh Writers block is evil!!!!!!!!!

  12. Ganki Force Ghost

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    ?Kaisha? the name had been given to him by his master. He had no memory of his first life. He couldn?t even remember if he had lived before his master. All he knew was that Master Kurai was now his life and he would serve him in any way he thought of as fit.

    Obi-Wan Kenobi

    The man had called him that. the name felt so familiar and why did he see him self in his mind. He couldn?t understand what was happening to him. What were those false pictures in his mind. Were they his buried memory? No they couldn?t be, because his master told him that he had no memory of his past because he hadn?t had a past.

    How could he not of had a past. he asked him self the question so many times and came up with the same answer every time. ?because his master said he had never lived before and that meant he couldn?t have memories of is past because he didn?t have a life then.

    Shaking his head has if trying to rid his mind of its thoughts. He had more important thing to worry about instead of the pictures he saw in his head and about that obi-Wan. He had under estimated Mace Windu and he wouldn?t do it again. This time he would kill the master and not fail.

    The Jedi would fall and he would be the reason they do.
  13. SilverWander Jedi Master

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    Good post
    no no Obi wont be the reason the jedi fall he cant he cant!
  14. SilverWander Jedi Master

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  15. Arwen-Jade_Kenobi Jedi Grand Master

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  16. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    short....but really really good!
    poor obi!
  17. Ganki Force Ghost

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    I ahve good news! this will be my 96th post *yeah not important* but 100 is to me I think it is cool so I am going to doo my 99th a update to this fic and 100 will be for the prequel of this fic Seeking Light!

    Post will be up very very soon 10 minutes really!
  18. Ganki Force Ghost

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    Stupid parents didn't let me on at night so I couldn't post this! ui will be away for a few days but there will be a post by tuesday! Enjoy and reply! *post 99*
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    ///Blurriness was forming in his eye. He could just make out two figures walking towards him. Distant voices all around him and he could just feel the hands lifting him up. What was happening? He couldn?t feel anything. The world had gone numb. He once again fell into a void of blackness.

    ?He has lost a lot of blood.?

    ?Do you think he will make it.?

    ?He has to. We can?t loose two Jedi on the same mission.?

    ?So Obi-Wan is dead. I think every Jedi felt his death. I wonder what happened to kill a Jedi and do this to a master.?

    ?Let?s get out of here so we don?t end up like either of them.? he looked down at Qui-Gon. He hadn?t really ever known the Jedi pare but had heard of them. Only connection with the two was a simple hi in the hall or just hearing about them in temple gossip.

    Even if he wasn?t close to them, he had still felt Obi-Wan Kenobis death. Luckily the Jedi team was had just completed there mission and were flying by. Then the felt the death of some life for. It must have been a death of Jedi for him to be able to feel it in outer space. So both him and his partner decided to check it out.

    Guilt was built up in side of him now. If the team was just a fem minutes earlier they could of been able to save the padawan but they didn?t. Now all they could do was save the master.
    ?Felix? Felix come on we have to go. If we wait any longer we are going to loose Qui-Gon too. Felix??

    ?Sorry Trisha. I was just thinking.?

    ?Well stop it and help me with him.? she said. She too was thinking the same thoughts about what would have happened if they were a few minutes earlier. The couldn?t of known about the trouble that qui-Gon was in if they hadn?t of felt the death of the kid. At least they could save one of them.

    ?Let?s go Trisha.?

    Both figures walked as fast as the could while holding the injured Jedi. Only four days to the temple. That meant they would have to keep him alive for four days.///
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    //Failure is one step you must take on the road to success.//

  19. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    Great post Ganki!
    Can't wait for more
  20. Arwen-Jade_Kenobi Jedi Grand Master

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  21. SilverWander Jedi Master

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    good post.. :( wahhhhhhhh obi!
  22. SilverWander Jedi Master

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  23. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    I agree SilverWanderer

    Uppers! More soon Ganki?
  24. Ganki Force Ghost

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    EEP! Sorry forgot about this thing heehee. New post let's say sunday. Or saturday? Is that okay with you guys.

    Sorry again and thanks for the replies and kicking this thing UP!
  25. Ganki Force Ghost

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    WOW a post! I will be away for a little so please don't wory! Read and reply....


    ?Kaisha? the name had been given to him by his master. He had no memory of his first life. He couldn?t even remember if he had lived before his master. All he knew was that Master Kurai was now his life and he would serve him in any way he thought of as fit.

    Obi-Wan Kenobi

    The man had called him that. the name felt so familiar and why did he see him self in his mind. He couldn?t understand what was happening to him. What were those false pictures in his mind. Were they his buried memory? No they couldn?t be, because his master told him that he had no memory of his past because he hadn?t had a past.

    How could he not of had a past. he asked him self the question so many times and came up with the same answer every time. ?because his master said he had never lived before and that meant he couldn?t have memories of is past because he didn?t have a life then.

    Shaking his head has if trying to rid his mind of its thoughts. He had more important thing to worry about instead of the pictures he saw in his head and about that obi-Wan. He had under estimated Mace Windu and he wouldn?t do it again. This time he would kill the master and not fail.

    The Jedi would fall and he would be the reason they do.
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    //Failure is one step you must take on the road to success.//



    Sorry about the big delay but I had the Junior Olympic trials. Didn?t do to good but oh well I will make it this summer. Bad chapter I know but the next will be better I hope! Now onto questions!

    What is happening to Obi-Wan?

    Well his soul was destroyed and I get to get a new one for him *well sort of I hope*
    Oh and I am sorry about the delay again but I have FCAT next week and that will be my High School in type of test. Please wish me luck and I hope I well get the next chapter out by next week!



    Chapter 4


    Tears of Glass

    All padawans were in there rooms. They were only out if escorted by a Knight or a Master. Knights patrolled the hall while the council discussed everything in a safer unknown area. Any in coming flights had to checked and the passengers escorted off the aircraft.

    There had been a attack on the Temple. By what may be the first Sith in a millennium.

    The attack was suppose to be unknown to all Jedi except the council so of course everyone knew what had happened by the next morning.

    Mace Windu luckily was spared with a few cuts and a sprained ankle. Nothing a night of rest would not heal. He was spared he knew it. If that thing wouldn?t of had a mental relapse he would of been dead. The council and been discussing this attack for hours and know one could find the answers about why mace? Why not the whole council.

    The feverless meeting was interrupted from a small beeping of the com unit in the side of Master Yodas chair. It was Qui-Gon. Inside Mace wanted to run, he didn?t want to tell his friend the news. the news of Obi-Wans so called clone.

    ?I have heard on attack on the temple and Mace. Is this so??

    No one wanted to answer as if holding a secret. The silence was broken by Yoda ?An Attack there was.?

    ?By who my Master.?

    ?A boy filled of blackness and empty darkness.? Maces words echoed through out the chamber.

    ?A Sith??

    Qui-Gon could see there was something they did not want to tell him but he couldn?t figure out what.

    ?Yes it was a Sith. It was Obi-Wan Kenobi.?
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