Text Efect Test..

Hey this is just a quick text effect for the ending of my preview, well when I make it. Just Tell me what you think.

http://orangebayproductions.com/Episode1title.mov

 

Way to much... But, for what there is, its cool.. But, id tone it down.

 

I agree, there is too much going on at once, tone it down a bit.
Thrice

 

I liked it, but not very true to film.

 

I disagree, I don't think there is too much going on, but thats just an opinion like everyone else. Good Job.

 

I agree with superspy, I thought it was nice.

I see what everyone else is saying, but the "too much" factor can be easily fixed. I'd say the WAR STAR text needs to fade in quicker, don't let in linger all blurred for so long. The displacement warping on EPISODE I should coincide with the bright flash. It's like you have all the right elements, but they're a little too spread out right now; compact them into one effect and you've got something there.

gallion311

 

Alright, thanks. I did the extra stuff for fun just to get a feel for the effects. It was also my first time ever doing something like that. I think Ill redo it and make it a tad shorter and truer to the movie, but the films I am making are all making fun of star wars hence The Phantom Kitty.

 

I think it is really cool, but it needs focal point, I think that is why people are saying there is too much, great effect though, but focus in on what you want to emphasize.