Saga That Look You Give

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Taraum, Mar 10, 2006.

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  1. Taraum Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Jan 7, 2006
    star 3
    This is a poem that I wrote a while back. It's about Qui-Gon's point of view after the Council scene in TPM.

    There it is.
    That look again.
    Shock.
    Pain.

    I have seen that look
    Only once before.
    The first time
    I rejected you.

    All those years ago.
    That look.
    It has haunted me ever since.
    I had hoped I would never see it again.

    Yet there it is.
    I cannot wipe it off your face.
    Nothing can.
    Please, my child, do not give me that look.
  2. DaenaBenjen42 Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    May 15, 2005
    star 5
    Wonderful exploration of QUi-Gon's feelings. Very well done. =D=

    Good poem. :)
  3. DarthIshtar Chosen One

    Member Since:
    Mar 26, 2001
    star 9
    Great, great, great explanation and very incharacter.
  4. PadwanKayla Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Jul 2, 2005
    star 4
    Nice feel to this. I could hear his voice and his anguish at the pain.
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