the 7 sentence obi horror and torture story. (come on in and join.)

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  1. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    this is going to be so much fun! :) i'll start.

    note: this can not be a joking, funny or crazy story. Thank You.
    Ka-trillia is my character in a story i'm writing so please don't go overboard with her. thanks.
    one more thing La-Stella is Ka-Trillia's master.

    lets get started.
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    15 year old Obi-wan walked down the hall with his friends Ka-Trillia and Bant, they were heading to the gym to practice with their light sabers.

    "are we going to do the regular one on one or are we going to do three on one lightsaber fighting?" Ka-Trillia asked looking at Obi-Wan and Bant.

    "well i thi...." Bant was cut off when she tripped over an object on the floor and fell down.

    "are you all right Bant?" Obi-Wan asked as he helped her up.

    "i'm fine." she looked down at the floor looking for what tripped her.

    "whats this?" Ka-trilia asked as she picked up a weird looking object off the floor.

    It was 10 inches thick, and 12 inches long.



  2. Erin-Starlight Jedi Knight

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    Okay, I'll give this a try.
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    Obi-Wan studied the strange objects' form intenstly.

    "It looks mechical in origin...but I've never seen anything like this before."

    Ka-Trillia nodded, while Bant bent down to get a closer look.

    "Whatever it is, it was hidden pretty well under this sheet." She noted.

    Ka-Trillia reached out to touch the unfamiliar object.

    "Hey--what are you doing ?!" Obi-Wan hollered.

    "Lesson number one in common sense is never touch unknown alien items ! "

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    Hope that's not to bad.
  3. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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  4. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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  5. Erin-Starlight Jedi Knight

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    Can you give a little more infro on Ka-Trillia ?
  6. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    sure, Ka-trillia has long brown, curly hair with a tint of red, piercing green eyes, her lightsaber color is sea green, she is 15 years old. her best friends are Obi-wan and Bant. both her and her master seem to attract danger on every mission. she has a twin brother at the temple (he won't be mentioned in the story.) her master and obi-wan's master are best friends. she has a secret crush on obi-wan. she formalates plans easily but part of them end in her getting caught.
    she is good at keeping calm but gets impatient after some time. she makes friends easily and handles a lightsaber with ease. she may rush into things at times and will put sme one's safety before her own.

    ok, i think thats about all you need to know. if you want some more information don't hesitate to ask me.
  7. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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  8. Erin-Starlight Jedi Knight

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    Thanks,that helps. If it's okay I'll add a bit more.
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    Ka-Trillia bit her lip back to keep a sigh from escaping her throat.

    She felt compelled to take this strnge form before them and inspect it closer.

    "Maybe it's--" Bant was cut off by a low hiss that came from the ebony colored item.

    "I'm getting a bad feeling about this..."

    If Ka-Trillia was not as shocked as the rest of them she would of rolled her eyes.

    Obi-Wan always had a bad feeling.

    Of course he was always right, this time was no exception.
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    Hope it's okay that I added some more. I like this 7 sentence format of yours.
  9. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    thanks. :)
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    The hissing grew louder and a dark red mist surounded them.

    "uggg, it smells horrible." Bant said as she waved her and to try and keep the smell away.

    screams were heard all around them, but they saw no one.

    "this is not good!" Ka-Trillia commented as she felt the ground become soft.

    Obi-Wan sent a mental call to his master just when a chilling wind brushed pass them.

    the smell became unbearable and all three collasped on the ground.

    A hooded face appeared above them and laughed an evil laugh and dissapeared.

  10. Erin-Starlight Jedi Knight

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    Cool ! I like it.
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    Even though it would only bring trouble, the hooded man could not hold back his laughter.

    His plan had worked with such ease he had even surpised himself with his cleverness.

    Before were three Padawans, two girls...and a boy.

    Obi-Wan Kenobi, the boy he had been keeping an eye on since his very birth.

    Now was his chance to take the boy away from the Jedi.

    As he picked up the boy, a loud commanding voice echoed through the hallway.

    Soon the Padawans' Master would be in the training room...
  11. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    He quickly picked up Obi-Wan and slung him over his shoulder.

    Ka-Trillia slowly opened her eyes and saw a glimpse of a hooded man with Obi-Wan slung over his shoulder heading to an opening cut into the wall by a lightsaber.

    She quickly stood up and chased after him.

    The hooded man jumped onto the ramp of his ship waiting for him and headed to the cockpit.

    Ka-Trillia got in just as the ramp closed, she cloaked herself with the force and found a hiding place.

    The hooded man set the coordinates and brought the shimp into hyperspace.

    He grinned evilly as the ship entered hyperspace, he then dragged Obi-Wan into a room that was converted into a cell that can hold a jedi.
  12. Erin-Starlight Jedi Knight

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    You posted !
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    Obi-Wan groaned as the hooded man left him in his cell.

    He had been to close when the gas had sprayed out, so it dazed him a bit more than Ka-Trillia.

    Still he could make out the hissing voice of another.

    "Soon your training will begin young one."

    Ice cold hands stoke his cheek making him flinch as a shiver went down his spine.

    The man laughed as he left the boy alone in his cell.

    Ka-Trillia repressed the urge to smack the man for even touching Obi-Wan.
  13. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    Qui-Gon and La-Stella ran into the training room and found Bant on the floor unconcious.

    "Something happened here." La-Stella said as she went over to Bant and checked for any sighns of injury.

    Qui-Gon searched for his pawdawan through the force but Obi-wan's prensence seemed to have dissaperd.

    "Qui-Gon look at this." she picked up a weird looking object from off the floor near Bant.

    Qui-Gon took it and examined it.

    "we must alert the council and find are pawdawans. You take Bant to the healers and see what she can tell us while i go talk to the council, meet me there." Qui-Gon said hurridly and he rushed out of the training room.

    La-Stella picked up Bant and headed to the healers.
  14. Erin-Starlight Jedi Knight

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    La-Stella helped Bant to the healers ward.

    The master was worried that could not sense her padawan through the force.

    What had happened to her Ka-Trillia and young Obi-Wan.

    Almost on cue the girl, Bant, began to moarn.

    "Leave...Obi alone..."

    Master La-Stella ears perked up at this, but the medical droids pulled the girl away.

    La-Stella made a vow to save the padawans as she made her way to the councils' chambers.
  15. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    Qui-Gon stood before the council and waited patiently for their response.

    Mace had the object in his hand and was examining it.

    (this object is a keisor.) Mace talked to Yoda through the force.

    (Rare it is.) Yoda responded.

    (the components to make one come from the planet, Detra.) Adi-Gallia said as she entered the conversation.

    (the Detreans are the only one's we know that use this device.) Mace responded.

    Just then La-Stella entered the Council chamber's.


  16. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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  17. Ganki Force Ghost

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    This looks cool. I think I may join once this writers block *bangs head on keyboard* goes away! Hope there will be more soon. I'll just read along for now until I see a spot open for me to jump in on!

    UP!
  18. IAmTheDarkSide Jedi Master

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    La-Stella composed herself, exchanged a glance with Qui-Gon, and addressed the Council: "Qui-Gon and I request permission to go after our Padawans."

    "A strange request this is," said Yoda, "since Qui-Gon can feel not his Padawan learner through the Force."

    "Are we to assume then that you still have some connection to Ka-trillia?" asked Mace Windu.

    "Yes, I can feel her -- vaguely; she's scared, hiding. We must go after her quickly."

    "Then no more time, you must spend here. Our permission you have to go on this quest."
  19. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    Ka-trillia calmed herself with the force and began to think of a plan.

    she quietly crept to where Obi-wan was.

    "Obi-wan? can you here me?" she asked.

    "Ka-trillia!? what? how?." he said as he tried to sort everything out.

    "questions later, right now we need to get out of here." she replied as she fiddled with the lock.

    just as she was about to unlock it however she heard footsteps coming toward them.

    she stopped working on the lock and ignited her lightsaber.
  20. Enigma_Jade Jedi Knight

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    I like it! I might have to join this later, try my hand at an obi fic. ;) I figure I can't possibly mess up 7 sentences, huh? [face_laugh]

    I really like what everyone's written so far. Great job, guys, and MORE!

    EJ
  21. Artemis_Silverbow Jedi Master

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    I saw this and couldn't resist :) I hope you like it.




    "Are you crazy?" Obi-Wan hissed. "Hide, before he sees you!"

    Ka-trillia stepped forward and brought her lightsaber down on the lock, intending to slice the mechanism cleanly in half. But the glowing blade rebounded from the metal, sending a painful jolt up her arm.

    She looked down at the barely scratched lock, then back at Obi-Wan. "I think we're in trouble."
  22. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    great posts everyone. UP! :)
  23. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    Ka-Trillia looked around and saw a door, opposite of where the foot steps were coming from.

    "i'll be back." she said as she ran to the door and entered.

    Ka-Trillia entered a small dark passage way and found a huge room.

    she quietly snuck in and quickly hid behind some boxes when she heard voices.

    "is the machine ready?"
    "not yet." he said as he tinkered with the huge machine.
    "the boss wants it quickly, no delay."

  24. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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  25. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    *looks around.* UP! this thread must stay up!!!!!
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