Beyond The Age of Heroes (post-NJO AU: Anakin, Jaina, Jacen, L/M, H/L, Tahiri, Kyp,Jag) Sequel 2/2/07!

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  1. YodaKenobi VIP

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    Title: Legacy of the Sith (book 1): The Age of Heroes
    Author: YodaKenobi
    Timeframe: Post NJO
    Characters: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, Tahiri, H/L, L/M, Kyp, Jag,everyone else who's ever been seen, spoken, or mentioned in a SW story
    Genre: Adventure, mystery
    Keywords: Cinnamon
    Summary: Three years after "The Living Force" , the galaxy and the Solo family are faced with a new threat.
    Notes:


    This is a continuation of the storyline from Revolution, The Eighth Cortex, and The Living Force . As well as the "teaser epic" Empire of the Hand. You don't need to have read them to understand this story, just know that they replace "The Final Prophecy" and "The Unifying Force" in the NJO storyline, giving the series a different ending.

    This story takes place three years after The Living Force , approximately 32 ABY, known as the beginning of the "Raithian Wars." A period that has long been ignored. It tells the story of the rise of the Raithians, and the Jedi from the Skywalker bloodline who became "Darth Hâvok."

    This is the first of a four story series called Legacy of the Sith.

    Thanks to the readers of The Living Force and Empire of the Hand for their encouragment :)


    [image=http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y165/YodaKenobi/TheAgeofHeroes.jpg]

    *coverart by Maggy*

    Dramatis Personae


    Ackbar; retired admiral (male Mon Calamari)
    Aero Gin; bounty hunter (female, species unknown)
    Alema Rar; Jedi Kight (female Twi'lek)
    Anakin Solo; Jedi Knight (male Human)
    Ayddar Nylykerka; intelligence director (male Tammarian)
    Baliss Phlora; tulan farmer (female Human)
    Ben Skywalker; child (Male Human)
    Booster Terrik; captain, Errant Venture (male Human)
    Brosh; commander of Thrawn's household phalanx (male Chiss)
    C-3PO; protocol droid
    Cakhmain; Leia's bodygaurd (male Noghri)
    Cal Omas; Chief of State (male Human)
    Callista Ming; former Jedi Knight (female Human)
    Cenn Stellwart; GFI security officer (male Human)
    Cilghal; Jedi Master (female Mon Calamari)
    Cordoba; crimelord (male Hutt)
    Danni Quee; scientist (female Human)
    Darak; assistant to the Magister (female Ferroan)
    Dorrin Kogg; senate speaker (male Sermarian)
    Evlyn Tabory; agent to the Chief Syndic (female Human)
    Faybol; unknown (male, unknown species)
    Fyor Rodan; senator (male Human)
    Garm Bel Iblis; general (male Human)
    Gavin Darklighter; General (male Human)
    Gilad Pellaeon; Grand Admiral (male Human)
    Goresh Tenziesh; Commander (male Vagaari)
    Han Solo; captain, Millennium Falcon (male Human)
    Isolder; Hapan Prince (male Human)
    Jacen Solo; Jedi Knight (male Human)
    Jagged Fel; commander, Vanguard Squadron (male Human)
    Jaina Solo; Jedi Knight (female Human)
    Jysella Horn; Jedi Apprentice (female Human)
    Kenth Hamner; Jedi Master (male Human)
    Kol Rénin; general, Raithian army (male Human)
    Kyle Katarn; Jedi Master (male Human)
    Kyp Durron; Jedi Master (male Human)
    Kyrn (Shawnk'yr'nuruodo); Colonel, Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet (female Chiss)
    Lando Calrissian; senator, Independant Traders Union (male Human)
    Leia Organa Solo; Jedi Knight (female Human)
    Lorra Klorne; commander (female Human)
    Lowbacca; Jedi Knight (male Wookiee)
    Luke Skywalker; Jedi Master (male Human)
    Mara Jade Skywalker; Jedi Master (female Human)
    Meewalh; Leia's bodyguard (Female Noghri)
    Mirax Horn; art dealer (female Human)
    Mulla Habbas; senator (male Human)
    Neget; smuggler (
  2. YodaKenobi VIP

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    Prologue: The Day the End Began

    In the ethereal glow of the space around the planet Denon, a great nebula shaped like an hourglass can be seen against the endless backdrop of darkness and shining beacons that give life, while maddening swirls of orange and red hues embrace the stars coalesced inside.

    At the waist of the nebula, in a haze of green gases, lies an eye. One thick white oval encasing the most startling blue. It is human in appearance with a small black pupil, like a woman staring frozen at a brilliant light, her shock evident in the tiny white star in the edge of the iris.

    It is the Eye of the Galaxy.

    Situated in the Inner Rim, its gaze stretches to corners of the galaxy not imagined by the thousands of sentient creatures inhabiting its vastness. If the Eye could see, this is what it would watch on the day the end began.

    It would focus on a single ship that appeared out of nowhere, as if the galaxy itself had simply willed it to be born.

    The ship is alien.

    It has never been inside the borders of the Galactic Federation of Free Alliances before.

    The government's highest-ranking intelligence officials have never seen anything like it, though others have been there and gone unnoticed.

    Black hulled with a long sharp nose, of which a considerable bulk is hooked beneath, the two eye-like viewports of its cockpit are atop it closer to its ion drives than its tip, two stubby wings on either side? the ship is stealth. It is seen only because it wishes to be seen? by the Eye and all.

    Intricate circuitry is fused into the thick hull plating, so complex, the galaxy's brightest technicians and scientific minds could study it for half a decade and not grasp it entirely. Even when it exposes itself, on a direct course for the glowing industrialized planet nearby, Denon's sensors have difficulty picking it up at all.

    Inside the alien craft is a lone passenger.

    Her name is Callista.

    What she carries with her is nothing short of the end of the Galaxy.

    The end of the Galactic Alliance.

    Echoing threat alarms and warnings bring a swarm of security ships from the planet's surface when the vessel is spotted. Inside one of these white-plated security ships, encased in a transparisteel canopy trimmed in the same burgundy as its wings, is another woman.

    Her name is Mara.

    Mara Jade Skywalker is as happy as she's ever been. Three years after the end of the Yuuzhan Vong conflict, she is healthy and married to a man who adores her, raising their five-year-old son, Ben, together in the relative peace of the galaxy's temporary capital. She is thinking only about how she would rather be flying the Jade Shadow or her new starfighter instead of the slower snubfighter issued to the planet's security force.

    She has no idea that her life is about to be ruined.

    As a special agent working for the GFI, Mara's experience and status as a Jedi Master leave her at the head of the pack. The alien craft has not responded to the numerous panicked hails from the communications stations on Denon's surface. It does not have a HoloNet transceiver, nor has it ever had a use for one until now.

    Before Mara sends a short range burst transmission from her fighter warning its pilot that it will be shot down if it continues towards the planet without responding and identifying itself, she reaches out with the Force, the great life-energy that surrounds, fills, and binds the universe together.

    She reaches for the ship.

    That's when she realizes.

    Inside the Watchkeeper Nebula, the Eye of the Galaxy watches all.
  3. thesporkbewithyou Jedi Master

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    Eek, it's here! *dances around and snags first reply*


    Dramatis Personae


    Ackbar; retired admiral (male Mon Calamari)
    Aero Gin; bounty hunter (female, species unknown)
    Alema Rar; Jedi Kight (female Twi'lek)
    Anakin Solo; Jedi Knight (male Human)
    Ayddar Nylykerka; intelligence director (male Tammarian)
    Baliss Phlora; tulan farmer (female Human)
    Ben Skywalker; child (Male Human)
    Booster Terrik; captain, Errant Venture (male Human)
    Brosh; commander of Thrawn's household phalanx (male Chiss)
    C-3PO; protocol droid
    Cakhmain; Leia's bodygaurd (male Noghri)
    Cal Omas; Chief of State (male Human)
    Callista Ming; former Jedi Knight (female Human)
    Cenn Stellwart; GFI security officer (male Human)
    Cilghal; Jedi Master (female Mon Calamari)
    Cordoba; crimelord (male Hutt)
    Danni Quee; scientist (female Human)
    Darak; assistant to the Magister (female Ferroan)
    Dorrin Kogg; senate speaker (male Sermarian)
    Evlyn Tabory; agent to the Chief Syndic (female Human)
    Faybol; unknown (male, unknown species)
    Fyor Rodan; senator (male Human)
    Garm Bel Iblis; general (male Human)
    Gavin Darklighter; General (male Human)
    Gilad Pellaeon; Grand Admiral (male Human)
    Goresh Tenziesh; Commander (male Vagaari)
    Han Solo; captain, Millennium Falcon (male Human)
    Isolder; Hapan Prince (male Human)
    Jacen Solo; Jedi Knight (male Human)
    Jagged Fel; commander, Vanguard Squadron (male Human)
    Jaina Solo; Jedi Knight (female Human)
    Jysella Horn; Jedi Apprentice (female Human)
    Kenth Hamner; Jedi Master (male Human)
    Kol Rénin; general, Raithian army (male Human)
    Kyle Katarn; Jedi Master (male Human)
    Kyp Durron; Jedi Master (male Human)
    Kyrn (Shawnk'yr'nuruodo); Colonel, Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet (female Chiss)
    Lando Calrissian; senator, Independant Traders Union (male Human)
    Leia Organa Solo; Jedi Knight (female Human)
    Lorra Kloren; commander (female Human)
    Lowbacca; Jedi Knight (male Wookiee)
    Luke Skywalker; Jedi Master (male Human)
    Mara Jade Skywalker; Jedi Master (female Human)
    Meewalh; Leia's bodyguard (Female Noghri)
    Mirax Horn; art dealer (female Human)
    Mulla Habbas; senator (male Human)
    Neget; smuggler (male Rodian)
    Nen Yim; Master Shaper (female Yuuzhan Vong)
    Oaxley; Lieutenant, CEDF (male Chiss)
    R2-D2; astromech droid
    Releqy A'kla; Minister of State (female Camassi)
    Rivult Vyler; warlord (male Human)
    Romesk; Krillaire crewman (male Vagaari)
    Rowel; Assistant to the Magister (male Ferroan)
    Raynar Thul; Jedi Knight (male Human)
    Saba Sebatyne; Jedi Master (female Barabel)
    Shada D'ukal; Talon Karrde's buisness assossiate (female Human)
    Sien Sovv; Supreme Commander (male Sullestan)
    Soontir Fel; Chief Syndic Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet (Male Human)
    Strift Zonn; smuggler (female Human)
    Ta'a Chume; former Queen Mother (female Human)
    Ta'lam Ranth; senator (female Gotal)
    Tahiri Veila; Jedi Knight (female Human)
    Talon Karrde; independant information broker (Male Human)
    Tenel Ka Djo; Queen Mother of the Hapes Consortium, Jedi Knight (female Human)
    Tesar Sebatyne; Jedi Knight (male Barabel)
    Traest Kre'fey; admiral (male Bonthan)
    Tresina Lobi; Jedi Master (female Chev)
    Triebakk; senator (male Wookiee)
    Uhla; shaper (female Yuuzhan Vong)
    Valin Horn; Jedi Apprentice (male Human)
    Vollum; captain, Krillaire (male Vagaari)
    Voss Parck; former Imperial Captain (male Human)
    Wedge Antilles; retired general (male Human)
    Wrev Caster; Jedi Knight (male Human)


    Wow...quite a Dramatis. But who's surprised? :D Can't wait to see what happens with Strift and Neget.

    At the waist of the nebula, in a haze of green gases, lies an eye. One thick white oval encasing the most startling blue. It is human in appearance with a small black pupil, like a woman staring frozen at a brilliant light, her shock evident in the tiny white star in the edge of the iris.

    Lovely description here. I got the chills reading it.

    Inside the alien craft is a lone passenger.

    Her name is Callista.

    What she carries with
  4. Thrawn McEwok Co-Author: Essential Guide to Warfare

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    YK: :eek: :D :cool: :D [face_dancing] :D :D!!!

    Woo-hoo!!

    Title: Legacy of the Sith (book 1): The Age of Heroes
    Author: YodaKenobi
    Timeframe: Post NJO
    Characters: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, Tahiri, H/L, L/M, Kyp, Jag,everyone else whos ever been seen, spoken, or mentioned in a SW story
    Genre: Adventure, mystery


    *grins* That sounds fun. And an interesting order of characters! :p

    Keywords: Cinnamon

    o_O [face_thinking] :p [face_laugh] :D ... [face_mischief]? :)

    Summary: Three years after "The Living Force" , the galaxy and the Solo family are faced with a new threat.
    Notes:


    This is a continuation of the storyline from Revolution, The Eighth Cortex, and The Living Force . As well as the "teaser epic" Empire of the Hand You don't need to have read them to understand this story, just know that they replace "The Final Prophecy" and "The Unifying Force" in the NJO storyline, giving the series a different ending.

    This story takes place three years after The Living Force , approximately 32 ABY, known as the beginning of the "Raithian Wars." A period that has long been ignored. It tells the story of the rise of the Raithians, and the Jedi from the Skywalker bloodline who became "Darth Hâvok."

    This is the first of a four story series called Legacy of the Sith.


    :D *grins hugely*

    I'm looking forward to this!

    Ackbar; retired admiral (male Mon Calamari)

    Alive and flipping? :p

    Aero Gin; bounty hunter (female, species unknown)

    Ohh? :D

    Alema Rar; Jedi Kight (female Twi'lek)
    Anakin Solo; Jedi Knight (male Human)


    Heh. Great! :D

    Ayddar Nylykerka; intelligence director (male Tammarian)
    Baliss Phlora; tulan farmer (female Human)


    Interesting, and random... :)

    Ben Skywalker; child (Male Human)
    Booster Terrik; captain, Errant Venture (male Human)
    Brosh; commander of Thrawn's household phalanx (male Chiss)
    C-3PO; protocol droid
    Cakhmain; Leia's bodygaurd (male Noghri)
    Cal Omas; Chief of State (male Human)
    Callista Ming; former Jedi Knight (female Human)


    Can I just say that that run of characters makes an interesting and unique combination?

    Cenn Stellwart; GFI security officer (male Human)
    Cilghal; Jedi Master (female Mon Calamari)


    "Old friends you will see..."? :)

    Cordoba; crimelord (male Hutt)

    Great name!! I'd like to steal it (and hey, he is a Hutt!!)

    Danni Quee; scientist (female Human)
    Darak; assistant to the Magister (female Ferroan)


    But no Jabitha? [face_thinking]

    Dorrin Kogg; senate speaker (male Sermarian)

    Have we seen Sermarians before?

    Evlyn Tabory; agent to the Chief Syndic (female Human)

    :D :D :D w00t!! :cool:

    Faybol; unknown (male, unknown species)

    Heh.

    Fyor Rodan; senator (male Human)
    Garm Bel Iblis; general (male Human)
    Gavin Darklighter; General (male Human)
    Gilad Pellaeon; Grand Admiral (male Human)


    Together? That could be... interesting? :p

    Goresh Tenziesh; Commander (male Vagaari)
    Han Solo; captain, Millennium Falcon (male Human)
    Isolder; Hapan Prince (male Human)
    Jacen Solo; Jedi Knight (male Human)
    Jagged Fel; commander, Vanguard Squadron (male Human)
    Jaina Solo; Jedi Knight (female Human)
    Jysella Horn; Jedi Apprentice (female Human)
    Kenth Hamner; Jedi Master (male Human)
    Kol Rénin; general, Raithian army (male Human)
    Kyle Katarn; Jedi Master (male Human)
    Kyp Durron; Jedi Master (male Human)
    Kyrn (Shawnk'yr'nuruodo); Colonel, Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet (female Chiss)
    Lando Calrissian; senator, Independant
  5. jagsredlady Jedi Master

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    *reserves space* :D

    edit: late review :p

    Characters: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, Tahiri, H/L, L/M, Kyp, Jag,everyone else whos ever been seen, spoken, or mentioned in a SW story

    From the Dramatis Personae, it looks like you?ve got that covered. :p

    Genre: Adventure, mystery

    Perfect [face_love]

    Keywords: Cinnamon

    :confused: [face_buns] :p

    This is the first of a four story series called Legacy of the Sith.

    Very cool title. :D

    "You soft complacent female. You think that because you lounge around your quiet worlds behind a ring of warships that the rest of the galaxy is a safe place to live? There are a hundred different threats that would freeze your blood if you knew about them"? Stent, Visions of the Future, page 429 (paperback)

    "You do realize the Jedi will have to pay for this political involvement."? Vergere, Destiny's Way, page 248
    .


    I?ve read these two quotes over and over, trying to figure out how they relate to the story, of course I?m not getting anything yet. :p But it adds to the mystery so it?s cool. :cool:

    For jagsredlady and Thrawn McEwok, whose continued assistance, inspiration, and encouragement throughout the writing process have been more helpful than I can tell either.

    :eek: *speechless and humbled* [face_blush] Thank you! [:D]

    In the ethereal glow of the space around the planet Denon, a great nebula shaped like an hourglass can be seen against the endless backdrop of darkness and shining beacons that give life, while maddening swirls of orange and red hues embrace the stars coalesced inside.

    At the waist of the nebula, in a haze of green gases, lies an eye. One thick white oval encasing the most startling blue. It is human in appearance with a small black pupil, like a woman staring frozen at a brilliant light, her shock evident in the tiny white star in the edge of the iris.

    It is the Eye of the Galaxy.


    The picture of the Hourglass Nebula with the ?eye? at its center is so chillingly perfect for this fic. I get goosebumps everytime I look at it. [face_hypnotized] Beautifully written and sets the mood for the mystery and the adventure to come.

    Inside the Watchkeeper Nebula, the Eye of the Galaxy watches all.

    *shivers* And so the adventure and mystery begins?

    I can hardly wait for more! :D


  6. Maggy Force Ghost

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    *also reserves space*





    Title: Legacy of the Sith (book 1): The Age of Heroes
    Author: YodaKenobi
    Timeframe: Post NJO
    Characters: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, Tahiri, H/L, L/M, Kyp, Jag, everyone else who?s ever been seen, spoken, or mentioned in a SW story


    it wouldn?t be you otherwise :p

    Genre: Adventure, mystery
    Keywords: Cinnamon


    :eek: Cinnamon? What the heck did I miss? :confused:

    Summary: Three years after "The Living Force" , the galaxy and the Solo family are faced with a new threat.
    Notes: [/b]

    This is a continuation of the storyline from Revolution, The Eighth Cortex, and The Living Force . As well as the "teaser epic" Empire of the Hand You don't need to have read them to understand this story, just know that they replace "The Final Prophecy" and "The Unifying Force" in the NJO storyline, giving the series a different ending.

    *mutters* and there he tells me you don?t need to read those :p [:D]

    This story takes place three years after The Living Force , approximately 32 ABY, known as the beginning of the "Raithian Wars." A period that has long been ignored. It tells the story of the rise of the Raithians, and the Jedi from the Skywalker bloodline who became "Darth Hâvok."

    o_O [face_thinking] [face_thinking] [face_idea] [face_mischief] o_O

    This is the first of a four story series called Legacy of the Sith.

    There you have something big planned :D yay :D


    [face_mischief] nice pic :p



    Dramatis Personae


    Ackbar; retired admiral (male Mon Calamari)


    that means he didn?t die like in the NJOs ... cool :D

    Aero Gin; bounty hunter (female, species unknown)
    Alema Rar; Jedi Kight (female Twi'lek)


    is she still wrapped around Wrev? ;)

    Anakin Solo; Jedi Knight (male Human)
    Ayddar Nylykerka; intelligence director (male Tammarian)
    Baliss Phlora; tulan farmer (female Human)
    Ben Skywalker; child (Male Human)
    Booster Terrik; captain,
    Errant Venture (male Human)
    Brosh; commander of Thrawn's household phalanx (male Chiss)
    C-3PO; protocol droid
    Cakhmain; Leia's bodygaurd (male Noghri)
    Cal Omas; Chief of State (male Human)
    Callista Ming; former Jedi Knight (female Human)


    still running her Potentum thingy?

    Cenn Stellwart; GFI security officer (male Human)
    Cilghal; Jedi Master (female Mon Calamari)
    Cordoba; crimelord (male Hutt)


    nice name for a Hutt *grins*

    Danni Quee; scientist (female Human)
    Darak; assistant to the Magister (female Ferroan)
    Dorrin Kogg; senate speaker (male Sermarian)
    Evlyn Tabory; agent to the Chief Syndic (female Human)
    Faybol; unknown (male, unknown species)
    Fyor Rodan; senator (male Human)
    Garm Bel Iblis; general (male Human)
    Gavin Darklighter; General (male Human)


    yay :D

    Gilad Pellaeon; Grand Admiral (male Human)
    Goresh Tenziesh; Commander (male Vagaari)
    Han Solo; captain,
    Millennium Falcon (male Human)
    Isolder; Hapan Prince (male Human)
    Jacen Solo; Jedi Knight (male Human)
    Jagged Fel; commander, Vanguard Squadron (male Human)
    Jaina Solo; Jedi Knight (female Human)
    Jysella Horn; Jedi Apprentice (female Human)
    Kenth Hamner; Jedi Master (male Human)
    Kol Rénin; general, Raithian army (male Human)
    Kyle Katarn; Jedi Master (male Human)
    Kyp Durron; Jedi Master (male Human)
    Kyrn (Shawnk'yr'nuruodo); Colonel, Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet (female Chiss)
    Lando Calrissian; senator, Independant Traders Union (male Human)


    :eek: senator?

    Leia Organa So
  7. Jedi_Jaina_Durron Jedi Grand Master

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    *does a little dance* [face_dancing][face_dancing][face_dancing]

    Though I haven't read the prequels to this (though I have been meaning to do so and will someday, I swear :D), this grabbed me right from the get-go. Very Stover-esque writing, without being any sort of ripoff. I like how you began this with a plot twist. I was sitting like this: :eek: by the end. [face_laugh]

    Dramatis Personae: :eek: Now that's what I'm talking about! :D I'm working on something that will probably never see the light of day, and I thought it was going to be unmanagable with almost 40 characters. I look forward to seeing you juggle your 75. :p Though if anyone has that kind of dexterity, I'm sure it's you. :)

    I'm addicted already. ;)

    Great beginning.

    Is it too soon to ask for more?

    [EDIT] Oh, and I like the name. :D

    And that Kyp is ahead of Jag in the thread title. :p Just kidding.

    And the quotes at the beginning. Chilling foreshadowing.
  8. flowerbee Jedi Grand Master

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    Whee. [face_dancing] Looks like it will be most interesting. The extensive character list frightened me until I remembered who was writing this. :p

    In the ethereal glow of the space around the planet Denon, a great nebula shaped like an hourglass can be seen against the endless backdrop of darkness and shining beacons that give life, while maddening swirls of orange and red hues embrace the stars coalesced inside.

    You have a gift with words, you know that? Makes it a lot of fun to read. :D
  9. Yodas-evil-twin Jedi Grand Master

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    I'm in.

    Very intruiging start.
  10. oldjedinurse Jedi Master

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    Yay!!! [face_dancing]

    What a D.P. - can't wait to see how you handle all those characters!!

    Lovely imagery in the "eye".

    Callista vs Mara? *rubs hands together* Oooh, goody!

    *Waitin' for more!*

    oldj
  11. TKeira_Lea Jedi Grand Master

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    Oct 10, 2002
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    Keyword cinnamon?

    Is there some inside joke I don't know :confused:

    So I'm jumping in here. Going to follow the awesomeness from the very beginning (much easier than catching up)

    You're writing is masterful; especialy powerful for a prologue. It makes me want to read more.

    Inside the Watchkeeper Nebula, the Eye of the Galaxy watches all.

    Fabulous ending to the beginning =D=


  12. RebelMom Jedi Grand Master

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    Apr 20, 2000
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    Oh my, that is quite the list of characters. I'm impressed. I'm looking forward to this too. I'm a little concerned here - you are going to ruin Mara's life? [face_worried]

    Keyword Cinnamon? :confused:

    do you have a posting schedule?
  13. MirandaFair Force Ghost

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    Jun 13, 2005
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    Hello!

    I'm so happy to be here at the start of one of your fics. I've been reading and trying to catch up on Empire of the Hand. I promise, one of these days, I'll get there. ;)

    I'm blown away by the DP. Looking forward to all the goodies you've got planned.

    What an opener! Mara vs. the Body Snatcher. Exciting..and patiently awaiting more.

    If you send out PMs, I'd love to be included. [:D]
  14. _Jedi_of_Destiny_ Jedi Master

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    *delurks*


    :eek:


    ......[face_dancing]


    [:D]




    W00T!!! :D I can't believe it's finally here! :D This fic sounds so fun! I like the title too. And what a cast of characters! How will you keep track of them all?!? :-B Now I have the "Battle of Heroes" song stuck in my head. *grumbles* :p

    A very interesting beginning. I had wondered where Callista got off to. Nice to see she's up to some mischief. [face_worried]

    I can't wait to see where you go with this!

    A very good start! :)

    *lurks*
  15. Stormtrooper_TK-421 Jedi Master

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    Nov 29, 2004
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    Count me in on this one, it looks like it's going to be good. :cool: Can't wait to see where this all goes. :)

    ---TK
  16. Briman Jedi Master

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    Oct 8, 2004
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    Very happy to see this starting [face_dancing]

    The trailer promises some great events.

    The Eye of the Galaxy, very interesting [face_thinking]

    And even more interesting to see Callista again, as well as this alien ship. Mara must tread carefully, I thinks.

    Good prologue.
  17. Darth_Lex Force Ghost

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    Nov 17, 2002
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    Hey there, YK! :D

    Yeah, so I'm hopelessly behind in my grand plan :p to catch up on your prior fics. :( But seeing you start this new series sounded like a good time to leap right in. ;) And who knows, if I'm hooked I'll probably read the others faster. :p

    Very impressive character list. :eek: I guess this isn't going to be a short story? [face_laugh]

    Great prologue. The whole nebula bit was cool - plus it left me wondering exactly what meaning I was supposed to take from the imagery. I like that. :cool:

    Hmm. Callista... [face_thinking]

    Can't wait to see where things go from here. :D
  18. crackjacks Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    Jun 19, 2005
    star 2
    Dude this is awesome.
    Humm...Callista ay?....this could get very interesting....

    Can't wait for more--kt
  19. Pelranius Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Apr 25, 2003
    star 5
    This is unexpectedly.... delicious.

    Reserve a space, I shall.

    I think I'll go post a trailer up on the Lost Hero, incidentally.
  20. Jags_Scoundrel Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Nov 12, 2003
    star 4
    It's here!! [face_dancing] :D :D

    Wow.

    What an incredible start!

    [face_hypnotized]

    Must. Have. More.
  21. poku_29 Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Oct 19, 2005
    star 1

    This is so GREAT yodakenobi. Sometime ago I finished reading all your previous alternative NJO fic and just loved them. They were so goooooooddd. So much better than the original NJO.
    So anyway I was really getting bored few days ago and wondered off to your Living Force thread for some reason ( The FORCE [face_thinking] ) and there it was my salvation, your announcement! You were about to publish a new fic again. I am so thrilled. If it is even half as good as the previous one (and you will keep developind Anakin/Tahiri thing) you have single handedly kept me as a Star wars fan for yet another year ( I hate NJO and DN so MUCH, that I am afraid that they will somehow ruin the LOTF also). I only hope that delrey would make as good job as some people here on the forums.


    Yodakenobi, I salute you =D=
  22. SilSolo Jedi Grand Master

    Member Since:
    Mar 5, 2004
    star 5
    YAY you posted this at last! Another yay for TC and TK! BTW, can you PM me when you update? Thanks.
  23. FORCEBlLADE Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Mar 2, 2003
    star 3
    Alright, good start. You stick to a third person speak and set a good tone for this. Great job!
  24. Chimpo_the_Sith Jedi Grand Master

    Member Since:
    Mar 15, 2003
    star 5
    That's one BIG Dramatis Personae there :eek:

    [This is a place where I will reply in the near future]
  25. Tahi Jedi Grand Master

    Member Since:
    Jun 8, 2002
    star 5
    Yay! We're off again. Woopee.

    Great beginning sequence and beautiful language. I'm going to have to hide on a desert island so I can read uninterrupted and get TLF finished - or maybe I'll just keep fighting the kids off the computer. LOL

    Seriously looking forward to this. Nice to see a new threat for the old gang. :)
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