Beyond The Age of Heroes (post-NJO AU: Anakin, Jaina, Jacen, L/M, H/L, Tahiri, Kyp,Jag) Sequel 2/2/07!

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  1. YodaKenobi VIP

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    The Sporkster: Eek, it's here! *dances around and snags first reply*

    Way to go ;)

    Wow...quite a Dramatis. But who's surprised? Can't wait to see what happens with Strift and Neget.

    Yeah, it's a little long. As for Strift and Neget, I was considering just killing them [face_devil]

    Lovely description here. I got the chills reading it.

    Thanks!

    I'd always wondered where Callista'd got to after The Living Force. Typical that she would be the end of the galaxy.

    She's been busy in the last three years ;
    Poor dear. For a moment though, I was wondering why she was happy. Then I realized I was mixing this up with I, Jaina.

    Heh, yeah. Completely different storyline.

    Oooh...perfect ending. Like the begining of a really good mystery novel.

    Thanks, I'm glad you liked it :)

    Edit: Talon Karrde; independant information broker (Male Human)

    That's actually what he's listed as in Canon. I think in Conquest.





    Thrawn: Woo-hoo!!

    Glad you're excited!

    *grins* That sounds fun. And an interesting order of characters!

    I wouldn't read anything into that.

    *grins hugely*
    I'm looking forward to this!


    Thanks for the name!

    Alive and flipping?

    Absolutely

    Ohh?

    Yeah, she'll be cool ;)

    Interesting, and random...

    Yeah, I don't have much to say about it either :p

    Can I just say that that run of characters makes an interesting and unique combination?

    Yeah, alphabetical order really makes some random groups.

    "Old friends you will see..."?

    Hehe

    Great name!! I'd like to steal it (and hey, he is a Hutt!!)

    You're welcome to him any time. Just put him back when you're done.

    But no Jabitha?

    Yeah, it could be that there's just one chapter on Zonama Sekot and she wasn't needed.

    Have we seen Sermarians before?

    No, just made it up the other day.

    w00t!!

    Evlyn is teh awesome

    Together? That could be... interesting?

    Heh.

    *rgins* Can you make me look forward to this 'fic more!? The cream of the canon, your established OCs, and... who's Lorra Kloren?

    I missed it, supposed to be "Klorne". A new OC. I was tired of writing scenes with fleet command and having it all males... canon should do something about that too.

    You know a planet is a rotten borough when the voting citizen population is approximately 200...

    Yeah, not hard to be a representative when that happens. But maybe "Minister of State" is a cabinet position.

    Oh?

    Yup, we'll see him in the first chapter. He was also mention in EOTH.

    The amazing thing about your 'fic (apart from all the other amazing things) is that you handle huge cast-lists so deflty!!

    Thanks! I'm glad to be writing one of these mega-epics again.

    I like this 'fic, those two quotes like lightsabers!!

    Yeah, I've had those quotes in mind for over a year.

    Thank you.

    Thank you :)

    Somehow, "flying is for droids" fails to adequately express my happiness...

    Maybe not, but it made me chuckle.


    YYYYYIIIIIIIIPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!

    That's pretty good too!

    *grins*
    [Reply follows here; right now, I'm just lying in the gutter, staring up at the sea of stars!!]


    Hehe, no hurry.

    Mara vs. Callista, coming up!

    Oh, is that what you think is coming up? [face_mischief]




    Red: *reserves space*

    *Reserves more space* :)




    Maggy: it wouldn?t be you otherwise

    Exactly ;)

    Cinnamon? What the heck did I miss?

    If you don't understand it, you probably never will.

    *mutters* and there he tells me you don?t need to read those

    I told you you'd feel like you wasted time.

    There you have something big planned yay

    Of course.

    nice pic

    Glad you like i
  2. Jedi_Jaina_Durron Jedi Grand Master

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    I think you can officially refer to me as JJD now, if that would make things easier. It's easier to type out. :p

    That really wasn't intended to mean anything silly Oh, yeah, right. ;) [face_laugh] I can dream, can't I? :p
  3. thesporkbewithyou Jedi Master

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    Way to go

    *continues dancing to the Victory Celebration track*

    Yeah, it's a little long. As for Strift and Neget, I was considering just killing them

    You're not seriouse about that, are you? [face_shocked][face_worried]:_| Because, I'm going to have to hurt you if you do. And remember, I know where you live. [face_devil]

    She's been busy in the last three years

    *nods* That she must have been to probably be the catalyst for the world's end.

    Heh, yeah. Completely different storyline.

    *bangs head on keyboard* Must remember. Two different story lines.

    That's actually what he's listed as in Canon. I think in Conquest.

    Really? I've gotta go check it up then. Haven't read it in a long time.

    Mara vs. Callista, coming up!

    Heh. Even if that is coming up, I wouldn't be two excited about it. What I would be more excited about would be a Callista vs Kyp duel. Now that would be cool.

    *mutters* and there he tells me you don?t need to read those

    You still should finish them though! *waves the fic in front of Maggy* [:D]





  4. TahiriSoloFan Jedi Master

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    =D= Beautiful beginning, Yoda ! I loved the image of the star & the eye!

    Don't be too mean to Mara... [face_praying] Turn to the light side, use your powers for good and fight the evil that is Callista! :p
  5. Yodas-evil-twin Jedi Grand Master

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    Wait a minute, these Raithian wouldn't happen to be the villians in Star Gate: Atlantis, would they. Lets see see from what you have in the trailer. Blue armor, well the ones in SGA, due were blue helmets at least. Staff weapons, sounds like them. And now the big one the end of the Universe. Well since the SG:A Wraithians feed by draining the life from people, then you could say that it would be the end of the universe.
  6. YodaKenobi VIP

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    JJD* ;)

    I think you can officially refer to me as JJD now, if that would make things easier. It's easier to type out.

    I think I just worry there's someone else with those initials :p

    Oh, yeah, right. I can dream, can't I?

    Well, we'll see Kyp before we see Jag if that makes you feel any better :p




    spork: *continues dancing to the Victory Celebration track*

    :)

    You're not seriouse about that, are you? [face_shocked] Because, I'm going to have to hurt you if you do. And remember, I know where you live.

    You do? o_O

    You'll have to wait and see ;)

    *nods* That she must have been to probably be the catalyst for the world's end.

    In a way...

    *bangs head on keyboard* Must remember. Two different story lines.

    Don't hurt yourself 8-}

    Heh. Even if that is coming up, I wouldn't be two excited about it. What I would be more excited about would be a Callista vs Kyp duel. Now that would be cool.

    They did duel in the 8th Cortex, or is that why you think it would be cool. A rematch?




    TSF: Beautiful beginning, Yoda ! I loved the image of the star & the eye!

    I'm glad you liked it :)

    Don't be too mean to Mara... Turn to the light side, use your powers for good and fight the evil that is Callista!

    Hehe, I love Mara [face_love] [face_mischief] This will be a happy story, I promise O:)

    With lots of A/T ;)




    evil-twin: Wait a minute, these Raithian wouldn't happen to be the villians in Star Gate: Atlantis, would they.

    Considering I've never even heard of "Star Gate: Atlantis" I wouldn't think so. I did see the movie "Star Gate" when I was in 8th grade though, and it was okay.

    Lets see see from what you have in the trailer. Blue armor, well the ones in SGA, due were blue helmets at least. Staff weapons, sounds like them. And now the big one the end of the Universe. Well since the SG:A Wraithians feed by draining the life from people, then you could say that it would be the end of the universe.

    Gah, really? Are they called "Wraithians"? Maybe I should rename them in this fic then :p :oops:




    Okay, I've got a nice update today :) Maggy made this great coverart for the fic. A big thanks to her, hope you guys like it:

    [image=http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y165/YodaKenobi/TheAgeofHeroes.jpg]


    :D
  7. Maggy Force Ghost

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    [reply to review here]


    Wes:

    Exactly ;)

    :p :p

    If you don't understand it, you probably never will.

    *humpf* not even a try to explain? :(

    I told you you'd feel like you wasted time.

    several times ... or rather every occasion you find :p

    Glad you like it!

    :D

    No, she's in the Unknown Regions after EotH. Will be explained though.

    :D

    Nope. We'll find out soon what happened to those poor souls.

    :D Raynar survived though

    I just noticed where is Corran :eek: :confused:

    Yeah, I like it too.

    sounds after a sunny city [face_thinking]

    Yeah. How corrupt do you think he is? :p

    Lando does what is only best for Lando? :p

    Quite a few actually. There are secret characters like always...

    like Corran?

    There ya go.

    :D yeah think I will need the crash webbing or I end up on the floor again [face_blush]

    You assume the Raithians are villains?

    assuming is the first way to go wrong :p

    There's a hint in the end of TLF. I've been planning this for almost two years.

    *mutters* and you are telling me for months now I don?t need to read it

    You assume Callista is a villain?

    [face_thinking] Callista is a weird woman ... and assuming isn?t knowing and from a certain POV Mara would be a villain and from another Callista? So where is the point :p

    That's true.

    yub yub

    I have to stop there... and yeah, that's what she realized, but I liked it a little ambiguous.

    :p

    Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it. :D

    no telling you don?t have to read ?em you will only waste your time? *giggles* :p




    you posted the pic :D yay :D


    ~ Mags ~
  8. Yodas-evil-twin Jedi Grand Master

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    Yes.


  9. thesporkbewithyou Jedi Master

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    You do?

    Well actually, I don't. But I could find out!

    You'll have to wait and see

    Grrr...too long to wait!

    They did duel in the 8th Cortex, or is that why you think it would be cool. A rematch?

    *nods* Yeah, a rematch. Because, that didn't really count as a mach. The conditions were so far tilted in favor of one side it wasn't fair!

    Awsome cover art Mags! [:D] *stares hard* Is that Kyp that's next to Jaina?
  10. Maggy Force Ghost

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    [:D] @ Sproky
    [face_blush] thanks :D :cool:

    Kyp? [face_thinking] nah that's either Jacen or Anakin depends on which side you mean
  11. TKeira_Lea Jedi Grand Master

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    Maggy: :eek: Awesome pic! Such talent =D=

    Love the cover art [face_love]
  12. SilSolo Jedi Grand Master

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    Does the redhead in teh background happen to be TK?

    I sure wish I knew how to use Photoshop so that this kinda stuff doesn't all have to be done by hand.
  13. Yodas-evil-twin Jedi Grand Master

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  14. sdhfs Force Ghost

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  15. flowerbee Jedi Grand Master

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    Nice cover art. :D

    With lots of A/T

    *perks up* Really? You mean after you put them both through the wringer, possibly killing both their ghosts will be happy? :p

    I'm kidding. Good to hear. :D
  16. Lola64 Force Ghost

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    Wow. One list of characters and a prologue and the place goes wild.

    In the ethereal glow of the space around the planet Denon, a great nebula shaped like an hourglass can be seen against the endless backdrop of darkness and shining beacons that give life, while maddening swirls of orange and red hues embrace the stars coalesced inside.

    At the waist of the nebula, in a haze of green gases, lies an eye. One thick white oval encasing the most startling blue. It is human in appearance with a small black pupil, like a woman staring frozen at a brilliant light, her shock evident in the tiny white star in the edge of the iris.

    It is the Eye of the Galaxy.


    This is beautiful writing.

    Inside the alien craft is a lone passenger.

    Her name is Callista.


    Here comes trouble.

    is another woman.

    Her name is Mara.

    She has no idea that her life is about to be ruined.


    This has a very Twilight Zone-ish flare about it. Very cool.

    Inside the Watchkeeper Nebula, the Eye of the Galaxy watches all.

    Speechless. I wanted to write something here but I can't really find the words....

    I'm just going to finish by stating how much I admire your writing. And I'm really looking forward to continuing to read this.
  17. FORCEBlLADE Force Ghost

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    Nice cover there, I wish I could have some made for my fics. The details are pretty good. You've really go this new series going.
  18. jagsredlady Jedi Master

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    Great coverart! It's perfect. [face_love]

    Wonderful job, Maggy. =D=
  19. Spike2002 Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager

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    Excellent start, and nice art too, YK. :)
  20. Whitey Force Ghost

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    [voice_very_gay]YK, this new fic of yours is looking FAB*U*LOUS!!! :p

    All kidding aside, that was beautifully written. And I can't wait for Mara to be owned. [face_devil]
  21. YodaKenobi VIP

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    Red: edit: late review

    Not late at all ;)

    From the Dramatis Personae, it looks like you?ve got that covered.

    Good, my first mission is completed then 8-}

    [face_buns]

    [face_laugh]

    I almost didn't get that at first.

    Very cool title.

    It comes from our friend Thrawn McEwok :D

    I?ve read these two quotes over and over, trying to figure out how they relate to the story, of course I?m not getting anything yet. But it adds to the mystery so it?s cool.

    If it doesn't make sense yet, it will make perfect sense about 22 chapters in :p

    *speechless and humbled* Thank you!

    [:D] @};-

    The picture of the Hourglass Nebula with the ?eye? at its center is so chillingly perfect for this fic. I get goosebumps everytime I look at it. Beautifully written and sets the mood for the mystery and the adventure to come.

    Thanks, I really like it too. The hubble telescope has some amazing shots. Glad you're liking it :)

    *shivers* And so the adventure and mystery begins?

    Yup! Thanks so much for reading :D




    Maggy: humpf* not even a try to explain?

    If I could I would, but I don't even get it :p

    Raynar survived though

    Yup, you'll have to read TLF to understand that...

    I just noticed where is Corran

    [face_shhh]

    sounds after a sunny city

    It was after a huge sandwich on a sitcom.

    Lando does what is only best for Lando?

    Precisely.

    *mutters* and you are telling me for months now I don?t need to read it

    Well, if you want hints.

    you posted the pic yay

    Yup :)




    evil-twin: Yes.

    Interesting.



    Spork: Well actually, I don't. But I could find out!

    Scary!

    *nods* Yeah, a rematch. Because, that didn't really count as a mach. The conditions were so far tilted in favor of one side it wasn't fair!

    You're just saying that because Kyp got owned :p

    Is that Kyp that's next to Jaina?

    Nope, sorry ;)




    TKL: Love the cover art

    Glad you like it :)




    Sil: Does the redhead in teh background happen to be TK?

    No, it's Mara. Tenel Ka is definitely in the story though...

    I sure wish I knew how to use Photoshop so that this kinda stuff doesn't all have to be done by hand.

    I wish I did too :p



    sdhfs: very nice.

    Thanks! :D



    flowerbee: *perks up* Really? You mean after you put them both through the wringer, possibly killing both their ghosts will be happy?

    [face_laugh]

    I'm kidding. Good to hear.

    I'm making up for last time ;)




    Lola: Wow. One list of characters and a prologue and the place goes wild.

    :p

    This is beautiful writing.

    Thank you [face_blush]

    This has a very Twilight Zone-ish flare about it. Very cool.

    Hehe, I think you're right.

    Speechless. I wanted to write something here but I can't really find the words....

    That's okay :)

    I'm just going to finish by stating how much I admire your writing. And I'm really looking forward to continuing to read this.

    Wow, thank you so much :D



    FB: Nice cover there, I wish I could have some made for my fics. The details are pretty good. You've really go this new series going.

    Yup, ready to pludge in with the first chapter soon ;)




    Red: Great coverart! It's perfect.

    Glad you like it :)




    Spike: Excellent start, and nice art too, YK.

    Thanks :D Nice to see you again.




    Whitey: [voice_very_gay]YK, this new fic of yours is looking FAB*U*LOUS!!!

    [face_laugh]

    All kidding aside, that was beautifully written. And I can't wait for Mara to be owned.

    Everyone assumes there's going to be a fight 8-}

    Thanks, Whitey[/
  22. Barefoot_XO Jedi Knight

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    Hmmmm...

    It has Anakin... and Tahiri...

    And a ridiculously huge assortment of my favourite characters, including such living legends as Gavin Darklighter and Garm Bel Iblis...

    I am so here. And this is a fact... [face_mischief]

    I'll be keeping an eye on this...

    Jasper
  23. JediMaster_Jen Force Ghost

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    =D= I can't lurk on this one. I had to come out and post.

    You've got me very interested in what Callista is up to.

    Great work.
  24. Whitey Force Ghost

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    Everyone assumes there's going to be a fight

    I was more referring the fact that Mara's life will be ruined. :p
  25. Jek_Windu Jedi Master

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    YAY *does-the-YodaKenobi-started-a-new-fic dance* Great start, can't wait for more.
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