The Beginning and the End (Anakin/Padme) AOTC/Post AOTC - Completed - 8/6/03

Woohoo! I get the first postie! Ahh thanks for acknowledging me- my favorite Protector!

Wonderful beginning! Can't wait for more!

 

When I saw that you posted the story that you have talked about over at PLJ's thread, I had to come check it out...

This is a very good story so far... I can't wait to see where you take the love story. Can't wait for more.

 

<stifling the tears> I told you I wouldn't be disappointed! <clap clap> Bravo!

Post when you feel ready, I'll wait...



And thank you for the acknowledgement.

 

Looks good so far. Hope to see more soon

 

Great start. I like your writing very much. And I completely agree with your insights regarding the romance in AOTC.

I have the feeling this is going to become a very sad story.

 

Ok, you already got me hooked. You're off to a great start. Look foward to reading much more of this.





EDIT: Those are some awesome quotes too. They really set the mood of the story.

 

Great to see the responses.

My Nubian Queen

Fitting that you get the first post.

JWY and Dally

Thanks for your posts. It gets much more interesting in the subsequent chapters. This is a just a setup chapter to explain what happens next. And as to how sad this becomes, we'll see...

Anidan

Thanks for coming over and taking a look.

Arriss

Hope my mom feels better soon.

I'm glad to see your response. Now feel better and enjoy your birthday!


I'm even thinking of posting Chapter 1 tonight around 8pm Eastern. Maybe.

Abstract

Thanks for coming over. I really appreciate it. And I was debating about the quotes, but I decided that they said a lot about what this story will tell.

Jedi Scholar

Just wait. The rest of this Part gets very interested, with plenty of psychological insight and mush to go around.

 

ES

Great Job! I have been really looking forward to your story. And its only fitting that it should be about our favorite couple. And knowing how much you love the Love Story, we have no doubts that it will be a joy to read.

Keep em coming buddy!

And thank you for the acknowledgment.

 

well, well, well, your story just got off to good start with some readers. i knew it was going to be a hit from the beginning.

 

Poor ES, and he was worrying nobody would bother to read his story.

"I find your lack of faith disturbing."

 

What are sidekicks for. I would not be a very good knight for PLJ if I did not read her Jedi's storys.

Also sense it is any A/P story why would a pass it up.

A/P

 

I will up this story for you so more people will be aware of it. After reading a few of the chapters that ES sent me, I must say that the rest of you will be in for a treat.

 

Boba

Thanks for the support. I know how much you have helped me.

And I cannot deny that I do love the love story and I am a hopeless romantic, so...

I'll keep them coming as best as I can.

Jacen200015

Thanks for your help. Great to see you posting and hope the "traffic" continues.

Nubian Queen

I thought being humble was a good thing for a guy. I didn't want to come in here saying I had the next great SW epic here!

But its because of people like you who had faith and kept on encouraging me that I got it going.

Anidan

Thanks sidekick!

And for those who like the love story, I think they will like this. But don't be fooled, this ain't going to be all good, but have faith...

A-P

Thanks A-P. You're already creating interest for more!

 

I thought being humble was a good thing for a guy. I didn't want to come in here saying I had the next great SW epic here!

You silly goose! Course you never know.... this might just be that great epic... guess we'll have to sit here and wait to find out!

 

Great start, looking forward to more!

 

Here's an UP darlin' as I wait for Chapter 1

 

I love it! What else could we expect from A/P shipperdom's resident romantic? Can't wait for more.

--MissPadme

 

Nubian Queen

Silly goose?

Anyway, that determination is not for me to decide. I am simply here to create and hope that what comes through the heart is expressed in the words.

Scruffy

Thanks for stopping by.

And more is coming.

MOM

Thanks for the up. Chapter 1 is coming imminently. Unfortunately, my initial Chapter 1 became 21 pages, so this is only the first 6 1/2 pages.

MissPadme

Thanks for posting. If you liked that, you're going to love the rest of this first section!

 

I liked it. It was a ever good chapter you sure can write.

 

Boy that was long... did you take lessons from the Queen? This chapter was so delicious... so much mush I was overwhelmed... keep it coming.

 

Fantastic changes!!

The gauzy shirt - Irresistable! I love it!

<proud mom boasting here> Exceptional chapter! Looking forward to the next!

 

Great story!!! Keep it UP!!

Taffy

 

Bravo, ES! Absolutely outstanding. The words I've just read in your prologue and first chapter could only be the words that came straight from the heart and soul of a hopeless romantic. Your A/P mush simply made me melt.

I'm also glad to see that the gauzy shirt made an appearance in your story. Yay! To thank you for that, I pledge to remain a loyal reader of this story from now to the very end.