The Best Day JA-TMP AU (first fan fic)

The Best Day
Author: Arctic Wolf
Summary: A Master reflects. AU
Archive: Ask please
Feedback: This is my first fic so please tell me how it is
Song Fic of George Strait's song of the same title.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of this, George Lucas owns Star Wars and the song belongs to George Strait.

We loaded the temple's old cruiser
With a tent, a lantern, and sleeping bags
Some fishing poles, lightsabers, a cooler of muja juice
Three days before we had to be back
When your seven you're in seventh heaven
When you're going camping in the wild outdoors
And as we left Coruscant
He look at me and swore

Master Jinn, This could be the best day of my life
I've been dreaming day and night about the fun we'll have
Just me and you doing what I've always wanted to
I'm the luckiest boy alive
This is the best day of my life

His fifteenth birthday rolled around
Collecting rocks were his thing
When I walked our quarters with a Ryliss Gem
I thought that boy would go insane

He said. . .
Master, This could be the best day of my life
I've been dreaming day and night about the fun we've had
Just me and you doing what I've always wanted to
I'm the luckiest Padawan alive
This is the best day of my life

Standing in a little room
Outside the council chambers, standing with our best
robes on.
Looking at him I say
I can't believe son that you're grown

He said. . .
Master, This could be the best day of my life
I've been dreaming day and night of being like you
Now I'm a Knight
Watching you I've learned
I'm the luckiest Padawan alive
This is the best day of my life

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So how was it?

 

Wonderful ^_^

 

Just upping my own thread!!!

 

That was really cool!
MORE!!!

 

That was sweet! I espescially liked how you had the refrain
"This could be the best day of my life" repeated each time and
how what was happening on that "day" changed as he got older.

 

OOOPPS! Sorry I was doing the quote from memory and
obviously my memory stinks I meant the refrain
"this is the best day of my life."
Sorry

 

This was good!

 

I don'tknow that song, but I liked that.