The Best Day JA-TMP AU (first fan fic)

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  1. Arctic_Wolf Jedi Youngling

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    Aug 19, 2000
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    The Best Day
    Author: Arctic Wolf
    Summary: A Master reflects. AU
    Archive: Ask please
    Feedback: This is my first fic so please tell me how it is
    Song Fic of George Strait's song of the same title.
    Disclaimer: I don't own any of this, George Lucas owns Star Wars and the song belongs to George Strait.

    We loaded the temple's old cruiser
    With a tent, a lantern, and sleeping bags
    Some fishing poles, lightsabers, a cooler of muja juice
    Three days before we had to be back
    When your seven you're in seventh heaven
    When you're going camping in the wild outdoors
    And as we left Coruscant
    He look at me and swore

    Master Jinn, This could be the best day of my life
    I've been dreaming day and night about the fun we'll have
    Just me and you doing what I've always wanted to
    I'm the luckiest boy alive
    This is the best day of my life

    His fifteenth birthday rolled around
    Collecting rocks were his thing
    When I walked our quarters with a Ryliss Gem
    I thought that boy would go insane

    He said. . .
    Master, This could be the best day of my life
    I've been dreaming day and night about the fun we've had
    Just me and you doing what I've always wanted to
    I'm the luckiest Padawan alive
    This is the best day of my life

    Standing in a little room
    Outside the council chambers, standing with our best
    robes on.
    Looking at him I say
    I can't believe son that you're grown

    He said. . .
    Master, This could be the best day of my life
    I've been dreaming day and night of being like you
    Now I'm a Knight
    Watching you I've learned
    I'm the luckiest Padawan alive
    This is the best day of my life

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    So how was it?


  2. Rosemary Jedi Youngling

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    Aug 20, 2000
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  3. Arctic_Wolf Jedi Youngling

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    Aug 19, 2000
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    Just upping my own thread!!!
  4. Tenel'Ka Jedi Youngling

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    Apr 5, 2000
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    That was really cool!
    MORE!!!
  5. jedi_dawn2dusk Jedi Youngling

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    Sep 22, 2000
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    That was sweet! I espescially liked how you had the refrain
    "This could be the best day of my life" repeated each time and
    how what was happening on that "day" changed as he got older.
  6. jedi_dawn2dusk Jedi Youngling

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    Sep 22, 2000
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    OOOPPS! Sorry I was doing the quote from memory and
    obviously my memory stinks I meant the refrain
    "this is the best day of my life."
    Sorry :(
  7. Jade's Fire2003 Jedi Padawan

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    Oct 12, 1999
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  8. jodiwent Jedi Master

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    Feb 11, 2000
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    I don'tknow that song, but I liked that.
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