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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by oldjedinurse, Apr 17, 2005.

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  1. GreatOne

    GreatOne Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    I wasn't expecting Han to visit Lando! :eek:

    It will be interesting to know who this mystery person is...

    And Jaina has figured out one of her babies is a dark sider! That's gotta be a shocker! [face_devil]
     
  2. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Oh, poor Jaina!!! I wonder who the heck Han and Lando are talking about . . .

    Great post!! :D
     
  3. oldjedinurse

    oldjedinurse Jedi Padawan star 4

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    HanSolo29 -

    I guess it's time I come out of lurking. Excellent story so far. You have a lot of interesting plotpoints going on here and I'm curious to see how you resolve all of them.
    Always glad to have a new reader! Welcome. And thanks - glad you're liking the story so far!


    Ishy -

    And who the heck is arenia? I'm intrigued!
    Glad you're back for more! The Arenia question will be resolved next Chapter!


    YK -

    Great reading Han's thoughts...glad he's feeling some remourse...
    Thought you'd appreciate that.

    Also good to see him on his way to talk to Jag, even if the conversation will be a nightmare. -- Big surprise that he went to see Lando instead of Jag.
    Gotcha!

    Jaina was having a short respite from anxiety in a few moments of deep delta-wave sleep. - That's a great sentence
    Thank you!

    What is Arenia?!
    Chapter 4!

    And who is the red voice in Jaina's head?
    More puzzle pieces are coming! Glad you're wondering...

    My mom had the same experience when she was pregnant with me.
    ROFLOL!!!!

    Great post, oldj
    Thanks, YodaKenobi! This isn't one of the more exciting ones but you've got to set the stage sometimes.


    GreatOne -

    I wasn't expecting Han to visit Lando!
    I don't think anyone was. Muahahaha!

    It will be interesting to know who this mystery person is...
    Arenia, or the red voice?

    And Jaina has figured out one of her babies is a dark sider! That's gotta be a shocker!
    I hope the shocks have only just begun!

    [face_devil]


    Thanks to everyone for reading and commenting!


    oldj
     
  4. oldjedinurse

    oldjedinurse Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Nat -

    Oh, poor Jaina!!! I wonder who the heck Han and Lando are talking about . . .
    Poor Jaina indeed - its a fine mess she's gotten herself into this time! More Han and Lando next Chapter!

    Great post!!
    Thanks a lot, Nat.


    oldj
     
  5. Dark_Heir

    Dark_Heir Jedi Youngling star 1

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    I'm wondering who's Arenia as well. I still can't believe one of Jaina's children are dark though.
     
  6. zettazofia

    zettazofia Jedi Master star 2

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    Aww, poor Han. I feel bad for him.

    What is going on with Jaina? Very creepy. So it wasn't her idea to get pregnant, it was this voice?

    Wow, was not expecting Lando to pop up. Who is Arenia? And what does she have to do with anything?

    Eeep. Poor Jaina. If you were going for creepy, you succeeded.

    Poor Jaina for having an evil child, poor Han for having a messed up child.

    Poor Jag, who is still unaware of all of this. When does he find out?!

    Excellent chapter, and I can't wait to see where you're taking everything.

    -Zetta
     
  7. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    Mar 26, 2001
    Actually, ojn, I had a character named Arenia in a story I wrote when I was 17. She was an intelligence agent who got captured and put in Lusankya, was coerced into becoming an agent, murdered her boss, and then got acquitted for it. So I'm assuming that's not the same Arenia.
     
  8. oldjedinurse

    oldjedinurse Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Dark_Heir -

    Thanks for your continued interest. I hope you enjoy the answers to your questions.


    zetta -

    All of your concerns will be addressed, I promise! As for 'creepy', it seems I can write creepy stuff, although I've always thought humor was my best thing. Thanks for reading!


    Ishy -

    Actually, ojn, I had a character named Arenia in a story I wrote when I was 17. She was an intelligence agent who got captured and put in Lusankya, was coerced into becoming an agent, murdered her boss, and then got acquitted for it. So I'm assuming that's not the same Arenia.
    :eek: [face_blush]
    I suppose this must happen sometimes! I'm sorry, Ish. I had no idea you'd written a character with that name. The name just developed as I tossed around some different possibilities - I don't think I've ever seen it anywhere and I certainly had no intention of copying you or your character. And since my character is going to be quite different, I will alter the name to avoid confusion. Thanks for letting me know, and again, sorry!


    oldj
     
  9. oldjedinurse

    oldjedinurse Jedi Padawan star 4

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    For those who are wondering...

    Goal date for Chapter 4 post - no later than Friday this week.

    Might post a teaser during the week. ;)


    oldj
     
  10. AvenKiel

    AvenKiel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Uh oh, a bad egg eh? What do you do with a darkside baby? Can it be turned to light when it's never touched it before? Can Jaina really forsake one of her unborn children because of it's darkness? Will the bad baby try to hurt the good babies?

    *chews lip with worry*

    Guess I'll have to wait for the next post....
     
  11. Jaina_and_Jag

    Jaina_and_Jag Jedi Master star 5

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    Great story! :D Very intriguing plot. I really like how you had Jaina basically impregnate herself. :p Original. :)

    And who is Arennal?! Guess we'll find out soon though...
     
  12. oldjedinurse

    oldjedinurse Jedi Padawan star 4

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    AvenKiel -

    Uh oh, a bad egg eh? What do you do with a darkside baby? Can it be turned to light when it's never touched it before? Can Jaina really forsake one of her unborn children because of it's darkness? Will the bad baby try to hurt the good babies?
    Bad egg or ... ?? Such excellent questions, AK! Some of the same ones I've been thinking and writing about in my notes...
    Thanks for coming back!



    Jaina_and_Jag -

    Very intriguing plot. I really like how you had Jaina basically impregnate herself. Original.
    Thanks so much! And who is that Arennal?? More coming soon...


    oldj
     
  13. JAGSGURL15

    JAGSGURL15 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Whoa! great job! that was well, AWESOME! Keep it up, im eager for meore!
     
  14. oldjedinurse

    oldjedinurse Jedi Padawan star 4

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    JG15 -

    Whoa! great job! that was well, AWESOME! Keep it up, im eager for meore!

    Wow - Thanks!! More soon,I promise...


    olj
     
  15. tangled_sphere

    tangled_sphere Jedi Master star 4

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    I am so curious to find out who this person is and why Han suddenly has an interest in her. And it seems Lando has something to do with her too. [face_thinking] Another great chapter, and you've got me wanting more!

    So eerie, when she reaches out to find a dark soul reaching back!

    Alright, my Padawan, more please! :D
     
  16. oldjedinurse

    oldjedinurse Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thank you, t_s!

    I am so curious to find out who this person is and why Han suddenly has an interest in her. And it seems Lando has something to do with her too.
    Well, all I'll say is she plays a part in explaining something. o_O

    ...you've got me wanting more!
    What more could I ask?

    So eerie, when she reaches out to find a dark soul reaching back!
    Oooh. I like "eerie". Thanks!

    Alright, my Padawan, more please!
    Okay, okay, okay...

    [:D]

    oldj
     
  17. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I'm loving this story! I tend to miss updates. And sometimes I read and then don't have a chance to leave feedback. (I'll send myself to my room for that, I promise!)

    But I really do love it. And your style of writing is amazing! [:D]

    Bravo! :D
     
  18. oldjedinurse

    oldjedinurse Jedi Padawan star 4

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    [face_blush]

    Thanks so much, VaderLVR!

    I hope to post the next chapter this weekend. DRL has been murder this week.

    I'll let you know when its up!



    [:D] to all my readers!

    oldj
     
  19. Dark_Heir

    Dark_Heir Jedi Youngling star 1

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    PLEASE POST! Your story is so good!
     
  20. oldjedinurse

    oldjedinurse Jedi Padawan star 4

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    :)

    I will - I promise!!

    oldj
     
  21. Gloria

    Gloria Jedi Master star 4

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    Up!

    *poke* [face_worried]
     
  22. oldjedinurse

    oldjedinurse Jedi Padawan star 4

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    **ouch**

    Okay, okay.

    Chapter Four - TOMORROW !
     
  23. YodaKenobi

    YodaKenobi Former TFN Books Staff star 6 VIP

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    Yay, it's tomorrow :D

    *waits for post* [face_tired]
     
  24. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    *watches as friday zooms past and turns a corner* Post soon?
     
  25. oldjedinurse

    oldjedinurse Jedi Padawan star 4

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    :D

    Its
    almost
    done
    !!!

    **out of breath from writing**


    oldj
     
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