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Beyond - Legends The Depths of the Heart: Redemption- K/J, J/T, J/TK, D/OC- Author's Note: August 13, 2009

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  1. JainaDurron

    JainaDurron Jedi Master star 4

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    Title: Redemption

    Disclaimer: I own nothing, except for any OCs that I create. And the plotline is mine, all mine!

    Author's Notes: This is the third part in the Depths of the Heart Series. First two are Pain and Insanity, the links are in my bio. This story starts approximately 3 months after the end of Insanity.


    ~~

    Kyp Durron growled as another lock of dark hair fell across his forehead. A soft chuckled issued from behind him. "Stuff it," he growled.

    Jaina Solo leaned over and kissed his cheek, her expression suddenly somber. "You could just cut it again," she said.

    "Nope," Kyp said, turning his head and giving her a quick, deep kiss. He frowned when he saw her somber expression. "What's wrong?"

    "We are closer," Jaina murmured. She snuggled into his arms more when he lifted his arm and settled it around her shoulders. "To home that is."

    "Mm, we are," Kyp said. "Took us longer than we had thought it would. I think your mother is getting anxious from her last transmission."

    "Can we stop at another port for a week?" Jaina mumbled.

    Kyp frowned and looked. "Honey, what is it?" he questioned. "I mean I understand the stops we've made over the past three months, but don't you want to finally get home? See your family?"

    "They probably hate me," Jaina whispered. She waved her hand. "I don't understand why Danni doesn't."

    Kyp walked over and took her ice cold hands in his. He frowned slightly, worrying a bit. Most of the time her hands were freezing ever since she had died and miraculously came back to life. "Honey, Danni knows that it wasn't really you," he said.

    "Yes it was," Jaina said. She sniffled a bit. "I remember everything I did. I was nothing but a monster." She wrapped her arms around her body.

    "So was I, when I used the Sun Crusher, it's called the Dark Side of the Force," Kyp said. "But Jaina you came back from it, we both did, and now we need to move on."

    "I'm scared," Jaina said, a tear sliding down her cheek. "I am so scared that I'm going to fall again."

    Kyp walked over and wrapped his arms around her, holding her tight to him. "I won't let that happen," he said softly. He pressed a kiss to her hair.

    ~~

    "Don't you think that you are over doing it honey?" Han Solo asked in an amused tone.

    "They'll be coming home soon, Kyp said two weeks, everything has to be perfect," Leia Organa-Solo said as she tried tidying the living area of Kyp and Jaina's apartment.

    Han walked over and took her hands. "And we have two weeks to make everything perfect," he said. He tugged her closer. "You realize, that this is the first time since shortly after we were married that we've had time just for ourselves? Jaina will be living with Kyp when she returns and Jacen is off with his wife enjoying her and preparing to be invaded with their own children. It's the first time in over twenty years that we've not had to worry about if our children are going to walk in on us."

    "Why Han Solo, you scoundrel," Leia said with a grin.

    "Yes I am," Han said, covering her mouth with his.

    ~~

    Tahiri Fel's eyes snapped open as a jolt ran through her. She looked at the chrono and groaned. It was early in the morning and the baby had woken her up again. She rose with a groan, noticing that her husband, Jag, shifted in his sleep only slightly. She finished rising from the bed and started to shuffle her way to the 'fresher. She stopped as pain consumed her, then a gasp escaped her throat. She looked down as she felt then saw the puddle forming beneath her, water streaming down her legs. A whimper escaped her.

    "Tahiri?" Jag said, his arms coming around her.

    "The baby," she said on a groan.

    Jag put his hand over her stomach, feeling how hard and tight it was, as well as a small ripple ever once in awhile from a contraction. He could feel the pain emanating from Tahiri through the link they had in the Force. With ease, the former Chiss lifted his wife into his arms. "It's time," he said.

    ~~

    Han groaned as his com beeped at him. He looked over and reached to grab it, hi
     
  2. SpacedOutAnna

    SpacedOutAnna Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oh! Such a good start..... I'm happy things are working out, tho knowing you why do I have a feeling this peace won't last very long? As for names.... I have no clue - I'm up to my ears in calculus homework right now, so unless you like 'Derivative' Fel.... can't help ya.

    Can't wait for more!
    Anna
     
  3. 1230kevin

    1230kevin Jedi Youngling star 1

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    more please jilly
     
  4. JainaDurron

    JainaDurron Jedi Master star 4

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    I'm up to my ears in calculus homework right now, so unless you like 'Derivative' Fel.... can't help ya

    Hehe, I could call her Deri then. :D

    ~~Jilly
     
  5. Agent_Jaid

    Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Names? Names?!

    Oy.

    Now I'm definatly staying. :D


    Baby Fel ~

    Jasyna

    Ta'niay

    Faylin

    Riselea


    On another note... I LOVED THE POST!! Jaina and Kyp are sooo sweet... [face_love]


     
  6. MiaTieska

    MiaTieska Jedi Master star 4

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    Yay! Redemption started!! I mean, the story, not the actual redemption. I get cold hands too; should I be worried? ;) (Sorry, couldn't resist.) That definitely worries me about Jaina. Something's not quite...right, still. And the fact that Tahiri just had her baby worries me, what with her earlier vision from Jaina.

    "She's doing well so far, the link she has with Jag is actually helping her," Mara said. "The pain is transferring over to him a bit."

    "Is that why he's so pale?" Han asked.

    Luke chuckled. "No that's from the vehement Yuuzhan Vong curses that Tahiri threw at him and the near miss when a scalpel flew at his head," he said.


    ROFLOL!!! The humor is great, and always, of course, the mush too. Keep up the good writing and post more soon!! :)

    -Mia
     
  7. JediMasterKobe

    JediMasterKobe Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Wow. What a way to kick-start the fic. Tahiri's baby! [face_love] As for the name, I humbly suggest Ayla, a derivative of Aayla (as in Secura :D). Will think about a name for Baby Solo.
     
  8. C3SoloP0

    C3SoloP0 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    *Skids in*

    You didn't think I was gonna miss THIS were ya?!?!?!

    That's right!! Solo is here!! ;) :)

    It was a good start considering all we (and the characters mostly) had to go through in Insanity....I'm sure evil will come soon enought but oh well...let's enjoy it while it lasts huh?

    As for baby Fel...I vote for Deri !! I mean come on...the circumstances of that are too good to pass up!!lol :)

     
  9. Daughterofflame

    Daughterofflame Jedi Padawan star 4

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    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I love it!!!!!!!!!!!

    OOOOHHHHHH. Baby names. :D you'd think that with so many younger sibs i would have a lot of ideas.

    OK, let's see...

    Èlia (eeeeeelia)
    Allisaer
    Erani
    Kilean

    Ok, I have more, but they're from the sequel to one of my stories that I'm working on right now. If you don't mind recycling names, you can pm me for the rest, Jilly.

    GREAT POST!!!! what a way to start off the conclusion! You're the best, Jilly!

    Austyn
     
  10. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Most of the time her hands were freezing ever since she had died and miraculously came back to life.

    Ah-ha! At least I'm not the only one that brought Jaina back from the dead :D

    "Is that why he's so pale?" Han asked.

    Luke chuckled. "No that's from the vehement Yuuzhan Vong curses that Tahiri threw at him and the near miss when a scalpel flew at his head," he said. "Cilghal decided to remove all sharp objects from the room at that point." Han laughed.


    :( Poor Jag but he's a father now, a baby girl:D Oooh, a baby girl :D Names? Hmm, one name for Baby Fel and another name for Baby Solo, it must be Jaina/Kyp's kid. I can't think of any right now, JD, but one I just realized, I'm going probably the only J/J 'shipper reading this fic. But that's okay.

    ~aeryn
     
  11. Mirax-Jade

    Mirax-Jade Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Awww that was sweet...


    YAY!!! IT'S BEGUN!!! *dances*
     
  12. Fireyforce

    Fireyforce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    That was great JD!!! Baby names? how about Sesni or Recca for Baby Fel? As for the Solo child Seth, or Wesca sound like good names.

    Fireyforce
     
  13. Jedi_Jaina_Durron

    Jedi_Jaina_Durron Jedi Knight star 5

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    Great start!

    Poor Jaina! She and Kyp were very sweet! Han and Leia were funny...having fun... ;) I thought it quite funny that Jaina's so paranoid about her parents hating her and her mother's cleaning the house for her! ;) Yay for Tahiri's baby! Cursing him in Vongese and throwing scalples at him? ;)

    Please name her Deri! That would be incredible! Ben and Deri and little Solo running around and making mischief (soon to be joined by a little Durron? ;) ). Yes, I vote for Deri.

    Is it too soon to ask for more?
     
  14. SpacedOutAnna

    SpacedOutAnna Jedi Padawan star 4

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    LOL.... Well I guess I have to vote for Deri too! Amazing what an off hand comic can start.... ;) Anna
     
  15. Princess1

    Princess1 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    What a awesome start to the next one! hehe, I love the han and leia romance you've got in here, so cute.

    Poor Kyp and Jaina, their together, but I can't blame Jaina for being scared. Their simularities here are one more point why Jag doesn't belong with Jaina!

    lol, loved the bit about how tahiri was 'cursing jag just like she should be'. :p
     
  16. JainaDurron

    JainaDurron Jedi Master star 4

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    Anna: Everyone thinks I'm gonna throw some evil twist into this...

    Kevin: I will. :)

    Jaid: Glad you liked it! :)

    Mia: Well she WAS dead, her body is probably still adjusting to that, and there is an absence now in her that is also in Kyp. You'll see...

    Mike: Hehe

    C3SoloPO: I'm sure evil will come soon enought but oh well...let's enjoy it while it lasts huh?
    :confused: Everyone keeps saying that...

    Daughterofflame: Thanks so much!

    Aeryn: Names? Hmm, one name for Baby Fel and another name for Baby Solo, it must be Jaina/Kyp's kid. I can't think of any right now, JD, but one I just realized, I'm going probably the only J/J 'shipper reading this fic. But that's okay.

    No, Baby Solo is Jacen and Tenel Ka's baby. Kyp and Jaina haven't been together yet. As for being the only J/J shipper, I don't think you are, but only the one that is reviewing. If the few that were reading Insanity followed over, but they lurk.

    Mirax: :D

    Fireyforce: Thanks for the names! I'm not even sure yet what sex J/TK's baby is gonna be yet. I wasn't sure what Baby Fel was gonna be until her birth.

    JJD: Nope not too soon, but it will be another couple days.

    Jen: Yes this one will be more romantic. :)

    Thanks all for reviewing!

    ~~Jilly
     
  17. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    That was very sweet, though you didn't have to go in so much detail 8-} Just kidding. I love it!

     
  18. jedi_enigma

    jedi_enigma Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Yay! It's here! :D

    As far as baby names here's what I can come up with while I am as tired as I am at the moment; I can't guerentee that they are any good:

    Baby Fell
    After Jag's sister who died (I can't remember her name at the moment).
    Adele
    Kelsey
    Lori
    Anna (Ani for short, sorry that just popped in my head, reference to Anakin Solo ::shrugs::)
    Abby
    Zara
    Sandhya (that is the name of a co-worker of mine that I find interesting)
    Estella
    Naaomi
    Clara
    Charon

    Baby Solo
    Mace (when I'm tired I get weirder than normal, sorry 8-} )
    Chase
    Mark
    Yoda (definitely in a weird mood! 8-} )
    Brett
    Sean
    Tyler
    Ryan
    Zachary

    I don't know if any of those ideas are any good. I'm not as creative with boy names tonight for some reason.

    Don't worry Aeryn I'm a J/J shipper too, but I now have a soft spot for J/K.
     
  19. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    I cam across a name in one of Feist's books that reminded me of Jaimna in a way. Maybe it is of any help

    Jana
     
  20. Bellyup

    Bellyup Jedi Padawan star 4

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    "No that's from the vehement Yuuzhan Vong curses that Tahiri threw at him and the near miss when a scalpel flew at his head," he said. "Cilghal decided to remove all sharp objects from the room at that point." Han laughed.

    Hehe... [face_mischief] Go Tahiri!

    And go Jilly!! The trilogy is coming to an end. Wow, I can't believe you have been writing these for so long! And the final ending is going to be happy once and for all, right?? [face_evil]

    I know you already have tons of baby names to choose from, but here are a couple more. :D

    Rosa
    Joureen
    Adillia
    Ylanda
    Theona
     
  21. JainaDurron

    JainaDurron Jedi Master star 4

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    And go Jilly!! The trilogy is coming to an end.

    Actually Bellyup, the series has grown. There are 3 more after this one. :D

    ~~Jilly
     
  22. Mirax-Jade

    Mirax-Jade Jedi Padawan star 4

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    *whines* Come one Jilly!! I want more!! Pwease?!
     
  23. JainaDurron

    JainaDurron Jedi Master star 4

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    Up! I intend to post the next part today or tomorrow. :) Been a hectic week for me.

    ~~Jilly
     
  24. JediMasterKobe

    JediMasterKobe Jedi Padawan star 4

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  25. C3SoloP0

    C3SoloP0 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Did I hear 3 more????

    YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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