Beyond - Legends The Fall Of the New Republic Post ROTJ

BEFORE YOU READ THERE IS POSSIBLE SPOLIER FOR THE GAME STAR WAR JEDI KNIGHT: JEDI ACADEMEY

Ok I'm really new here(just joined yesterday)I not very good a writing stories but I got a storyline. Um here is the Scrolling text sequence. Oh and I havn't read any of the books just watched the moives and played the games. Oh and im kinda doing it like a moive script or what I would depict a movie script to look like

STAR WARS

THE FALL OF THE NEW REPUBLIC

Many years have passed since the Battle of Endor.
The New Republic struggles to maintain peace throughout
the galaxy.

Unkown to the Repbulic the Imperial Remenant has
reactivated the CIS droid construction factories
in a desperate attempt to overthrow the Republic.

Yet again the galaxy will be thrown into warfare(could be the word turmoil instead)
and the Jedi Order will again be the keepers of peace.....

Ok I amm going to make up characters since I don't know any from the books accept for
Mara Jade. I will use Luke, Kyle Kartan, Jaden Korrs(off Jedi Academey Dark Side) Possible Chewbacca, Han and Liea and Wedge Antillies. I will make up the names of Jedi, Republic Crusiers, Imperial Crusiers, Soldiers, Commanders. Will Use knowledge from the Games JKII:JO
JK:JA, Galactic BattleGrounds, X-wing Alliance and others.

Ok Here is the Storyline or how I want it to happen

The Imperial Remanat has reactivated the Droid Control Factories.
When the Rebublic encounters them the assume that a pirate activated them and destroyes a pirate base where some of them are comming from. Courasaunt is then attack with a mix of Iperial and CIS forces. They add A and B and then it hits them like a frisbe. More Core planets are hit Republic Evacuates Politics, Army, Navy etc. Again Becoming like a Rebellion.
Jedi Order finds out that the Imperials are under the command of Jaden Korrs(who is the main character of JK:Jedi Academey who has gone Dark side). Big Battle like at the start of Ep III
with jedis Azasa Jacjo(made up jedi) and his Apprentice(who I've yet to name) sent to capture him in his newly made SSD. Jadens appretice encounters them onboard and it is reveals that is Azasa best friend who was lost (fight scene) Sith dies. Jaden Escapes in a Tie Defender with a hyperdrive.
And thats all I've come up with so far. Sorry about the spelling and grammar.
Please I don't mind "Contructive comments" I think thats how they put it.
Azza

 

Also at the end of Jedi Knight: Jedi Academey when you go Dark side do you face kyle Katarn
If so do you kill him or does he get away. If he gets killed then for my story i'll just imagine that he didn't die

 

Is this the actual story, or just what you're thinking of? In the former case, then it's cool. If not, well, you'll have to put up an actual story post or this'll get locked. Anyway, looks like an interesting idea, and you certainly don't have to have read the books to write something interesting.

And when you have another idea, if you'd like to add it to your previous post, there's an edit button available. I have to use it all the time to fix mistakes I've made?

EDIT: And if you think you aren't good at writing, you might want to consider asking for a beta. What's a beta? Well, being one myself, I'll tell you. A beta is someone who can help you with plot, grammar, spelling, characterization ? just about anything that you need help with (for writing, that is ) Anyway, if you'd like a beta, here is the Beta Reader's Index. Now, if you want help on coming up with ideas, you could go to a thread like the Gentleman's Writing Guild, and we'd help you, even though that isn't it's primary purpose. Or you could post a topic describing what your ideas are and asking for someone to help you.

Welcome to TF.n!

KT

 

Thanks JT

Ok here is Act 1 scene 1 -is how they put in the old MS-DOS peter pan Game.
Oh and I'm adding the Character Ace Azzameen from X-wing Alliance and some others(Olin Garn).
Oh and question is Boba Fett dead because it looked like he died in ROTJ but in Jedi Academy
he appears.

Scene 1:
After the Text scrolling in the first post the camera scrolls down to a Star Destroyer and a Tie fighter flies past the camera.
On the bridge

General Voxton approaches a mysterious figuire.

General Voxton: Sir the droids factories are producing at 200%. We have enough droids for several Armies and enough ships for one fleet but at this rate there will be double that in one week.

Mysterious Figure: Excellent(like Mr Burns on The Simpson (R))

Mysterious Figure: Continue to attack New Republic convoys. Then Gather a dozen Imperial Ships in the Solaris system for an attack on the platform Bolan II.

General Voxton: Yes Sir....I mean Lord.

Scene 2 in few minutes or hours.

 

I know it's a typo, but it's KT, not JT.

Is Boba Fett dead? Well, official canon says no, but some fans think that he really did die. Personally, I think he lived.

So this is the actual story? Well, all the more power to you. I'd still suggest getting a beta, though. They're very helpful.

KT

 

Act 1 scene 2


Screen transition- wipe

X-wing Gold Group(six fighters in a squdron or group)leave the Winged Calamari Crusier New Liberty(The original Liberty was destroyed by the second death Star). To help escort a New Republic Convoy which has been picking up strange readings possibly ships following the convoy. Gold Group enters hyperspace.

They come out of hyperspace and form up around the convoy.

Convoy Leader: Good to see you Gold Group, Those "things" have been getting........

12 droid starfighters and 12 droid tri-fighters enter hyperspace from behind.

Convoy Leader: Closer!

Gold Leader/Olin Garn:Ace do you want to go check them out.

Ace Azzameen/Gold 2: Yes Olin

Olin: The rest of you form up behind me and get ready to engage.

Rest of Squad: Yes Sir

Camera follows Aces X-wing as it makes an about turn, opens its S-foils and flys full Throttle towards the droids.

Inside Cockpit(from now on refered to as ICp)
Ace:I'm not picking up any life signs,... but they are tageting me.

ICp
Olin: Ok gold Group lets go.

Again folling Aces X-wing, As it flys towards the droids they begin to fire, Ace flys between them then pulls up and takes two of them out.

Icp
Gold 4: I don't think they're friendly

Gold 3: Yeah I sorta got that but have you ever scene a fighter like that before

Gold leader/Olin: Cut the chatter.

Olins X-wing pulls up as it comes towards a Colliean Corvette also Escorting the Convoy

Icp
Olin: There attacking the Convoy, Gold six stop them.

I think I might let you imagine the rest of the battle. Outcome all Droids destroyed with no casualties. Just very confused pilots. If you want me to write the battle just tell me.
Covoy maked it saftely to Bespin
End Scene
If you don't like it also tell me I would like to know instead of wasting my time writing for people who don't like it. Sorry about the typo KT my mistake

 

I'm not going to do the Act 1 Scene 2. Now it's just all scene 1, 2 or 3etc.

Scene 3

Azasa Jacjo(Jedi Knight)is waiting ouside Mon Mathars Office(Like Palpatenes in EpII and III)
Inside Kyle and Jan Katarn are talking to Mon Mathar.
You can see them through the glass door by you can't hear what they're talking about.
Kyle Gets up and MM gives him a data pad. He sees Azasa and holds it behind him.

Azasa: Kyle..what are you doing here?

Kyle: MM has given me and Jan a mission, What are you doing here?

Azasa:Luke has given me this message to give to MM.
He show kyle a Datapad you can see it but can't read it because it's in a different lanuage.

Kyle: Wow that pretty serious, Looks like Luke's going to need all the Jedi Back at the Academey then.

Azasa:Yeah that's not the half of it!!

Kyle: Hmmmm not good, I guess I'll see you back at the Academey.
Starts to walk away then turns arounds and says

Kyle: Tell Luke not to worry about me I can take care of myself.

Azasa Walks into MM office

MM:Azasa, Nice to see you again.

Azasa: Unfortunaly it's not for good news.

MM: I was affraid you were going to say that.(Gets up and looks out the large panaramic window.)
MM:mmm I guess you should just tell me.

Azasa: Jedi Intelligence confirms our fears......Jaden Korrs is the new leader of the Imperial Remanants. He has trained many sith and...

MM: What is it.

Azasa: He has killed Sotaris!!!
Sort of sharp sounding music scene changes to Trade Federation Theme.

Scene 4
On an unknown planet thousands and thousands of droids are being made. Scene like on Ep II AOTC but less red and more like a Hi-tech Factory.

Ok I will contine scene 4 later. I have to go cook Dinner

Who else thinks i should get a Beta
Remember I like Contructive comments!!

 

Scene 4

On an unknown planet thousands and thousands of droids are being made. Scene like on Ep II AOTC but less red and more like a Hi-tech Factory.
Surrounding the planet,there is three fleets of CIS ships along with an Super Star Destroyer.
On board the SSD two sith are dueling. The Mysterious figire walks into the room. The sith stop dueling. The Mysterious figuire pulls off his hood. It's Jaden Korrs a Keldorian. He rasies his had a pushes the two sith againts the wall and pins them there with the force.

Jaden: You...You are going to the Jedi Academey on Yavin IV. You know what to do there.

Sit their knees

Sith: Yes Sir

 

While this is interesting, Star_Rocker, I strongly suggest a beta. Plus, if you put a link in your signature, and go post in other people's stories, there's a high chance that they'll go read yours. Also, while it's good you're enthusiastic, how about waiting to make longer posts, or just have longer intervals? That would also help.

KT

 

Yeah I am gonna get a beta, and the signautre thing "how do you do that".

 

Just as Jaden sits down to meditate General Voxton and two Stormtropees Walk into the room.

Jaden: What is it General?

Voxton: Sir we have Severely underestimated the size of the Republic fleet.
At present it stands with over 100 Mon Calamari crusiers.

Jaden: I already know this Genral so leave me!!

Voxton: Yes Lord, here are the stormtropers for that "Special mission".

Jaden: Ah yes (small evil laugh)

Voxton leaves the room, the door close you here a lightsaber, a blater shot, then silence.


Question I hear that Wedge Antillies has command of a SSD is this true.

 

Ok since I'm one of those people who knows he's doing wrong but continues anyway then scraps it half way through and starts it again I'm going to do just that.

If you liked it the way it was then shout out