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Resource The Fanon Thread | Fanon Planet Challenge 2.0 Announced (7/10, post #1132)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction and Writing Resource' started by FanonSock, Nov 11, 2014.

  1. Ewok Poet

    Ewok Poet Force Ghost star 5

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    Option 3.
     
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  2. Raissa Baiard

    Raissa Baiard Force Ghost star 4

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    I would go with Option 2, as well.
     
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  3. Voltron64

    Voltron64 Jedi Master star 1

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    Wanted by Cracken: The First Mother or The Dark Fate of an Fallen Heroine (borrowed from here.)

    Name: First Mother, (possible true identity: Barris Offee)

    Species: Mirialan

    Gender: Female

    Homeworld: Mirial

    Height: 1.66 meters

    Age: 35

    Crimes Against the Galactic Republic and Rebel Alliance: Murder and torture of Republic and Alliance personnel, espionage, aiding Separatist forces, aiding Imperial forces.

    Reward for Capture: 30,000 credits

    Reward for Elimination: 15,000 credits (Visual and physical proof must be provided)

    The Mirialan known as First Mother is reported to wear, what appears to be a simple black robe. However, upon closer inspection, a task that could be hazardous to one’s health, there are detailed geometric designs embroidered all across the fabric. She carries a red lightsaber, which she uses with deadly efficiency. She is very powerful and strong in the Force.

    Personal Addendum – General Airen Cracken
    “The existence of the target known as First Mother has been confirmed by multiple sources. The true identity of this target is another matter, and cannot be confirmed at this time. The most recent report of a group successfully returning from facing this target in person is almost a decade old. The group had just lost a close friend and ally during the encounter and therefore their testimony could be clouded by grief. Another source cited in the report, named only as Fulcrum, endured more than a month of intense torture and questioning regarding Alliance operations and fleet movements. As such, Fulcrum’s testimony to the true identity of this target could be skewed or compromised as well. Whatever the truth is behind this targets identity, extreme caution should be used if Alliance personnel ever encounter this target.”

    Behind the Screen: First Mother Backstory
    Fleeing arrest by the Jedi Order, after a failed attempt to frame fellow padawan Ahsoka Tano, Barriss Offee fled to the Outer Rim. There she stayed in hiding while the Clone Wars continued. She was eventually approached by a representative of Darth Sidious. After a series of talks she finally agreed to meet with Sidious. She was shocked to see the Supreme Chancellor. He spun a tale of how the Jedi had started to manipulate Galactic Politics and steer the Galaxy towards a chaotic spiral. Palpatine claimed that he wanted to end the Clone Wars and bring order and peace to the Galaxy once again, and that the Jedi had been blocking his progress in trying to end the conflict.

    While she was suspicious, Palpatine was able to sprinkle in just enough facts to cloud the padawan’s perception and convince her to work with him behind the scenes. By the time Order 66 was enacted Barriss was so far fallen that she didn’t bat an eye or shed a tear for any of her former friends and mentors. Palpatine and Vader had one final test for Barriss. She was to lead an operation to capture her former Master, Luminara Unduli. She completed this assignment with efficiency and cunning. Later she helped to break the will of one of the Temple guards and convert him to the Dark Side. As a reward Barriss was given the title First Mother and placed in charge of the Training and Indoctrination regiment of the Inquisitorius and its acolytes.
     
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  4. Sith-I-5

    Sith-I-5 Force Ghost star 6

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    @Voltron64 - The backstory fails to mention why the Jedi Order wanted to arrest her in the first place.

    My Lord Nelf is Inquisitorious. Although I barely reference the Order, this would be a useful personage to name drop.
     
  5. FanonSock

    FanonSock Jedi Knight star 1

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    Thanks to everyone who replied to my above poll on the current challenge. It looks like most are in favor of retrying the Fanon Planet challenge, this time without requiring a second element. I will do my best to get that set up in the next few days; in the meantime, if anyone else would like to weigh in, please do. :)

    @Voltron64, your material on the First Mother looks more like a character profile or a storyline idea; a better place for it might be in the Plot Bunny Index and Donation Thread (run by @Gamiel).
     
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  6. Findswoman

    Findswoman Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    “My desire is to participate, Garel, City, Garel”:
    The GFFA’s Big Apple/Blumfruit/Jogan/Meiloorun/Muja/Etc.


    “Commence information dissemination…
    I embark during this rotation…”


    Most of us know Garel City as the capital of Garel (Lothal Sector) and the base of the Spectres’ operations in Rebels season 2. In the Rebels-based stories of Raissa Baiard and myself, however, it has become kind of a Space!NewYorkCity, with similar landmarks, institutions, and cultural artifacts. Here some of these are offered to the community both for use in stories and for general amusement. More to come, of course!

    “Those backrocket blues
    Begin to lose structural integrity...”




    The Garel City Review Of Holobooks: Semi-monthly publication featuring articles on literature, culture, current events, and various sentient-interest topics. (RL basis: The New York Review of Books; credit Raissa Baiard)

    Lower North Side: historical lower-to-middle-class neighborhood home to such picturesque shops as Mun’s Antiquarian Books and Grug’ag’pyg’naq’s Super Value Hardware. (RL basis: the Lower East Side)

    M’d-s’n Avenue: main drag of the Upper North Side’s insanely posh, upscale shopping district, featuring such finer retail establishments as Poochy, Herf & Mern, D’ogiva Chocolatier, Forn-Aurek-Osk Blacke, and Nespresso. (RL basis: Madison Avenue)

    The Noogenheym Museum: One of the Lothal Sector’s foremost modern art museums. (RL basis: the Guggenheim Museum)

    Za’Barr’s: Deli and finer foods retailer on the North Side, at which one may purchase some of Garel City’s trademark food products, including:
    • squagels with creamshmear and Nuova grovlaxx
    • deli-style d’il pykkles
    • black-and-white Wookiee-ookiees
    (RL basis: Zabar’s)
     
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  7. FanonSock

    FanonSock Jedi Knight star 1

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    To begin with, a few updates:



    Aaaaaand now... it gives me great pleasure to announce
    Fanon Planet Challenge 2.0!

    This is a revised and hopefully more user-friendly version of the Fanon Planet Plus One Challenge, which received no entries. As with that one, you may choose a number from 1 to 15 to be assigned a planet-related fanon entry to incorporate into your story. (If it is one of your own fanon entries, though, I'll ask you to choose a new number.) This time, however, you are not required to incorporate a second fanon element (unless you really, really want to, of course).

    The list of participants is below and includes those who signed up for the Fanon Planet Plus One Challenge when it was first launched. Those people are tagged; please let me know if you would like to keep the planet you received when you signed up then, pick a new number, or remove yourself from the challenge. (I can remind you by PM if you've forgotten what you received.)

    The deadline to post stories will 11:59 PST on Monday, November 12, so you will have about four months to complete your story. At that point voting will be open for two weeks, and winners will be posted on or soon after Monday, November 26.

    The winner will get to choose the next challenge. If thread title changing functionality is back by that point (though don't hold your breath), then the winner will get his or her story listed in the title of the Fanon Thread for a week, too.

    Have fun, all! And please feel free to ask any questions that you may have. :)


    List of Authors and Entries:
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    2. @Findswoman
    3. @Ewok Poet
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    6. @Gamiel
    7. @Sith-I-5
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    9. Kahara
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    12. @Raissa Baiard
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    15.
     
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  8. Ewok Poet

    Ewok Poet Force Ghost star 5

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    I shall keep mine. :) Thanks for giving me options. <3
     
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  9. Raissa Baiard

    Raissa Baiard Force Ghost star 4

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    I’d like to keep mine, thanks.
     
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  10. Findswoman

    Findswoman Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    I'll hold on to mine, too. :)
     
  11. Kahara

    Kahara Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    9? :)
     
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  12. Gamiel

    Gamiel Force Ghost star 6

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    SPACER NOMADS

    Ostersjon League: a group of herglic space nomads found in [whatever part of the GFFA you want], they offer transport, trade, help with technology and gambling. When it come to the last part so are Ostersjon League infamous for it, in every spaceport’s League quarters you will find at least one gambling den (legal or not) and every Ostersjonic transporter is said to be a small casino.
    The Ostersjon League trade with any realm/state/planet in their part of space that are willing to trade with them but they show a preference for landing near or in water.
    Herglics from the Ostersjon League show ritualistic scarifications marking out family, rank, ship, honours and many other things. They put importance on cleanliness, especially on pure water and their internal currency is based on units of clear water.

    Obe d’Mar Xhi: an ancient and inbreed clan of duros space-nomads, with an contempt toward the Republic and its laws that goes back at least a thousand years. This contempt is just as strong for the Republic’s successor: the Empire.
    As such they have no problem breaking Republic, and later Imperial, law. They are willing to trade with anything and anybody no matter what or who, legal or not. Known to keep their contract to the letter (if not the spirit) but having no loyalty with former trading partner once the deal has ended.
    How large the Obe d’Mar Xhi clan is is a mystery, since its members are extremely tightlipped toward outsiders, it’s is spread out all over the galaxy and ships have been known to go unrecorded for decades and then reaper. The lowest guesses are around ten thousand while the highest believe that there can be billions of Obe d’Mar Xhi clan-members out there.

    The Kull Mining Corporation-Clans: Seldom seen outside of their voidsuits the Kull are ryn who trade in the ore and stone they mine but are also known for their musicians, theatre-plays and void-warriors (all three groups which are for hire, as are the Kull’s miners and their knowledge).
    The Kull are divided into Corporation-Clans which in turn are divided into shipholds. A clan usually lay claim on a territory – which is usually a system, a planet, an asteroid cluster – which gives them solo right among a Kull to mine and built in that territory, and they say in that claim until the ore run out or they are driven from there by other (more often it’s the later).
    While ryn make up the majority of the Corporation-Clans do they sometime adopt in people from other species, even free droids (which doesn’t mean that they don’t own non-free droids) but the amount of non-ryn among the Corporation-Clans are belived to be between 1 - 5%.

    White Red Sphere Triangle Explorators: this antediluvian group of space nomads is formed around a core group of gree who are supposedly continuing with an ancient mission given to their ancestors. In time those ancestors and their decedents gathered followers to help them when their own numbers grow smaller and their original equipment begun to fail them.
    The Explorators can be found all around the galaxy, their original ships turned into the core of hyperspace capable spacestation created by all the generations of patching, upgrading and installing. Those spacestation are usually surrounded by smaller ‘ships repairing, patrolling, protecting, coming or going. By some unknown mean so do the different Explorator fleets (as they have become known as) keep in contact regarding all important information. It’s been suggested that they use ancient gree-tech, mystical abilities or some kind of astropathy.
    What the Explorators mission is seemingly only known by the gree and they are not willing to explain to “beings who would just not understand”, but it has been theories by outside observers that not even the gree know and they are just continuing what they saw their forebears do.
    The Explorator-servants of the gree comes from all manner of species that the Explorator ships have come in contacted with but share one elaborated an baroque culture. Many of them are masked, speak in strange ways and females among the Explorator-servants are sexually active with outsiders when given chance to prevent inbreeding.
    To get in personal contact with the gree at the core of the Explorators outsiders will have to go through all manners of rituals and diplomatic talks.
     
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  13. Findswoman

    Findswoman Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    (begins chant with clapping and foot-stomping)
    PM! The! Sock!
    PM! The! Sock!
    PM! The! Sock!
    PM! The! Sock!
    PM! The! Sock!

    :D

    EDIT: Just got it. Thanks much. :)
     
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  14. Gamiel

    Gamiel Force Ghost star 6

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    So I take it that you have no constructive comments on my post?
     
  15. Findswoman

    Findswoman Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Just was teasing you a little in a friendly manner, Gamiel; no harm meant. @};- Of course your post looks great, and I like the variety of species you have here—we don't see Herglics often these days, and it's always good to see the Ryn, for example (@TheRynJedi would probably be very happy to see them here too).
     
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  16. TheRynJedi

    TheRynJedi Jedi Padawan

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    Always happy to see some love for the Ryn!

    (As long as it's accurate, unlike some of the facts and art that actually got published in an rpg book that contradicted stuff James Luceno (who created them) said in his books. But... That's a rant for another day, lol.)
    [​IMG]
     
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  17. Ewok Poet

    Ewok Poet Force Ghost star 5

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    Gamiel be Gamiel. ;)
     
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  18. Gamiel

    Gamiel Force Ghost star 6

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    That's part of the reason why I chose them, they are presented as one of those old spacefaring species that had their own interstellar empire of some sort before joining the Republic but we never really see them being used.


    Ultimate Alien Anthology, the lack of hygiene part and no mention of their tail?

    When it come to the Kull Mining Corporation-Clans so did I actually begin with “nomadic deepspace miners” then chose species. By taking the ryn I had three things that they were known for, mercenaries, musicians and wanderers* and I tried to incorporate all three. After all why us ryn if they are not going to have the stuff associated with them.
    * And the magnificent moustaches part also even if it doesn’t get a mention, so technically four thing

    I have two more ryn based ideas for space nomads – one based on their role as mercenaries and another idea that has a group of ryn that are scoundrels and cutthroats, the kind that give the other ryn a bad reputation. Will see if they became something more than just ideas.
     
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