The Fight For Survival; a JA story, JA #2 spoilers (update 10/8/01)

<G> Young Sith Apprentice, it's so cool that you and your mom can share this, y'know? I'd kill for my mom to like Star Wars and write stories with me. And I see that incredible writing talent runs in your family from both you and HealerLeona's stories. HealerLeona, I don't suppose YOUR mom likes Star Wars and writes?? (hey, we can always use more great stories)

Knight Obi Wan

 

La de da, I finally cleaned my room after about 4 months. I'm a good girl, hehehe . Well, I've been writing lately, heres a small post. There shall be more soon. and BTW, this story is getting near the end, and I shall announce it when it's over. but for now, I hope you enjoy.
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Qui-Gon sighed when Obi-Wan began hand-to-hand fighting with a man that was blocking the doorway. One of these men was Xanatos and he knew. Figuring which one would be the problem, they're facing weren't visable and they all fought with the same skill. He looked to see Sarine holding her own against two men. He only hoped that they could hold on a bit longer till he could help. Giving strength to both Sarine and Obi-Wan, he joined the fight.
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Block, kick, duck, punch. His strength was getting better, and it helped with the strength he was recieving from Qui-Gon. This dark robed man was strong, and more experienced then him, at least, from what he could tell. There was a fimilarity in his style of fighting. Maybe Obi-Wan was imagining things, but he knew this man from somewhere. He continued fighting and caught his opponent off guard. The man fell to the floor, and in the process, his hood was knocked back. Obi-Wan took a good look at the man and froze.

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Qui-Gon was fighting alongside Sarine when he noticed Obi-Wan knock the dark robed man to the floor and freeze when he saw who it was. He himself also lost concentration, realizing that the man Obi-wan had been fighting, was Xanatos.

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Sarine hadn't stopped fighting to recognize Xanatos, but paused to wonder why both Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan had stopped fighting. She turned her head to see one of the men pull out a small blaster and aim for Obi-Wan. His finger was on the trigger and she screamed out to warn Obi-Wan, jumping in front of the blaster to get hit instead. She was too late.

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Obi-Wan was hit in the middle of his chest and staggered back. His hand slowly came up to his wound and pulled back, covered him blood. He looked up to a horrified Qui-Gon and a fearful Sarine with pained eyes and attemped to speak, but no sound came out with his words. Reluctantly, he fell to his hands and knees as his legs gave away under him, his life bleeding out of him. Maybe he was going to die after all.

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Was that ok? I couldn't figure out wording. I hope you liked it.

 

La de da, I triple posted.

[This message has been edited by Young_Sith_Apprentice (edited 02-15-2000).]

 

sorry, double post, ignore this

[This message has been edited by Young_Sith_Apprentice (edited 02-15-2000).]

 

Great post but I know you of all people aren't going to let Obi die, are you? There must be some small part of you not Sith.
Knight Obi Wan it's a wonderful bond
YSA and I share. We also have another common obsession. Many a night have we sat together having Buffy fests.

 

AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
POST! POST!

 

Great post. Now you got me holding the chair for good life praying Qui-Gon kicks xanatos's a$$.

 

Oh my Force!!!

Trika Kenobi

 

Aaarrgghh! That's the best cliffhanger I've seen to date! I love it! But now you have to post some more soon before I have a heart attack!

 

POST! Please, for the love of the force, POST!

 

Grandfa Grigg
had a pig
in a field of clover

Piggy died
Grandfa cried
and all the fun was over

This is NOT the plotline of this story, is it?

 

POST!
OMIGOD I can't deal with these cliffhangers!
POST!

 

*with a small voice*

Post please?

Darklighter

 

OK, small post.
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Obi-Wan struggled to breath, as the shot must have pierced his lung. He tasted blood in his mouth and began choking when his throat filled with it. I'm really going to die, he thought. He looked over to a smiling Xanatos, and barely felt his enemy's boot hit his chest, throwing him back. He screamed out in pain. Xanatos' hand grabbed his neck and dragged Obi-Wan to his feet, tossing him into the wall. Crashing to the ground, Obi-Wan had no strength to fight, or barely move. He watched as Xanatos stood over him.
"So, Obi-Wan, do you have any suggestions on how I should kill you?" He closed his eyes, Xanatos made a fist and pulled it back.

*Goodbye Master, know that I will always love you.*

He waited for the final blow.

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"No!" Qui-Gon yelled after receiving Obi-Wan's words. His shock and fear turned to determination and partly anger. He used that Force to break the neck of one of the men, pushing the lightsaber through the other man's stomach. He ran to Obi-Wan and grabbed Xanatos' wrist roughly, bending it back and snapping it, making Xanatos yell out. Obi-Wan rolled to his side and spit out the large amount of blood that was in his mouth. Qui-Gon severly backhanded his former apprentice, hearing the crack in his jaw.
"You will never touch Obi-Wan again!"

He kicked in the back of his knees, and smacked the side of Xanatos' head with the handle of his lightsaber. He slumped to the floor unconcious. Turning to Obi-Wan with eyes, glistening wet with tears, he bent down hoping his apprentice wasn't dead.

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Hope you liked that bit. It was kinda hard for me to write, I'm not good at writing out action scenes.

 

Aaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!! Qui-Gon beats the crap out of Xanatos...whoohoo!!!!! Keep it up!

Trika Kenobi

 

If being a Sith is where your incredible writing comes from I may have to take a walk on the dark side.
That was A-W-E-S-O-M-E

[This message has been edited by HealerLeona (edited 02-16-2000).]

 

All right. He does kick xanatos's a$$. Way to go Young Sith Apprentice. Lovely post.

 

NNNNNNNNooooooooooooooooo don't stop there you are making me turn sith...............this page needs to keep some jedi.... I don't want to turn to thr dark side

 

NNNNNNNNooooooooooooooooo don't stop there you are making me turn sith...............this page needs to keep some jedi.... I don't want to turn to thr dark side

 

NNNNNNNNooooooooooooooooo don't stop there you are making me turn sith...............this page needs to keep some jedi.... I don't want to turn to thr dark side

 

NNNNNNNNooooooooooooooooo don't stop there you are making me turn sith...............this page needs to keep some jedi.... I don't want to turn to thr dark side

 

Woo Hoo!
Go Qui-Gon!
Don't stop here! Post again! Today please before you go off to bed!

 

Dont mind me. I'm just here waiting for another post. Will it be soon?

 

*taps Sith_Apprentice on the shoulder*

Post soon please!

 

Still no post?
*grumble, grumble*