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Beyond - Legends The Final Dual(J/Z w/ **EVIL** Kyp)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Ewok-From-Endor, Sep 30, 2003.

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  1. Ewok-From-Endor

    Ewok-From-Endor Jedi Youngling

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    Okay first fic. *Trembles* Hope you all like it!

    Disclaimer: Everything belongs to GL. Not making any money of this.

    Jaina and Zekk have been dualing the dark lord, Kyp Durron. This is the end of that battle.

    Keywords: Pain. Suffering. Death. :(




    A shot of pain ran through Jaina's body as the crimson blade sliced through her arm. A sudden push of the Force sent her flying back into her fallen lover. Zekk pulled her limp form into his embrace, trying to ignore the pain in his leg where the saber gone through. He glanced up.

    "Such a pity." The dark haired man said, approaching the two. "She could have been mine, and share my power. But, she chose you. You, worthless piece of..." He kicked Zekk's wound, the scream covering up the last words of the sentence. Zekk's body shuddered from the pain.

    "Why.. Why don't you just finish us off." Zekk's voice was harsh and broken. The red blade disignited.

    "Oh, I will. First, I thought I let you say good bye to her. You'll be the only one dying today." A sob escaped Jaina's lips. She turned her head a buried it in ZekkÕs chest. Zekk looked up at the dark Jedi.

    "I hate you, Durron." He spat out.

    "I bet you do. Now kiss her, so, I can kill you." Zekk glared at Kyp then pressed his forehead to her head. She lifted her head. Her tear filled brown eyes meeting his green ones.

    [i]//I don't want to go with him.\\[/i] His hands clutched his lightsaber. He knew this was the only way. Through the Force she felt what he planed to do. [i]//Do it Zekk. If go with him, my soul will be lost to the darkside and I don't want to live without you. Please do it.\\[/i] Tears filled his eyes.

    "Hurry up, you two."

    "I love you, Jaina."

    "I love you, too, Zekk." Zekk lowered his head and their mouths met, both drinking deep of the other. Both forgetting where they were or what had happened. Both forgetting they would never get the chance to be married or be with the other. Zekk snapped back into reality and push down on the ignition on his saber. Kyp stood above the two ready to cave Zekk's skull in with a swift kick. Before his foot made contact, an orange blade shot through Zekk's back and into Jaina. Both died instantly. Thier lips still on eachother. Kyp gave a disgusted look as the blade disappeared, leaving a black hole through both. Kyp kicked the bodies and sneered. Grabbing up their lightsabers he turned and left the hanger. As Zekk and Jaina stepped into eternity.

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    Commets?

    Edit: Zekk has an orange, not a green saber. Fixed it!
     
  2. GenOochy

    GenOochy Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    "I bet you do. Now kiss her, so, I can kill you." Zekk glared at Kyp then pressed his forehead to her head. She lifted her head. Her tear filled brown eyes meeting his green ones.

    :(

    KILL KYP!!!

    :mad:

    Poor J/Z. :(

     
  3. Trickster_Jaina_Fel

    Trickster_Jaina_Fel Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    poor j/z :_| ... but i can't get mad at you...i've done much the same thing, except jay didn't die...instead, she found out about zekk's death later and went sith on kyp (her master) :( :p

    great job :)

    ~TJF

    PS - if you would like to add this to the YJK Index, please send the following information to either YJK_Index (preferred) or myself (Trickster_Jaina_Fel, of course):

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    thanks! :)
     
  4. Mara_Jade_FSS

    Mara_Jade_FSS Jedi Youngling star 1

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    SO ANGSTY!!! :( :(

    but good job. :)
     
  5. Ewok-From-Endor

    Ewok-From-Endor Jedi Youngling

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    GenOochy: Thanks. ;)

    Trickster_Jaina_Fel: Will do!

    Mara_Jade_FSS: Ah, angst. Don't you love it?


     
  6. The_Hooded_One

    The_Hooded_One Jedi Padawan star 4

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    :( That was well done.
     
  7. Ewok-From-Endor

    Ewok-From-Endor Jedi Youngling

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    The_Hooded_One: Thanks

     
  8. Agent_Jaid

    Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    *bawls*

    You killed Zekk!!

    You killed him!!

    :_| :( :_|

    HOW COULD YOU??!?!?!!?

    *sobs broken heartedly*



     
  9. Ewok-From-Endor

    Ewok-From-Endor Jedi Youngling

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    Agent_Jaid: Yes I did. :( Sorry.

    I'm doing another story right now, I'll post it in a few minutes.

    Edit: Posted!
     
  10. Lieutenant_Jaina

    Lieutenant_Jaina Jedi Youngling star 3

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    AHHHHH!!!! *screams* ZEKKIE ( [face_love] ) NOOOOO!!!! How could, how dare yo-


    ...That was awesomely written!!!!

    now, I am planning to personally kill Kyp, anyone joins me???
     
  11. GenOochy

    GenOochy Jedi Grand Master star 5

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  12. Ewok-From-Endor

    Ewok-From-Endor Jedi Youngling

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    You all like it??? :eek: [face_plain]

    *Is shocked*

    Wow...

    Okay.. Want Kyp to die? *Opens Wordpad*

    *Cackles*
     
  13. Ewok-From-Endor

    Ewok-From-Endor Jedi Youngling

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  14. KnightHawk

    KnightHawk Jedi Knight star 5

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    Most impressive. Definitely touching. (Wipes away a tear.)
     
  15. Ewok-From-Endor

    Ewok-From-Endor Jedi Youngling

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    Thank you Knighthawk! *Hands tissue*
     
  16. GenOochy

    GenOochy Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    **Bump**
     
  17. Dantana Skywalker

    Dantana Skywalker Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Just my personal opinion, but that was sick.


    Dana
     
  18. Ewok-From-Endor

    Ewok-From-Endor Jedi Youngling

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    Yep. It was. Read the other one. It's happier. :p
     
  19. Dantana Skywalker

    Dantana Skywalker Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I read the other one first.

    I don't mean to be rude, but was there a reason to this other than to thoroughly tick off Kyplings?


    Dana
     
  20. Ewok-From-Endor

    Ewok-From-Endor Jedi Youngling

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    *Laughs*
    No, it was just an evil plot bunny. I'm not a Kyp fan, but that wasn't my reason for writing it. Sorry.
     
  21. Dantana Skywalker

    Dantana Skywalker Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Good to know. If it HAD been . . .

    I really don't mind if people are persuasions other than K/J, or whatever. What I mind is when people get weird about it. And go around trying to piss off everyone around them.


    Dana
     
  22. Ewok-From-Endor

    Ewok-From-Endor Jedi Youngling

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    No, don't worry. I wasn't going for that.

     
  23. JediMasterKobe

    JediMasterKobe Jedi Padawan star 4

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    :_|

    'Nuff said!
     
  24. Sara_Kenobi

    Sara_Kenobi Jedi Grand Master star 7

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    Kyp was very vaderish there. I loved it. :)
     
  25. Ewok-From-Endor

    Ewok-From-Endor Jedi Youngling

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    Zekk has an orange, not a green saber. So I just fixed that.
     
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