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Before - Legends The First Great Schism(24, 547 bby, some oc's, some expanded cc's)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by KnightFr0mOssus, Dec 1, 2009.

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    KnightFr0mOssus Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Title: The Tragedy of Danzigorro Potts(A tale of the History of The Jedi)
    Era: Early Republic years
    Most main characters are canon but with surnames or first names added because not all characters are mentioned by their full names in the books. This is based on a story in The Essential Guide to The Force and is based off an in-universe datacard made on Colomus.


    Prologue:
    Notron, the birthplace of man. This planet's people grew in time until its people reached the Industrial Age, then the Nuclear Age, then the Space Age. By 100,000 BBY, Notron became Coruscant and was now covered in cities. Over time, city's grew over cities and the Humans began traveling to other worlds via sleeper ships, massive vessels teeming with cryonic capsules. It is this way Alsakan, Corulag, and other similar planets were settled, although the process of reaching destinations could take centuries.

    Then came the Rakatan Empire which enslaved many of the Human worlds for a long time. But eventually, a plague afflicted the Rakatans that made them lose their force-sensitivity thus denying them use of their own constructs. The slaves revolted and founded their own sovereign nations. Eventually, it was decided that the planets must unite to help each other and ward off disputes and wars. A Galactic Republic was proposed. Many opposed the idea sparking the Unification Wars. During the war , The Galactic Republic was founded, circa 25,053 BBY.

    Before the Unification Wars, and before the Infinite empire, many scientists, priests, philosophers, and warriors converged on Tython in the Deep Core and discovered the force.The Jedi Order was soon born. At first, it was comprised of the descendants of these early force sensitives and they established many of the Orders customs and rules.

    Things did not always go smoothly though. Jedi Knight Rasho Dundir began experimenting with the force for personal gain. He taught others to use the Force this way. These actions culminated in the form of a war called the Force Wars. This war went on for about a decade and really brought down the Jedi's numbers. Still, the Jedi prevailed.

    Not long after, the Jedi themselves joined the Galactic Republic becoming the guardians of justice and peace in the galaxy. But, there was still trouble not to long after. In 24,523, Jedi Knight Raller Xendor and his lover, Arden Lyn, recruited Jedi into the Legions of Lettow, an organization of Dark Jedi with the simple promise of no boundaries for what you can use the force for. This event became known as the First Great Schism...
    Chapter 1
    Jedi Enclave, Tython 24,553 BBY

    Danzigorro Potts was nothing but an insignificant padawan among many, many Jedi warriors on the planet Tython. He was a carefree and sympathetic person, yet really shy. So shy that he rarely talked to people he didn't know, and usually got to know them by chance. Regardless of his shyness, he would always answer if spoken to and he occasionally enjoyed conversation. But when someone close to Danzigorro was swept away, Danzigorro would wind down a course and eventually become the most famous Jedi to participate in the First Great Schism. It was he who, using the last piece of strength he had left, made the Columus tapes, the only record of the final battle of this war.


    Depression took hold of young Jedi Padawan Danzigorro Potts. His best friend and secret crush had left the Jedi Order to join Xendor and his other followers. Xendor had been talking about leaving the Order for some time. Xendor had been experimenting with the force in secret and had found that much more was attainable through the force if one was willing to figure out how to use it to its full potential. He had told his closest friends that the Jedi Council under Master Sar Agorn as well as most of the masters of the order were holding everyone back with rules, edicts and codes. He said any gift should be used to its fullest potential.
    It was common for Jedi to be spiteful towards all of the rules laid down by the council, so Xendor gained many followers. Blendri Toth was one
     
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    KnightFr0mOssus Jedi Youngling star 1

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    This fanfic is non-canon but based around a canon event and uses many canon characters. Many events depicted in this fanfic are either alluded to somewhere or of my creation. The primary inspiration for this was the Columus datatape in the book Jedi Vs. Sith: The Essential Guide To The Force by Ryder Wyndham. Acknowledge that many of these characters are of his creation. I will try and write at least every other day until I get to the end which will be an exact copy of the Columus Tapes(written originally by Ryder Wyndham) as well as an epilogue. hope you will all like it :)
     
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