Beyond The Fragile Peace (Skywalker-Jade Revival Society Challenge)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Revanfan1, May 22, 2014.

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  1. taramidala Chosen One

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    Jun 18, 1999
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    Haha! That's actually who I'd guessed, but I triple-checked to make sure he wasn't already on the list!
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  2. Gemma Jedi Grand Master

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    Dec 25, 2013
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    Fantastic. I like how Fett snuck away. Sad that the Noghri died. Liked how Damien and Jaina confessed their love for one another. Another great story closes. Tag me for the next one.
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  3. K'Tai qel Letta-Tanku Force Ghost

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    Apr 18, 2000
    star 2
    Fabulous. Now, when is the next installment coming? ;)
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  4. AzureAngel2 Force Ghost

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    Jun 14, 2005
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    So, the sith are back...

    [face_nail_biting]

    Dear me!

    I hope they can be stopped...
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  5. JadeLotus Force Ghost

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    Mar 27, 2005
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    Great ending! I loved how you worked in all the new characters and left things open with Ahli as the villain for Episode VIII.
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  6. Revanfan1 Chosen One

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    Jun 3, 2013
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    With the trailer released yesterday, I decided to go back and look over this, and I was surprised by some of the things I got right. :p

    Things I Got Right:
    1. There are X-wings on a planet with an ocean and islands
    2. An X-wing pilot is a main character (in my story, Kameron Antilles)
    3. There seems to be a battle in a snowy forest (of course, I probably heard this rumor before writing this)

    Things I Got Wrong:
    1. Oscar Isaac is the aforementioned X-wing pilot main character, not a Mandalorian
    2. Andy Serkis did the voice-over for the trailer, so he's probably a villain, not a Noghri bodyguard
    3. John Boyega is a stormtrooper, not a Jedi

    Maybe I'll come back to this thread after the movie's released and see just how close–or far off–I was.
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  7. Force Smuggler Chosen One

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  8. Revanfan1 Chosen One

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    Jun 3, 2013
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    Thank you! :)
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  9. Force Smuggler Chosen One

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    Sep 2, 2012
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    Yw. Now to speed read through the RoD and get to the last one.
    Is it bad that I want Ben and Ahli to get together?
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  10. Revanfan1 Chosen One

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    Jun 3, 2013
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    [face_laugh]

    Must be Ben/Vestara syndrome seeping through. ;)
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  11. Force Smuggler Chosen One

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    Sep 2, 2012
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    :D Yes. Must be. Darn you! ;)
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  12. AzureAngel2 Force Ghost

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    Jun 14, 2005
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    Book that off under "author´s freedom". But thanks for pointing mistakes out. Nobody who wrote the PT script would ever do such a thing. @};-
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  13. Revanfan1 Chosen One

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    Jun 3, 2013
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    Thank you everyone who nominated this story for Best Epic. It's an honor. :D
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  14. Jedi_Lover Chosen One

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    Nov 1, 2004
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