Before The Galaxa Mission (JA)

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  1. Sara_Kenobi Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Sep 21, 2000
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    Title: The Galaxa Mission
    Summary: Obi-Wan and Padawan Kaelana Lanora go to the Galaxa System, where Obi-Wan learns of the future. Can he stop what happens to all those he loves dearly?
    Timeline: 20 years before Ep III.

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    Lana couldn't believe it. She was stuck on her first Mission with Master Jinn's Padawan, Obi-Wan Kenobi.

    It wasn't like he wouldn't be useful. Master Jinn had often said how excellent an student his Padawan was.

    It was just that Lana was used to doing things on her own. Her own Master often pressed her to test herself in such ways. But then Master Dooku was a Master that was difficult to understand at times.

    "Took you long enough to get down here," Lana replied icily.

    Obi-Wan Kenobi swollowed hard and forced himself to calm down, "I'm deeply sorry, Padawan Lanora. It is hard to rush from the top level of the Temple."

    "I still don't see why I have to drag you along," Lana spat. "I'm twenty years old. Not sixteen."

    "Well I just had my birthday last week, "Obi-Wan quipped dryly. "You'll be happy to know I'm no longer sixteen. I'll try not and get in your way."

    "Lets go," Lana snapped.

    The young red-haired woman then lead the way out of the Jedi Temple.









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    TBC
  2. lordmaul13 Jedi Master

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    Oct 18, 2000
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    Looks interesting.

    Can he stop what happens to all those he loves dearly?

    I'm betting on...

    No.

    lordmaul13
  3. Sara_Kenobi Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Sep 21, 2000
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    Thank you for replying, lordmaul. I'm sorry the first post was so small, but I started the story just before I was about to leave for work.

    Expect the next post shortly. :)
  4. Padawan_Jess_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    Nov 20, 2002
    star 4
    Well, I'm hooked. :D The interaction is very interesting, and I sense quite a bit of amusing bickering to come, huh? I'll be watching this one, sounds great! ;)
  5. KrystalBlaze Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Aug 3, 2002
    star 5
    Cool! You've got a good start going. Keep it up. I liked the interaction between the two. I sense much petty arguments. Excellent job!
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