The Hunted (JA fic by Cassia and Sio)

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  1. Kim-kenobi Jedi Knight

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    Cassia's New FIC!!!! this time with SIO!!!! WOOO HOOOOO!!!! both my favourite authors!!! both VERY talented. They have co-authored this story.

    Please Feedback! either here or directly to them and they would read it.

    ONe thing I AM NOT THE AUTHOR(there have been cases people mailing me, saying I am a good writer... I wish).

    Kim B :)


    ENJOY :D


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    Hi everyone!!!
    I am really excited to post this story because it has been so much fun to
    write. It is my first co-authored story, but hopefully not my last! =D I
    want to say thank you to Siobhan for making this so much fun to work on! As
    you can probably tell from the message line, this is going to be a nice long
    story, so if you're game, strap yourselves in and prepare for the jump to
    hyperspace!
    I am going to have to be out of town for a short while (Yes, again... don?t
    get me started on *that*...) from this Saturday until after next weekend,
    but Sio will keep posting the story so that no one is left hanging for too
    long. =D
    Well, take care and I hope you enjoy!
    --Cassia

    Title: The Hunted

    Authors: The Anonymous Torture Fic Writer and her Campy Mute Mush Shadow;
    (a.k.a.: Cassia and Sio)

    Rating: PG-13 for strong violence

    Spoilers: hmmmm do we have any spoilers? Maybe for Titan AE - LOL just
    kidding.

    Archive: Early Years, Jedi Apprentice, Telly, Obi the Kid, Kim B. and
    anyone Cassia has previously given permission to. All others, please ask.

    Feedback: Yes please! You can send to either cassia_a@h... or
    siobhancl2@h..., either way it will be seen by both authors. Thank
    you!

    Disclaimer: All recognizable Star Wars characters are the exclusive
    property of George Lucas. All others belong to us. We have no official
    permission to use these characters, but we are not being paid for it either,
    and we do return them in mostly one piece, so that's okay. =D

    Time Frame: 8 years Pre-TMP. Obi-Wan is 17.

    Summary: Non-slash. When a mission goes awry, Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon are
    caught up in a churning swirl of events that leaves Obi-Wan to the mercy of
    a cruel and unbending society and forces Qui-Gon to make decisions that
    could effect both their lives forever. In trouble and unable to turn to the
    Temple for help, the pair must try to survive on their own and stay two
    steps ahead of pursuit in a galaxy that is suddenly full of predators as
    they find themselves having become... the Hunted.

    Warning: This story contains violence and character torture. It also
    depicts a loving, father/son relationship between Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan. If
    either of these things bother you, please do not read this story.

    Notes: Everything between // is Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon talking through their
    bond.
    Things bracketed by * * are italics.


    -THE HUNTED-
    Part One:

    Obi-Wan Kenobi's gaze drifted across the shimmering star-streaks of
    hyperspace on the other side of the view-port.

    He was glad this mission was almost over. It had been a difficult one from
    the start, but it was finally concluded. Soon he would join Qui-Gon on
    Coruscant and perhaps they would get a little breather...

    The Padawan grinned ironically. Rest seemed to be such a foreign concept to
    them lately. Something always happened.

    Obi-Wan sighed and shifted restlessly. What was it that was making him
    uneasy? He didn't know. Yet somehow, all did not feel right. The young
    Jedi tried to check in with his Master, but Qui-Gon was much too far away
    for him to make a connection. Still, when he probed the Force in that
    direction he did not get the feeling that his unease had to do with anything
    Qui-Gon was dealing with... so what then?

    So far, the trip had been a quiet one. There was nothing visible to disturb
    him. Settling back in the chair that he occupied in a corner of the small
    transport's central area the young Jedi let his mind drift back over the
    events of the past few weeks.

    The security of a critical witness to a massive war-crimes trial on th
  2. Kim-kenobi Jedi Knight

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    I forgot to say PLEASE FEEDBACK!!!!!!!!

    Kim B :)
    Once again reminding everyone not the author
  3. Jedi-Faith Jedi Master

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    AHHHH!!!!!!!!!! Cruel, cruel place to stop! *falls off the cliff*

    Anyways, an absolutely AMAZING start! Poor Obi; he already got injured and it's only the first post!

    LOL! I love the author line, although you forgot to mention "who both apparently enjoy to torment readers with nailbiting cliffhangers"!!! :D But Torture + Mush = very very good fic :D I can't wait for more!
  4. Obi-wan's Padawan Jedi Knight

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    That was a great beginning! I hope Obi is okay. I am looking forward to reading more.
  5. Kim-kenobi Jedi Knight

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  6. ApprenticeM Jedi Master

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    AAAHHHH!!! *follows jedi-faith off the cliff* Post soon!!!!!!!!!! Need....more.....
  7. Healer_Leona Scattegories Host. Manager Emeritus

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    Wow!!! A fabulous start Cassia and Sio!!

    I loved how Obi-Wan never questioned the respoinsibility faling to hm and that he would sacrifice himself to ensure the safety of the others.

    Kim, thank you for bringing us this wonderful thread. :) :)

    Post often, post soon!
  8. HannahBates Jedi Knight

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    A new Cassia fict? I'm a very happy fan fict addict.

    So far, this story is off to a great start. I loved how Obi-Wan never thought twice about sacrificing himself, but he wasn't about to go down without a fight either. Very well done. And, to top it off, he's already injured!

    I eagerly await the next post. Cassia and Sio are doing an excellent job.

    Hannah
  9. ewen Jedi Master

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    Great beginning.As a FF reader I only read JA Qui/Obi non slash stories,so I was really pleased to see another one starting.THANX !!!!Keep up the good work.
  10. Cheryl_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    post now you will that was sad
  11. Abbi_Cee Jedi Master

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    Cassia's starting a new story and this time she has a partner! :) Great begining guys. Waiting eagerly for the next part.
  12. Maija Darklighter Jedi Knight

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    Holy.....Sith..
    Need...A...Post....

    *faints*

  13. Healer_Leona Scattegories Host. Manager Emeritus

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    Come on Kim... it's terrible to dangle a new story in front of us and not continue with updates. :) :) :)
  14. Ginger_Jedi Jedi Grand Master

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    :eek:

    Great start!!!

    :D

    More soon?
  15. Kim-kenobi Jedi Knight

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    Here is part 2 enjoy :)

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    Notes: Everything between // is Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon talking through
    their bond.
    Things bracketed by * * are italics.

    Part Two:


    Qui-Gon Jinn shook Ran Tisane's hand. The man had gone through a lot
    to get here, to give the testimony that he had, but it had paid off.
    Justice had been served and the verdict of the jury found the three
    Aurelian Generals guilty of the inhumane war crimes they had
    committed during Aureus' resent civil war.

    The man's sad eyes finally had a look of completion in them. "Thank
    you Master Jinn, I owe this victory to you and your apprentice.
    Thank you," Ran said sincerely.

    Qui-Gon smiled and bowed. "It is our pleasure to... serve." A
    strange cloud passed over the Master's face momentarily.

    "Is everything all right?" Ran inquired with concern.

    "It's fine, forgive me," Qui-Gon shrugged it off, but inside, he was
    not so quick to dispel the strange feeling of apprehension that had
    passed over him.

    Qui-Gon finished his duties, but could not shake the strange cloud
    that seemed to eat at the back of his consciousness. He did not know
    what it meant, but was watchful all the same. The feeling followed
    him onto his shuttle back to Coruscant.

    The trial had ended up taking place not too far from the capital
    planet so it was only a five-hour trip for him and he was back in his
    quarters in the Jedi Temple. Yet even there he was not totally at
    ease and that troubled him.

    He wished he could reach Obi-Wan to make sure that his apprentice was
    all right, but he had no idea where the Padawan was and their
    scheduled rendezvous was not for another two days. Mostly dismissing
    his ill ease, Qui-Gon decided that he would certainly feel a lot
    better when he and Obi-Wan were back together.


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    "Ooh Sith..." Obi-Wan moaned softly as he came to. For a few moments
    he couldn't figure out where he was or why, or much of anything
    actually other then that he had a pounding headache and he felt like
    he had been used as a punching bag for a group of enraged Wampas.

    Slowly his memory came back to him. The ship, the sabotage, the
    pod... Peeling himself stiffly off the ground he found that he was
    resting upon one of the pod walls. The damaged craft had landed on
    it's side with the hatch now directly above him in place of the
    ceiling.

    He could not stand up completely in the small space, but rose as much
    as he could and worked with the pod's hatch release controls over his
    head. A few minutes later he was rewarded by a hydraulic hiss as the
    door popped open, flooding the dark little pod with bright rays of
    sunlight.

    Obi-Wan blinked hard, momentarily blinded by the sudden light. His
    eyes adjusted quickly however and a few minutes later he hauled
    himself up and out. Looking around he found himself in an arid
    expanse of land with no civilization as far as the eye could see.

    "Lovely," the young Jedi murmured as he dropped to the ground,
    sending up a small swirl of dust. He scouted his immediate area and
    then returned to the pod for the survival packs that were standard
    issue aboard escape craft.

    Obi-Wan had no idea where he was or what planet this was, or even if
    it was populated. Calmly assessing his situation, the Padawan did
    not let those things worry him. The unknown was not to be feared,
    but faced, then it would no longer be unknown.

    Closing his eyes the apprentice Jedi let the Force flow through him,
    searching for signs of nearby life...
    Obi-Wan was rewarded with the living hum that sentient beings
    created. This planet was inhabited, although no one was nearby.

    Suddenly a different tendril of the Force brushed by Obi-Wan, but he
    couldn't quite catch it's meaning. It seemed to warn him of
    something, something... Obi-Wan's eyes furrowed tighter shut as he
    tried to discern the meaning of the uneasy feeling, but it was gone
    now.

    A few minutes later he opened them again and turned
  16. Kim-kenobi Jedi Knight

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    long part I hope you all enjoy and feedback..

    Kim B :)
  17. Kim-kenobi Jedi Knight

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    uppers :)

    Kim
    (not the author, sorry to remind everyone but I think it was improtant to mention)
  18. Jedi-Faith Jedi Master

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    Great post! Real long too :D

    I hope Qui doesn't decide to wait too long; he has to go save Obi before the poor guy gets into more trouble... or maybe he should wait longer... ;)

    So how long before the next one?
  19. ApprenticeM Jedi Master

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    Oy.....Obi's in trouble again.....so when's the Obi torture coming?? :D
  20. Kim-kenobi Jedi Knight

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    I heard soon.... he he he he he... torture, angst... all coming soon(from what I heard).

    And the next part should be also soon...

    Please Feedback, either here or to the authors directly... they really love feedbacks.

    Kim B :)
  21. Healer_Leona Scattegories Host. Manager Emeritus

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    FAbulous post!!! From Mace and Qui-Gon's distracted game, I loved the friendly comraderie of those two, to the extremem tesnse and volitile situation Obi's now found himself in.

    Can't wait for more!! :) :)
  22. Lady_Segra Jedi Knight

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    Jun 10, 2001
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    YEAH another Cassia Story! And Sio Oooh this is too great! Obi-Wan's so gentelmanly, poor him, and poor her, more please!

    Oh and Kim, despite what you say you deserve credit for this too, you post the stories so we get to read them! :)
  23. Sarah_K Jedi Master

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    I haven't finished yet, but so far it is GREAT!! I'll try and come back later. ;)

    Sarah >^,,^<
  24. Cheryl_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    I really have a bad feeling about the next post
  25. Abbi_Cee Jedi Master

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    Ahh, am I detecting influences from a certain religious/politcal group in a small far off country? ;) Good story guys, nothing like cultural differences to bring about conflict. Poor Obi, I suspect he's really put the proverbial foot in it this time. Looking forward to the next part.
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